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Ludik and the Runaway Mountain
Mountains will move. Cities will fall. Worlds will shatter.
Ludik is a deaf boy determined to find the mountain that murdered his parents. Along the way, he encounters fun and eccentric characters, discovers powerful magic, and engages in catastrophic battles. With talking trees, alternate realities, and magical letters, it's a beautiful tale of found family, forgiveness, and innocent first love.
‘A well-written and exciting new take on epic fantasy. Great characterization, plotting, and action mixed with interesting worldbuilding makes this a winner.’ – Bryan Thomas Schmidt, #1 bestselling author of Shortcut and first editor of The Martian
Ludik is a deaf boy determined to find the mountain that murdered his parents. Along the way, he encounters fun and eccentric characters, discovers powerful magic, and engages in catastrophic battles. With talking trees, alternate realities, and magical letters, it's a beautiful tale of found family, forgiveness, and innocent first love.
‘A well-written and exciting new take on epic fantasy. Great characterization, plotting, and action mixed with interesting worldbuilding makes this a winner.’ – Bryan Thomas Schmidt, #1 bestselling author of Shortcut and first editor of The Martian
500 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 24, 2024
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September 16, 2024
This was a fantastic novel that purveys a deep sense of hope for a lone young man looking for closure. Ludik is artfully drawn and developed as he advances through life. His situational encounters build character as they are tethered to a solid story line.
The magic is as simple as it is elegant. The collision of characters from two different worlds adds a bit of levity throughout the story. Each character is drawn with care, and by design, pulls deeper the readers interest. I had a great time reading this. It is one of those rare novels that you really want to read slowly to rebuke the ending.
I received this ARC for an honest review
4.9/5
The magic is as simple as it is elegant. The collision of characters from two different worlds adds a bit of levity throughout the story. Each character is drawn with care, and by design, pulls deeper the readers interest. I had a great time reading this. It is one of those rare novels that you really want to read slowly to rebuke the ending.
I received this ARC for an honest review
4.9/5
August 5, 2024
This is an epic fantasy about of a deaf boy determined to avenge his parents' murder. Along the way, he encounters fun and eccentric characters, discovers powerful magic, and engages in catastrophic battles. With talking trees, alternate realities, and magical letters, it's a beautiful tale of found family, forgiveness, and innocent first love.
First of all, the book cover immediately captured my attention—it's gorgeous and the colors are stunning! I just wanted to read it without even knowing what the story is about! Secondly, I was genuinely intrigued by the premise of a young boy seeking revenge against a mountain. I mean, seriously, how does one accomplish that?
At 500 pages, the book is lengthy. However, the story starts off strong, and I was quickly engrossed. Fortunately, I had a quiet, distraction-free weekend, which allowed me to thoroughly enjoy this book. I suggest you take your time with it and lose yourself in Ludik's captivating world.
The world-building is uncomplicated and we can easily follow Ludik's journey to "take down the mountain." The scenes where he loses his parents, especially his mom, are heartbreaking. From there, he finds people who care for him, and we continue to follow his journey as his character grows and develops.
Ludik's story spans from ages 8 to 17, and I appreciate how the author keeps his character age-appropriate. Unlike some books where teenagers think and act like 25-year-olds, Ludik behaves like a kid his age, making mistakes that are believable given his circumstances.
The humor, snark, and witty banter make this book such a delightful read! I loved all the characters Ludik meets, especially Heimee and Aunt Kola. The pages are brimming with adventure, though I'm a bit uncertain about the alternate reality angle. Also, there's no spice, making it perfect for young readers. The ending is satisfying, yet the last sentence hints at a possible premonition.
If you enjoy epic fantasies with themes of found family and friendship, you'll love Ludik and the Runaway Mountain!
Much thanks to the author for the digital ARC of this book.
First of all, the book cover immediately captured my attention—it's gorgeous and the colors are stunning! I just wanted to read it without even knowing what the story is about! Secondly, I was genuinely intrigued by the premise of a young boy seeking revenge against a mountain. I mean, seriously, how does one accomplish that?
At 500 pages, the book is lengthy. However, the story starts off strong, and I was quickly engrossed. Fortunately, I had a quiet, distraction-free weekend, which allowed me to thoroughly enjoy this book. I suggest you take your time with it and lose yourself in Ludik's captivating world.
The world-building is uncomplicated and we can easily follow Ludik's journey to "take down the mountain." The scenes where he loses his parents, especially his mom, are heartbreaking. From there, he finds people who care for him, and we continue to follow his journey as his character grows and develops.
Ludik's story spans from ages 8 to 17, and I appreciate how the author keeps his character age-appropriate. Unlike some books where teenagers think and act like 25-year-olds, Ludik behaves like a kid his age, making mistakes that are believable given his circumstances.
"Most people call me Ludi or Lud, even though my name is Ludik. Or they do call me Ludik, but I can’t catch the k on their lips. No, it doesn’t bother me—being deaf, that is. Still, if given the choice, I would’ve gone with ugly.
There are many misconceptions about deafness, but the oddest to me is that we are void of sound, which is simply not true. And it’s with a sound that my story begins."
The humor, snark, and witty banter make this book such a delightful read! I loved all the characters Ludik meets, especially Heimee and Aunt Kola. The pages are brimming with adventure, though I'm a bit uncertain about the alternate reality angle. Also, there's no spice, making it perfect for young readers. The ending is satisfying, yet the last sentence hints at a possible premonition.
If you enjoy epic fantasies with themes of found family and friendship, you'll love Ludik and the Runaway Mountain!
Much thanks to the author for the digital ARC of this book.
August 6, 2024
[2.5/5] • Firstly, a thank you to the author for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review. I don't normally have this much to say in a review, so I'll put this into segments:
OVERVIEW:
My feelings on Ludik and the Runaway Mountain are complicated. I find myself bouncing between wanting to rate it 2 stars or 3 because I feel so split on it, but I really wanted to rate this book higher. First off — that gorgeous cover art, holy moly! Then, there's the unique premise — a quest to try to stop a moving mountain? That's cool as hell! The worldbuilding and connection between worlds is so fascinating and imaginative. I also really appreciated the unique magic system in place, which lead to a lot of creative abilities and action sequences. The author's writing voice is likable and has a good sense of humor to boot. I felt compelled by Ludik's struggles and his resilience, and I enjoyed seeing the dynamics between the characters develop — I'm definitely a sucker for the found-family dynamic. The villains are so easy to hate and I loved the tension from the stakes continually being raised.
WHAT'S IT ABOUT?
