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For fans of The Poppy War, She Who Became the Sun and The Will of the Many, a breathtaking fantasy novel about the daughter of an overthrown emperor from an exciting new voice
Khamilla Zahr-zad’s life has been built on a foundation of violence and vengeance. Every home she’s known has been destroyed by war. As the daughter of an emperor’s clan, she spent her childhood training to maintain his throne. But when her clansmen are assassinated by another rival empire, plans change. With her heavenly magic of nur, Khamilla is a weapon even enemies would wield—especially those in the magical, scholarly city of Za’skar. Hiding her identity, Khamilla joins the enemy’s army school full of jinn, magic and martial arts, risking it all to topple her adversaries, avenge her clan and reclaim their throne.
To survive, she studies under cutthroat mystic monks and battles in a series of contests to outmaneuver her fellow soldiers. She must win at all costs, even if it means embracing the darkness lurking inside her. But the more she excels, the more she is faced with history that contradicts her father’s teachings. With a war brewing among the kingdoms and a new twisted magic overtaking the land, Khamilla is torn between two impossible vengeance or salvation.
Khamilla Zahr-zad’s life has been built on a foundation of violence and vengeance. Every home she’s known has been destroyed by war. As the daughter of an emperor’s clan, she spent her childhood training to maintain his throne. But when her clansmen are assassinated by another rival empire, plans change. With her heavenly magic of nur, Khamilla is a weapon even enemies would wield—especially those in the magical, scholarly city of Za’skar. Hiding her identity, Khamilla joins the enemy’s army school full of jinn, magic and martial arts, risking it all to topple her adversaries, avenge her clan and reclaim their throne.
To survive, she studies under cutthroat mystic monks and battles in a series of contests to outmaneuver her fellow soldiers. She must win at all costs, even if it means embracing the darkness lurking inside her. But the more she excels, the more she is faced with history that contradicts her father’s teachings. With a war brewing among the kingdoms and a new twisted magic overtaking the land, Khamilla is torn between two impossible vengeance or salvation.
480 pages, Hardcover
Expected publication December 2, 2025
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Sarah Mughal Rana
5 books315 followersSarah Mughal Rana, Pakistani author of the debut novel Hope Ablaze, is a writer and student at Oxford University, pursuing her MPhil at the intersection of human rights and policy. She is a BookTok personality and the co-host of On the Write Track Podcast where she enjoys spilling tea with her favourite authors about the book world. Outside of school, she falls down history rabbit holes and trains in traditional martial arts. These days can find her on Instagram & Tiktok
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October 3, 2025
The writing is BEAUTIFUL in this book! So poetic & descriptive (and the FOOD descriptions??? 🤤)
This story follows such a unique FMC who is struggling to find a sense of belonging, while dealing with trauma from a young age. The way she manipulates her own memory throughout the book is so interesting.
Some of the lore and war strategy honestly was a bit difficult for me to pick up at points, and went a little over my head 😂 but if you love imperfect characters trying to balance on the line of morality, found family, and the absolute coolest fight scenes, definitely recommend!
This story follows such a unique FMC who is struggling to find a sense of belonging, while dealing with trauma from a young age. The way she manipulates her own memory throughout the book is so interesting.
Some of the lore and war strategy honestly was a bit difficult for me to pick up at points, and went a little over my head 😂 but if you love imperfect characters trying to balance on the line of morality, found family, and the absolute coolest fight scenes, definitely recommend!
July 6, 2025
I wish i didn't have to write a review like this but as a reviewer, i need to be honest. This book just wasn't for me. It sounded promising from the synopsis and what i saw on social media but it fell flat. I felt like i was reading some sort of textbook at times and because i couldn't get into it at the beginning, the rest just didn't grip me. I wanted to dnf at times but i told myself to give it a chance. It was ok in certain areas (hence the 2 stars) but nothing more and i had to skim read just to get myself to finish the book. I thought it may be because i'm not in the right headspace right now but i think, even if i were to re-read it when i'm better, my thoughts will still be the same.
I felt like the author was trying to do a lot so nothing was explained well and there wasn't much development with characters. I felt no connection to any of them. I didn't even like them so when things were meant to be emotional, i just didn't care. This book could've delivered really well if the writing and worldbuilding had been better. It's a shame that i couldn't connect with it.
Thank you so much Netgalley and Bloomsbury Publishing for allowing me to read an e-arc for an honest review. I truly appreciate it.
I felt like the author was trying to do a lot so nothing was explained well and there wasn't much development with characters. I felt no connection to any of them. I didn't even like them so when things were meant to be emotional, i just didn't care. This book could've delivered really well if the writing and worldbuilding had been better. It's a shame that i couldn't connect with it.
Thank you so much Netgalley and Bloomsbury Publishing for allowing me to read an e-arc for an honest review. I truly appreciate it.
July 24, 2025
Unfortunately it’s a DNF for me. From the very start this book just has to much packed in. It felt clunky and disorganized and by 20% I was bored and knew it wasn’t for me. I really didn’t read enough for a thorough plot review I just couldn’t get there. Comparing this book to Poppy Wars kinda feels like a crime. Not on the same level. I do think that there was some potential there but it just fell flat and didn’t really follow through.
Thank you to Harper Collin’s and Netgalley for the arc I’m sorry it just wasn’t for me
Thank you to Harper Collin’s and Netgalley for the arc I’m sorry it just wasn’t for me
June 18, 2025
If I had to take a shot every time I read the word heavenly, I’d be dead nine times over.
This book started strong. The opening hooked me, and I was genuinely curious to see what all of it was building up to. I had not read a central-asian inspired fantasy before, and I was excited to learn and grow alongside the characters. But somewhere around the halfway mark, it felt like the book lost sight of itself.
The story became bogged down by infodumps that didn’t lead anywhere meaningful, and the pacing dragged as a result. It felt like the book was constantly distracted by its own world, desperate to wave every shiny idea in the reader's face without fully integrating them into the plot. Like a collage of other fantasies mashed together without cohesion. If you’ve read the books this one is comped to, you’ll pick up on the 'inspiration' scenes immediately—except the originals did them much better, with a finer focus on what made those scenes/dynamics interesting in the first place.
The bigger issue is that the book clearly wants to be epic and sweeping, but it doesn’t have the restraint, narrative discipline, and clarity to pull it off. Instead of refining its core themes and letting them breathe, it keeps adding more until none of it really lands. (And it also tried too hard to be edgy...like a 14-yo boy who wants to add every dark possible thing to his D&D world) The magic system especially was hard to grasp—not because it was complex, but because it just wasn’t explained in a consistent or helpful way. (I almost wanted to dnf it after the MC pulls out some new power up every battle to win)
As for the MC, she read as pretty juvenile—which was fine in the beginning. (I liked the beginning, I swear, Eliyas was great) But as the story went on, there wasn’t much growth or meaningful introspection until the very end, and by that point, it felt too little, too late.
