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Bloom Town: Genesis
Ally North’s viral BookTok sensation follows a preacher’s daughter with a secret, an outlaw running from the gallows, and a thrilling sapphic love story spanning vast oceans and wide deserts.
June 1852. When Abby Proctor is kidnapped from a train in the middle of the desert halfway to her new life in California, she makes a promise to herself—she will escape. Abby is leaving Iowa and all its oppressions behind for a reason, and she refuses to be someone’s prisoner again. Especially when that someone is the infamous female outlaw Joey “JT London” Taylor—Abby’s brash, brooding, and inconveniently beautiful captor.
As Abby plots her escape, she stumbles upon a larger conspiracy behind her kidnapping—a complicated revelation considering her growing feelings for Joey, who might not be the ruthless criminal everyone believes her to be. Suddenly Abby doesn’t want to go back to the confines of her religious father or her suffocating husband.
Then Abby realizes it’s all connected—her kidnapping, the secrets she left behind in Iowa, even her plans in California—and she must decide between returning to a life of obedience and unhappiness or trusting an enigmatic outlaw bound for the gallows.
June 1852. When Abby Proctor is kidnapped from a train in the middle of the desert halfway to her new life in California, she makes a promise to herself—she will escape. Abby is leaving Iowa and all its oppressions behind for a reason, and she refuses to be someone’s prisoner again. Especially when that someone is the infamous female outlaw Joey “JT London” Taylor—Abby’s brash, brooding, and inconveniently beautiful captor.
As Abby plots her escape, she stumbles upon a larger conspiracy behind her kidnapping—a complicated revelation considering her growing feelings for Joey, who might not be the ruthless criminal everyone believes her to be. Suddenly Abby doesn’t want to go back to the confines of her religious father or her suffocating husband.
Then Abby realizes it’s all connected—her kidnapping, the secrets she left behind in Iowa, even her plans in California—and she must decide between returning to a life of obedience and unhappiness or trusting an enigmatic outlaw bound for the gallows.
514 pages, Paperback
First published July 11, 2024
About the author
Ally North
3 books920 followersAlly North (she/her) has been writing fiction her entire life, but recently, during the pandemic, she began writing sapphic romance out of pure chaotic boredom and discovered an untried knack for the genre. She lives in America, but occasionally she lives in England. When she isn’t writing, Ally can be found cooking with obscene amounts of garlic, traveling someplace new, rescuing animals and feeding Jean-Claude, the wild possum who lives under her shed.
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June 26, 2026I am warning you right now do not start this until you have time to read the entire book and start the second one. Has my sleep this weekend suffered? Yes. Was it worth it? Absolutely. Between the story, the steam, and the suspense, I could not get enough of this book. Thank goodness book two is available to start immediately.
September 7, 2024
Review to come bc holy crrrraaaaaappppp this book! Read this now! I need to talk about it
Okay- here we go!!!!
Bloom Town: Genesis by Ally North is nothing short of a masterpiece, and I can’t believe this is the author’s debut novel. I originally picked up the book because I was absolutely captivated by the cover, but after reading the synopsis, it became one of the fastest one-clicks of my life. And trust me, this book did not disappoint.
From the very first chapter, I was completely sucked in. North’s writing is eloquent, magical, and lyrical, bringing the Wild West to life with such vividness that I could feel the heat of the desert and the dust on my skin. This is so much more than just a romance novel—it’s an emotional journey filled with themes of family, freedom, and personal growth. North shows that the family you choose can bring more love and peace than the one you’re born into, and this found family is one of the most heartwarming aspects of the story.
The characters in Bloom Town: Genesis are beautifully flawed, perfectly imperfect, and impossible not to love. From Olive and Jack to my sweet, sweet Lewis, every character adds depth and warmth to the narrative. But let’s talk about Joey “JT London” Taylor, the complex outlaw who had me absolutely swooning. I have the BIGGEST crush on Joey—she’s brash, brooding, and utterly captivating. And then there’s Abby Proctor, who is just as wonderful. Watching Abby grow and step into her power throughout the book is one of the most satisfying character arcs I’ve read in a long time. Her evolution from a preacher’s daughter running from oppression to a woman embracing her desires and independence is incredible.
One of the things I loved most about this book is how North tackles deeper issues like prejudice and religious trauma. These themes are handled with tact and class, but readers should be aware they might find them triggering. Still, it’s clear North approached these topics with care, making the story even more impactful.
Now, let’s get to the steam. OMG—the spice in this book is *on fire*. From slow-burn sexual awakening to exploring sexuality, toys (no seriously), and even some very well-done dirty talk and praise kink (in a historical novel, no less—YES PLEASE), this book delivers on every level. The intimate scenes are not just hot, but meaningful, adding layers to Joey and Abby’s relationship. The sexual tension and emotional depth between them make for an unforgettable romance.
And I have to tell you that Bloom Town: Genesis is an emotional rollercoaster. I didn’t want it to end. But alas, it does… on a cliffhanger! So do yourself a favor and get book two when you pick up the first one because you’re going to want to dive right in after finishing this one. I cleared my entire weekend for this series, and it was totally worth it.
I also need to say how much I hope this book gets an audiobook. I would *love* to listen to these characters come to life again.
Bloom Town: Genesis is a diamond of a book—easily one of my top 5 reads this year. Ally North has officially made me a fan of the sapphic western romance trope, and I’m low-key sad I devoured this book so fast because I’m not ready to let it go. Trust me—clear your schedule and dive into this book (and the sequel!). You won’t regret it.
Okay- here we go!!!!
Bloom Town: Genesis by Ally North is nothing short of a masterpiece, and I can’t believe this is the author’s debut novel. I originally picked up the book because I was absolutely captivated by the cover, but after reading the synopsis, it became one of the fastest one-clicks of my life. And trust me, this book did not disappoint.
From the very first chapter, I was completely sucked in. North’s writing is eloquent, magical, and lyrical, bringing the Wild West to life with such vividness that I could feel the heat of the desert and the dust on my skin. This is so much more than just a romance novel—it’s an emotional journey filled with themes of family, freedom, and personal growth. North shows that the family you choose can bring more love and peace than the one you’re born into, and this found family is one of the most heartwarming aspects of the story.