Ludik and the Runaway Mountain follows three paths that converge: beginning briefly with a Bostonian teenager named Mathew who uncovers a mysterious magic flame in an old library, then following the struggle of an orphaned boy named Ludik in another world, and a mid-twenties woman named Ariel who lives in rural Scotland and secretly possesses light magic.
We mainly follow Ludik, a young refugee who seeks to take revenge against the forces of nature that claimed the lives of his family and everything he loved. He is deaf, and is taken under the wing and apprenticeship of Heimee, a whisky distiller. Ludik's plan to avenge his village is... unclear. But he knows what he saw the day of the tragedy: the mountain moved. And he's going to do whatever he can to stop it from happening again.
Things get strange when Ludik finds a mysterious note, and a boy from another world — Mathew — literally falls out of a tree. Ludik, his friend/crush Brinn, and Mathew (along with a sentient book in his possession) all unite on their quest to reach the mountain, all while being pursued by the light mage Ariel. However, on the path filled with thrilling turns and plot twists, an even darker and more sinister force is on the hunt.
CRITIQUE:
What I had not expected, is that Ludik and the Runaway Mountain is partly a portal fantasy that switches perspectives between characters. That itself isn't the issue; I don't mind multi-POV stories, but it's mostly an issue of execution. There's one specific character whose introduction and circumstances came along in a way that was jarring and disjointed, as though I started reading a different book altogether. I also don't mind having to put together pieces with information that's given over time, but there's a certain balance that needs to be met, and I found myself feeling frustrated by the lack of clarity and context early on. This made the first 30% very difficult to push through; as answers came around at the 40% mark, it pulls itself back together and I found myself re-engaged. I was however very annoyed that one character in particular, while characterized as "impulsive", kept making really bad and destructive moves for what felt like no logical reason whatsoever. I felt like a lot of issues could've been solved if the characters just stopped for 30 seconds to explain what they're doing and why.
There's also a lot of very odd and unnatural dialogue scattered throughout (for instance, Mathew at one point says, "My head feels like a basketball after a Boston Celtics game." As someone who's spent a lot of time in and around Boston — no matter how proudly Bostonian you are, no one says that. In general, it's a weird sentence, and that's not the only one). In some scenes, it's unclear who's saying what, which leads to some re-reading, confusion, and guessing. There's also a few stray typos and cases of missing punctuation, though rare. Also, this is just my personal taste, but I'm not a fan of when writers write a character's accent phonetically in dialogue (once again though, just a personal pet peeve of mine — no slight against the author).
In terms of representation, I cannot speak for the portrayal of Ludik's disability since I'm not Deaf or HOH. Ludik often has to deal with and overcome ableism from other people in his world (as well as some disparaging comments from one of the other protagonists, but whom eventually comes around), though Ludik himself is never treated by the author as less capable. Still though, the instances of ableism may be uncomfortable for some. What did bother me though is there's some weirdness when Ludik and Brinn meet Mathew, who is Black. With Ludik and Brinn having never seen a person with such dark skin before (and for whatever reason, they've never heard of dark skinned people existing...?), some pretty tired tropes ensue — the author is obviously not being ill-intentioned here; he calls it out and lampshades it, but it still felt unnecessary and for me personally left a bad taste in my mouth.
On a more minor note, there's a weird fascination with urinating and defecating and using it as a plot device/detail. Enough times to make me raise an eyebrow.
I do wish that the author would include more visual details about the characters earlier on as well. We don't get ideas of what some of these characters — mainly Ludik — look like until long after they're introduced. A little description can go a long way.
Lastly — while keeping out of spoiler territory, there's something at the end that I feel could've worked with better execution, but has really weird momentum as it is and fell flat for me.
CONCLUSION:
There's definitely good material and good intentions here, but it needs a lot of refining. It's so frustrating, because there's so many things about this book that I really enjoyed! An additional detailed pass from an editor would've really helped this book soar and reach its potential. That being said, I'm still looking forward to the author's growth and future endeavors.
"If what you're trying to accomplish doesn't involve hardship, sacrifice, pain; if it doesn't require determination, if it's so easy anyone could do it, is it really worth it? No. But if you want to make something known, something great, something right; if you want to make this a better world or leave something behind that did not exist before you set out to do it, you can only do it with perseverance. Am I making sense to you?"
OVERVIEW:
My feelings on Ludik and the Runaway Mountain are complicated. I find myself bouncing between wanting to rate it 2 stars or 3 because I feel so split on it, but I really wanted to rate this book higher. First off — that gorgeous cover art, holy moly! Then, there's the unique premise — a quest to try to stop a moving mountain? That's cool as hell! The worldbuilding and connection between worlds is so fascinating and imaginative. I also really appreciated the unique magic system in place, which lead to a lot of creative abilities and action sequences. The author's writing voice is likable and has a good sense of humor to boot. I felt compelled by Ludik's struggles and his resilience, and I enjoyed seeing the dynamics between the characters develop — I'm definitely a sucker for the found-family dynamic. The villains are so easy to hate and I loved the tension from the stakes continually being raised.
WHAT'S IT ABOUT?
Ludik and the Runaway Mountain follows three paths that converge: beginning briefly with a Bostonian teenager named Mathew who uncovers a mysterious magic flame in an old library, then following the struggle of an orphaned boy named Ludik in another world, and a mid-twenties woman named Ariel who lives in rural Scotland and secretly possesses light magic.
We mainly follow Ludik, a young refugee who seeks to take revenge against the forces of nature that claimed the lives of his family and everything he loved. He is deaf, and is taken under the wing and apprenticeship of Heimee, a whisky distiller. Ludik's plan to avenge his village is... unclear. But he knows what he saw the day of the tragedy: the mountain moved. And he's going to do whatever he can to stop it from happening again.
Things get strange when Ludik finds a mysterious note, and a boy from another world — Mathew — literally falls out of a tree. Ludik, his friend/crush Brinn, and Mathew (along with a sentient book in his possession) all unite on their quest to reach the mountain, all while being pursued by the light mage Ariel. However, on the path filled with thrilling turns and plot twists, an even darker and more sinister force is on the hunt.
CRITIQUE:
What I had not expected, is that Ludik and the Runaway Mountain is partly a portal fantasy that switches perspectives between characters. That itself isn't the issue; I don't mind multi-POV stories, but it's mostly an issue of execution. There's one specific character whose introduction and circumstances came along in a way that was jarring and disjointed, as though I started reading a different book altogether. I also don't mind having to put together pieces with information that's given over time, but there's a certain balance that needs to be met, and I found myself feeling frustrated by the lack of clarity and context early on. This made the first 30% very difficult to push through; as answers came around at the 40% mark, it pulls itself back together and I found myself re-engaged. I was however very annoyed that one character in particular, while characterized as "impulsive", kept making really bad and destructive moves for what felt like no logical reason whatsoever. I felt like a lot of issues could've been solved if the characters just stopped for 30 seconds to explain what they're doing and why.
