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Luna Lola: The End...or Not
"I, Grayson Dawson, Alpha of the Moonlit Pack, reject you, Lola Ashton, as my mate and Luna of this pack," I heard Grayson's voice reach my ear and a single tear ran down my left cheek as it felt like my heart was being ripped out of my chest.
"I, Lola Ashton, accept..." I did not finish my sentence before he held me up by my throat and snarled in my face. His eyes had already changed colors so I knew his wolf was in charge.
"You will not reject me, slut. I am your owner and I tell you what to do and when," he slapped me across the face and threw me on the ground.
***
After being rejected by her mate in the Moonlit pack, Lola escaped on a full moon only to enter the territory of the next Alpha King who also happened to be her second chance mate.
Adrian is the next Alpha King but he hasn't been able to assume his role because he needed a Luna by his side. A rogue that trespassed on his territory, whom he ordered be killed turned out to be his mate leaving him in a dilemma.
Will Adrian reject Lola because she came into his territory as a rogue? Will he overcome what happened to him in the past and give Lola a chance or reject her and go ahead with Fay as his chosen Luna?
What will happen when everyone finds out just how much power Lola wields and how she's supposed to protect her kind in an oncoming war? Find out in Lola- The Moon Wolf!
"I, Lola Ashton, accept..." I did not finish my sentence before he held me up by my throat and snarled in my face. His eyes had already changed colors so I knew his wolf was in charge.
"You will not reject me, slut. I am your owner and I tell you what to do and when," he slapped me across the face and threw me on the ground.
***
After being rejected by her mate in the Moonlit pack, Lola escaped on a full moon only to enter the territory of the next Alpha King who also happened to be her second chance mate.
Adrian is the next Alpha King but he hasn't been able to assume his role because he needed a Luna by his side. A rogue that trespassed on his territory, whom he ordered be killed turned out to be his mate leaving him in a dilemma.
Will Adrian reject Lola because she came into his territory as a rogue? Will he overcome what happened to him in the past and give Lola a chance or reject her and go ahead with Fay as his chosen Luna?
What will happen when everyone finds out just how much power Lola wields and how she's supposed to protect her kind in an oncoming war? Find out in Lola- The Moon Wolf!
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172 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 14, 2024
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September 20, 2024
Story line has potential
This whole series had a lot of potential. This fourth installment was a bit of a let down. It felt very rushed. I've said it in previous reviews, but it stands here as well. The whole series is in bad need of editing.
There was a part of the book where it repeated like 6-8 chapters. Felt like a waste of money.
Overall I loved the initial storyline and characters. Just needed some extra love and editing for sure.
This whole series had a lot of potential. This fourth installment was a bit of a let down. It felt very rushed. I've said it in previous reviews, but it stands here as well. The whole series is in bad need of editing.
There was a part of the book where it repeated like 6-8 chapters. Felt like a waste of money.
Overall I loved the initial storyline and characters. Just needed some extra love and editing for sure.
May 6, 2025
Repeat
The first chapter of the fourth book is a repeat of the third book. It's really hard to enjoy the story with so many errors. It's like a ten year old wrote it. The story was good otherwise but if I had a choice I would not have spent the money on this story. She even splits the story into four books when it should be in one book. More money for her I guess. More fool I was for buying them.
The first chapter of the fourth book is a repeat of the third book. It's really hard to enjoy the story with so many errors. It's like a ten year old wrote it. The story was good otherwise but if I had a choice I would not have spent the money on this story. She even splits the story into four books when it should be in one book. More money for her I guess. More fool I was for buying them.
April 29, 2025
Good story, but sheesh, an editor is needed
I liked the story line. It was difficult sometimes to follow because the grammar was terrible at times, and names were mixed up....with Adrian being called Alexander at times. I had to kinda backtrack often because I'd have to figure out wtf was going on and who tf was saying what. Also, feels like a waste of money because, like, at least 6 chapters were REPEATED--I feel ripped off, tbh. All in all, I enjoyed the story and characters. If only it wasn't so distracting with the name changes and grammar problems.
