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The Cost of a Kiss: An Elizabeth and Darcy Story
Elizabeth Bennet never imagined she'd become the wife of the proud and wealthy Mr. Darcy after a scandalous encounter at Bingley’s Netherfield Ball. Now thrust into high society as the new mistress of Pemberley, Elizabeth does not know how to fulfill her new role while continuing to love her family and stay true to herself. And she is not sure if her husband's desire for her is stronger than the anger he feels because he believes she tricked him into this marriage.
Darcy was always inexplicably drawn to Elizabeth Bennet. But he’d never meant to marry far beneath himself. A drunken impulsive kiss, and then the witnesses, led by Elizabeth’s mother, burst in and sealed his fate. Fitzwilliam Darcy was a man who refused to lie to himself — they had schemed to trap him, but he had been the one to kiss Elizabeth. And he’d drunk so much that night because he’d been unhappy that he would need to leave her behind the next day.
He desperately wanted her. He could be happy with Elizabeth. If only she would behave as his wife ought to.
This Pride and Prejudice variation from the author of Mr. Bennet’s Daughter and Disability and Determination is filled with witty banter, affection, forgiveness and love.
For those odd readers who also wish that Amazon directly reported this number on the detail page, this novel is 103,000 words long.
Darcy was always inexplicably drawn to Elizabeth Bennet. But he’d never meant to marry far beneath himself. A drunken impulsive kiss, and then the witnesses, led by Elizabeth’s mother, burst in and sealed his fate. Fitzwilliam Darcy was a man who refused to lie to himself — they had schemed to trap him, but he had been the one to kiss Elizabeth. And he’d drunk so much that night because he’d been unhappy that he would need to leave her behind the next day.
He desperately wanted her. He could be happy with Elizabeth. If only she would behave as his wife ought to.
This Pride and Prejudice variation from the author of Mr. Bennet’s Daughter and Disability and Determination is filled with witty banter, affection, forgiveness and love.
For those odd readers who also wish that Amazon directly reported this number on the detail page, this novel is 103,000 words long.
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Published July 7, 2024
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July 20, 2024
When you dig in your heels.
This Darcy and Elizabeth story, as Timothy Underwood likes to call his Pride and Prejudice variations, begins with an impulsive kiss behind closed doors during the Netherfield Ball. When their embrace is observed by Mrs. Bennet and Lady Lucas, their spontaneous act results in a forced marriage.
Expecting her father’s support, Elizabeth is shocked when Mr. Bennet refuses to back her, instead accusing her of being wanton and after Darcy’s riches. Mrs. Bennet’s reaction leads Darcy to believe it was all planned as an entrapment, making him think Elizabeth is just another fortune hunter. Both feeling betrayed for different reasons, it’s not the best way to begin a marriage.
While there is no overly graphic content, the fact that both have a genuine lust for one another makes this book a mature read—no bedroom issues for them. When it comes to communication and expectations, however, both dig in their heels with the unwavering pride and stubbornness they exhibit—this is the main driving force behind the plot.
Not having much choice in the matter as Mrs. Darcy, the interactions between Elizabeth and some of her husband’s visiting Fitzwilliam family members are both diverting and a touch angsty, depending on the character. Conversely, because of Darcy’s pride, there isn’t much interaction between Darcy and Elizabeth’s family members until the latter part of the book.
Elizabeth’s eventual ‘last man in the world’ moment—this time as Darcy’s wife— brings their relationship to a head and results in Darcy running away from Pemberley to London. On the way, Darcy writes a variation of the infamous Hunsford letter to Elizabeth. Their separation gives him an opportunity for self-reflection and recognition of his pride, opening his eyes to his own flaws and true feelings for Elizabeth. His time in London also gives him a chance to ‘fix’ some of his mistakes—namely, Jane and Bingley and the Gardiners. Meanwhile at Pemberley, Elizabeth faces her own regrets after reading his letter and must acknowledge her true feelings for him.
Not having much choice in the matter as Mrs. Darcy, the interactions between Elizabeth and some of her husband’s family members are both diverting and a bit angsty, depending on the character. Conversely, because of Darcy’s pride, there isn’t much interaction between Darcy and Elizabeth’s family members until the latter part of the book.