The characters in Bloom Town: Genesis are beautifully flawed, perfectly imperfect, and impossible not to love. From Olive and Jack to my sweet, sweet Lewis, every character adds depth and warmth to the narrative. But let’s talk about Joey “JT London” Taylor, the complex outlaw who had me absolutely swooning. I have the BIGGEST crush on Joey—she’s brash, brooding, and utterly captivating. And then there’s Abby Proctor, who is just as wonderful. Watching Abby grow and step into her power throughout the book is one of the most satisfying character arcs I’ve read in a long time. Her evolution from a preacher’s daughter running from oppression to a woman embracing her desires and independence is incredible.
One of the things I loved most about this book is how North tackles deeper issues like prejudice and religious trauma. These themes are handled with tact and class, but readers should be aware they might find them triggering. Still, it’s clear North approached these topics with care, making the story even more impactful.
Now, let’s get to the steam. OMG—the spice in this book is *on fire*. From slow-burn sexual awakening to exploring sexuality, toys (no seriously), and even some very well-done dirty talk and praise kink (in a historical novel, no less—YES PLEASE), this book delivers on every level. The intimate scenes are not just hot, but meaningful, adding layers to Joey and Abby’s relationship. The sexual tension and emotional depth between them make for an unforgettable romance.
And I have to tell you that Bloom Town: Genesis is an emotional rollercoaster. I didn’t want it to end. But alas, it does… on a cliffhanger! So do yourself a favor and get book two when you pick up the first one because you’re going to want to dive right in after finishing this one. I cleared my entire weekend for this series, and it was totally worth it.
I also need to say how much I hope this book gets an audiobook. I would *love* to listen to these characters come to life again.
Bloom Town: Genesis is a diamond of a book—easily one of my top 5 reads this year. Ally North has officially made me a fan of the sapphic western romance trope, and I’m low-key sad I devoured this book so fast because I’m not ready to let it go. Trust me—clear your schedule and dive into this book (and the sequel!). You won’t regret it.
May 10, 2025
**'Telling really great stories can be painful but for novices and hacks, it's fun to them. Also, enticing stories comes through/from good revisionists..'
Fascinating read!
A well paced and interesting book #1!
Recommended book!
Fascinating read!
A well paced and interesting book #1!
Recommended book!
June 27, 2026
⋆˚࿔ Review 🐴 𝜗𝜚˚⋆
— ✧ rating: ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
I knew this book was going to be good because… come on. A sapphic western romance set in the 1800s?? That already sounded like it was made specifically for me. 🤭
And somehow it still exceeded every expectation I had. Everything I imagined this book would be doesn’t even compare to how much I ended up loving it.
I don’t usually gravitate toward historical romances, but this might have me rethinking that opinion because wow… this was incredible. The writing was so immersive that I completely forgot I was reading. The pacing was perfect, nothing felt dragged out, and every part of the story fit together so naturally. There were never moments where I felt like something didn’t make sense or was thrown in just for the plot.
The cast was another huge highlight. Not only did I adore both main characters, but the side characters completely stole my heart too. They all felt important to the story instead of just existing in the background.
And Olive… my sweet angel 🥹. She was such a precious character. She was so much more mature than someone her age should’ve had to be, which honestly broke my heart a little.
°ᡣ𐭩.°.જ⁀➴ Joey 🤠
My woman 😩 The second she appeared on the page I was obsessed, and somehow she only got better as the story went on.
She’s such a genuinely caring person, and it definitely doesn’t hurt that she’s incredibly attractive too 🤭. From the very beginning I knew she had a good heart, and her backstory only made me love her more. The way she loved those children and was willing to sacrifice absolutely everything for them was so beautiful to watch. She protected them without hesitation, and every decision she made came from a place of love.
°ᡣ𐭩.°.જ⁀➴ Abbey 🌾
I loved Abbey just as much. She was so easy to root for, and I loved how naturally she cared for the kids despite everything happening around her.
Honestly, she might be the sweetest kidnapping victim I’ve ever read about 😭. She had such a warm heart, and every interaction she had with the children melted me, especially her relationship with Luis. Seeing how patient she was with him and how hard she worked to help him made me love her even more. Those quieter moments ended up being some of my favorites in the entire book.
ᵎᵎ｡🧷𖦹°‧ Joey & Abbey 🤍
These two completely stole my heart. Their chemistry felt effortless, their banter was hilarious, and every emotional moment between them felt earned. I loved how they challenged each other while also bringing out the best in one another.
The push and pull between Joey and Abbey was done so well. Their banter had me giggling the entire book because half of their arguments were so unnecessary 😭 but that’s exactly what made them so entertaining. Every interaction between them had so much chemistry, and watching them slowly let their walls down was everything.
By the end, I was completely attached to them and honestly wasn’t ready to say goodbye.
I love them both so much, and I already can’t wait to pick up the second book. 🥹🤍
Thank you for reading xx 💋
ෆ ༚︶︶︶︶ෆ ༚꒰ ෆ ꒱༚ ෆ︶︶︶︶༚ ෆ
˚₊‧꒰ა Pre read ⋆｡𖦹°⭒˚｡⋆
A wester sapphic romance. That’s it. That’s all I needed to hear.
My expectations are already through the roof, and I refuse to do anything about it 🙂↕️
— ✧ rating: ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
I knew this book was going to be good because… come on. A sapphic western romance set in the 1800s?? That already sounded like it was made specifically for me. 🤭
And somehow it still exceeded every expectation I had. Everything I imagined this book would be doesn’t even compare to how much I ended up loving it.
I don’t usually gravitate toward historical romances, but this might have me rethinking that opinion because wow… this was incredible. The writing was so immersive that I completely forgot I was reading. The pacing was perfect, nothing felt dragged out, and every part of the story fit together so naturally. There were never moments where I felt like something didn’t make sense or was thrown in just for the plot.
The cast was another huge highlight. Not only did I adore both main characters, but the side characters completely stole my heart too. They all felt important to the story instead of just existing in the background.
And Olive… my sweet angel 🥹. She was such a precious character. She was so much more mature than someone her age should’ve had to be, which honestly broke my heart a little.
°ᡣ𐭩.°.જ⁀➴ Joey 🤠
My woman 😩 The second she appeared on the page I was obsessed, and somehow she only got better as the story went on.