I liked the story line. It was difficult sometimes to follow because the grammar was terrible at times, and names were mixed up....with Adrian being called Alexander at times. I had to kinda backtrack often because I'd have to figure out wtf was going on and who tf was saying what. Also, feels like a waste of money because, like, at least 6 chapters were REPEATED--I feel ripped off, tbh. All in all, I enjoyed the story and characters. If only it wasn't so distracting with the name changes and grammar problems.
December 5, 2024
Okay Luna story. You just have to get through the lack of grammar and editing.
This is your basic wolf story but the typos and grammar are atrocious. If you don’t mind self editing as you read you can get through it. Wasn’t a series I could breeze through cause it so much work. I don’t understand how this series made it through publishing without being fixed. Surprised Amazon would allow it. I felt as if I was reading a first draft that someone, that didn’t speak English as their first language, just dictated to their computer and never checked for mistakes. The story only suffered from the lack of polish. It could have been so much better without the frustration of trying to figure out what the author was trying to say or who they actually were talking about.
This is your basic wolf story but the typos and grammar are atrocious. If you don’t mind self editing as you read you can get through it. Wasn’t a series I could breeze through cause it so much work. I don’t understand how this series made it through publishing without being fixed. Surprised Amazon would allow it. I felt as if I was reading a first draft that someone, that didn’t speak English as their first language, just dictated to their computer and never checked for mistakes. The story only suffered from the lack of polish. It could have been so much better without the frustration of trying to figure out what the author was trying to say or who they actually were talking about.
March 3, 2025
Needs a good proof read and edit
Loved the storyline and is why I have given this 2 stars. Not sure if was translated into English from another language or by an Indy author, but for almost £4 per book (4 in the series) I would expect it to read well. Character names were often mixed up, grammar and language were awful, I had to skip through 3 chapters of book 4 as were repeated, all of which made it a hard read. I usually don't want a series to finish, unfortunately I couldn't wait for this to end despite enjoying the storyline. I would suggest the author pull the books, give them a thorough proof read and edit, better yet, have someone else do it. In its current state , I sadly wouldn't recommend reading this series. 😢
Loved the storyline and is why I have given this 2 stars. Not sure if was translated into English from another language or by an Indy author, but for almost £4 per book (4 in the series) I would expect it to read well. Character names were often mixed up, grammar and language were awful, I had to skip through 3 chapters of book 4 as were repeated, all of which made it a hard read. I usually don't want a series to finish, unfortunately I couldn't wait for this to end despite enjoying the storyline. I would suggest the author pull the books, give them a thorough proof read and edit, better yet, have someone else do it. In its current state , I sadly wouldn't recommend reading this series. 😢
March 28, 2025
disappointing
I thought the first book was good, even though it needed extreme editing. But as the story moved through books 2 and 3 it got more and more juvenile. And still needed extreme editing. Their little pet names and behaviors got to be seriously annoying and disrupted the story. By book 4 I was really fed up. I willingly paid for all four books because I felt the author deserved the money for making the effort. But she should have combined it all into just one book and hired an editor. Book 4 literally had over 30 pages pulled word-for-word from Book 3. I doubt I’ll read anything else by this author.
I thought the first book was good, even though it needed extreme editing. But as the story moved through books 2 and 3 it got more and more juvenile. And still needed extreme editing. Their little pet names and behaviors got to be seriously annoying and disrupted the story. By book 4 I was really fed up. I willingly paid for all four books because I felt the author deserved the money for making the effort. But she should have combined it all into just one book and hired an editor. Book 4 literally had over 30 pages pulled word-for-word from Book 3. I doubt I’ll read anything else by this author.