Her PTSD and memory loss had the potential to be compelling. There were moments where I could see the glimmer of a more layered character under the surface. But the book never gave her enough room to be a person. Everything she did felt like it was in service of moving the plot forward rather than reflecting anything internal. Without a clear sense of who she is beyond what the story needs from her, it was hard to root for her or feel connected to her journey.
In the end, it all kind of collapsed under its own weight. A story trying so hard to be everything ends up saying very little. I think the author has potential, and I would advise her to trust her own instincts and less of what other fantasies are doing.
Thanks to HarperCollins for the ARC.
This book started strong. The opening hooked me, and I was genuinely curious to see what all of it was building up to. I had not read a central-asian inspired fantasy before, and I was excited to learn and grow alongside the characters. But somewhere around the halfway mark, it felt like the book lost sight of itself.
The story became bogged down by infodumps that didn’t lead anywhere meaningful, and the pacing dragged as a result. It felt like the book was constantly distracted by its own world, desperate to wave every shiny idea in the reader's face without fully integrating them into the plot. Like a collage of other fantasies mashed together without cohesion. If you’ve read the books this one is comped to, you’ll pick up on the 'inspiration' scenes immediately—except the originals did them much better, with a finer focus on what made those scenes/dynamics interesting in the first place.
The bigger issue is that the book clearly wants to be epic and sweeping, but it doesn’t have the restraint, narrative discipline, and clarity to pull it off. Instead of refining its core themes and letting them breathe, it keeps adding more until none of it really lands. (And it also tried too hard to be edgy...like a 14-yo boy who wants to add every dark possible thing to his D&D world) The magic system especially was hard to grasp—not because it was complex, but because it just wasn’t explained in a consistent or helpful way. (I almost wanted to dnf it after the MC pulls out some new power up every battle to win)
As for the MC, she read as pretty juvenile—which was fine in the beginning. (I liked the beginning, I swear, Eliyas was great) But as the story went on, there wasn’t much growth or meaningful introspection until the very end, and by that point, it felt too little, too late.
Her PTSD and memory loss had the potential to be compelling. There were moments where I could see the glimmer of a more layered character under the surface. But the book never gave her enough room to be a person. Everything she did felt like it was in service of moving the plot forward rather than reflecting anything internal. Without a clear sense of who she is beyond what the story needs from her, it was hard to root for her or feel connected to her journey.
In the end, it all kind of collapsed under its own weight. A story trying so hard to be everything ends up saying very little. I think the author has potential, and I would advise her to trust her own instincts and less of what other fantasies are doing.
Thanks to HarperCollins for the ARC.
September 11, 2024
Longer review to come, but I had the opportunity to read an early version of DotFB & y'all aren't ready!!! Honestly it is a POWERHOUSE of a fantasy novel & such a unique world that I don't think I've read in a fantasy book before. It's gritty and raw and powerful & perfect for a true fantasy reader. I can't wait until it's out in the world!!!
July 13, 2025
READING IS SUBJECTIVE!
Had to start by saying that this book just wasn’t for me. This is definitely a high fantasy with very intense world building. I definitely enjoy high fantasies but this for me was too much world building I felt like I couldn’t get into the plot of it. Every time I felt like I was getting somewhere, there was just so much information to take in I couldn’t keep up with it. It’s definitely very heavy on the politics and culture aspects aswell so again a lot to take in and remember as you’re going along.
I did really enjoy the magic system it was very unique, definitely haven’t read another book with anything like this. I’m pretty sure I was pronouncing over half the people/places incorrectly but that’s just my own incompetence 🤭
The story line was very interesting and I think a lot of people will definitely love this. Unfortunately for me it was too much from the start to understand what was going on and follow along. But please give this a go as not every book is for everyone so please try it before you walk past it 💖
Had to start by saying that this book just wasn’t for me. This is definitely a high fantasy with very intense world building. I definitely enjoy high fantasies but this for me was too much world building I felt like I couldn’t get into the plot of it. Every time I felt like I was getting somewhere, there was just so much information to take in I couldn’t keep up with it. It’s definitely very heavy on the politics and culture aspects aswell so again a lot to take in and remember as you’re going along.
I did really enjoy the magic system it was very unique, definitely haven’t read another book with anything like this. I’m pretty sure I was pronouncing over half the people/places incorrectly but that’s just my own incompetence 🤭
The story line was very interesting and I think a lot of people will definitely love this. Unfortunately for me it was too much from the start to understand what was going on and follow along. But please give this a go as not every book is for everyone so please try it before you walk past it 💖
August 11, 2025
Update 11/08:
My original review was reported and removed - proof of ‘someone’ reporting negative reviews.
Original review:
Thank you to Sarah Mughal Rana, Bloomsbury, and NetGalley for the e-arc in exchange for an honest review.
Dawn of the Firebird had an interesting premise but it wasn’t executed perfectly. There was a lot of info-dumping and the sentence structure could be jarring at times. I was also surprised to find out that this book wasn’t being marketed for YA (I wouldn’t have picked it up if it was). A re-edit to make it suitable for YA may have worked better.
The author is obviously very intelligent and creative, but this one just didn’t work for me. I think if you’re stepping into fantasy and don’t have many other books to compare it to, you might quite like it. If you have, you’ll understand that quite a few ideas have been magpied and not executed quite as well. I had to dnf.
The author / author’s family has also been acting unprofessionally toward reviewers / readers, which is disappointing.
My original review was reported and removed - proof of ‘someone’ reporting negative reviews.
Original review:
Thank you to Sarah Mughal Rana, Bloomsbury, and NetGalley for the e-arc in exchange for an honest review.
Dawn of the Firebird had an interesting premise but it wasn’t executed perfectly. There was a lot of info-dumping and the sentence structure could be jarring at times. I was also surprised to find out that this book wasn’t being marketed for YA (I wouldn’t have picked it up if it was). A re-edit to make it suitable for YA may have worked better.
The author is obviously very intelligent and creative, but this one just didn’t work for me. I think if you’re stepping into fantasy and don’t have many other books to compare it to, you might quite like it. If you have, you’ll understand that quite a few ideas have been magpied and not executed quite as well. I had to dnf.
The author / author’s family has also been acting unprofessionally toward reviewers / readers, which is disappointing.
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July 11, 2025i'm sure the pintrest boards for this book were lovely
August 9, 2025
I want to preface this by saying that I don't think this was a bad book, it just wasn't for me. The plot had a lot of potential and at times I was interested in the story, but overall I just didn't end up connecting with it.
