Great story, good story telling, poor writing
The story is great, I love the world building and the history we are seeing, though wizard Blacke bugs me sometimes. The real weakness of the story is the writing. Wrong words used, or just plain weird words, or sentance or paragraph throughout, incorrect euphemisms, paragraphs that have missing sentences, or the wrong sentence pasted in. It's all very poorly edited. I'm thinking maybe AI was used for part of it, because some bits just come out weird.
All that aside, it's s great story!!!