Lovers of JAFF will appreciate the fact that Elizabeth and Darcy are together from the onset of the story. To me, the beginning of the book did feel a little scattered because it isn’t clear exactly what happened between Elizabeth and Mr. Bennet, since it happened off-page, so it takes a while for their disagreement to become clearly known. Regardless, I found it to be a very well-written and satisfying read. I thoroughly enjoyed it and am happy to recommend Timothy Underwood’s latest novel.
This Darcy and Elizabeth story, as Timothy Underwood likes to call his Pride and Prejudice variations, begins with an impulsive kiss behind closed doors during the Netherfield Ball. When their embrace is observed by Mrs. Bennet and Lady Lucas, their spontaneous act results in a forced marriage.
Expecting her father’s support, Elizabeth is shocked when Mr. Bennet refuses to back her, instead accusing her of being wanton and after Darcy’s riches. Mrs. Bennet’s reaction leads Darcy to believe it was all planned as an entrapment, making him think Elizabeth is just another fortune hunter. Both feeling betrayed for different reasons, it’s not the best way to begin a marriage.
While there is no overly graphic content, the fact that both have a genuine lust for one another makes this book a mature read—no bedroom issues for them. When it comes to communication and expectations, however, both dig in their heels with the unwavering pride and stubbornness they exhibit—this is the main driving force behind the plot.
Not having much choice in the matter as Mrs. Darcy, the interactions between Elizabeth and some of her husband’s visiting Fitzwilliam family members are both diverting and a touch angsty, depending on the character. Conversely, because of Darcy’s pride, there isn’t much interaction between Darcy and Elizabeth’s family members until the latter part of the book.
Elizabeth’s eventual ‘last man in the world’ moment—this time as Darcy’s wife— brings their relationship to a head and results in Darcy running away from Pemberley to London. On the way, Darcy writes a variation of the infamous Hunsford letter to Elizabeth. Their separation gives him an opportunity for self-reflection and recognition of his pride, opening his eyes to his own flaws and true feelings for Elizabeth. His time in London also gives him a chance to ‘fix’ some of his mistakes—namely, Jane and Bingley and the Gardiners. Meanwhile at Pemberley, Elizabeth faces her own regrets after reading his letter and must acknowledge her true feelings for him.
Not having much choice in the matter as Mrs. Darcy, the interactions between Elizabeth and some of her husband’s family members are both diverting and a bit angsty, depending on the character. Conversely, because of Darcy’s pride, there isn’t much interaction between Darcy and Elizabeth’s family members until the latter part of the book.
Lovers of JAFF will appreciate the fact that Elizabeth and Darcy are together from the onset of the story. To me, the beginning of the book did feel a little scattered because it isn’t clear exactly what happened between Elizabeth and Mr. Bennet, since it happened off-page, so it takes a while for their disagreement to become clearly known. Regardless, I found it to be a very well-written and satisfying read. I thoroughly enjoyed it and am happy to recommend Timothy Underwood’s latest novel.
September 11, 2024
A forced compromise marriage where Fitzwilliam Darcy has to learn that he is not all that and Elizabeth Bennet has to accept herself in her life. Lots of feelings that need to be discussed and worked through.
July 26, 2024
Wonderful
During the Netherfield ball, Elizabeth and Darcy are arguing about Wickham in the library alone when Darcy suddenly kisses Elizabeth passionately, Mrs Bennett and Lady Lucas witness it, and Mrs Bennett calls compromise. Darcy and Elizabeth are forced to marry, while Elizabeth is being blamed by Darcy and everyone else for the compromise, calling her wanton and a fortune hunter. Even Mr Bennett criticizes Elizabeth, so she enters an unwanted marriage with no very good feelings.
I like this author. He's an automatic purchase for me. This is a particularly angsty story, but fortunately Mr Underwood's talent for light banter and humor comes through in all the right places. It's difficult to read a tale about ODC where, for more than half of the book, Darcy is a jerk. Thank goodness for the appearances of Colonel Fitzwilliam, and even the colonel's older brother sometimes, to figuratively slap Darcy "upside the head." The extremely angsty parts are interspersed with lovely romance, since, although Darcy unfairly labels Elizabeth a fortune hunter, he can't resist her in the bedroom and elsewhere, and she also can't resist him.
There's a lot of heartbreak and drama, but also plenty of heartwarming and uplifting circumstances. The book is well written and well edited. I highly recommend it.