A young girl lives in a nomadic clan raised by her mother and on the path to being a storyteller. The lands she lives in are rife with enemies and after her village is destroyed in war, she takes to living with her father, the emperor. He is reluctant to take her in, only doing so for the rare magic she wields. As she grows in his court, she learns various tools to control her powers and thwart attacks from poison. However, this home, too, is stolen from her through war. After having lost so much, Khamilla must seek revenge.
This story was incredibly dense and a little chaotic for me. The prose made it difficult for me to see the complexities of the characters as it focused heavily on their courtly motivations. I think the part that made it hard for me to connect to this story, however, was the magic. It lacked a solid form or shape in my mind even after half of the book. As it was central to the story, this made it a challenge to envision the happenings of the plot. All in all, this could definitely be an enjoyable read for others but it sadly wasn't the right book for me.
Thank you NetGalley for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
A young girl lives in a nomadic clan raised by her mother and on the path to being a storyteller. The lands she lives in are rife with enemies and after her village is destroyed in war, she takes to living with her father, the emperor. He is reluctant to take her in, only doing so for the rare magic she wields. As she grows in his court, she learns various tools to control her powers and thwart attacks from poison. However, this home, too, is stolen from her through war. After having lost so much, Khamilla must seek revenge.
This story was incredibly dense and a little chaotic for me. The prose made it difficult for me to see the complexities of the characters as it focused heavily on their courtly motivations. I think the part that made it hard for me to connect to this story, however, was the magic. It lacked a solid form or shape in my mind even after half of the book. As it was central to the story, this made it a challenge to envision the happenings of the plot. All in all, this could definitely be an enjoyable read for others but it sadly wasn't the right book for me.
Thank you NetGalley for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
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May 23, 2025Dnf at 10 pages, had trouble with the inconsistent switch between past-present tense writing/editing.
July 20, 2025
(I dont know wtf is going on in these reviews, but there's like obvious troll accounts trying to start drama??)
Anyways, thank you to NetGalley and Bloomsbury for an e-arc in exchange for an honest review!
As a debut fantasy novel, I’m impressed by the sheer ambition of this book. While it doesn’t always and consistently deliver on scope, breadth and depth, I can totally see the series getting better with each book.
In this book, the author has clearly dedicated a lot of time, a lot of thought, and a lot of energy to building a unique world that carefully and respectfully pays homage to Asian communities and cultures (specifically central asian, I think). The author does this by reaching beyond the contemporary nation-state era back to a quasi-feudal form of political organization. There is a major emphasis on these characters, engaging with, and also being situated in smaller, more localized communities, marked by villages, regions or feudal lords. This is at the core of the structure of the novel, and also shapes the subsequent relationships and the central conflict. I really enjoyed this part of the book because Rana doesn’t copy-paste or rely on real-life cultures to do the heavy lifting of her worldbuilding. Instead, she takes these elements and plays around with them to differentiate her worldbuilding from others. The end result subsequently feels like a real-life kingdom/province. At the same time, I could totally see where readers (specifically those who don’t tend to pick up adult historical fantasies) can get lost, as the information does feel overwhelming at times.
As Rana draws from real-life inspiration, she’s also keeping the story rooted in a historical, more fantasy-based, elemental-centred world. The worldbuilding in her novel extends to what I mentioned before (more material forms of cultural inspiration, like foods and clothing). But at the same time, she’s weaving in political intrigue grounded by a really interesting Quranic magic system. In fact, this political intrigue throughout the entire book was one of the absolute highlights for me personally. While the upkeep of the politics isn’t always perfectly consistent or pursued with the same degree of energy throughout the narrative, I still think it really speaks to how great the book is on this front. Specifically, the central narrative gets re-anchored to different parts of this world. As a reader, I thought the transition between these different settings, in terms of the actual environment and political games, was a little awkward at times and felt abrupt/illogical. As I said earlier, you can really tell the author is passionate about this; it’s clear she spent a lot of time researching because the politics and strategies we see in the academy portion are layered, complex, and well thought-out.
In terms of the writing style, there were two aspects to it that I had complicated feelings about. On one hand, I loved the prose. Concerning description and setting up vivid visuals for the reader, the author does an excellent job. The beautiful prose made up for some of the weaker points in the book, especially in the middle sections where the character is at the academy. That part was one I found was the weakest, with a stagnant subplot, so having such smooth prose really helped to chug the narrative along.
However, I didn’t really vibe with the tone and voice of the characters, specifically our FMC. I think at the start, the author does very well in depicting the immaturity, age, and potential areas of development of the FMC. As the book progresses, she does end up going through a brutal and dark character development arc. Yet, while she technically matures, the voice weirdly stays the same. I really do feel like there was more room for the tone to mature along with her.
Overall, this was such a fantastic read! With how dense the worldbuilding and politics can be, I think this will especially land with those who enjoy books such as the Green Bone saga and/or She Who Became the Sun!
Anyways, thank you to NetGalley and Bloomsbury for an e-arc in exchange for an honest review!
As a debut fantasy novel, I’m impressed by the sheer ambition of this book. While it doesn’t always and consistently deliver on scope, breadth and depth, I can totally see the series getting better with each book.
In this book, the author has clearly dedicated a lot of time, a lot of thought, and a lot of energy to building a unique world that carefully and respectfully pays homage to Asian communities and cultures (specifically central asian, I think). The author does this by reaching beyond the contemporary nation-state era back to a quasi-feudal form of political organization. There is a major emphasis on these characters, engaging with, and also being situated in smaller, more localized communities, marked by villages, regions or feudal lords. This is at the core of the structure of the novel, and also shapes the subsequent relationships and the central conflict. I really enjoyed this part of the book because Rana doesn’t copy-paste or rely on real-life cultures to do the heavy lifting of her worldbuilding. Instead, she takes these elements and plays around with them to differentiate her worldbuilding from others. The end result subsequently feels like a real-life kingdom/province. At the same time, I could totally see where readers (specifically those who don’t tend to pick up adult historical fantasies) can get lost, as the information does feel overwhelming at times.
As Rana draws from real-life inspiration, she’s also keeping the story rooted in a historical, more fantasy-based, elemental-centred world. The worldbuilding in her novel extends to what I mentioned before (more material forms of cultural inspiration, like foods and clothing). But at the same time, she’s weaving in political intrigue grounded by a really interesting Quranic magic system. In fact, this political intrigue throughout the entire book was one of the absolute highlights for me personally. While the upkeep of the politics isn’t always perfectly consistent or pursued with the same degree of energy throughout the narrative, I still think it really speaks to how great the book is on this front. Specifically, the central narrative gets re-anchored to different parts of this world. As a reader, I thought the transition between these different settings, in terms of the actual environment and political games, was a little awkward at times and felt abrupt/illogical. As I said earlier, you can really tell the author is passionate about this; it’s clear she spent a lot of time researching because the politics and strategies we see in the academy portion are layered, complex, and well thought-out.