She’s such a genuinely caring person, and it definitely doesn’t hurt that she’s incredibly attractive too 🤭. From the very beginning I knew she had a good heart, and her backstory only made me love her more. The way she loved those children and was willing to sacrifice absolutely everything for them was so beautiful to watch. She protected them without hesitation, and every decision she made came from a place of love.
°ᡣ𐭩.°.જ⁀➴ Abbey 🌾
I loved Abbey just as much. She was so easy to root for, and I loved how naturally she cared for the kids despite everything happening around her.
Honestly, she might be the sweetest kidnapping victim I’ve ever read about 😭. She had such a warm heart, and every interaction she had with the children melted me, especially her relationship with Luis. Seeing how patient she was with him and how hard she worked to help him made me love her even more. Those quieter moments ended up being some of my favorites in the entire book.
ᵎᵎ｡🧷𖦹°‧ Joey & Abbey 🤍
These two completely stole my heart. Their chemistry felt effortless, their banter was hilarious, and every emotional moment between them felt earned. I loved how they challenged each other while also bringing out the best in one another.
The push and pull between Joey and Abbey was done so well. Their banter had me giggling the entire book because half of their arguments were so unnecessary 😭 but that’s exactly what made them so entertaining. Every interaction between them had so much chemistry, and watching them slowly let their walls down was everything.
By the end, I was completely attached to them and honestly wasn’t ready to say goodbye.
I love them both so much, and I already can’t wait to pick up the second book. 🥹🤍
Thank you for reading xx 💋
ෆ ༚︶︶︶︶ෆ ༚꒰ ෆ ꒱༚ ෆ︶︶︶︶༚ ෆ
˚₊‧꒰ა Pre read ⋆｡𖦹°⭒˚｡⋆
A wester sapphic romance. That’s it. That’s all I needed to hear.
My expectations are already through the roof, and I refuse to do anything about it 🙂↕️
June 16, 2025
outrageously good debut. life changing. intimate, inspired, hot. maybe the best thing i’ve ever read. overall UNREAL RTC.
June 2, 2026
dani and jamie fanfic confirmed! i LOVED this so fucking much, bly manor truthers do yourselves a favor and read this 🙂↕️ it was utter perfection of a book. if anyone has been obsessing over dani + jamie and needing a fix, this is the book for you!! i DEVOURED this & the hype when it was indie published was quite deserved, i feel like it delivered on every aspect regarding a historical sapphic western!! also that cliffhanger was lethal and i need the next book asap rocky!!!
thank you to netgalley and dell for the arc!!
thank you to netgalley and dell for the arc!!
March 21, 2025
I am 100% in the minority here, so disregard this review if you want. This just didn't click for me.
What I liked:
Abby. I thought she was a great protagonist, and I really enjoyed seeing her grow over the course of the kidnapping and imprisonment and eventual freedom. I'm so glad she moved away from religion and found herself! Love that for her.
The beginning. It started with a bang, and it was really great to read.
Which leads me to Abby's and Joey's banter at the start. Good enemies to lovers energy. Unfortunately, that falls away when they start sleeping together.
What I didn't like:
While I did like Joey, her accent/the way it was written kept throwing me off. For example, in the UK, we can say shit, shite, or shat, depending on the tense/context. All she said was shite, often incorrectly, and it was just a little thing that kept annoying me.
The children. I'm not a fan of kids in general lol, and these two were 10 and 8 but read much older. I just didn't like it. Also, I've recently seen that this started life as a Bly Manor fanfiction, and I hated the annoying kids in that, which compounded my dislike of them in this.
I also didn't buy Abby's love. The book takes place over 2 weeks, yet we're supposed to believe Abby goes from hating Joey to loving her in that time, even with the whole kidnapping complication? It required too much suspension of disbelief for me.
It's unfortunate, as I was looking forward to this based on the great reviews. I'm so glad others enjoyed it!
What I liked:
Abby. I thought she was a great protagonist, and I really enjoyed seeing her grow over the course of the kidnapping and imprisonment and eventual freedom. I'm so glad she moved away from religion and found herself! Love that for her.
The beginning. It started with a bang, and it was really great to read.
Which leads me to Abby's and Joey's banter at the start. Good enemies to lovers energy. Unfortunately, that falls away when they start sleeping together.
What I didn't like:
While I did like Joey, her accent/the way it was written kept throwing me off. For example, in the UK, we can say shit, shite, or shat, depending on the tense/context. All she said was shite, often incorrectly, and it was just a little thing that kept annoying me.
The children. I'm not a fan of kids in general lol, and these two were 10 and 8 but read much older. I just didn't like it. Also, I've recently seen that this started life as a Bly Manor fanfiction, and I hated the annoying kids in that, which compounded my dislike of them in this.
I also didn't buy Abby's love. The book takes place over 2 weeks, yet we're supposed to believe Abby goes from hating Joey to loving her in that time, even with the whole kidnapping complication? It required too much suspension of disbelief for me.
It's unfortunate, as I was looking forward to this based on the great reviews. I'm so glad others enjoyed it!
February 1, 2026
This started as a The Haunting of Bly Manor fan fiction, which I’d have loved on a fan fiction site. However, publishing it for profit without giving credit to the show feels wrong, especially when so many elements, like the characters and specific scenes (e.g., the kids’ theater show), are strikingly similar. I mean some things are virtually the same. I knew this was a Bly Manor fic just from Olive and Jack alone. A simple acknowledgment in the book’s credits could have gone a long way in showing that Ally North was honoring her inspiration rather than seeming to copy it.
It’s disappointing because the story itself has real potential. But the lack of credit to the show or its creators left a bad taste in my mouth, particularly since the original fan fiction was deleted after Bloom Town was published. I think Ally either should have acknowledged the shows writers for crafting the characters or make them different enough from the show that it wasn't obvious they were from there.
It’s disappointing because the story itself has real potential. But the lack of credit to the show or its creators left a bad taste in my mouth, particularly since the original fan fiction was deleted after Bloom Town was published. I think Ally either should have acknowledged the shows writers for crafting the characters or make them different enough from the show that it wasn't obvious they were from there.