October 4, 2024
7 Wows ~ well, I have a headache from crying. You’ll have to read to understand.❤️🔥
What a story, so much heartbreak. You will need lots of tissues if you are an emotional reader like me. War is coming and you won’t guess what will happen until to read the story. I have read all 4 books consecutively to the point where I-need sleep and aspirin. Kudos to Park Kara. I dearly enjoyed your creative writing abilities. If anyone says differently just ignore them because I don’t think they like HEA. Thank
What a story, so much heartbreak. You will need lots of tissues if you are an emotional reader like me. War is coming and you won’t guess what will happen until to read the story. I have read all 4 books consecutively to the point where I-need sleep and aspirin. Kudos to Park Kara. I dearly enjoyed your creative writing abilities. If anyone says differently just ignore them because I don’t think they like HEA. Thank
January 15, 2025
Finally a conclusion
Some what poorly written with a continued need for editing - same as all the previous books. Story could have been condensed to one book. It had great potential but all the errors throughout the series really took away from it. Sorry I spent $ on it.
Some what poorly written with a continued need for editing - same as all the previous books. Story could have been condensed to one book. It had great potential but all the errors throughout the series really took away from it. Sorry I spent $ on it.
June 25, 2025
Almost at a loss for words
Wow. All of the books needed way more than proofreading. This last one was the worst of all. I was expecting them to improve along the way, but she (the author) clearly had no guidance. English is not her first language, although she has a good grasp of it; but not well enough to write a book without proofreading and maybe a little education along the way about the English language. I've always heard it was the most difficult language to learn.
In places, it was barely more than broken English.
I'm glad I was reading it in the Kindle app because I had the ability to bookmark something when I thought I was losing my mind. Two chapters begin the exact same way and go through the exact same story, the same conversation, the same sex scene; but they are many chapters apart! Umm. WHY reuse a chapter that's already written, then end it differently? That's lame to say it politely.
The author continues to use similar yet still incorrect words but sometimes they're so wrong you have to stop and try to figure out what she's saying.
The only way I could get through this was by ignoring the stilted conversations and the many mistakes and reading it the way it should have been written.
I ONLY read it all the way through because I got hooked by the storyline. But the misuse of words, the grammatical errors, vulgarities, the punctuation errors are horrible and I can't imagine why anybody would've published this without correcting it first.
In one scene, his muscles were rippling nicely under his shirt as he lit candles but when he turned to face her, he was start naked. How did that happen?
She decided to wear one of his T-shirts and covered it with a corset top. Which reminds me, a little too much time is spent describing her outfits. Just saying. Later, as things heated up, the book states that when he ripped her shirt open, the buttons popped off. I didn't know that a T-shirt had a row of buttons.
Great storyline, horribly written in broken and incorrect English. Vulgarity in all the wrong places. But then again, there's no good place for vulgarity is there?
Wow. All of the books needed way more than proofreading. This last one was the worst of all. I was expecting them to improve along the way, but she (the author) clearly had no guidance. English is not her first language, although she has a good grasp of it; but not well enough to write a book without proofreading and maybe a little education along the way about the English language. I've always heard it was the most difficult language to learn.
In places, it was barely more than broken English.
I'm glad I was reading it in the Kindle app because I had the ability to bookmark something when I thought I was losing my mind. Two chapters begin the exact same way and go through the exact same story, the same conversation, the same sex scene; but they are many chapters apart! Umm. WHY reuse a chapter that's already written, then end it differently? That's lame to say it politely.
The author continues to use similar yet still incorrect words but sometimes they're so wrong you have to stop and try to figure out what she's saying.
The only way I could get through this was by ignoring the stilted conversations and the many mistakes and reading it the way it should have been written.
I ONLY read it all the way through because I got hooked by the storyline. But the misuse of words, the grammatical errors, vulgarities, the punctuation errors are horrible and I can't imagine why anybody would've published this without correcting it first.
In one scene, his muscles were rippling nicely under his shirt as he lit candles but when he turned to face her, he was start naked. How did that happen?