In terms of the writing style, there were two aspects to it that I had complicated feelings about. On one hand, I loved the prose. Concerning description and setting up vivid visuals for the reader, the author does an excellent job. The beautiful prose made up for some of the weaker points in the book, especially in the middle sections where the character is at the academy. That part was one I found was the weakest, with a stagnant subplot, so having such smooth prose really helped to chug the narrative along.
However, I didn’t really vibe with the tone and voice of the characters, specifically our FMC. I think at the start, the author does very well in depicting the immaturity, age, and potential areas of development of the FMC. As the book progresses, she does end up going through a brutal and dark character development arc. Yet, while she technically matures, the voice weirdly stays the same. I really do feel like there was more room for the tone to mature along with her.
Overall, this was such a fantastic read! With how dense the worldbuilding and politics can be, I think this will especially land with those who enjoy books such as the Green Bone saga and/or She Who Became the Sun!
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August 8, 2025Just came from @greekchoir tiktok, and yeah. A lot of these negative 1 star reviews are definitely fake, pretending they're getting harassed, trying to orchestrate a cancel campaign. Their reviews, as the tiktoker pointed out, are full of repetition and things that aren't even true about the book or are super vague and something you could write about any negative book. Everyone knows when you hate a book you come with the RECEPITS. (I do). I recommend people watch the tiktok.
In short, it seems like this is a revenge campaign of sorts. With multiple accounts that are brand new harassing the author. Did I check their other ratings? Yeah lol. For some reason quite a few of them rated her debut novel a 1 star too. Why would you request an ARC for an author who's book you loathed? Oh right, you didn't, you're just pretending.
I have my thoughts on who is orchestrating this, based on comments and information I've seen. 😒 and if I'm right, that's SUPER super embarrassing.
The worrying this is, how do you stop this? This person (or persons) could make hundreds of reviews and ratings and skew the entire rating system. That's just a new low.
Anyway, I am excited for the book and will rate it truthfully whether I like it or not because IT'S NOT THAT SERIOUS GUYS. IT'S A BOOK.
ACTUALLY it is that serious.
I requested AN ARC for this book and didn't get it so I'M A SALTY
In short, it seems like this is a revenge campaign of sorts. With multiple accounts that are brand new harassing the author. Did I check their other ratings? Yeah lol. For some reason quite a few of them rated her debut novel a 1 star too. Why would you request an ARC for an author who's book you loathed? Oh right, you didn't, you're just pretending.
I have my thoughts on who is orchestrating this, based on comments and information I've seen. 😒 and if I'm right, that's SUPER super embarrassing.
The worrying this is, how do you stop this? This person (or persons) could make hundreds of reviews and ratings and skew the entire rating system. That's just a new low.
Anyway, I am excited for the book and will rate it truthfully whether I like it or not because IT'S NOT THAT SERIOUS GUYS. IT'S A BOOK.
ACTUALLY it is that serious.
I requested AN ARC for this book and didn't get it so I'M A SALTY
August 24, 2025
I want to start by saying how grateful I am to have received an advanced reader copy of this book through netgalley. Unfortunately, I was not able to finish it. While I always strive to give each book a fair chance, I ultimately found that this one just wasn’t for me.
The writing style felt inconsistent at times, which made it difficult for me to stay grounded in the story. Additionally, the narrative structure—particularly the time jumps—was challenging to follow. I also struggled with the world-building, which, while clearly rich and imaginative, came across as overly complex for my personal reading preferences.
That said, I fully acknowledge that these critiques reflect my own tastes and not the overall quality of the book. I can see how readers who enjoy intricate worlds and nonlinear storytelling may connect with it much more deeply. I encourage those interested to give it a try and form their own opinions.
The writing style felt inconsistent at times, which made it difficult for me to stay grounded in the story. Additionally, the narrative structure—particularly the time jumps—was challenging to follow. I also struggled with the world-building, which, while clearly rich and imaginative, came across as overly complex for my personal reading preferences.
That said, I fully acknowledge that these critiques reflect my own tastes and not the overall quality of the book. I can see how readers who enjoy intricate worlds and nonlinear storytelling may connect with it much more deeply. I encourage those interested to give it a try and form their own opinions.
August 15, 2025
DNF — and I wish I’d dropped it the second I saw the words “the creator created us.” That was my first red flag that I was in the hands of a writer with no grasp of prose or storytelling. From there, Dawn of the Firebird spirals into one of the most boring, clunky, and confusing reading experiences I’ve ever endured. The pacing? Nonexistent. The sentence structure? Jarring. The scenes? Irrelevant filler stacked on irrelevant filler. The author will spend paragraphs describing useless nonsense no one cares about while completely ignoring basic things like where the hell the characters are or what they’re doing. It’s all noise, no signal.
And then there’s the main character, an insufferable, juvenile, self-proclaimed “special” prodigy who is constantly praised by everyone and framed as the best at everything. Every character description somehow loops back to her. Being trapped in her head was torture. She’s the kind of narrator that makes you hate turning the page. Pair that with worldbuilding so poorly conveyed that I often had to reread entire sections just to figure out what was supposed to be happening, and still came up empty, and in summary, you’ve got a recipe for a book that feels like a sedative.
The constant bird imagery was the final nail in the coffin. I thought “firebird” might be a metaphor. Nope! Just endless talk about birds until I started resenting them. And don’t think the “academy” sections save it, those scenes are some of the dullest, most sleep-inducing pages I’ve ever read. The whole thing is marketed like it’s on par with The Poppy War, but that comparison isn’t just wrong, it’s insulting. This book isn’t in the same league, the same sport, or even the same planet.
And if the book’s mediocrity wasn’t bad enough, the behavior surrounding it is somehow worse. Reviews, including mine, have been reported and deleted. Readers accused of being trolls or bots simply for not liking it. People have been harassed, lied about, and identity-policed because they have dared to DNF this book. I’ve seen thin-skinned authors before, but this takes it to a new level: petty, vindictive, and wildly unprofessional. Goodreads is for readers, not a playground for authors, friends, and family to bully critics into silence.
This isn’t just the worst book I’ve read this year, it’s one of the worst I’ve read, period. I couldn’t even hate-read it. Nothing happens, nothing makes sense, and everything that is described is completely useless. The author magpies ideas from better books, executes them poorly, and then doubles down on ego instead of craft. Between the bad writing, the insufferable protagonist, and the exhausting circus of author drama, which includes the drama surrounding her debut book, her sister, and with what happened with Molly X. Chang, I can say with full confidence: I hated this book, I hated this experience, and I will never pick up anything by this author again.
Thank you to HarperCollins and NetGalley for the review copy— all opinions are my own, and I’m sorry, but this just wasn’t for me.