During the Netherfield ball, Elizabeth and Darcy are arguing about Wickham in the library alone when Darcy suddenly kisses Elizabeth passionately, Mrs Bennett and Lady Lucas witness it, and Mrs Bennett calls compromise. Darcy and Elizabeth are forced to marry, while Elizabeth is being blamed by Darcy and everyone else for the compromise, calling her wanton and a fortune hunter. Even Mr Bennett criticizes Elizabeth, so she enters an unwanted marriage with no very good feelings.
I like this author. He's an automatic purchase for me. This is a particularly angsty story, but fortunately Mr Underwood's talent for light banter and humor comes through in all the right places. It's difficult to read a tale about ODC where, for more than half of the book, Darcy is a jerk. Thank goodness for the appearances of Colonel Fitzwilliam, and even the colonel's older brother sometimes, to figuratively slap Darcy "upside the head." The extremely angsty parts are interspersed with lovely romance, since, although Darcy unfairly labels Elizabeth a fortune hunter, he can't resist her in the bedroom and elsewhere, and she also can't resist him.
There's a lot of heartbreak and drama, but also plenty of heartwarming and uplifting circumstances. The book is well written and well edited. I highly recommend it.
October 11, 2024
Good story
I liked the idea and the way it maintains the characters personalities and traits. A well developed plot and interesting changes in the way it addresses some aspects. Very entertaining.
I liked the idea and the way it maintains the characters personalities and traits. A well developed plot and interesting changes in the way it addresses some aspects. Very entertaining.
July 13, 2024
Two pigheaded people
Darcy and Elizabeth are both very stubborn and resentful and opinionated as they endure a forced marriage after being caught kissing at the Netherfield Ball. It takes time, conversations, lust, and several discussions with well-meaning relatives, but they finally understand each other and reach a happy ending.
Darcy and Elizabeth are both very stubborn and resentful and opinionated as they endure a forced marriage after being caught kissing at the Netherfield Ball. It takes time, conversations, lust, and several discussions with well-meaning relatives, but they finally understand each other and reach a happy ending.
July 26, 2024
Overall, enjoyed this. There is angst but not too intense. This reminded me somewhat of “Being Mrs. Darcy” in that E&D have an overall positive experience in the first months of marriage. They are complacent but still have a lot to resolve, especially Darcy with his pompous ways and misunderstanding of Elizabeth’s character. There is shared lust, but no details or descriptions on the act they happily partake in. I especially enjoyed the E&D banter. I wish we had some justice for Elizabeth with Darcy’s family.
July 21, 2024
Forced Marriage Scenario
I enjoyed this forced marriage variation. The characters stayed true to cannon (Lizzy had no superpowers, either in talents or perception; Darcy was duty-driven and longing to be loved; both see their mistakes and learn) and the story was different enough to stay interesting without going completely off the rails (though I love that kind of variation, too!). The editing is good, and as always I enjoyed Mr Underwood’s quirky writing style.
Two things particularly stood out to me after finishing this book. First was the anguish Lizzy felt over her father’s betrayal and how it manifested itself in her behavior. It seemed so irrational to everyone, but totally fit Lizzy’s personality—particularly her stubbornness. Second was how much I enjoy the details of period life Mr Underwood includes, especially as he followed his usual habit of including a small, personable essay after the epilogue explaining some of his choices and his research findings. To me, those explanations are pure gold. I get a look into his mind and his process, learn a little more about a time and place I find fascinating, and feel like I have strengthened the connection to him as a person, which seems to be unique among JAFF writers, or really any writers.
One warning I think needs to be stated: this book is rather heavy on the physical aspect of marriage. It’s all closed-door, consensual and between married people, but it does play a significant role in the psychological development of our characters. This may not be a book you want to share with your 10 year old, but your older teen probably sees more explicit and less respectful content on a near-daily basis.
I could say more about my opinions but I hate spoilers so I will just say if you are looking for a medium-angst story that is respectful of our dearly loved fictional friends while keeping you entertained and possibly even sneaking in a bit of humor and learning, read this book.
I enjoyed this forced marriage variation. The characters stayed true to cannon (Lizzy had no superpowers, either in talents or perception; Darcy was duty-driven and longing to be loved; both see their mistakes and learn) and the story was different enough to stay interesting without going completely off the rails (though I love that kind of variation, too!). The editing is good, and as always I enjoyed Mr Underwood’s quirky writing style.
