While She Was Sleeping

by Audrey Grace

Jasmine, niece of John's ex-wife, is staying the weekend with him. He's dreading it. She demands he take her out to a club, and when they arrive home, she's a wreck. She teases and torments John before passing out. John decides it's time she gets her comeuppance... while she's sleeping.

This sizzling 10,000+ word novelette sees John getting back at Jasmine in her sleep.

WARNING: Contains themes of dubious consent & reluctance, revenge sex, and graphic, explicit descriptions of cunnilingus, and vaginal penetration, and orgasm & ejaculation.

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First published March 25, 2012

About the author

Audrey Grace is the pen name of a thirty-something traveler who has followed her father and his job around the world. A rebellious tomboy in her teenage years, Audrey first discovered her love of scribbling smut with an erotic short story written for class when she was fourteen. It was titled The Erotic Adventures of Hercules and earned her an appointment with the principal.

Having lived in Australia, Canada, China, Hong Kong, Japan, and the United Kingdom, smut (and traveling) have always been Audrey's one consistent. Blessed with a hyperactive sex drive, it's the one thing she just can't stop doing. Audrey is currently based in Melbourne, Australia, but she won't stay there for long!

Reviews

[Kelly · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ha. Oh, man. Between Jas's foul mouth and John's cowering attitude, I'm surprised he had the balls to do what he did. Although, really, it was Jas's attitude that pushed John into acting out of character and taking what she had been so blatantly offering, so maybe I'm not all that surprised.

Revenge sex -- who knew it could be so fun?

-Kelly @ Reading the Paranormal

[Caroline · Rating 4 out of 5]

YEA! YOU DESERVE THAT YOU FUCKING CUNT!.....wow....just wow JASMINE'S a TOTAL SLUT and a TOTAL FUCKING BITCH with a very crude and obnoxious attitude(or behavior), I just can't remember any female lead who's as bitchy as she is, she speaks with a mouthful of crude cuss 'language' that would make anyone cringe and flinch or pale and faint...or perhaps run for cover. She's just fucking awful, I can't imagine ANYONE LIVING or EXISTING with the same character/personality/attitude as hers...she's just fucking beyond terrible and appalling. I JUST CAN'T FUCKING STAND HER....but then that's the point of the story right!? TO HAVE REVENGE!! to have a revenge with the fucking cunt! to fuck her while she sleeps! to justify the revenge and to justify the 'sleep fucking' RIGHT!!?? what better way and reason to screw or 'punish' a bitch like her!!?? if her ATTITUDE and BEHAVIOR is that HORRIBLE!? AND SO THAT'S WHY SHE FUCKING DESERVES IT!!....well I think it still 'benefitted' her because SHE DOES VERY MUCH WANT AND 'LIKE' IT anyway(and I don't know if it's not enough hehe) but yea, I do think it's not enough with what John did to her, you know he could have spanked her or whipped her or perhaps infuse a slight BDSM in there to make the 'revenge' sweeter and more sinful (and of course HOTTER :D). I really sympathize with John...I just understand him tremendously. Who would want to live or even to endure an extremely crude and obnoxious bitch like her even for just the weekend?? Christ.....that's why I VERY MUCH UNDERSTAND the type of revenge that John chose and gave to her and I FOUND IT EXTREMELY, INTENSELY, IRRESISTIBLY SCORCHING and BLAZING FUCKING HOT TO THE NTH LEVEL...you know I just can't find the 'right' words on how HOT THIS IS ....the details is just HIGHLY FUCKING GRAPHIC (yowza! lol) and HONESTLY I get turned on with this kind of sex stories hihihi LOL >:D

My only(and little) 'issue' on this is the 'physical detailing' of John...you know I don't have ANY IDEA how or what John looks like, I'm like "is he muscular? or perhaps fat?? nah maybe has a slight 'beer belly? thin and lanky? rangy or maybe bulky in form??"....I really have no idea. But logical reasoning came up and did its job, PERHAPS MAYBE JOHN IS FUCKING HOT!! (even if he's already in his late 30's) because why would Jasmine taunt him? mock him? TEASE HIM!? TORMENT HIM!? SPREAD OPEN HER CUNT FOR HIM LIKE A FUCKING WHORE!? PROVOKE HIM!!??......FUCK HIM??? lol WHAT!? she just want to GET LAID like a CHEAP SLUT ?? that PLAIN and SIMPLE!??(probably not I think she's attracted to John...but I dunno :p) like you know what I'm saying?? even if she's drunk you know because LET'S ALL BE HONEST AND ADMIT TO OURSELVES THAT WHEN WE'RE DRUNK WE DON'T LOSE 'AWARENESS' RIGHT!!!???? and if perhaps I'm drunk and I'm in her position(even if it's quite IMPOSSIBLE to happen TO ME IN REAL LIFE LOL), I WOULD STILL BE AWARE TO CHOOSE WHO WOULD 'HIT' ME OR WHO WOULD I LIKE TO HIT OR TO SLEEP WITH OR TO FUCK or whatever :D, I'd still choose and go for the HOT GUY EVEN IF I'M DAMN HALF PAST DEAD DRUNK.....AM I RIGHT LADIES!!?? (lol) I WOULD JUST BE MORE GODDAMN CONFIDENT TO DO IT(because of course..you know...I'm drunk >:D) so my logical reasoning says to me that John is hot even if he's not 'described' fully and physically. ~.^
And perhaps they really suit each other because they bring out the worst of each other??? LOL!!!
(Sorry for the spoilers AND I KNOW I'm just like Jasmine with this review, so sorry for the crude profanities and I'm well aware that I did had a 'potty mouth' on this but come on! WHOEVER ALREADY READ THIS, you'll KNOW where I'm coming form...I just can't help it :D)

3.5 stars for this HOT 'SLEEPING SEX' ^^,

[Lisa · Rating 3 out of 5]

2 stars for the first part of the story and 4 stars for the second half.

It was kinda hard to get into the first part of the story with Jasmine being so damn annoying. It seemed a little over done but maybe that was what the author was going for. The sex was pretty freaking hot. The way it ended was cute, but you saw it coming - still wish it would have ended the other way around.