And then there’s the main character, an insufferable, juvenile, self-proclaimed “special” prodigy who is constantly praised by everyone and framed as the best at everything. Every character description somehow loops back to her. Being trapped in her head was torture. She’s the kind of narrator that makes you hate turning the page. Pair that with worldbuilding so poorly conveyed that I often had to reread entire sections just to figure out what was supposed to be happening, and still came up empty, and in summary, you’ve got a recipe for a book that feels like a sedative.
The constant bird imagery was the final nail in the coffin. I thought “firebird” might be a metaphor. Nope! Just endless talk about birds until I started resenting them. And don’t think the “academy” sections save it, those scenes are some of the dullest, most sleep-inducing pages I’ve ever read. The whole thing is marketed like it’s on par with The Poppy War, but that comparison isn’t just wrong, it’s insulting. This book isn’t in the same league, the same sport, or even the same planet.
And if the book’s mediocrity wasn’t bad enough, the behavior surrounding it is somehow worse. Reviews, including mine, have been reported and deleted. Readers accused of being trolls or bots simply for not liking it. People have been harassed, lied about, and identity-policed because they have dared to DNF this book. I’ve seen thin-skinned authors before, but this takes it to a new level: petty, vindictive, and wildly unprofessional. Goodreads is for readers, not a playground for authors, friends, and family to bully critics into silence.
This isn’t just the worst book I’ve read this year, it’s one of the worst I’ve read, period. I couldn’t even hate-read it. Nothing happens, nothing makes sense, and everything that is described is completely useless. The author magpies ideas from better books, executes them poorly, and then doubles down on ego instead of craft. Between the bad writing, the insufferable protagonist, and the exhausting circus of author drama, which includes the drama surrounding her debut book, her sister, and with what happened with Molly X. Chang, I can say with full confidence: I hated this book, I hated this experience, and I will never pick up anything by this author again.
Thank you to HarperCollins and NetGalley for the review copy— all opinions are my own, and I’m sorry, but this just wasn’t for me.
July 21, 2025
Trash! DNF
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August 23, 2025My thanks to Bloomsbury Publishing Plc (UK & ANZ) and NetGalley for a free DRC of "Dawn of the Firebird" by Sarah Mughal Rana.
An Epic Fantasy debut that is packed with magic and court intrigue.
The first part, my favorite, reminded me a bit with falling in love with reading, thanks to "1001 Arabian Nights'. I was sad when that part ended.
The next part, the palace intrigue was too much for me in the sense it had too many things going on. I felt like I lost the connection with the main heroine.
While I had to stop reading, I am glad I gave this debut I try and I'll keep an eye on this author's future works.
An Epic Fantasy debut that is packed with magic and court intrigue.
The first part, my favorite, reminded me a bit with falling in love with reading, thanks to "1001 Arabian Nights'. I was sad when that part ended.
The next part, the palace intrigue was too much for me in the sense it had too many things going on. I felt like I lost the connection with the main heroine.
While I had to stop reading, I am glad I gave this debut I try and I'll keep an eye on this author's future works.
July 30, 2025
I have very mixed feelings about this book. The world building was beautiful and intricate and I really enjoyed it, but at times it did feel like it got in the way of the actual plot. Around the middle things started to lag, but I felt they did pick up again towards the end, and hopefully that improved pacing will continue in the sequel. Not my favourite book, but I enjoyed it enough that I think I will go back for the next one in the series.
I received a copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review
I received a copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review
September 3, 2025
Thank you NetGalley for this ARC!
I'm usually very generous with ratings, and it's not typical for me to give bad reviews. It's my second 2 star review ever but I feel like it's totally justified.
If it tells you anything, it took me over a month of reading to finish this book. Can't believe I spent that much time of something I expected to be more thrilling. Either my expectations were too high or this book is just not for me. Probably both.
2/5 ⭐ Boring plot, boring characters, boring philosophical statements that don't make sense, boring and predictable ending.
I finished 4 other books while I was reading Dawn of the firebird at the same time, one of them was The wedding people. And I kept thinking "man, I don't want this book to end" while reading The wedding people and The housemaid, and "I can't wait for this book to end" while reading Dawn of the firebird. And I'm a huge fantasy lover and have been since I was a teen!
It started so slow that the first quarter of it could have easily fit on one page and it would make no difference. I was getting tired of rolling eyes every time I saw the words "heavenly" and "bird" (spoiler - there were way too many!)
I still don't see how this book is about her infiltrating an enemy magic school because it seems to be so clumped together with other ideas and unnecessary events that it's hard to see the big picture.
And what's up with all her assignments there being about her tribe's lands? It's become so boring and predictable to have her circle back to her origins every chapter.
The magic system is also pretty hard to understand because there's too many foreign names and too little description, and when there is, it's all too confusing (much like the description of the battle scenes, because what in the world is that? I had so much trouble understanding how every one of them went!)
The main character barely had any development through the whole book. If anything she's the most annoying main character I've ever read about. She was as flat as it gets and definitely not morally gray and "super smart" as the author is advertising. The only improvement I saw was when she warmed up towards the kids.
On the bright side, intricate politics are kind of captivating. I haven't read The poppy war but Dawn of the firebird reminds me a bit of Dune.
I did appreciate some of the other elements, too. As someone who was raised in Eastern Europe, I'm quite familiar with the ways of our closest neighbor countries and it made my heart full when I realized I knew these things and they brought me back home for a little bit.
All in all, it was an interesting story but with how much space descriptions of every little detail and dialogues take, it seems more like a movie script than a book. I understand the author was trying to set the mood and elevate cultural aspect, but it was overwhelming and not in a good way. I'm not looking for that in books, I'm looking for deep connection with a fictional world and it's characters to the point where I'd want to teleport to their world and I'd cry if they died. Dawn of the firebird wasn't it.
I'm usually very generous with ratings, and it's not typical for me to give bad reviews. It's my second 2 star review ever but I feel like it's totally justified.
If it tells you anything, it took me over a month of reading to finish this book. Can't believe I spent that much time of something I expected to be more thrilling. Either my expectations were too high or this book is just not for me. Probably both.
2/5 ⭐ Boring plot, boring characters, boring philosophical statements that don't make sense, boring and predictable ending.
I finished 4 other books while I was reading Dawn of the firebird at the same time, one of them was The wedding people. And I kept thinking "man, I don't want this book to end" while reading The wedding people and The housemaid, and "I can't wait for this book to end" while reading Dawn of the firebird. And I'm a huge fantasy lover and have been since I was a teen!
It started so slow that the first quarter of it could have easily fit on one page and it would make no difference. I was getting tired of rolling eyes every time I saw the words "heavenly" and "bird" (spoiler - there were way too many!)
I still don't see how this book is about her infiltrating an enemy magic school because it seems to be so clumped together with other ideas and unnecessary events that it's hard to see the big picture.