Two things particularly stood out to me after finishing this book. First was the anguish Lizzy felt over her father’s betrayal and how it manifested itself in her behavior. It seemed so irrational to everyone, but totally fit Lizzy’s personality—particularly her stubbornness. Second was how much I enjoy the details of period life Mr Underwood includes, especially as he followed his usual habit of including a small, personable essay after the epilogue explaining some of his choices and his research findings. To me, those explanations are pure gold. I get a look into his mind and his process, learn a little more about a time and place I find fascinating, and feel like I have strengthened the connection to him as a person, which seems to be unique among JAFF writers, or really any writers.
One warning I think needs to be stated: this book is rather heavy on the physical aspect of marriage. It’s all closed-door, consensual and between married people, but it does play a significant role in the psychological development of our characters. This may not be a book you want to share with your 10 year old, but your older teen probably sees more explicit and less respectful content on a near-daily basis.
I could say more about my opinions but I hate spoilers so I will just say if you are looking for a medium-angst story that is respectful of our dearly loved fictional friends while keeping you entertained and possibly even sneaking in a bit of humor and learning, read this book.
July 20, 2024
A Keeper
I'm usually not a fan of forced marriage scenarios and avoid them most of the time to prevent damage to my tablet and wall. From my experience reading them, either
1) The compromise is silly
2) The compromise doesn't warrant a marriage
3) Darcy and Elizabeth do not attempt to know one another before marriage
4) A regency man marries and tells his wife he will wait however long it takes before they become intimate. It is hard for me to imagine.
Most times, all of the above is included.
I didn't think twice about reading Underwood's fm scenario; I trust his work to know my tablet is safe.
What I liked:
- The compromise was believable. In my head, I always felt that although Elizabeth didn't like Darcy, she was physically attracted to him. So, I can definitely see this compromise taking place at that moment. Now, did it warrant a marriage? No, not on Darcy's end, but he is getting Elizabeth in the bargain.
- I liked this Darcy because he stayed true to character. He's honest and clueless to a fault at times. He's also battling his desires, duty, and anger. I can't fault him for his words because he believed them accurate, and Elizabeth never defended herself or her family at the time. Now, did they talk before the marriage? No, but the author wrote the story where that segment occurred before the beginning of his tale.
- Elizabeth. She didn't like how things went down, but she took advantage of what she wanted from Darcy and stood her ground on the rest.
- The marriage wasn't ideal, but I liked the give and take. Darcy and Elizabeth found a middle ground while figuring out the rest.
- Other than that, I liked the supporting cast. However, Lydia's minor storyline felt incomplete.
- The usual baddies are either mentioned or have an insignificant role.
Mr. Underwood's books don't come around often enough for me, but it's always a must-read when it does.
I'm usually not a fan of forced marriage scenarios and avoid them most of the time to prevent damage to my tablet and wall. From my experience reading them, either
1) The compromise is silly
2) The compromise doesn't warrant a marriage
3) Darcy and Elizabeth do not attempt to know one another before marriage
4) A regency man marries and tells his wife he will wait however long it takes before they become intimate. It is hard for me to imagine.
Most times, all of the above is included.
I didn't think twice about reading Underwood's fm scenario; I trust his work to know my tablet is safe.
What I liked:
- The compromise was believable. In my head, I always felt that although Elizabeth didn't like Darcy, she was physically attracted to him. So, I can definitely see this compromise taking place at that moment. Now, did it warrant a marriage? No, not on Darcy's end, but he is getting Elizabeth in the bargain.
- I liked this Darcy because he stayed true to character. He's honest and clueless to a fault at times. He's also battling his desires, duty, and anger. I can't fault him for his words because he believed them accurate, and Elizabeth never defended herself or her family at the time. Now, did they talk before the marriage? No, but the author wrote the story where that segment occurred before the beginning of his tale.
- Elizabeth. She didn't like how things went down, but she took advantage of what she wanted from Darcy and stood her ground on the rest.
- The marriage wasn't ideal, but I liked the give and take. Darcy and Elizabeth found a middle ground while figuring out the rest.
- Other than that, I liked the supporting cast. However, Lydia's minor storyline felt incomplete.
- The usual baddies are either mentioned or have an insignificant role.