April 7, 2025
“She didn’t want to see that poor animal, cursed by its own beauty, butchered and plated for consumption by small men made angry when beautiful things dared to exist outside of their possession.” (My jaw dropped when I read this)
Wow, that was a wild ride. The ending was such a cliffhanger I can’t not pick up the second one immediately. The only thing that bugged me a bit was that Abby immediately fell into bed with someone who literally kidnapped her. There was no lull period, or a short time where they got to know each other, and it felt a bit weird for her to sleep with her kidnapper right away. I looooved all of the characters and how kind they all really were given the situation. My heart ached for Abby, being punished and publicly humiliated by your own family because you were with a woman is just unimaginable. She’s never been able to live life for her, never being “free”.
The storyline was 5/5 though. It really brings to light how religion played such a huge part in the 1800s and how homosexuality was viewed as well as the realities of how life was during the westward expansion. Definitely worth reading!
Wow, that was a wild ride. The ending was such a cliffhanger I can’t not pick up the second one immediately. The only thing that bugged me a bit was that Abby immediately fell into bed with someone who literally kidnapped her. There was no lull period, or a short time where they got to know each other, and it felt a bit weird for her to sleep with her kidnapper right away. I looooved all of the characters and how kind they all really were given the situation. My heart ached for Abby, being punished and publicly humiliated by your own family because you were with a woman is just unimaginable. She’s never been able to live life for her, never being “free”.
The storyline was 5/5 though. It really brings to light how religion played such a huge part in the 1800s and how homosexuality was viewed as well as the realities of how life was during the westward expansion. Definitely worth reading!
January 31, 2026
Well!!
Brilliant!
This is the best book I’ve read for a while!!!
Brilliant!
This is the best book I’ve read for a while!!!
April 9, 2025
Wow. 5 stars.
This was my first time reading a book that made me want to cry on several occasions from the shock and depth of the words written within.
Even beyond the sapphic romance (which btw was very well done and filled with such beautiful emotions), the MC makes us accompany her on her journey of discovery and search for freedom. And also, how what really matters is what we have here on earth, not heaven or hell, but the now.
It made me reflect with her, as mentioned a couple of times in the book; that if she didn't act in the moment, she would spend the rest of her life chasing the echo of what she could have had.
It was so nice to be able to grow so attached to all the characters, not just the MCs.
And I'm sure that it's a book that a lot of us queer people can relate to in some way.
I don't know if I'm overrating it, but it's definitely a new one on my list of favorite books.
I'm going to read the sequel immediately.
This was my first time reading a book that made me want to cry on several occasions from the shock and depth of the words written within.
Even beyond the sapphic romance (which btw was very well done and filled with such beautiful emotions), the MC makes us accompany her on her journey of discovery and search for freedom. And also, how what really matters is what we have here on earth, not heaven or hell, but the now.
It made me reflect with her, as mentioned a couple of times in the book; that if she didn't act in the moment, she would spend the rest of her life chasing the echo of what she could have had.
It was so nice to be able to grow so attached to all the characters, not just the MCs.
And I'm sure that it's a book that a lot of us queer people can relate to in some way.
I don't know if I'm overrating it, but it's definitely a new one on my list of favorite books.
I'm going to read the sequel immediately.
July 2, 2025
I'm completely baffled by the popularity of this. This was genuinely one of the worst written books I've ever read. As a fanfiction, it would have been meh, alright, but as a published historical fiction this is laughable. Terribly written, needed like two rounds of editing, there seems to be absolutely 0 research behind this as it isn't even trying to be historically accurate and it has plenty of uncomfortable moments that I wish I could forget.
June 6, 2026
I’m actually deeply disappointed in my fellow lesbians, I thought we had better taste than this. This was a hot fucking mess. And not even in a slightly entertaining way.
The main draw of this book is supposed to be the romance. The pastor’s daughter kidnapped and held for ransom by a gunslinging outlaw is a juicy fucking trope. How can you fumble it this badly??? With this kind of setup, one expects there to be an intense internal struggle as law meets the Wild West. As the pure becomes corrupted. The pastor’s daughter encountering a freedom she’s never thought existed before. That expected tension and character growth is completely ruined when you reveal that your good Christian girl has already dismantled the teachings of her youth. There’s barely anything for her to struggle with internally, and the few things she is challenged with she easily overcomes. Which is exactly why the entire kidnapped plot loses steam barely 20% of the way in. Abby instantly begins playing house, trying to act all defiant even though she’s rolling over like a dog in heat. Then we’re trying to make Jo some upstanding citizen who won’t fuck her while having her captive, but then two seconds later tossing that out the window too. There’s nothing enticing about this romance after trying to position it as a forbidden entanglement when it’s nothing of the sort.
The sex would have been the only redeeming quality of this book, if they weren’t constantly doing it around the children. Why are we doing foreplay while watching kids put on a play?? Why are we fucking in the middle of a hide and seek game with children?? I think a large chunk of my problems with this book would be solved by the kids simply not existing. They added nothing to the story, and were so poorly integrated into the plot. I frankly don’t believe Ally North has ever been around children before.
The lackluster romance could have been overlooked if there was a plot that actually picked up the slack. Again, most of this book is just Abby playing house. There’s no action or adventure to distract from the shallow character interactions. We’re stuck in a ghost town with only the occasional visitor. Our time is split between the classroom watching Abby teach the kids how to read at a speed only super geniuses could rival. The other half of the time we’re watching Abby get railed in a cave turned penthouse. Please tell me why this book is over 500 pages?
I severely disliked how Lewis and the Kuttuhsippeh were portrayed. It felt very tokenism, as if they were included just to prove how progressive our characters were. The amount of emphasis placed on Abby being the only one to see that Lewis is actually super smart, he’s just trapped in his own mind. Like wow what an empath she is! She’s the only one who can figure out how to communicate with him. And then the Kuttuhsippeh are literally introduced because Abby’s fear of Native Americans is one of the last holdovers from her upbringing. So we get this scene where Jo and the children show her there’s nothing to fear from them. See! Jo’s a good person! Indigenous people think she’s special! Meanwhile, the Kuttuhsippeh are never given an actual purpose or characterization outside of being a vehicle for Abby to unlearn bigotry.