There's also a lot of very odd and unnatural dialogue scattered throughout (for instance, Mathew at one point says, "My head feels like a basketball after a Boston Celtics game." As someone who's spent a lot of time in and around Boston — no matter how proudly Bostonian you are, no one says that. In general, it's a weird sentence, and that's not the only one). In some scenes, it's unclear who's saying what, which leads to some re-reading, confusion, and guessing. There's also a few stray typos and cases of missing punctuation, though rare. Also, this is just my personal taste, but I'm not a fan of when writers write a character's accent phonetically in dialogue (once again though, just a personal pet peeve of mine — no slight against the author).
In terms of representation, I cannot speak for the portrayal of Ludik's disability since I'm not Deaf or HOH. Ludik often has to deal with and overcome ableism from other people in his world (as well as some disparaging comments from one of the other protagonists, but whom eventually comes around), though Ludik himself is never treated by the author as less capable. Still though, the instances of ableism may be uncomfortable for some. What did bother me though is there's some weirdness when Ludik and Brinn meet Mathew, who is Black. With Ludik and Brinn having never seen a person with such dark skin before (and for whatever reason, they've never heard of dark skinned people existing...?), some pretty tired tropes ensue — the author is obviously not being ill-intentioned here; he calls it out and lampshades it, but it still felt unnecessary and for me personally left a bad taste in my mouth.
On a more minor note, there's a weird fascination with urinating and defecating and using it as a plot device/detail. Enough times to make me raise an eyebrow.
I do wish that the author would include more visual details about the characters earlier on as well. We don't get ideas of what some of these characters — mainly Ludik — look like until long after they're introduced. A little description can go a long way.
Lastly — while keeping out of spoiler territory, there's something at the end that I feel could've worked with better execution, but has really weird momentum as it is and fell flat for me.
CONCLUSION:
There's definitely good material and good intentions here, but it needs a lot of refining. It's so frustrating, because there's so many things about this book that I really enjoyed! An additional detailed pass from an editor would've really helped this book soar and reach its potential. That being said, I'm still looking forward to the author's growth and future endeavors.
"If what you're trying to accomplish doesn't involve hardship, sacrifice, pain; if it doesn't require determination, if it's so easy anyone could do it, is it really worth it? No. But if you want to make something known, something great, something right; if you want to make this a better world or leave something behind that did not exist before you set out to do it, you can only do it with perseverance. Am I making sense to you?"
July 27, 2024
He may be deaf but it does not mean he cannot hear. The mountain has moved destroying everything and he wants to make sure it does not happen again. Can he prevent it happening again? How will he do it? See hoe it will all go
I received an advance copy from hidden gems and I want to review
I received an advance copy from hidden gems and I want to review
September 16, 2024
✨🔮🌞🌕🍄🌕🌞🔮✨
ARC REVIEW - BOOK TOUR
Ludik and the runaway mountain - John Ilho
5/5⭐️
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First I’ll start with I was definitely blown away with this one! From page one I was pulled into the book and just did not want to put it down. The book cover is originally what made me want to pick up the book and I was not disappointed. Ludik’s story is definitely an epic one. As a deaf boy who was not dealing with the best situation, he was truly a strong and determined one! The world building was done perfectly and not hard to follow along. I really enjoyed having the map! I just had tears in my eyes for some scenes… losing his parents hurt my heart. I really enjoyed the amazing adventure this book brought me on and highly recommend!
This does have zero spice and perfect for younger readers or those who just don’t enjoy spice.
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If you like to read:
- Fantasy
- Found family
- Great friendships
- Disability Rep
… You should definitely check this out
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Thank you so much for sending me a copy for an honest review in my own words. #AD
✨if you could be any fantasy character, which one would you choose?
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ARC REVIEW - BOOK TOUR
Ludik and the runaway mountain - John Ilho
5/5⭐️
✨✨✨✨✨✨
First I’ll start with I was definitely blown away with this one! From page one I was pulled into the book and just did not want to put it down. The book cover is originally what made me want to pick up the book and I was not disappointed. Ludik’s story is definitely an epic one. As a deaf boy who was not dealing with the best situation, he was truly a strong and determined one! The world building was done perfectly and not hard to follow along. I really enjoyed having the map! I just had tears in my eyes for some scenes… losing his parents hurt my heart. I really enjoyed the amazing adventure this book brought me on and highly recommend!
This does have zero spice and perfect for younger readers or those who just don’t enjoy spice.
📚📚📚
If you like to read:
- Fantasy
- Found family
- Great friendships
- Disability Rep
… You should definitely check this out
📚📚📚
Thank you so much for sending me a copy for an honest review in my own words. #AD
✨if you could be any fantasy character, which one would you choose?
#books #booklover #smut #booknerd #bookfriend #bookish #booklovers #bookishcommunity #bookloversunite #instabook #bookporn #bookphotography #reviews #igbooks #ilovereading #smutty #bookaddiction #bookhoader #hotnsexy #fortheloveofbooks #bookrecs #yummy #givemeallthebooks #readingthepainaway #booktok #arc #giftedcopy
October 1, 2024
I absolutely adore the cover of this book, and it was an epic fantasy adventure, with a diverse range of characters, unique magic and lots of intrigue.
This story has rich worldbuilding and was easy to get lost in with its various magic types that are explored, including Ludik's curious ability to talk to and understand trees, elemental mages, and a magical book.
It has multiple POV, but the story primarily follows Ludik, who has been deaf since early childhood, and how he navigates life and the trauma he has faced, and his goals of both revenge and finding peace.
It's a coming of age journey, and an epic quest for a group of allies, and I loved the found family dynamics and mischief.
There is a great deal of character growth, there are many struggles, and conflicts, and I loved the bravery, resilience and determination that shone through. I also enjoyed the humour and banter between the group.
This is the kind of book that can be enjoyed at any age, it's whimsical and imaginative, and it has a great ending.
🏔️ "Offer me anywhere to go, any excuse, and I'll follow you. I just don't want to go alone"
🏔️ "But what do I care? I now know what pee tastes like.
P.s I hate you more with each passing minute"
🏔️"He and I aren't so different. Stubborn as they come. And if I learnt anything, anything at all, is that when it gets darkest, there is only room left for light"
🏔️"You will move. I will move with you. You can't run away from this. This is where we stand and fight"
🏔️"Men do not want to be saved. Men want war, even when they search for peace. Man needs conquering if they are to be subdued"
🏔️"I held the truth in my heart: inside of every man, woman, and child, there's a monumental mountain capable of changing the world"
This story has rich worldbuilding and was easy to get lost in with its various magic types that are explored, including Ludik's curious ability to talk to and understand trees, elemental mages, and a magical book.