Mr. Underwood's books don't come around often enough for me, but it's always a must-read when it does.
July 28, 2024
He believes Miss Elizabeth Bennet has schemed to compromise him, and he's not alone.
Given no other choice, Elizabeth Bennet has married Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy. He harbors feelings for her he is unwilling to accept. Elizabeth's most ardent protector has abandoned her. If that isn't bad enough, now she must deal with Darcy's family and their interference . Can it get any worse ? Just wait and see. Enjoy! I know I did.
Given no other choice, Elizabeth Bennet has married Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy. He harbors feelings for her he is unwilling to accept. Elizabeth's most ardent protector has abandoned her. If that isn't bad enough, now she must deal with Darcy's family and their interference . Can it get any worse ? Just wait and see. Enjoy! I know I did.
July 20, 2024
Most satisfying
In this excellent forced marriage variation, Mr Underwood has deftly woven misunderstandings, overheard conversations, sisterly love, and just the right level of angst into a story that leaves the reader most satisfied, but simultaneously wanting more. Kudos!!
In this excellent forced marriage variation, Mr Underwood has deftly woven misunderstandings, overheard conversations, sisterly love, and just the right level of angst into a story that leaves the reader most satisfied, but simultaneously wanting more. Kudos!!
July 20, 2024
I recommend this very good variation. It is well written and has depth. The end felt a bit rushed though. In the first chapters Darcy acts like a real p***k. It put me off for a while but then the story gets better. 4.5 stars.
July 22, 2024
It felt like only half a story
I really enjoyed the story's premise but it ended too abruptly. What happened to Wickham? Did Darcy's family accept her? What about Lydia? The author skipped over the Collins part of the story and how he would have reacted to the compromise.
I really enjoyed the story's premise but it ended too abruptly. What happened to Wickham? Did Darcy's family accept her? What about Lydia? The author skipped over the Collins part of the story and how he would have reacted to the compromise.
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July 21, 2024DNF. I really like the plot but I couldn’t get used to what seems to me modern conversations. I don’t think people were so straightforward and told their minds so openly at that time. This really bothered me.
November 13, 2025
Unexpectedly very good. I hated this authors The compromised compromise and wanted to read a recent book before giving up. I'm glad i did so. This book has handled the forced marriage scenario very well and actually went in a way i expected the E&D to behave.
Things i liked
1. Plausible scenario. Elizabeth, Darcy were both drinking more than usual, Elizabeth felt an attraction to Darcy as they were arguing, he saw that and kissed her, she reciprocated, they were caught. Elizabeth's father blamed her, so without any of her input, marriage happened.
2. Even though darcy feels that Elizabeth took advantage of his attraction and blames her, he blames himself more, so doesn't knowingly mistreat her and his actions aren't cruel or out of character for a pre-hunsford darcy
3. Elizabeth is not obvious to Darcy's feelings for her or his good qualities. So refreshing to read an Elizabeth who actually reads darcy well
4. Both E&D actually make an effort for a happy marriage, Darcy actually compromises when he realises he upsets her and Elizabeth also treats him with kindness. I actually like both of them as people throughout the entire book.
5. Portrayal of darcy's family - they are portrayed as normal people, with flaws and virtues, and actual love for darcy. Both his cousins actually give him good advice and darcy even follows them although not immediately. No one is comically bad or overly good.
6. The banter between E & D - so good actually 😍
This had a lots of things i wished other marriage of compromise books had, so even though it had some issues i didn't mind them at all. It ended very abruptly though, wish author had added more chapters and slowly resolved things. But things between E & D had satisfying ending, so its was also fine
5/5, will reread again just for the refreshing portrayal of E&D
Things i liked
1. Plausible scenario. Elizabeth, Darcy were both drinking more than usual, Elizabeth felt an attraction to Darcy as they were arguing, he saw that and kissed her, she reciprocated, they were caught. Elizabeth's father blamed her, so without any of her input, marriage happened.
2. Even though darcy feels that Elizabeth took advantage of his attraction and blames her, he blames himself more, so doesn't knowingly mistreat her and his actions aren't cruel or out of character for a pre-hunsford darcy
3. Elizabeth is not obvious to Darcy's feelings for her or his good qualities. So refreshing to read an Elizabeth who actually reads darcy well
4. Both E&D actually make an effort for a happy marriage, Darcy actually compromises when he realises he upsets her and Elizabeth also treats him with kindness. I actually like both of them as people throughout the entire book.