This was straight ass and I need everyone to reevaluate their priorities, thanks.
The main draw of this book is supposed to be the romance. The pastor’s daughter kidnapped and held for ransom by a gunslinging outlaw is a juicy fucking trope. How can you fumble it this badly??? With this kind of setup, one expects there to be an intense internal struggle as law meets the Wild West. As the pure becomes corrupted. The pastor’s daughter encountering a freedom she’s never thought existed before. That expected tension and character growth is completely ruined when you reveal that your good Christian girl has already dismantled the teachings of her youth. There’s barely anything for her to struggle with internally, and the few things she is challenged with she easily overcomes. Which is exactly why the entire kidnapped plot loses steam barely 20% of the way in. Abby instantly begins playing house, trying to act all defiant even though she’s rolling over like a dog in heat. Then we’re trying to make Jo some upstanding citizen who won’t fuck her while having her captive, but then two seconds later tossing that out the window too. There’s nothing enticing about this romance after trying to position it as a forbidden entanglement when it’s nothing of the sort.
The sex would have been the only redeeming quality of this book, if they weren’t constantly doing it around the children. Why are we doing foreplay while watching kids put on a play?? Why are we fucking in the middle of a hide and seek game with children?? I think a large chunk of my problems with this book would be solved by the kids simply not existing. They added nothing to the story, and were so poorly integrated into the plot. I frankly don’t believe Ally North has ever been around children before.
The lackluster romance could have been overlooked if there was a plot that actually picked up the slack. Again, most of this book is just Abby playing house. There’s no action or adventure to distract from the shallow character interactions. We’re stuck in a ghost town with only the occasional visitor. Our time is split between the classroom watching Abby teach the kids how to read at a speed only super geniuses could rival. The other half of the time we’re watching Abby get railed in a cave turned penthouse. Please tell me why this book is over 500 pages?
I severely disliked how Lewis and the Kuttuhsippeh were portrayed. It felt very tokenism, as if they were included just to prove how progressive our characters were. The amount of emphasis placed on Abby being the only one to see that Lewis is actually super smart, he’s just trapped in his own mind. Like wow what an empath she is! She’s the only one who can figure out how to communicate with him. And then the Kuttuhsippeh are literally introduced because Abby’s fear of Native Americans is one of the last holdovers from her upbringing. So we get this scene where Jo and the children show her there’s nothing to fear from them. See! Jo’s a good person! Indigenous people think she’s special! Meanwhile, the Kuttuhsippeh are never given an actual purpose or characterization outside of being a vehicle for Abby to unlearn bigotry.
This was straight ass and I need everyone to reevaluate their priorities, thanks.
November 5, 2025
★5 SADDLE SHOOTIN' STARS ★
Ironic given the subject matter but...HOLY CHRIST. This book. It was adequately hyped, if not still severely underrated.
RTC because I'm rushing to get to book 2 right away.
Ironic given the subject matter but...HOLY CHRIST. This book. It was adequately hyped, if not still severely underrated.
RTC because I'm rushing to get to book 2 right away.
April 3, 2025
There aren’t really words to describe all the love I have for this book!
I'm going to read the second volume now, and after that, I'll probably write a more detailed review of it. But right now, I'm too overwhelmed with emotions to say anything other than that I absolutely fucking loved it, and it already has a special place in my heart.
6/5
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Alright, I’ve finished the second book, so I can finally go back to my review of the first one.
First of all, let’s be clear: I’ve probably just read one of my favorite books of the year. And honestly, it immediately earns a special place in my heart. I’m creating a new shelf for the pantheon of my all-time favorite books, and this one is going straight in.
When it comes to romance and character chemistry, it’s just... *searches for words* … the absolute best.
I personally have a massive crush on Joey—I adore characters who make me laugh, are badass, and probably tortured as well. Abby is absolutely perfect too (and funny/clever, too). Honestly, she might just be the best character in the book. Which makes it hard for me to admit my crush on Joey. I’ll get back to these two characters more in my review of the second book.
As for the spicy level, these are probably the best scenes I’ve ever read. No notes. It was (for me) perfect. The balance of quantity, quality—everything was just masterfully done. The kind of book where you have to put it down for a second to collect yourself because, damn… 🤯 One of the spiciest books I’ve ever read.
Story-wise, it was perfect. Forced proximity is a trope I love, as well as enemies-to-lovers. There’s also a bit of grumpy/sunshine, with dark Joey and radiant Abby. The other characters are amazing too—perfectly balanced, engaging enough to keep you captivated the whole time.
In short, this first book is, in my eyes, an absolute masterpiece.
See you for my review of book 2!
I'm going to read the second volume now, and after that, I'll probably write a more detailed review of it. But right now, I'm too overwhelmed with emotions to say anything other than that I absolutely fucking loved it, and it already has a special place in my heart.
6/5
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Alright, I’ve finished the second book, so I can finally go back to my review of the first one.
First of all, let’s be clear: I’ve probably just read one of my favorite books of the year. And honestly, it immediately earns a special place in my heart. I’m creating a new shelf for the pantheon of my all-time favorite books, and this one is going straight in.
When it comes to romance and character chemistry, it’s just... *searches for words* … the absolute best.
I personally have a massive crush on Joey—I adore characters who make me laugh, are badass, and probably tortured as well. Abby is absolutely perfect too (and funny/clever, too). Honestly, she might just be the best character in the book. Which makes it hard for me to admit my crush on Joey. I’ll get back to these two characters more in my review of the second book.
As for the spicy level, these are probably the best scenes I’ve ever read. No notes. It was (for me) perfect. The balance of quantity, quality—everything was just masterfully done. The kind of book where you have to put it down for a second to collect yourself because, damn… 🤯 One of the spiciest books I’ve ever read.
Story-wise, it was perfect. Forced proximity is a trope I love, as well as enemies-to-lovers. There’s also a bit of grumpy/sunshine, with dark Joey and radiant Abby. The other characters are amazing too—perfectly balanced, engaging enough to keep you captivated the whole time.
In short, this first book is, in my eyes, an absolute masterpiece.
that the world wasn’t as simple as black and white and good and evil and outlaws and housewives, and perhaps it was possible to be kidnapped and rescued at the same exact time.
See you for my review of book 2!