It has multiple POV, but the story primarily follows Ludik, who has been deaf since early childhood, and how he navigates life and the trauma he has faced, and his goals of both revenge and finding peace.
It's a coming of age journey, and an epic quest for a group of allies, and I loved the found family dynamics and mischief.
There is a great deal of character growth, there are many struggles, and conflicts, and I loved the bravery, resilience and determination that shone through. I also enjoyed the humour and banter between the group.
This is the kind of book that can be enjoyed at any age, it's whimsical and imaginative, and it has a great ending.
🏔️ "Offer me anywhere to go, any excuse, and I'll follow you. I just don't want to go alone"
🏔️ "But what do I care? I now know what pee tastes like.
P.s I hate you more with each passing minute"
🏔️"He and I aren't so different. Stubborn as they come. And if I learnt anything, anything at all, is that when it gets darkest, there is only room left for light"
🏔️"You will move. I will move with you. You can't run away from this. This is where we stand and fight"
🏔️"Men do not want to be saved. Men want war, even when they search for peace. Man needs conquering if they are to be subdued"
🏔️"I held the truth in my heart: inside of every man, woman, and child, there's a monumental mountain capable of changing the world"
August 5, 2024
I had the opportunity to read this book before being released on the market. It got my attention right from the prologue.
I found the characters very intriguing and its development on a personal level as they get more layers as the story goes it’s quite fascinating and satisfying to follow.
The narrative is simple and rich at the same time. Even if the choice of words can feel a bit like “overdoing it”, the way everything is put together is simple, detailed and surprisingly entertaining.
I loved the way you follow the world trough different lenses with the two main characters. And the proximity/distance John Ilho provides us with the use of pronouns and verbs.
I think it’s the sort of book that can be read by adults and teens and I wouldn’t be surprised if it gets exactly a young teens edition in the future if it turns out to be a success. Which, if it does, it’s very well deserved.
John Ilho revealed himself to be a surprise in this gender and I have a feeling he is here to stay.
Can’t wait to get a copy.
I found the characters very intriguing and its development on a personal level as they get more layers as the story goes it’s quite fascinating and satisfying to follow.
The narrative is simple and rich at the same time. Even if the choice of words can feel a bit like “overdoing it”, the way everything is put together is simple, detailed and surprisingly entertaining.
I loved the way you follow the world trough different lenses with the two main characters. And the proximity/distance John Ilho provides us with the use of pronouns and verbs.
I think it’s the sort of book that can be read by adults and teens and I wouldn’t be surprised if it gets exactly a young teens edition in the future if it turns out to be a success. Which, if it does, it’s very well deserved.
John Ilho revealed himself to be a surprise in this gender and I have a feeling he is here to stay.
Can’t wait to get a copy.
October 1, 2024
First thing first. Thanks to lovebooktours, the author and the publish for this opportunity to read this book. I got lucky enough to get a physical copy of this copy.
This book capture my attention by the title “Ludik” it kinda played with my mind, because it’s too close of my last name. So I had to read it. Two I’ve never read that the main character is deaf.
My oh my, this is an amazing point of view, protagonist of a deaf person. I love that there’s a strong character lead and we need more like this.
This is one thing and the other. This is an amazing adventure that he goes through.
Witty banter, found family, world building, easy read, very entertaining, deaf hero, magic.
This book capture my attention by the title “Ludik” it kinda played with my mind, because it’s too close of my last name. So I had to read it. Two I’ve never read that the main character is deaf.
My oh my, this is an amazing point of view, protagonist of a deaf person. I love that there’s a strong character lead and we need more like this.
This is one thing and the other. This is an amazing adventure that he goes through.
Witty banter, found family, world building, easy read, very entertaining, deaf hero, magic.
September 30, 2024
‘Ludik and the Runaway Mountain’ is a great story and really easy to read. I love the character of Ludik, he is so innocent at the beginning of the story and his character grows a lot throughout the novel. I really like the idea of talking to trees and how Ludik’s deafness is presented in the novel. Even though this book is 500 pages long, it doesn’t feel like a heavy read and it’s entertaining and thoughtful.
September 8, 2024
Well written adventure packed story of a boy who is hard of hearing. I like that element which added a different dimension to the story. Full of magic and action. Probably suited to YA market. Thank you to the author. Thank you to #netgalley and the publisher for an ARC.
August 22, 2024
*I was chosen as an ARC reader for this* stand alone novel.
This fantasy novel was such an enthralling story. Gripping from the start. Lengthy but necessary when introducing you to a new world with a new adventure. A deaf boy and a group of unexpected heroes.an actual Moving Mountain! 🏔️ Easy to read writing style. Dual POV. Witty and humorous and an understanding of a deaf persons side of things. I loved many quotes but I’d need two reviews just to post them all. 🤣 this was an incredible story inside a wonderful world to be immersed in. Great writing!
A MUST Read!
This fantasy novel was such an enthralling story. Gripping from the start. Lengthy but necessary when introducing you to a new world with a new adventure. A deaf boy and a group of unexpected heroes.an actual Moving Mountain! 🏔️ Easy to read writing style. Dual POV. Witty and humorous and an understanding of a deaf persons side of things. I loved many quotes but I’d need two reviews just to post them all. 🤣 this was an incredible story inside a wonderful world to be immersed in. Great writing!
A MUST Read!
August 30, 2024
With his novel “Ludik and the Runaway Mountain” John Ilho gives readers a whimsical journey in a new fantasy world. With elements that are reminiscent of Harry Potter, The Never Ending Story and other children’s fantasy novel, this one is sure to capture the reader’s heart. I loved that it felt like I was reading a book like the ones that helped fuel my passion for reading.
The book lures you in with the promise of mischief and shenanigans as Mat explores places he isn’t allowed. Ilho has such a masterful way with his storytelling and understanding of human behavior, that his characters come to life right off the page. I love that there is a deaf character and provides a characters younger readers could relate to. Everything from character interaction, dialogue, setting, and execution is so well thought out that sometimes it doesn’t feel like reading. I lost track of time reading a few times. This is definitely a book I am recommending to my friends.