5. Portrayal of darcy's family - they are portrayed as normal people, with flaws and virtues, and actual love for darcy. Both his cousins actually give him good advice and darcy even follows them although not immediately. No one is comically bad or overly good.
6. The banter between E & D - so good actually 😍
This had a lots of things i wished other marriage of compromise books had, so even though it had some issues i didn't mind them at all. It ended very abruptly though, wish author had added more chapters and slowly resolved things. But things between E & D had satisfying ending, so its was also fine
5/5, will reread again just for the refreshing portrayal of E&D
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July 29, 2024
I have enjoyed all the FMS variations (Forced Marriage Situations) that I have read and this one was no exception. I did find some amusement at how the "compromise" was really all at the hands of Darcy...BUT as Mrs. Bennet and Lady Lucas happen upon the couple just as he ends the kiss he initiated with Elizabeth, compromise is claimed by Mrs. B. So he does not take blame but rather groups Elizabeth with all the other women who see him only for his fortune, his estate and his connections. Sadly, Elizabeth finds no support from her father, who scolds her for wanting all those things, also.
ODC does have chemistry in the bedroom, which is alluded to and thus this story is not really for the young and innocent among readers.
There are several long letters; not just between Darcy and Elizabeth, that these do move the plot along as it seems the authors of such are much better explaining their feeling and offering apologies than when in company with those for whom the letters are meant.
Lydia and Wickham have parts but Lydia's role did not play out as in canon. In fact, I was looking for something to be said about her at the end or in the epilogue.
Another amusing part is the pressure one of Darcy's relations puts on Elizabeth to change her style of dressing. Elizabeth's excuse for NOT spending more than £50 is interesting. (I won't give that away here.)
Elizabeth does, of course, develop a loving relationship with Georgiana and learns of her issues.
I enjoyed this story and recommend it. The author does give us some background about his reasons for using this premise and about his research. I found that interesting also. I have read a number of his stories.
ODC does have chemistry in the bedroom, which is alluded to and thus this story is not really for the young and innocent among readers.
There are several long letters; not just between Darcy and Elizabeth, that these do move the plot along as it seems the authors of such are much better explaining their feeling and offering apologies than when in company with those for whom the letters are meant.
Lydia and Wickham have parts but Lydia's role did not play out as in canon. In fact, I was looking for something to be said about her at the end or in the epilogue.
Another amusing part is the pressure one of Darcy's relations puts on Elizabeth to change her style of dressing. Elizabeth's excuse for NOT spending more than £50 is interesting. (I won't give that away here.)
Elizabeth does, of course, develop a loving relationship with Georgiana and learns of her issues.
I enjoyed this story and recommend it. The author does give us some background about his reasons for using this premise and about his research. I found that interesting also. I have read a number of his stories.
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October 22, 2024Really enjoyable
I really enjoyed this take. It has a lot of discussions about some historical ideas that are actually quite present still. They talk about flushing toilets, rape, and breastfeeding in an unexpected way that normally gets glossed over in literally every other piece of literature. Didn't love Mr. Bennet's original folly - seriously doesn't fit with his character in the least. While it sorta gets resolved, the explanation of his reasoning for what happened is never really satisfactorily resolved. I love Georgiana and the Colonel, as I usually do. The Colonel, and surprisingly, his brother, the Viscount, are delightful and insightful characters. Georgiana isn't half bad either. I really enjoyed how they were written in this account.
The ODC I mostly enjoyed, too, though the premise - while necessary for the plot of the book is...a bit of a stretch, though the author mostly makes it work. Mostly. I enjoyed the insights of most of the characters and the overall plot, and piece, itself, there are a few things that seem...a stretch. I did greatly enjoy the piece and wish there were more like it. This author can be hit or miss for me. I think I enjoy his writing, overall, but don't love some of the plot pieces treat are contrived. And when the characters get changed in too far-fetched a manner - I enjoy it less. This piece in particular stayed very true to the characters (except Mr. Bennet,) I think they were enhanced and well-imagined far the most part. Except maybe the lasciviousness of the ODC, but I as totally fine with that part.