And what's up with all her assignments there being about her tribe's lands? It's become so boring and predictable to have her circle back to her origins every chapter.
The magic system is also pretty hard to understand because there's too many foreign names and too little description, and when there is, it's all too confusing (much like the description of the battle scenes, because what in the world is that? I had so much trouble understanding how every one of them went!)
The main character barely had any development through the whole book. If anything she's the most annoying main character I've ever read about. She was as flat as it gets and definitely not morally gray and "super smart" as the author is advertising. The only improvement I saw was when she warmed up towards the kids.
On the bright side, intricate politics are kind of captivating. I haven't read The poppy war but Dawn of the firebird reminds me a bit of Dune.
I did appreciate some of the other elements, too. As someone who was raised in Eastern Europe, I'm quite familiar with the ways of our closest neighbor countries and it made my heart full when I realized I knew these things and they brought me back home for a little bit.
All in all, it was an interesting story but with how much space descriptions of every little detail and dialogues take, it seems more like a movie script than a book. I understand the author was trying to set the mood and elevate cultural aspect, but it was overwhelming and not in a good way. I'm not looking for that in books, I'm looking for deep connection with a fictional world and it's characters to the point where I'd want to teleport to their world and I'd cry if they died. Dawn of the firebird wasn't it.
September 16, 2025
This is for The Poppy War fans.
If you take rage, unrelenting determination, hidden treachery, and someone who will do anything to win: you will get this book.
Tyrants may not have chains around our necks, but they control something worse: our ideology.
The emperor’s black sheep barbarian daughter, a child of the Usur tribe, returns to the palace after thwarting invaders. She must prove herself and stay alive through harsh training and family willing to poison each other.
She is determined to infiltrate the ranks of their enemies who are formidable warriors and wield nūr - heavenly magic. Unbeknownst to most at court, our heroine is also able to wield these heavenly bonds.
That is all I’m going to say because so much happens and I don’t know what would be a spoiler or not.
It started off reminding me of The Birth of a Dynasty and then flips and turned into The Poppy War.
Our heroine begins unnamed, caught between two worlds and desperate to earn the loyalty of her father, the untouchable emperor. Everything is tinged with violent bonds of love which our heroine has normalised and even seeks.
And of course, children are children through their dreams. Children only become monsters when all the dreams fade away.
Where we started and where we ended up was crazily different. It astounded me how the main character and her convictions changed (but also didn’t).
The ending did feel too rushed - over-powered characters, a whiplash of a climax, and a resolution which left me unsatisfied.
However, I liked how unapologetic this book is in the anger and the unlikable underdog you can’t help but root for.
I can understand the mixed reviews, my own thoughts are all over the place.
Physical arc gifted by Bloomsbury Publishing.
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If you take rage, unrelenting determination, hidden treachery, and someone who will do anything to win: you will get this book.
Tyrants may not have chains around our necks, but they control something worse: our ideology.
The emperor’s black sheep barbarian daughter, a child of the Usur tribe, returns to the palace after thwarting invaders. She must prove herself and stay alive through harsh training and family willing to poison each other.
She is determined to infiltrate the ranks of their enemies who are formidable warriors and wield nūr - heavenly magic. Unbeknownst to most at court, our heroine is also able to wield these heavenly bonds.
That is all I’m going to say because so much happens and I don’t know what would be a spoiler or not.
It started off reminding me of The Birth of a Dynasty and then flips and turned into The Poppy War.
Our heroine begins unnamed, caught between two worlds and desperate to earn the loyalty of her father, the untouchable emperor. Everything is tinged with violent bonds of love which our heroine has normalised and even seeks.
And of course, children are children through their dreams. Children only become monsters when all the dreams fade away.
Where we started and where we ended up was crazily different. It astounded me how the main character and her convictions changed (but also didn’t).
The ending did feel too rushed - over-powered characters, a whiplash of a climax, and a resolution which left me unsatisfied.
However, I liked how unapologetic this book is in the anger and the unlikable underdog you can’t help but root for.
I can understand the mixed reviews, my own thoughts are all over the place.
Physical arc gifted by Bloomsbury Publishing.
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July 23, 2025Extremely weird reviews for this book.
August 16, 2025
The first 25% was absolutely banging and then…idk. I think this book tried for too much. I’m so sad bc the author can definitely write and it has absolutely everything I should love but it just fell short
August 11, 2025
Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for an arc of this book.
I really wanted to love this book but it felt flat for me. Part one was engaging but it was a bit confusing to learn about the world. I liked the pacing of this part, lots of important events and characters are introduced. As we get to part 2, where Khamilla is at Za’skar, the pace gets really really slow. It got to a point where I wanted to stop reading. Lots of information was thrown, not much was happening. It felt almost like a different story. Then, the pace picked up in part 3 and it got better. I did have trouble to connect with Khamilla. It’s not a bad book, the writing is nice. However, the pacing of the story was lacking for me. I found that the world building was also confusing and I had trouble at times to keep up. I don’t think I’ll read the next book.
I really wanted to love this book but it felt flat for me. Part one was engaging but it was a bit confusing to learn about the world. I liked the pacing of this part, lots of important events and characters are introduced. As we get to part 2, where Khamilla is at Za’skar, the pace gets really really slow. It got to a point where I wanted to stop reading. Lots of information was thrown, not much was happening. It felt almost like a different story. Then, the pace picked up in part 3 and it got better. I did have trouble to connect with Khamilla. It’s not a bad book, the writing is nice. However, the pacing of the story was lacking for me. I found that the world building was also confusing and I had trouble at times to keep up. I don’t think I’ll read the next book.
October 16, 2025
3.75*
this was reallyyyy good omg! i enjoyed learning about the world and the magic system, it was so cool. the fighting scenes were also top tier!!
the only thing is that i didnt really feel connected to the main character until the end of the book, but im really excited to see how the story continues 👀
this was reallyyyy good omg! i enjoyed learning about the world and the magic system, it was so cool. the fighting scenes were also top tier!!
the only thing is that i didnt really feel connected to the main character until the end of the book, but im really excited to see how the story continues 👀
July 2, 2025
This turned out to be a great read that kept me turning pages late into the night. The story is full of action and great world building that felt full of potential.
It did take me a little while to find my footing. There’s a lot of information and names thrown at you early on, and the pacing doesn’t give you much time to catch your breath. But once I got into the flow of it I was fully invested.
The plot moves fast, but it kept me engaged the whole way through. I really enjoyed the twists, and the fresh take on familiar fantasy elements. Overall a really enjoyable read, and I’m really excited to see where the story goes next.
It did take me a little while to find my footing. There’s a lot of information and names thrown at you early on, and the pacing doesn’t give you much time to catch your breath. But once I got into the flow of it I was fully invested.