The book lures you in with the promise of mischief and shenanigans as Mat explores places he isn’t allowed. Ilho has such a masterful way with his storytelling and understanding of human behavior, that his characters come to life right off the page. I love that there is a deaf character and provides a characters younger readers could relate to. Everything from character interaction, dialogue, setting, and execution is so well thought out that sometimes it doesn’t feel like reading. I lost track of time reading a few times. This is definitely a book I am recommending to my friends.
August 12, 2024
The author's writing style is likable and easy to understand, with a good sense of humor. I found myself laughing out loud at the dialogue, the irony in some of the situations, and the overall prose at many points in the story.
There were only a few things that kept me from giving this book 5 stars. First, there were a number of typos that were missed (definitely a pet peeve of mine). The bigger thing was the initial transition between characters was super confusing and made it feel like I had switched to a completely different book.
Overall, this was a super fun read, and I would highly recommend it to any age group.
There were only a few things that kept me from giving this book 5 stars. First, there were a number of typos that were missed (definitely a pet peeve of mine). The bigger thing was the initial transition between characters was super confusing and made it feel like I had switched to a completely different book.
Overall, this was a super fun read, and I would highly recommend it to any age group.
August 25, 2024
What do you do when a mountain destroys your life when it decides to take a walk one day? Ludik, the blond deaf boy whose life the mountain destroyed, swears he will seek vengeance against it, vengance that he mist bide his time to achive. Then two strangers barge into his life and his chance of revenge may finally be in reach. But with these strangers looms a far greater threat that could completely destroy the world. This is a remarkable story of a group of unlikely heros who eventually come together for the greater good. A wonderfully thought out story with unexpected twists and a riveting story that will keep you engaged. One of the best stories I've read that show what the life of a deaf person is like and the struggles they face on a daily basis, let alone while saving the world.
September 1, 2024
This was a surprising book for me! I went into the read, not quite knowing what to expect..and was pleasantly surprised.
Our MMC is deaf, but that doesn’t stop him from being a normal boy. The author, at least in my opinion (as a non deaf or HOH individual), did a very good job of representing the struggles and day to day life of a deaf individual.
The premise of the book is to go after the mountain, that had run away, which is what drew me in. I’ve never read a book before about a moving mountain. Have you?
I also love that the FMCs are snarky, fiercely independent and highly intelligent young (well at least one of them) women, who can definitely stand on their own. And speaking of characters, I loved the banter and other interactions they had. It made me come to love all of them.
This book is appropriate for middle school ages (11ish) and up. I was pleasantly surprised to love this book as much as I did and it was a nice change of pace from the “romantasy” type books I normally read.
I would definitely recommend giving this book a read, and I’ll tell anyone who will listen to do so.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Our MMC is deaf, but that doesn’t stop him from being a normal boy. The author, at least in my opinion (as a non deaf or HOH individual), did a very good job of representing the struggles and day to day life of a deaf individual.
The premise of the book is to go after the mountain, that had run away, which is what drew me in. I’ve never read a book before about a moving mountain. Have you?
I also love that the FMCs are snarky, fiercely independent and highly intelligent young (well at least one of them) women, who can definitely stand on their own. And speaking of characters, I loved the banter and other interactions they had. It made me come to love all of them.
This book is appropriate for middle school ages (11ish) and up. I was pleasantly surprised to love this book as much as I did and it was a nice change of pace from the “romantasy” type books I normally read.
I would definitely recommend giving this book a read, and I’ll tell anyone who will listen to do so.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 6, 2024
Recommend
Ludik and the Runaway Mountain by John Ilho.
I did love the cover of this book. It was like a never-ending story. You had talking trees. Which I really liked. I did like Ludik. His deafness was different. This was an easy read, and I got into it straight away. I read in one sitting. I couldn't put it down. This was a well-written and exciting epic fantasy. There was nothing I didn't like about this book. I would definitely recommend this book.
Ludik and the Runaway Mountain by John Ilho.
I did love the cover of this book. It was like a never-ending story. You had talking trees. Which I really liked. I did like Ludik. His deafness was different. This was an easy read, and I got into it straight away. I read in one sitting. I couldn't put it down. This was a well-written and exciting epic fantasy. There was nothing I didn't like about this book. I would definitely recommend this book.
January 29, 2025
Get ready for a story in the medieval time, with time travel/world jumping, which will bring you our modern time characters to Ludik’s world in this exciting new book from John. If you loved the Umbrella Academy, you definitely don't want to miss out on this.
The book starts with Ludik as a small deaf kid who has to fight through troubled times, which is too harsh for just a young boy. Before he ventures into a journey to confront the mountain for making him a orphan, while being chased and hunted down by enemies and soldiers.
The book is packed with cool powers and an exciting magic system. One of my favorite parts of the story is the trees, but I’m not going to spoil why. You’ll just have to read it yourself to find out. The story itself is very good. It filled with more stuff than I honestly thought it would be. Which makes this a great adventure that never gets boring.
I haven't read many fantasy books that feature characters with disabilities, so I found it really cool that this one focused on a deaf protagonist. It was fascinating to experience the story through Ludik’s perspective, especially as he faced the challenges of going on an adventure without being able to hear. It really allowed me to step into his shoes and connect with his struggles in a unique way.
Definitely recommend this for adventure fans, both young and old.
The book starts with Ludik as a small deaf kid who has to fight through troubled times, which is too harsh for just a young boy. Before he ventures into a journey to confront the mountain for making him a orphan, while being chased and hunted down by enemies and soldiers.
The book is packed with cool powers and an exciting magic system. One of my favorite parts of the story is the trees, but I’m not going to spoil why. You’ll just have to read it yourself to find out. The story itself is very good. It filled with more stuff than I honestly thought it would be. Which makes this a great adventure that never gets boring.
I haven't read many fantasy books that feature characters with disabilities, so I found it really cool that this one focused on a deaf protagonist. It was fascinating to experience the story through Ludik’s perspective, especially as he faced the challenges of going on an adventure without being able to hear. It really allowed me to step into his shoes and connect with his struggles in a unique way.
Definitely recommend this for adventure fans, both young and old.
October 3, 2024
Ludik and the Runaway Mountain is a beautiful, sweeping tale of a boy out for revenge against the mountain that killed his parents, and he'll stop at nothing to get it.
I loved the premise of this story, quite different to anything I've read before, and I must say, the world building on display here is quite wonderful. It's rich and imaginative, and is easy to get lost in as you read along.
It's a brilliantly descriptive story, you can really see the sights, hear the sounds and smell the smells and it told from multiple points of view, although it mainly centres around our main character, Ludik, who has been deaf since birth. So I like the diversity here.
It's a fun, whimsical story, full to the brim with great, well rounded characters, and has some great humour too.
It's quite a hefty tome, at 500 pages, but it certainly doesn't seem that long as you flick through the pages, and I read this in four sittings.