I really enjoyed this take. It has a lot of discussions about some historical ideas that are actually quite present still. They talk about flushing toilets, rape, and breastfeeding in an unexpected way that normally gets glossed over in literally every other piece of literature. Didn't love Mr. Bennet's original folly - seriously doesn't fit with his character in the least. While it sorta gets resolved, the explanation of his reasoning for what happened is never really satisfactorily resolved. I love Georgiana and the Colonel, as I usually do. The Colonel, and surprisingly, his brother, the Viscount, are delightful and insightful characters. Georgiana isn't half bad either. I really enjoyed how they were written in this account.
The ODC I mostly enjoyed, too, though the premise - while necessary for the plot of the book is...a bit of a stretch, though the author mostly makes it work. Mostly. I enjoyed the insights of most of the characters and the overall plot, and piece, itself, there are a few things that seem...a stretch. I did greatly enjoy the piece and wish there were more like it. This author can be hit or miss for me. I think I enjoy his writing, overall, but don't love some of the plot pieces treat are contrived. And when the characters get changed in too far-fetched a manner - I enjoy it less. This piece in particular stayed very true to the characters (except Mr. Bennet,) I think they were enhanced and well-imagined far the most part. Except maybe the lasciviousness of the ODC, but I as totally fine with that part.
November 26, 2024
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This story is filled with witty banter, affection, forgiveness and love. Elizabeth Bennet never imagined she'd become the wife of the proud and wealthy Mr. Darcy after a scandalous encounter at Bingley’s Netherfield Ball. Now thrust into high society as the new mistress of Pemberley, Elizabeth does not know how to fulfill her new role while continuing to love her family and stay true to herself, and she is not sure if her husband's desire for her is stronger than the anger he feels because he believes she tricked him into this marriage. Darcy was always inexplicably drawn to Elizabeth Bennet, but he’d never meant to marry far beneath himself. A drunken impulsive kiss, and then the witnesses, led by Elizabeth’s mother, burst in and sealed his fate. Fitzwilliam Darcy was a man who refused to lie to himself, they had schemed to trap him, but he had been the one to kiss Elizabeth, and he’d drunk so much that night because he’d been unhappy that he would need to leave her behind the next day. He desperately wanted her, and he could be happy with her, if only she would behave as his wife ought to. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This story is filled with witty banter, affection, forgiveness and love. Elizabeth Bennet never imagined she'd become the wife of the proud and wealthy Mr. Darcy after a scandalous encounter at Bingley’s Netherfield Ball. Now thrust into high society as the new mistress of Pemberley, Elizabeth does not know how to fulfill her new role while continuing to love her family and stay true to herself, and she is not sure if her husband's desire for her is stronger than the anger he feels because he believes she tricked him into this marriage. Darcy was always inexplicably drawn to Elizabeth Bennet, but he’d never meant to marry far beneath himself. A drunken impulsive kiss, and then the witnesses, led by Elizabeth’s mother, burst in and sealed his fate. Fitzwilliam Darcy was a man who refused to lie to himself, they had schemed to trap him, but he had been the one to kiss Elizabeth, and he’d drunk so much that night because he’d been unhappy that he would need to leave her behind the next day. He desperately wanted her, and he could be happy with her, if only she would behave as his wife ought to. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
January 18, 2025
I am always impressed when an author attempts a retelling of my beloved Jane Austen’s stories. This was certainly an interesting take - what if Darcy and Elizabeth had been forced to marry and then with all of the tension of forced proximity and dealing with the natural desire for each other have to wade through pride and prejudice? There was a decent amount that I liked about this book but with retellings, I need the characters to act like themselves. In this, I think this book fell short, particularly as to Mr. Bennet. I suppose it was necessary for the narrative but the relationship between Elizabeth and her father is one of the most endearing parts of P&P and I didn’t think this retelling treated this properly. It also was a little long with scenes that seemed unnecessary and so I did end up skimming a bit.
Content Notes: Closed door/fade to black romance
Content Notes: Closed door/fade to black romance
September 27, 2024
Kept me coming back
I knew I liked this book as I looked forward to picking it up and reading it whenever a moment presented itself. The forced marriage theme invariable brings some dark moments and Mr. Bennet was particularly dark in this one, but the darkness is balanced out and ultimately exceeded by the lightness of the story. It may have gone on a touch long (D stayed in London too long), but it was a solid and pleasant read.