March 10, 2025
This book is advertised as several things: historical fiction, a western, and a romance. I will give it credit for the romance, it does deliver on that. That said, it is neither researched well enough to acquit itself as meaningfully historical, nor is it tonally consistent enough to be called a western. What it is—and what it was not advertised as—is fanfiction. A modicum of research and commitment to building a more authentic sense of time and place would have improved this book immensely.
July 19, 2025
1.5/5
I've discovered that there are three things I never want to come across while reading a sex scene:
1. Foreplay while watching kids put on a theatre production
2. Sex on horseback
3. Using a strap that a goat has taken a bite out of
I've discovered that there are three things I never want to come across while reading a sex scene:
1. Foreplay while watching kids put on a theatre production
2. Sex on horseback
3. Using a strap that a goat has taken a bite out of
October 29, 2024
Great western theme and very steamy in a good way.
December 30, 2024
This book sucked me right in. It has vivid imagery of the wild west, unforgetable and quirky characters, clever banters, steamy love story. Fortunately, I've discovered this when book 2 is already out so I could dive right into the next part.
June 9, 2026
this book just altered my brain chemistry.
March 9, 2025
✨ Historical Western Romance
✨ Third Person POV
✨ 4/5 Spice Level
✨ Kidnapping/Enemies to Lovers
✨ Preacher's Daughter x Outlaw
✨ Experienced x Inexperienced
> micro-tropes after review
> content warnings at the bottom
Bloom Town: Genesis is... I don't even know where to start. I was absolutely blown away from this novel. I could not put it down. I only slept 4 hours because I needed to keep reading. The characterization is particularly compelling. I couldn't help but fall in love with the main cast of characters. The pacing was good, and the spice was spicing (but more on that later...).
The story is told in third person from Abby's point of view broken up by letters written by Joey (so the reader can glean a bit of her perspective). The main plot point is: While Abby is traveling via train to meet with her husband in California (where he has been establishing a town over the past two year), she is kidnapped by outlaws. In comes Joey, a rough around the edges outlaw whose motivation is ransom money. Like all good stories, there is more than meets the eye when it comes to Joey as well as Abby. As their story unfolds, it quickly becomes apparent they are both trying to escape circumstances of their fates and end up finding a sort of escape in each other.
The real strength in this book is the characters. They are so, so loveable, and the diversity (particularly in a western) is appreciated. There is disability rep and BIPOC rep. The story doesn't hesitate to call to light the negatives of the time period, and I loved Abby's character development as her perspective changes with new information (yet her ignorance is apparent). Also, I love Joey. I just have to say it. If you're in the market for a new book crush...
As for the spice, you ask? Possibly some of the best I've ever read. It felt fresh, real, and not scripted/expected. Like these women are downright desperate for each other, and it shows. I'm not afraid to admit that I've gone back and re-read some of my favorite scenes. They caught me off guard and felt so genuine. I hardly have the words to express the feelings I felt while reading those parts of this book. Also, the backstory of both characters as well as the dialogue between the characters softens the ick-factor of the kidnapping aspect (I read dark romances, but I wouldn't consider this in the same vein).
I loved this book so much, I started the second one immediately (and will be sharing my review for Exodus soon). Heed the warning that you should clear out your calendar and lock yourself away to finish this series because they are hard to put down. I really hope the author writes some more books like this because I need more in my life, desperately. I highly, highly recommend this book, and I imagine it will have a permanent place on my favorites list.
(beware potential spoilers below)
Micro-tropes:
✨ Riding (of a few different varieties)
✨ First time with a woman
✨ Trying all the things~
✨ Age Gap
Content Warnings
this list may not be complete
bigotry, homophobia, racism, g*ns, kidnapping, threats of s*xual violence, s*xually explicit scenes, mentions of CSA/r*pe, mentions of br*thels/pr*stitution/indentured servitude, m*rder, death
✨ Third Person POV
✨ 4/5 Spice Level
✨ Kidnapping/Enemies to Lovers
✨ Preacher's Daughter x Outlaw
✨ Experienced x Inexperienced
> micro-tropes after review
> content warnings at the bottom
Bloom Town: Genesis is... I don't even know where to start. I was absolutely blown away from this novel. I could not put it down. I only slept 4 hours because I needed to keep reading. The characterization is particularly compelling. I couldn't help but fall in love with the main cast of characters. The pacing was good, and the spice was spicing (but more on that later...).
The story is told in third person from Abby's point of view broken up by letters written by Joey (so the reader can glean a bit of her perspective). The main plot point is: While Abby is traveling via train to meet with her husband in California (where he has been establishing a town over the past two year), she is kidnapped by outlaws. In comes Joey, a rough around the edges outlaw whose motivation is ransom money. Like all good stories, there is more than meets the eye when it comes to Joey as well as Abby. As their story unfolds, it quickly becomes apparent they are both trying to escape circumstances of their fates and end up finding a sort of escape in each other.
The real strength in this book is the characters. They are so, so loveable, and the diversity (particularly in a western) is appreciated. There is disability rep and BIPOC rep. The story doesn't hesitate to call to light the negatives of the time period, and I loved Abby's character development as her perspective changes with new information (yet her ignorance is apparent). Also, I love Joey. I just have to say it. If you're in the market for a new book crush...
As for the spice, you ask? Possibly some of the best I've ever read. It felt fresh, real, and not scripted/expected. Like these women are downright desperate for each other, and it shows. I'm not afraid to admit that I've gone back and re-read some of my favorite scenes. They caught me off guard and felt so genuine. I hardly have the words to express the feelings I felt while reading those parts of this book. Also, the backstory of both characters as well as the dialogue between the characters softens the ick-factor of the kidnapping aspect (I read dark romances, but I wouldn't consider this in the same vein).
I loved this book so much, I started the second one immediately (and will be sharing my review for Exodus soon). Heed the warning that you should clear out your calendar and lock yourself away to finish this series because they are hard to put down. I really hope the author writes some more books like this because I need more in my life, desperately. I highly, highly recommend this book, and I imagine it will have a permanent place on my favorites list.