The plot moves fast, but it kept me engaged the whole way through. I really enjoyed the twists, and the fresh take on familiar fantasy elements. Overall a really enjoyable read, and I’m really excited to see where the story goes next.
November 21, 2025
Lush world building, high stakes fantasy with an amazing strong female main character. I love that she starts her journey with no name and desires to earn her place, her name and her family. This was such an emotional read with so many gut wrenching moments that provoked true thought about so many aspects of life. The setting of many nations warring and our main character warring with herself sets the stage for a truly breathtaking fantasy.
August 9, 2025
“[…] family is not the blood running through your clan or the gnarled roots twisting beneath a tree in archaic tradition, a cage to be rebuilt generation after generation. It’s the people worth every breath, every labour, and every act of love to create a home.”
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for this eARc!
I am very torn.
So let’s start with the positives. Right from the start, the writing is so rich that you feel the story through all your senses. I could almost taste the dishes, feel the fabric, see the architecture, hear and smell the plains. I also loved learning more about cultures and mythologies that I am (sadly) not as familiar with. In the same way that European mythology often isn’t explained in books (writers suppose that everyone knows what an elf is), the vocabulary used isn’t explained, although context clues are sufficient to get the gist of its meaning. I was quite happy to do some googling to get a deeper sense of the atmosphere and world of this story!
The author manages to tackle the themes of trust, loyalty, love, home, family and identity throughout the entire book and I thought it was done particularly well. There is also a creepy-sentient-shadow creature that kept me guessing up til the very end. This world is harsh, dark, but still very much believable and clearly inspired by history.
Now, there are two aspects that I struggled with. The first is that for the middle part of the book, the FMC is intolerably immature and boring. This has a purpose; the narrative clearly explains why she is this way, and it all ties up nicely with the ending. However, I had a hard time staying invested in her story, to the point where I considered DNFing. The fact that the pacing slows in the middle contributed to my diminishing interest. The second thing is linked to how my brain works. I am a very visual person, but the magic system, although really interesting, is linked to metaphysics and psychospirituality, which is understandably quite hard to visualize. The fact that the story is narrated in a way where the reader only knows what the FMC does did not help me with figuring out how the magic actually works.
Also, a warning for people with emetophobia! There is a surprisingly large amount of times where characters are sick.
Overall, although I loved certain aspects of the book, the ones I disliked make me unsure as to whether I will continue with the series. I’ll probably wait to read reviews of the sequel and decide at that moment if I wish to continue.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for this eARc!
I am very torn.
So let’s start with the positives. Right from the start, the writing is so rich that you feel the story through all your senses. I could almost taste the dishes, feel the fabric, see the architecture, hear and smell the plains. I also loved learning more about cultures and mythologies that I am (sadly) not as familiar with. In the same way that European mythology often isn’t explained in books (writers suppose that everyone knows what an elf is), the vocabulary used isn’t explained, although context clues are sufficient to get the gist of its meaning. I was quite happy to do some googling to get a deeper sense of the atmosphere and world of this story!
The author manages to tackle the themes of trust, loyalty, love, home, family and identity throughout the entire book and I thought it was done particularly well. There is also a creepy-sentient-shadow creature that kept me guessing up til the very end. This world is harsh, dark, but still very much believable and clearly inspired by history.
Now, there are two aspects that I struggled with. The first is that for the middle part of the book, the FMC is intolerably immature and boring. This has a purpose; the narrative clearly explains why she is this way, and it all ties up nicely with the ending. However, I had a hard time staying invested in her story, to the point where I considered DNFing. The fact that the pacing slows in the middle contributed to my diminishing interest. The second thing is linked to how my brain works. I am a very visual person, but the magic system, although really interesting, is linked to metaphysics and psychospirituality, which is understandably quite hard to visualize. The fact that the story is narrated in a way where the reader only knows what the FMC does did not help me with figuring out how the magic actually works.
Also, a warning for people with emetophobia! There is a surprisingly large amount of times where characters are sick.
Overall, although I loved certain aspects of the book, the ones I disliked make me unsure as to whether I will continue with the series. I’ll probably wait to read reviews of the sequel and decide at that moment if I wish to continue.
November 16, 2025
A beautiful, stunning, and utterly electrifying read. Dawn of the Firebird is a masterpiece of flowery prose and heart-pounding fantasy that had me glued to the pages until the very end. I am the target audience and I can’t get enough of it.
The story follows our FMC Khamilla Zahr-Zad who has been shaped by war and vengeance. After her clan gets brutally assassinated, she risks everything by infiltrating an enemy school of jinn to exact vengeance and reclaim her clan’s throne.
She is the epitome of a resilient and badass female protagonist, and her fierce dedication to her clan was deeply moving. As I followed her journey is this story, I became more and more attached to her character. Her triumphs filled me with so much joy, and her sorrows felt deeply personal. I cried and cheered and clapped for her throughout the entire book.
Sarah's writing, which evocatively reminded me of some of my favorite authors, I knew from the start this was goin to be an amazing read. I am already eagerly awaiting the next installment!!
The story follows our FMC Khamilla Zahr-Zad who has been shaped by war and vengeance. After her clan gets brutally assassinated, she risks everything by infiltrating an enemy school of jinn to exact vengeance and reclaim her clan’s throne.
She is the epitome of a resilient and badass female protagonist, and her fierce dedication to her clan was deeply moving. As I followed her journey is this story, I became more and more attached to her character. Her triumphs filled me with so much joy, and her sorrows felt deeply personal. I cried and cheered and clapped for her throughout the entire book.
Sarah's writing, which evocatively reminded me of some of my favorite authors, I knew from the start this was goin to be an amazing read. I am already eagerly awaiting the next installment!!
September 5, 2025
First thank you netgalley and the publisher for the arc.
I'm sorry but I had to DNF this book at 25%. I just could not could not read through any more as it just did not hold my attention and I could not connect with the characters at all. I was really excited to read this book based on the synopsis and I am disappointed that it did not live up to the hype.
What I did read I felt it was overly complicated at times and that may be because I have little knowledge or understanding of the culture the story was inspired by but I was confused alot, I was not interested in the MC after awhile, I found some things were not well explained like the magic system and some things like the poisons took up too much of the story. I just couldn't stay interested in the story and thought it would have been a lot further long by 100 pages.
I'm sorry but I had to DNF this book at 25%. I just could not could not read through any more as it just did not hold my attention and I could not connect with the characters at all. I was really excited to read this book based on the synopsis and I am disappointed that it did not live up to the hype.
What I did read I felt it was overly complicated at times and that may be because I have little knowledge or understanding of the culture the story was inspired by but I was confused alot, I was not interested in the MC after awhile, I found some things were not well explained like the magic system and some things like the poisons took up too much of the story. I just couldn't stay interested in the story and thought it would have been a lot further long by 100 pages.