Overall, an entirely enjoyable, exciting fantasy.
5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 's from me.
I loved the premise of this story, quite different to anything I've read before, and I must say, the world building on display here is quite wonderful. It's rich and imaginative, and is easy to get lost in as you read along.
It's a brilliantly descriptive story, you can really see the sights, hear the sounds and smell the smells and it told from multiple points of view, although it mainly centres around our main character, Ludik, who has been deaf since birth. So I like the diversity here.
It's a fun, whimsical story, full to the brim with great, well rounded characters, and has some great humour too.
It's quite a hefty tome, at 500 pages, but it certainly doesn't seem that long as you flick through the pages, and I read this in four sittings.
Overall, an entirely enjoyable, exciting fantasy.
5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 's from me.
September 29, 2024
The very pretty front cover of this book caught my eye instantly 😍 after reading the blurb I had to read it!!
John Ilho has a beautiful way of writing - the first few chapters of this story following young deaf lad Ludik had my heart breaking for characters we’d barely been introduced too 💔😢
After suffering some tough losses Ludik is saved by a man named Heimee Heims - by far my fav character I absolutely loved the way he talks to and takes care of Ludik.
This story had so much packed into it and I loved the great world building the characters the magic and the journey John took me on. Awesome read 🤩
John Ilho has a beautiful way of writing - the first few chapters of this story following young deaf lad Ludik had my heart breaking for characters we’d barely been introduced too 💔😢
After suffering some tough losses Ludik is saved by a man named Heimee Heims - by far my fav character I absolutely loved the way he talks to and takes care of Ludik.
This story had so much packed into it and I loved the great world building the characters the magic and the journey John took me on. Awesome read 🤩
May 25, 2026
I really, really wanted to like this book. The premise was unique, and the main plot line was solid, but I feel like the author got lost along the way a few times. The inner dialogue was rough in a lot of it, abruptly pulling me out of the story with references that felt very forced. I enjoyed a number of the characters and there were some really strong and quotable moments mixed in with some really confusing, missed the mark moments that required a reread. It felt... disjointed throughout to the point where I thought I accidentally skipped a few pages and missed something quite a few times. I felt like the book really hit its stride in the last 10%, the dialogue was less forced and it was clear that the author knew exactly what he wanted to do with the end of the book, I was bummed that the rest of the book had been missing that ease.
August 18, 2024
im not that big on writing reviews, but for this one i will! as a fantasy reader, this book took me through a wonderful journey!
i loved that the story is different from what im used to, i loved the characters and the relationships between each and one of them!
i dont have much to say but i really hope i get to see a hopeful next chapter to the story as i feel the ending definitely leads to a new story for ludik :)
i gave it 4 stars mostly cause the world blending between ludik’s timeline and the modern one was confusing at the beginning. it also took me a while to actually get into the book but once i have a sense of what its about, i was reading as much as i could!
i loved that the story is different from what im used to, i loved the characters and the relationships between each and one of them!
i dont have much to say but i really hope i get to see a hopeful next chapter to the story as i feel the ending definitely leads to a new story for ludik :)
i gave it 4 stars mostly cause the world blending between ludik’s timeline and the modern one was confusing at the beginning. it also took me a while to actually get into the book but once i have a sense of what its about, i was reading as much as i could!
October 3, 2024
I received this as an ARC, and I much appreciate the author making it available. I just took longer to read it because last month was too busy.
I know others have said it, but the cover art is absolutely gorgeous. Eye-catching and lovely, I want to give some props for that.
I did enjoy the authors voice in the writing very much. He is great with descriptive language that suits the characters and their interpretations of the world, and the language styles really lend to the individual character development within the story. Most of the book relies on Ludik's point of view, but it does switch between characters occasionally, and each voice is distinct and unique. The individual characters stood apart from each other, had intentions and motivations that made sense and were fleshed out well, and Ludik alone with his deafness and how he has to work around limitations, whether magical or non, was pretty well done overall and integrated well into the story. Lovely work there.
The world building was a bit confusing, though not insanely complicated. I felt like I was sometimes trying to go back and try and find some piece I missed about the history of the world, or how the different worlds integrated into one another, and a lot of that probably was because explanations were a bit two dimensional and lacked depth. Didn't take away from the readability of the story, but it did make it feel a bit glossed over, like a painting lacking texture but too much varnish.
The magic of the world isn't super well-explained, but the concepts around it were intriguing, and the idea of integrating a modern world into a more archaic one and being able to world hop was also intriguing. Again, though, it was not super explored or developed, so it felt more two-dimensional than integral to the story.
The ending felt a bit abrupt and rushed, honestly, which didn't fit the rest of the story, especially the first half, really taking its time to develop characters and backstory and motivations. Felt like I got to the end and went, "Oh, that's it? After all that.. That's it?"
Solid 4 out of 5 stars, though, more because some elements felt a little undercooked and rushed at times, rather than being truly bad, and I did REALLY love the authors use of language and style to make some lovely characters.
I know others have said it, but the cover art is absolutely gorgeous. Eye-catching and lovely, I want to give some props for that.
I did enjoy the authors voice in the writing very much. He is great with descriptive language that suits the characters and their interpretations of the world, and the language styles really lend to the individual character development within the story. Most of the book relies on Ludik's point of view, but it does switch between characters occasionally, and each voice is distinct and unique. The individual characters stood apart from each other, had intentions and motivations that made sense and were fleshed out well, and Ludik alone with his deafness and how he has to work around limitations, whether magical or non, was pretty well done overall and integrated well into the story. Lovely work there.
The world building was a bit confusing, though not insanely complicated. I felt like I was sometimes trying to go back and try and find some piece I missed about the history of the world, or how the different worlds integrated into one another, and a lot of that probably was because explanations were a bit two dimensional and lacked depth. Didn't take away from the readability of the story, but it did make it feel a bit glossed over, like a painting lacking texture but too much varnish.
The magic of the world isn't super well-explained, but the concepts around it were intriguing, and the idea of integrating a modern world into a more archaic one and being able to world hop was also intriguing. Again, though, it was not super explored or developed, so it felt more two-dimensional than integral to the story.
The ending felt a bit abrupt and rushed, honestly, which didn't fit the rest of the story, especially the first half, really taking its time to develop characters and backstory and motivations. Felt like I got to the end and went, "Oh, that's it? After all that.. That's it?"
Solid 4 out of 5 stars, though, more because some elements felt a little undercooked and rushed at times, rather than being truly bad, and I did REALLY love the authors use of language and style to make some lovely characters.
