Great Story. Irritating characters.
I don't understand why the author wrote so many of protagonist's party members as being so despicable. *I'm confused*
It is like reading the LitRPG/GameLit version of "Lord of the Flies".
The leader of the party is perfect.
The African is wise and mature.
The oldest female is mature and professional.
However, the others totally suck.
One party guy is a loudmouth who yells out frequently while surrounded by hostiles in a combat zone. So, much for sneaking up on your prey?!
One girl is completely selfish and power hungry. She will throw anyone under the bus to get brownie points and money from her clan.
...and finally, another female party member is the most annoying, naive, thumb sucking pacifist that I have ever read about in a story.
Why make main characters that your readers will despise????