She decided to wear one of his T-shirts and covered it with a corset top. Which reminds me, a little too much time is spent describing her outfits. Just saying. Later, as things heated up, the book states that when he ripped her shirt open, the buttons popped off. I didn't know that a T-shirt had a row of buttons.
Great storyline, horribly written in broken and incorrect English. Vulgarity in all the wrong places. But then again, there's no good place for vulgarity is there?
September 19, 2025
Luna Lola starts out as an orphaned child, emotionally abused, food deprived, physically beaten and almost sexually assaulted! She escapes from the Moonlit Pack to the Crescent Moon Pack and is not trusted as a rogue. Her Alpha from Moonlit Pack, renounced her, believing she had no wolf, no value and was going to use her as a sex toy; so she had to escape and finds that she is the second chance mate of the Crescent Moon Pack's Alpha, she wonders if Adrian is going to renounce her as well!
There are several assaults on different packs, clans being wiped out by a sadistic maniac, Damon, the Rogue King! He has found out that Lola is the Moon Wolf! With her by his side he sees himself as the King of All Werewolves. He uses the aid of Alysia the witch, and her dark magic. Together they torture and main, manipulate and confuse the minds of many werewolves. They are waiting for Lola to come into her full powers.
Lola's powers are strong forces indeed, but they are draining and are taking life threatening toll on her. When she uses her powers she may be unconscious for 2-3 days at a time. She cannot go into battle like this. She knows that this is her destiny! She is her peoples' champion, and she wants to save ALL of them. Winning is a must, otherwise, subjugation, murder and tyranny will be the werewolves' daily bread!
The final battle is coming and the Crescent Moon Pack has sustained some heavy losses! Adrian and Lola have fully mated, even their wolves' have mated; they need to trust each other, but that is deciphered differently by each one.
With loss, pain and revenge on their minds' Crescent Moon Pack battles for the freedom of all packs.
Will Lola deal death blows to the enemy? Will she survive the war? Will she be godmother to Lyla's child?
Read Luna Lola: the End... or not? for the answers to these questions and many more!
A cozy second chance supernatural, paranormal romance series for 15+, with racy scenes and some foul language!
There are several assaults on different packs, clans being wiped out by a sadistic maniac, Damon, the Rogue King! He has found out that Lola is the Moon Wolf! With her by his side he sees himself as the King of All Werewolves. He uses the aid of Alysia the witch, and her dark magic. Together they torture and main, manipulate and confuse the minds of many werewolves. They are waiting for Lola to come into her full powers.
Lola's powers are strong forces indeed, but they are draining and are taking life threatening toll on her. When she uses her powers she may be unconscious for 2-3 days at a time. She cannot go into battle like this. She knows that this is her destiny! She is her peoples' champion, and she wants to save ALL of them. Winning is a must, otherwise, subjugation, murder and tyranny will be the werewolves' daily bread!
The final battle is coming and the Crescent Moon Pack has sustained some heavy losses! Adrian and Lola have fully mated, even their wolves' have mated; they need to trust each other, but that is deciphered differently by each one.
With loss, pain and revenge on their minds' Crescent Moon Pack battles for the freedom of all packs.
Will Lola deal death blows to the enemy? Will she survive the war? Will she be godmother to Lyla's child?
Read Luna Lola: the End... or not? for the answers to these questions and many more!
A cozy second chance supernatural, paranormal romance series for 15+, with racy scenes and some foul language!
September 1, 2025
I am reading this book via Passion app from Google Play.
Now to the final part of the story....
War has decided on the pack, Alpha Adrian has gained the agreement of other alphas to wage against the demon rogue king and his packs.
He's captured Lola, she's managed to escape, lea ung those who protected and helped her escape to suffer their punishment, Lola feels guilty, hurt and betrayed.
Can they win the war? Will she live or die? Will the lack ever recover from the betrayals within their own pack?