October 12, 2024
Ludik And The Runaway Mountain is an epic fantasy adventure by John Iiho.
💜 Blurb -
‘Most people call me Ludi or Lud, even though my name is Ludik. Or they do call me Ludik, but I can’t catch the k on their lips. No, it doesn’t bother me—being deaf, that is. Still, if given the choice, I would’ve gone with ugly.
There are many misconceptions about deafness, but the oddest to me is that we are void of sound, which is simply not true. And it’s with a sound that my story begins.
With the earth-shattering thunder of a runaway mountain.
The mountain destroyed everything I’ve ever known. My village, my friends, my family. All gone. I don’t care why it ran. I’ll make sure it never moves again.’
A well-written and exciting new take on epic fantasy mixed with alternate realities. Great characterization, plotting, and action mixed with interesting worldbuilding makes this a winner.’ – Bryan Thomas Schmidt, #1 bestselling author of Shortcut and Hugo-nominated editor
💝 Review -
This was such a beautiful and well written novel. I couldn't put it down and despite it's 500 pages, I soon got through it. The book was so full of adventure and I loved following the characters journey throughout the book. This book was very enjoyable and I highly recommend it to other readers.
❣️ Thank you to Love Book Tours, the publisher and author, John Iiho for my copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
💜 Blurb -
‘Most people call me Ludi or Lud, even though my name is Ludik. Or they do call me Ludik, but I can’t catch the k on their lips. No, it doesn’t bother me—being deaf, that is. Still, if given the choice, I would’ve gone with ugly.
There are many misconceptions about deafness, but the oddest to me is that we are void of sound, which is simply not true. And it’s with a sound that my story begins.
With the earth-shattering thunder of a runaway mountain.
The mountain destroyed everything I’ve ever known. My village, my friends, my family. All gone. I don’t care why it ran. I’ll make sure it never moves again.’
A well-written and exciting new take on epic fantasy mixed with alternate realities. Great characterization, plotting, and action mixed with interesting worldbuilding makes this a winner.’ – Bryan Thomas Schmidt, #1 bestselling author of Shortcut and Hugo-nominated editor
💝 Review -
This was such a beautiful and well written novel. I couldn't put it down and despite it's 500 pages, I soon got through it. The book was so full of adventure and I loved following the characters journey throughout the book. This book was very enjoyable and I highly recommend it to other readers.
❣️ Thank you to Love Book Tours, the publisher and author, John Iiho for my copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
October 9, 2024
Ludik and the Runaway Mountain by John Ilho was so good!! Can I just say the cover of the book is GORGEOUS! If you love action, adventure, found family, forgiveness, YA, epic fantasies then you will love this book!!
Ludik aka Ludi or Lud is a cute little blond boy, who happens to be deaf. His life changed when the mountain was destroyed and now he is on a mission to seek vengeance against it, patiently.
This book had such a great plot, storyline, an amazing world building. I love the MC but I also love the side characters. You get to watch Ludi grow in this book in the beginning he is 8yo and by the end he is 17. I enjoyed the banter between the character’s it’s funny and witty. I enjoyed this book so much I finished it in a day. I cannot recommend this book enough!! Thank you to John Ilho and Love Book Tours for sending me a physical copy of this book in exchange for my honest thoughts and opinions.
Ludik aka Ludi or Lud is a cute little blond boy, who happens to be deaf. His life changed when the mountain was destroyed and now he is on a mission to seek vengeance against it, patiently.
This book had such a great plot, storyline, an amazing world building. I love the MC but I also love the side characters. You get to watch Ludi grow in this book in the beginning he is 8yo and by the end he is 17. I enjoyed the banter between the character’s it’s funny and witty. I enjoyed this book so much I finished it in a day. I cannot recommend this book enough!! Thank you to John Ilho and Love Book Tours for sending me a physical copy of this book in exchange for my honest thoughts and opinions.
September 4, 2024
This cover intrigued me so much! I love the colours and when I read the blurb, I knew I had to read it! It follows Ludik, an 8 year old deaf boy, who becomes an orphan and goes on a mission to avenge the mountain that made him lose his parents.
On the way, he meets Heimee, amongst others and I like the way Ludik is portrayed. The fact he is deaf makes you realise how hard it must have been to communicate when others don't necessarily know how to sign or having to lip read when you can't always know the context of the conversation. I haven't read many books with a deaf character and it has opened my mind to appreciate what we have and not take it for granted.
I like how there is action from early on, I was a bit daunted by the fact it is a 500 page book but it didn't feel like that as the storyline keeps you engaged throughout. There is action, adventure, mages, magical powers, found family, love and excitement. I love how Heimee takes in Ludik when he finds him in a snow storm, lost and alone.
The chapters are in pov's of the different characters, I like this because of the different perspectives and it gives more insight. I did struggle picturing the characters as there isn't much visual descriptions for them but the world building makes up for it.
Would recommend this for fans of fantasy readers and don't be put off by the page count!
On the way, he meets Heimee, amongst others and I like the way Ludik is portrayed. The fact he is deaf makes you realise how hard it must have been to communicate when others don't necessarily know how to sign or having to lip read when you can't always know the context of the conversation. I haven't read many books with a deaf character and it has opened my mind to appreciate what we have and not take it for granted.
I like how there is action from early on, I was a bit daunted by the fact it is a 500 page book but it didn't feel like that as the storyline keeps you engaged throughout. There is action, adventure, mages, magical powers, found family, love and excitement. I love how Heimee takes in Ludik when he finds him in a snow storm, lost and alone.
The chapters are in pov's of the different characters, I like this because of the different perspectives and it gives more insight. I did struggle picturing the characters as there isn't much visual descriptions for them but the world building makes up for it.
Would recommend this for fans of fantasy readers and don't be put off by the page count!
October 10, 2024
This book was epic! I loved it! Ludik was a fantastic hero, even though he isn’t typical type of hero. I thought it was really good that he was deaf, going against the conventions of main characters. I loved how he was portrayed as being determined and strong and how he was able to communicate with those around him. He didn’t let his deafness stop him. His development throughout the book was very good. There were also plenty of fun, crazy characters that he met on his journey, providing plenty of humour and witty conversations. The story also has other great elements like magic, adventure And some epic battles. The book is quite hefty with 500 pages, but I was so engrossed, I didn’t notice. I highly recommend this excellentbook.
October 6, 2024
4.5⭐️ A captivating story of resilience and found family.
Throughout this story we follow young Ludik, a deaf boy whose life is shattered when a mountain disappears causing Ludik’s to loose his family, friends, and village. Because of this, Ludik seeks vengeance against the mountain and sets out to find it along with some new found friends.