I knew I liked this book as I looked forward to picking it up and reading it whenever a moment presented itself. The forced marriage theme invariable brings some dark moments and Mr. Bennet was particularly dark in this one, but the darkness is balanced out and ultimately exceeded by the lightness of the story. It may have gone on a touch long (D stayed in London too long), but it was a solid and pleasant read.
April 1, 2025
Molte variazioni hanno come fulcro un matrimonio forzato fra Darcy e Elizabeth dovuto al fatto che siano stati sorpresi insieme. E trattano delle difficoltà dei primi momenti per poi giungere alla felicità della vita condivisa. Quindi l'argomento trattato non è niente di nuovo nel panorama delle variazioni.
Ci sono dei momenti troppo lunghi in cui i dialoghi dilatano i tempi e non sempre sono interessanti.
Di questa tipologia ne ho preferiti altri.
Ci sono dei momenti troppo lunghi in cui i dialoghi dilatano i tempi e non sempre sono interessanti.
Di questa tipologia ne ho preferiti altri.
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December 10, 2025
This book surprised me. Instead of a neat fairytale, it gives us messy, vulnerable, deeply human versions of Darcy and Elizabeth. Watching them work through resentment, attraction, pride, and fear was incredibly satisfying. The forced-marriage setup could easily feel cheap, but here it’s handled with nuance and emotional weight. The payoff? Beautiful. Highly recommended for readers who want depth, not fluff.
July 31, 2024
Very good book
This is my first book by this author, and I can't wait to read more of his works.
Also to the people who said the book is very focused on the physical relationship and makes it look like there is a lot of graphic sex, there is NO description of sex. The book is not graphic or hyperfocused on the physical relationship between the couple.
This is my first book by this author, and I can't wait to read more of his works.
Also to the people who said the book is very focused on the physical relationship and makes it look like there is a lot of graphic sex, there is NO description of sex. The book is not graphic or hyperfocused on the physical relationship between the couple.
January 21, 2025
Very nice story. Darcy is an ass at the beginning, but that's kind of his job in JAFF, right? I liked the way that Darcy finally realized that the compromise really was HIS fault, and how he felt bad about it when he understood that he had taken away Elizabeth's ability to choose who she married.
The part with Mr. Bennet was good too - he completely failed Elizabeth when the compromise happened, and took him a while to realize what an idiot he had been.
I definitely recommend this book!
The part with Mr. Bennet was good too - he completely failed Elizabeth when the compromise happened, and took him a while to realize what an idiot he had been.
I definitely recommend this book!
August 20, 2024
Who knew a kiss could cause such havoc? Well of course it happens if you are if there time. A kiss, A firm papa who will not kisten... Now a forced marriage. Can she be saved? We do get our happily ever after! Just not Lydia. Lol.
January 21, 2025
This story was fabulous. I swear I’ve never read a bad book by this author, and I wasn’t disappointed on this occasion either. After a moment of weakness on Darcy’s part at the Netherfield Ball, he and Elizabeth end up married before they’ve sorted out all of their issues with one another. Of course this leads to disagreements over and over where they are at odd purposes so often. Mr. Bennet being the bad guy (so to speak) was a new twist for me. Though he and Elizabeth do try to fix their relationship before the end of the book, I hadn’t expected that and it does inspire a lot of Elizabeth’s behavior. Once the two of them actually, finally, talk to one another and things work out, of course they come to the same arrangement that they do in canon, which makes me happy. Their path to get there this time was a bit different, but it was so good I devoured this book in a matter of hours.
April 28, 2025
enjoyable
Thoroughly enjoyed this novel. I am always looking for forced marriage P&P variations and this one did not disappoint. Read it in one sitting as I did not want to put it down.
Thoroughly enjoyed this novel. I am always looking for forced marriage P&P variations and this one did not disappoint. Read it in one sitting as I did not want to put it down.
July 22, 2024
Written well but I didn't buy the romance at all. I will leave it there.
August 20, 2024
3.25 stars
September 10, 2024
Enjoyable
I enjoyed this book. Particularly a few scenes shared by Darcy and our beloved Colonel and Darcy and Mr. Bennet. Great writing there!
I enjoyed this book. Particularly a few scenes shared by Darcy and our beloved Colonel and Darcy and Mr. Bennet. Great writing there!
April 30, 2025
this was so bad and i usually love pnp adaptations
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