I'm not telling you, read the book to find out how it all owns out ...
If you are reading via the app, be prepared to watch ads, read articles, play games to gain extra chapters ..but in my opinion, it's well with the sacrifices...just look at each if then as a means to an eve and a rest from reading non- stop.
Enjoy.
Now to the final part of the story....
War has decided on the pack, Alpha Adrian has gained the agreement of other alphas to wage against the demon rogue king and his packs.
He's captured Lola, she's managed to escape, lea ung those who protected and helped her escape to suffer their punishment, Lola feels guilty, hurt and betrayed.
Can they win the war? Will she live or die? Will the lack ever recover from the betrayals within their own pack?
I'm not telling you, read the book to find out how it all owns out ...
If you are reading via the app, be prepared to watch ads, read articles, play games to gain extra chapters ..but in my opinion, it's well with the sacrifices...just look at each if then as a means to an eve and a rest from reading non- stop.
Enjoy.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 17, 2025
Needs an editor!
Overall, it's a good read. However, it desperately needs to be edited. Many, many times throughout the 4 "books" names are switched (especially Lola and Lyla). In the 4th "book," chapter 146 through chapter 154 are repeated chapters from earlier in the story (this also happened one other time in one of the first three "books"). Also, when Lola and Adrian mated in their wolf form, Lola's full powers were to be complete, but no additional power/s were revealed. And last but by no means least Lola is supposed to be this powerful "Moon Luna" not a cry baby! Far, far too much crying from a powerful Luna, blessed by the Moon Goddess.
Overall, it's a good read. However, it desperately needs to be edited. Many, many times throughout the 4 "books" names are switched (especially Lola and Lyla). In the 4th "book," chapter 146 through chapter 154 are repeated chapters from earlier in the story (this also happened one other time in one of the first three "books"). Also, when Lola and Adrian mated in their wolf form, Lola's full powers were to be complete, but no additional power/s were revealed. And last but by no means least Lola is supposed to be this powerful "Moon Luna" not a cry baby! Far, far too much crying from a powerful Luna, blessed by the Moon Goddess.
September 25, 2025
Luna Lola Book 4 wrapped up the series in a way I really enjoyed, especially the ending—it tied things together nicely and left me satisfied as a reader. The story itself was good, and overall, I think the series as a whole is worth reading.
That said, I gave it 3 stars because there were quite a few repeated chapters, which made parts of the book feel less polished and slowed down the flow of the story. It didn’t take away from the overall enjoyment, but it did affect the pacing and kept it from being a 5-star read for me.
Still, it was a solid conclusion to a good series, and I’m glad I stuck with it to the end.
That said, I gave it 3 stars because there were quite a few repeated chapters, which made parts of the book feel less polished and slowed down the flow of the story. It didn’t take away from the overall enjoyment, but it did affect the pacing and kept it from being a 5-star read for me.
Still, it was a solid conclusion to a good series, and I’m glad I stuck with it to the end.
November 24, 2025
Half cooked
This series would have been great if it was proofread before publishing and charging kindle unlimited members. I am bothered by the recklessness of publishing “half cooked” books. I wanted to see the story through so i purchased the bundle. I got fed up noting errors in the 1st book that i stopped at book 2, it just got worse after book 1. Book 4 pages 45-83 were duplicated, that’s almost 40 pages. I repeat what I said from my previous books’ reviews that it’s a good storyline but if you’re bothered by spelling and grammar mistakes, mis-references, as well as punctuation errors, then I do not recommend you purchase these books.
This series would have been great if it was proofread before publishing and charging kindle unlimited members. I am bothered by the recklessness of publishing “half cooked” books. I wanted to see the story through so i purchased the bundle. I got fed up noting errors in the 1st book that i stopped at book 2, it just got worse after book 1. Book 4 pages 45-83 were duplicated, that’s almost 40 pages. I repeat what I said from my previous books’ reviews that it’s a good storyline but if you’re bothered by spelling and grammar mistakes, mis-references, as well as punctuation errors, then I do not recommend you purchase these books.