(beware potential spoilers below)
Micro-tropes:
✨ Riding (of a few different varieties)
✨ First time with a woman
✨ Trying all the things~
✨ Age Gap
Content Warnings
this list may not be complete
bigotry, homophobia, racism, g*ns, kidnapping, threats of s*xual violence, s*xually explicit scenes, mentions of CSA/r*pe, mentions of br*thels/pr*stitution/indentured servitude, m*rder, death
April 13, 2026
With all the high ratings from my mutuals and the religious theme in a western setting(!), I knew I had to read this book. So I finally did. And I get why so many people like this novel. It’s thrilling and sexy and triumphant. But it’s also a big mess.
Okay, so here’s what worked for me:
- Abby! Abby is a wonderful character. I liked her vulnerability (and her comfort in her vulnerability), her courage, her determination. I do question her romantic inclinations in this book, but I liked her enough—and the journey she was on—to overlook it.
- The twist. I did not see that coming and it really added a layer of intrigue that shot some life into the last part of the novel.
- The kids and Lewis. Great side characters even if the kids sounded and acted way too old for their actual ages. I thought they were great characters.
What didn’t work for me:
- Joey. Ugh. What happened there? How did Ally North get Joey so wrong? I don’t get.
- The romance. Obviously if Joey doesn’t work for me, the romance won’t either. Yes, the Stockholm Syndrome is definitely an issue. But I think it would have worked if Joey as a character works, but she doesn’t hold to scrutiny.
- The ending, which I won’t elaborate on for reasons of spoilers, but it didn’t work for me.
- The religious aspect. I get extreme religiosity but it was a bit over the top for me. It was too easily made a villain here and I felt it was a bit lazy.
- The two-week period this entire book takes place in, wherein a lot of really improbable things happen, e.g. kids go from illiterate to completely literate pretty much instantly? Nah.
This novel is also long, which I don’t honestly mind, but I did feel the pacing was off. But it was a fun read. I'm sure I will read the next novel.
3.5
Okay, so here’s what worked for me:
- Abby! Abby is a wonderful character. I liked her vulnerability (and her comfort in her vulnerability), her courage, her determination. I do question her romantic inclinations in this book, but I liked her enough—and the journey she was on—to overlook it.
- The twist. I did not see that coming and it really added a layer of intrigue that shot some life into the last part of the novel.
- The kids and Lewis. Great side characters even if the kids sounded and acted way too old for their actual ages. I thought they were great characters.
What didn’t work for me:
- Joey. Ugh. What happened there? How did Ally North get Joey so wrong? I don’t get.
- The romance. Obviously if Joey doesn’t work for me, the romance won’t either. Yes, the Stockholm Syndrome is definitely an issue. But I think it would have worked if Joey as a character works, but she doesn’t hold to scrutiny.
- The ending, which I won’t elaborate on for reasons of spoilers, but it didn’t work for me.
- The religious aspect. I get extreme religiosity but it was a bit over the top for me. It was too easily made a villain here and I felt it was a bit lazy.
- The two-week period this entire book takes place in, wherein a lot of really improbable things happen, e.g. kids go from illiterate to completely literate pretty much instantly? Nah.
This novel is also long, which I don’t honestly mind, but I did feel the pacing was off. But it was a fun read. I'm sure I will read the next novel.
3.5
August 18, 2025
bought this because people on tik tok were acting like it’s a piece of sapphic literary genius. it is literally fanfiction. and not even good fanfiction. if i am going to read fanfiction, i want to read about characters i actually care about. i am annoyed but i guess this is what i get for listening to idiots in tik tok comments.
i unfortunately have to read the second one because i bought them both at the same time and also i am stuck on a literal island for the next 2 days with nothing else to read. annoyed.
i unfortunately have to read the second one because i bought them both at the same time and also i am stuck on a literal island for the next 2 days with nothing else to read. annoyed.
September 10, 2024
Yeahhhh Wow. OH MY GOD. That was fucking good. The way I am smiling... Chef's kiss because damn. Book 2, let's see what you got.
January 14, 2025
i’m kinda struggling with this one. i was really really excited to read because i’d literally only heard good things, but without even knowing in the first place, i could tell this was self-published and/or a fanfiction first. let me clarify that i dont think there’s anything wrong with self-publishing or fanfiction, but as someone who has read/written a lot of fanfiction myself, it kind of put me off. because i’m reading a book, but it feels like a fanfiction, and i’m like ???
this really could’ve used an editor. a huge pet peeve of mine is the use of the passive voice. so for example, a line said “Olive was staring out the window” or “There was a clawing feeling spreading throughout Abby” when it’s just a lot simpler to say “Olive stared out the window” or “A clawing feeling spread throughout Abby”. i noticed this EVERY time it happened, and my brain tried to overwrite it and i got distracted. i’m not necessarily ANTI passive voice, people speak in passive voice all the time, but outside of dialogue, it just makes for extra work that could be condensed down to something that makes more sense. idk 🤷🏼♀️ and some plot points felt contrived
i do intend to read the second book because i bought both thinking i wouldnt be able to put it down. maybe a few other books first that i’ll enjoy more. I’m disappointed i didnt enjoy this more!! i really think this author could make some amazing stories with a proper editor/publisher!!
TLDR; dont go into this expecting a literary masterpiece, but you’ll have fun
4/10 or 2/5 & physical book
this really could’ve used an editor. a huge pet peeve of mine is the use of the passive voice. so for example, a line said “Olive was staring out the window” or “There was a clawing feeling spreading throughout Abby” when it’s just a lot simpler to say “Olive stared out the window” or “A clawing feeling spread throughout Abby”. i noticed this EVERY time it happened, and my brain tried to overwrite it and i got distracted. i’m not necessarily ANTI passive voice, people speak in passive voice all the time, but outside of dialogue, it just makes for extra work that could be condensed down to something that makes more sense. idk 🤷🏼♀️ and some plot points felt contrived
i do intend to read the second book because i bought both thinking i wouldnt be able to put it down. maybe a few other books first that i’ll enjoy more. I’m disappointed i didnt enjoy this more!! i really think this author could make some amazing stories with a proper editor/publisher!!
TLDR; dont go into this expecting a literary masterpiece, but you’ll have fun
4/10 or 2/5 & physical book
June 12, 2026
Holy hell, this book was GOOD.