This book is truly beautifully written, it is full of vivid imagery, exciting adventure, easy to understand world building, alternating points of view, and complex characters that you will love. There are talking trees, fantasy creatures, and of course magic. This story will have you smiling, laughing, and maybe even tearing up a bit. You will absolutely find yourself cheering on Ludik throughout his incredible journey.
I couldn’t recommend this book more, it’s an incredible story that has everything you could want from a young adult fantasy. If you want to go on an epic adventure, you have to read this book.
Side note, I’d also like to mention that the cover of this book is absolutely stunning!
Throughout this story we follow young Ludik, a deaf boy whose life is shattered when a mountain disappears causing Ludik’s to loose his family, friends, and village. Because of this, Ludik seeks vengeance against the mountain and sets out to find it along with some new found friends.
This book is truly beautifully written, it is full of vivid imagery, exciting adventure, easy to understand world building, alternating points of view, and complex characters that you will love. There are talking trees, fantasy creatures, and of course magic. This story will have you smiling, laughing, and maybe even tearing up a bit. You will absolutely find yourself cheering on Ludik throughout his incredible journey.
I couldn’t recommend this book more, it’s an incredible story that has everything you could want from a young adult fantasy. If you want to go on an epic adventure, you have to read this book.
Side note, I’d also like to mention that the cover of this book is absolutely stunning!
October 5, 2024
First of all, what a beautiful cover for this book. It instantly drew me in, and it would look gorgeous on any bookshelf!
Next... THERE'S MAPS! I do love a good fantasy book with maps, and the quality of these maps matches the artwork!
Now, onto the story... a story about a deaf young boy who lost his parents and goes on a journey to avenge them.
First of all, as a woman with deaf family members, I love how there is a deaf representation here!
It is a very long book at 498 printed pages, but the chapters aren't massive it doesn't feel overwhelming.
John has a lovely way of introducing diverse characters and developing them, while the world-building is just fantastic - vivid and realistic.
There is so much to unpack with this story that I can't do in this small space but an enjoyable book and one I can recommend to epic fantasy lovers!
Next... THERE'S MAPS! I do love a good fantasy book with maps, and the quality of these maps matches the artwork!
Now, onto the story... a story about a deaf young boy who lost his parents and goes on a journey to avenge them.
First of all, as a woman with deaf family members, I love how there is a deaf representation here!
It is a very long book at 498 printed pages, but the chapters aren't massive it doesn't feel overwhelming.
John has a lovely way of introducing diverse characters and developing them, while the world-building is just fantastic - vivid and realistic.
There is so much to unpack with this story that I can't do in this small space but an enjoyable book and one I can recommend to epic fantasy lovers!
October 29, 2025
First off, BEAUTIFUL cover artwork.
The concept of the book was also very intriguing and I loved the idea of a main character in an adventure fantasy setting with deaf representation. The book feels a little like middle grade humor, and epic storytelling mashed together.
While I liked the idea of a boy chasing after a mountain for revenge - there was a huge delay in the story with that actual storyline. It ended up being an afterthought for a long time, and the eventual climax for that was sudden and confusing.
The portal aspect of the book was confusing at first, and I don't think it was introduced well, or necessary. Honestly, the characters could have just been from another part of the world or city, and it would have had the same impact - but making it a portal fantasy seemed to just add to the entertainment value and ability to add modern phrases and confusion to the other characters.
Ludik was a wonderful character, and some of the others, like Heimee, and Brinn were also great additions. The villains were very awful and terrible (as they should be), and I liked how there was a great mix of good/bad motivations displayed. The loved the way they showed how lip reading is not a cure all, and how every person and face can change how difficult it can be to Interpret.
So many different adventures, and a unique magic system kept me reading and invested in the story - but it was hard to stay engaged. There was a lot of confusion at times about WHO was speaking, or what was happening in the book, and I had to constantly go back and reread sections to try and figure out what I was missing, only to find they didn't explain or the dialogue was unclear.
The constant mentions of whiskey drinking (not just making) and how obsessed Ariel was with the drink became a little annoying throughout. She was a very fun character otherwise. I did enjoy her phonetic speech though some people find that annoying. Her inability to engage properly or communicate well caused no end of issues that could have been easily resolved early on.
The use of the word infundibuliform to describe someone's face shape, also seemed out of place for the age group I would expect this book is geared towards - and while there were several instances of bigger vocabulary words sprinkled about - that one just felt like too much.
Ludik's journey is full of twists. And I think that was part of the problem. There was so much going on in this book, and it was one endless event after another with no real rest until the last build up. The ending also left me feeling like a cheap trick was used to peak interest after the story ends. Rather like the cheap scare movie endings. It would have been so much better without that addition.
The concept of the book was also very intriguing and I loved the idea of a main character in an adventure fantasy setting with deaf representation. The book feels a little like middle grade humor, and epic storytelling mashed together.
While I liked the idea of a boy chasing after a mountain for revenge - there was a huge delay in the story with that actual storyline. It ended up being an afterthought for a long time, and the eventual climax for that was sudden and confusing.
The portal aspect of the book was confusing at first, and I don't think it was introduced well, or necessary. Honestly, the characters could have just been from another part of the world or city, and it would have had the same impact - but making it a portal fantasy seemed to just add to the entertainment value and ability to add modern phrases and confusion to the other characters.
Ludik was a wonderful character, and some of the others, like Heimee, and Brinn were also great additions. The villains were very awful and terrible (as they should be), and I liked how there was a great mix of good/bad motivations displayed. The loved the way they showed how lip reading is not a cure all, and how every person and face can change how difficult it can be to Interpret.
So many different adventures, and a unique magic system kept me reading and invested in the story - but it was hard to stay engaged. There was a lot of confusion at times about WHO was speaking, or what was happening in the book, and I had to constantly go back and reread sections to try and figure out what I was missing, only to find they didn't explain or the dialogue was unclear.
The constant mentions of whiskey drinking (not just making) and how obsessed Ariel was with the drink became a little annoying throughout. She was a very fun character otherwise. I did enjoy her phonetic speech though some people find that annoying. Her inability to engage properly or communicate well caused no end of issues that could have been easily resolved early on.
The use of the word infundibuliform to describe someone's face shape, also seemed out of place for the age group I would expect this book is geared towards - and while there were several instances of bigger vocabulary words sprinkled about - that one just felt like too much.
Ludik's journey is full of twists. And I think that was part of the problem. There was so much going on in this book, and it was one endless event after another with no real rest until the last build up. The ending also left me feeling like a cheap trick was used to peak interest after the story ends. Rather like the cheap scare movie endings. It would have been so much better without that addition.
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