September 17, 2025
First, I want to thank NetGalley for this opportunity.
Unfortunately, I couldn’t continue any further.
The beginning had me for a minute but I feel as though this projected to be high fantasy but it just didn’t land for me as much as I wanted it to. The information provided didn’t lead where it should and the FMC was really difficult to connect to. She irritated me in so many ways and lacked any growth… or potential to be moving.
It felt as though everything introduced had no plot or connection to the next. Nothing seemed to be cohesive.
Unfortunately, I couldn’t continue any further.
The beginning had me for a minute but I feel as though this projected to be high fantasy but it just didn’t land for me as much as I wanted it to. The information provided didn’t lead where it should and the FMC was really difficult to connect to. She irritated me in so many ways and lacked any growth… or potential to be moving.
It felt as though everything introduced had no plot or connection to the next. Nothing seemed to be cohesive.
November 6, 2025
3⭐️ man i really had high hopes for this, but the execution was not it for me.
Tropes/themes:
✨unique magic system based on spiritual bonds
✨jinn lore
✨memory manipulation (done to self)
✨political intrigue/heavy descriptions of war tactics
✨extremely determined and slightly masochistic FMC
✨Islamic inspired culture
✨complex family dynamics
Simply put, this book tried to do a LOT as the first of the trilogy and I continuously felt myself overwhelmed by the sheer amount of information being dumped on me. I would like to note that I really appreciate how the author weaved so much of her culture into that book, especially as a reader actively seeking diversity in her stories. But I do think that sometimes the cultural inserts were given so casually without a lot of context that it added to my confusion at how the plot or our characters were being impacted at times. I'm also giving the disclaimer that I did know this was an epic fantasy, not a romantasy, going into it so I was prepared for a lot of worldbuilding at first already.
For the first 30% of this book, I was genuinely enjoying myself and read through it pretty quickly. The problem with that though, is that the first 30% didn't really involve the "real" plot of this book - it almost seemed like we had two mini stories before we got into what the synopsis is based on. I thought the earlier developments of the book had a lot of promise with our unnamed FMC's tribe and history, giving us a glimpse at the jinn lore of this world, and even when going on to the Emperor's kingdom and learning more about her sibling dynamics and training arcs.
By the time I was 40% into this book is where it started to truly lose me. By that time we had so many new character introductions that it was hard to keep track of who was who and I don't even think I could fully differentiate by the time I finished. The military descriptions and the various trials that were thrown in varied in complexity, and I say at least 50% of it went over my head.
Kamilla as an FMC was...interesting. I can admire her determinations and relentless will to prove herself, but the actual motivations for her character kept getting hazy for me. It felt like a new goal post kept being moved and as she monologued internally to herself, or had conversations with the mysterious "no-name," I was missing context for the WHY as a reader. I just think there was something missing for me to become fully invested in her story, and as such I really lacked an emotional attachment to this story when the big moments happened. Her missing memory moments were initially really interesting, but then only led to kind of confuse me a little more with how the writing presented it later in the story.
A positive highlight for me and her character was the band of pakhab students that she took under her wing as a mentor, as I thought those relationships were the most solidly developed and meaningful to me. Cemil and her rivalry was also a little interesting.
The ending also fell flat for me - it felt half predictable and half confusing at how we even got to that point. The last line was kind of a "well, duh" moment for me.
I feel like it's a little hard for me to articulate what exactly went wrong with this book for me, but overall it seems a combination of too much information, lack of characters I can connect to/emotionally resonate for, and execution in writing prose that left me feeling like I was too far removed from the plot context.
I do think this debut novel/author has a lot of potential and I think some of the descriptions and writing prose was beautiful, which is preventing it from entering 2 star territory, but I personally do not think I am interested in continuing this series, nor would I strongly recommend it.
Thank you to Netgalley and Hanover Square Press for gifting me an ARC of this book. All opinions are my own.
Tropes/themes:
✨unique magic system based on spiritual bonds
✨jinn lore
✨memory manipulation (done to self)
✨political intrigue/heavy descriptions of war tactics
✨extremely determined and slightly masochistic FMC
✨Islamic inspired culture
✨complex family dynamics
Simply put, this book tried to do a LOT as the first of the trilogy and I continuously felt myself overwhelmed by the sheer amount of information being dumped on me. I would like to note that I really appreciate how the author weaved so much of her culture into that book, especially as a reader actively seeking diversity in her stories. But I do think that sometimes the cultural inserts were given so casually without a lot of context that it added to my confusion at how the plot or our characters were being impacted at times. I'm also giving the disclaimer that I did know this was an epic fantasy, not a romantasy, going into it so I was prepared for a lot of worldbuilding at first already.
For the first 30% of this book, I was genuinely enjoying myself and read through it pretty quickly. The problem with that though, is that the first 30% didn't really involve the "real" plot of this book - it almost seemed like we had two mini stories before we got into what the synopsis is based on. I thought the earlier developments of the book had a lot of promise with our unnamed FMC's tribe and history, giving us a glimpse at the jinn lore of this world, and even when going on to the Emperor's kingdom and learning more about her sibling dynamics and training arcs.
By the time I was 40% into this book is where it started to truly lose me. By that time we had so many new character introductions that it was hard to keep track of who was who and I don't even think I could fully differentiate by the time I finished. The military descriptions and the various trials that were thrown in varied in complexity, and I say at least 50% of it went over my head.
Kamilla as an FMC was...interesting. I can admire her determinations and relentless will to prove herself, but the actual motivations for her character kept getting hazy for me. It felt like a new goal post kept being moved and as she monologued internally to herself, or had conversations with the mysterious "no-name," I was missing context for the WHY as a reader. I just think there was something missing for me to become fully invested in her story, and as such I really lacked an emotional attachment to this story when the big moments happened. Her missing memory moments were initially really interesting, but then only led to kind of confuse me a little more with how the writing presented it later in the story.
A positive highlight for me and her character was the band of pakhab students that she took under her wing as a mentor, as I thought those relationships were the most solidly developed and meaningful to me. Cemil and her rivalry was also a little interesting.
The ending also fell flat for me - it felt half predictable and half confusing at how we even got to that point. The last line was kind of a "well, duh" moment for me.
I feel like it's a little hard for me to articulate what exactly went wrong with this book for me, but overall it seems a combination of too much information, lack of characters I can connect to/emotionally resonate for, and execution in writing prose that left me feeling like I was too far removed from the plot context.
I do think this debut novel/author has a lot of potential and I think some of the descriptions and writing prose was beautiful, which is preventing it from entering 2 star territory, but I personally do not think I am interested in continuing this series, nor would I strongly recommend it.
Thank you to Netgalley and Hanover Square Press for gifting me an ARC of this book. All opinions are my own.
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