I've read a ridiculous amount of sapphic romance, and after a while you start seeing the same tropes, the same beats, and sometimes even the same characters wearing different names. This book? Not even close. It felt fresh, unique, and completely impossible to stop.
And the spice? Dear lord. Not only was it incredibly hot, but it actually meant something. Every scene pushed the relationship forward instead of feeling like it was checking a mandatory spice quota.
Also, I need to have a serious conversation with this author because I'm pretty sure this book just convinced me that horseback riding is the sexiest hobby on Earth. I don't know how we got here, but suddenly I'm looking at riding lessons and questioning my life choices.
Since I listened to the audiobook, I have to give a massive shoutout to Quinn Riley. The performance was absolutely phenomenal. The narration didn't just tell the story, it sold it. At this point, I'd probably listen to Quinn Riley read a grocery list.
Now excuse me while I desperately try to get my hands on the next book. Usually, I'd be worried about a sequel living up to a book this good, but honestly? For the first time in a long while, I'm actually optimistic. If it's even half as good as this one, I'm in for a great time.
I've read a ridiculous amount of sapphic romance, and after a while you start seeing the same tropes, the same beats, and sometimes even the same characters wearing different names. This book? Not even close. It felt fresh, unique, and completely impossible to stop.
And the spice? Dear lord. Not only was it incredibly hot, but it actually meant something. Every scene pushed the relationship forward instead of feeling like it was checking a mandatory spice quota.
Also, I need to have a serious conversation with this author because I'm pretty sure this book just convinced me that horseback riding is the sexiest hobby on Earth. I don't know how we got here, but suddenly I'm looking at riding lessons and questioning my life choices.
Since I listened to the audiobook, I have to give a massive shoutout to Quinn Riley. The performance was absolutely phenomenal. The narration didn't just tell the story, it sold it. At this point, I'd probably listen to Quinn Riley read a grocery list.
Now excuse me while I desperately try to get my hands on the next book. Usually, I'd be worried about a sequel living up to a book this good, but honestly? For the first time in a long while, I'm actually optimistic. If it's even half as good as this one, I'm in for a great time.
June 3, 2026
Sadly got into a long reader’s block during this one. I loved some parts and there were others where I got bored? I guess this makes me odd but there was just too much sex… Overall it was a good book, and it’s my wife’s favorite so I have to read the second one 👉🏼👈🏼
August 17, 2025
Audiobook - it was perfect
Third time i've read this. It just gets better. I reread this because my current TBR list has left me bored. Love LOVE this book - just as good a second time around. Hopefully an audiobook is on the horizon
*Possible Spoilers*
What a story! What a well-written book! What a sexy, sapphic SPICY novel, my God! I am not a fan of books and movies that take place in the early days (1800's). I find them boring. Bloom Town Genesis, was nothing of the sort. Wonderful supporting characters, vivid imagery and a world setting that reminded me of a western themed Neverland from Peter Pan, this debut novel had a bit of everything. The best part - the sizzling chemistry between Abby and Joey - sweet Jesus (Sorry Abby). I have to say, Bloom Town had one of the best, if not the best, sapphic sexual scenario's I've ever read. I need a fan. Actually, I need an audiobook, like yesterday. I want to see what narrator can pull off those HOT sapphic scenes. I will be canceling my personal life, when the audiobook comes out. 5 stars, and 6 stars for spice. Bravo.
Third time i've read this. It just gets better. I reread this because my current TBR list has left me bored. Love LOVE this book - just as good a second time around. Hopefully an audiobook is on the horizon
*Possible Spoilers*
What a story! What a well-written book! What a sexy, sapphic SPICY novel, my God! I am not a fan of books and movies that take place in the early days (1800's). I find them boring. Bloom Town Genesis, was nothing of the sort. Wonderful supporting characters, vivid imagery and a world setting that reminded me of a western themed Neverland from Peter Pan, this debut novel had a bit of everything. The best part - the sizzling chemistry between Abby and Joey - sweet Jesus (Sorry Abby). I have to say, Bloom Town had one of the best, if not the best, sapphic sexual scenario's I've ever read. I need a fan. Actually, I need an audiobook, like yesterday. I want to see what narrator can pull off those HOT sapphic scenes. I will be canceling my personal life, when the audiobook comes out. 5 stars, and 6 stars for spice. Bravo.
December 10, 2025
4 Stars
This book had a reputation. It was hyped up a lot especially on bookstagram. And I get it. I get why it’s a fan favourite.
The setting was amazing. I was in the desserti, in the heat and coyotes and insects. The characters were very memorable. I was taken by Olive and her grown-up way of speaking and thinking. She was the most remarkable for me.
The whole story in general was multifaceted. Diving into issues that still plague our society nowadays. There’s homophobia, the patriarchy, religious abuse, colonisation, there’s probably more but I can’t think of them now. It’s…. an experience, to read this book, that’s for sure. Spice? At some point I was wondering if this book could be classified as erotica.
This book had a reputation. It was hyped up a lot especially on bookstagram. And I get it. I get why it’s a fan favourite.
The setting was amazing. I was in the desserti, in the heat and coyotes and insects. The characters were very memorable. I was taken by Olive and her grown-up way of speaking and thinking. She was the most remarkable for me.
The whole story in general was multifaceted. Diving into issues that still plague our society nowadays. There’s homophobia, the patriarchy, religious abuse, colonisation, there’s probably more but I can’t think of them now. It’s…. an experience, to read this book, that’s for sure. Spice? At some point I was wondering if this book could be classified as erotica.
August 30, 2025
5+ stars!
An absolutely incredible listen! Fantastic storytelling, compelling characters and perfect narration.
This is absolutely narrator Quinn Riley’s best work, placing her firmly in the top tier. She does some amazing accent work and glides seamlessly through a variety of ages and genders.
With just her first sapphic release, Ally North becomes the new author to watch.
I can’t wait to read or listen to Bloom Town Exodus!
An absolutely incredible listen! Fantastic storytelling, compelling characters and perfect narration.
This is absolutely narrator Quinn Riley’s best work, placing her firmly in the top tier. She does some amazing accent work and glides seamlessly through a variety of ages and genders.
With just her first sapphic release, Ally North becomes the new author to watch.
I can’t wait to read or listen to Bloom Town Exodus!
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