April 20, 2025
So...
After the series I would like to say how much editing helps. Even just having friends help. Again I'm sure it's not easy catching every mistake, but still.....
Also, the story was good, but with that said I do have to say that I wish Lola's character had some growth to it. Everyone acting like she was perfect, sometimes seeming almost ungrateful, and one thing that is common in this genre is that the arthur was the heroines to be so strong that they make them imo almost unlikable. Anyway overall a good story. Just some constructive criticism.
After the series I would like to say how much editing helps. Even just having friends help. Again I'm sure it's not easy catching every mistake, but still.....
Also, the story was good, but with that said I do have to say that I wish Lola's character had some growth to it. Everyone acting like she was perfect, sometimes seeming almost ungrateful, and one thing that is common in this genre is that the arthur was the heroines to be so strong that they make them imo almost unlikable. Anyway overall a good story. Just some constructive criticism.
October 31, 2025
Repeat Chapters, Grammar, and Spelling
The storyline is amazing. The ending feels very rushed and definitely could slow down but still satisfying and leaves the possibility of a second series.
The downsides? There are like 4 chapters in the middle that are in there twice for some odd reason. The spelling and grammar can be really bad in places. There seems to have been no proofreader, which some people (like me) would do for free, so I don't know why it wasn't done before it was published as a full book...
But it is still a HIGHLY recommended series.
The storyline is amazing. The ending feels very rushed and definitely could slow down but still satisfying and leaves the possibility of a second series.
The downsides? There are like 4 chapters in the middle that are in there twice for some odd reason. The spelling and grammar can be really bad in places. There seems to have been no proofreader, which some people (like me) would do for free, so I don't know why it wasn't done before it was published as a full book...
But it is still a HIGHLY recommended series.
August 13, 2024
Book was Okay!!!
I mean The Big War lasted all of five minutes. The people that started The Big War were killed like they were nothing. I was really sad about some situations that happened and the way that they happened.
I just think that being a lot of people knew about the situation and what or who they were up against. People could have been a lot more smarter than they were.
I mean The Big War lasted all of five minutes. The people that started The Big War were killed like they were nothing. I was really sad about some situations that happened and the way that they happened.
I just think that being a lot of people knew about the situation and what or who they were up against. People could have been a lot more smarter than they were.
May 27, 2025
I bought the series because it sounded interesting. The storyline had a lot of potential. The books had too many errors (spelling, grammar, use of wrong words). It must have been translated from a different language. The characters never learned from their mistakes. Lola keeps trusting the wrong people, but never trusted her mate with the truth. Chapters 146, 147, 148, 149, & 150 were the same as Chapters 138, 139, 140, 141, & 142.
August 31, 2025
good series
I really enjoyed the pace and detail in the series of books. It was intricate storyline and was gripping.
I have not however given it 5 stars; because there were a lot (in each book 1-4) a lot of spelling mistakes and sometimes different names used, also lots of grammatical errors. This would need to be edited or have a professional proofreader read it to take this to the next level.
I really enjoyed the pace and detail in the series of books. It was intricate storyline and was gripping.
I have not however given it 5 stars; because there were a lot (in each book 1-4) a lot of spelling mistakes and sometimes different names used, also lots of grammatical errors. This would need to be edited or have a professional proofreader read it to take this to the next level.
September 29, 2024
Needs a little more editing
Interesting story. About 7 chapters are repeated, names are mixed up, years and story plot get muddled or confused. Have to keep going back to read certain chapters so it makes sense.
Usually not an issue on apps like Dreame, but a little annoying here
Interesting story. About 7 chapters are repeated, names are mixed up, years and story plot get muddled or confused. Have to keep going back to read certain chapters so it makes sense.
Usually not an issue on apps like Dreame, but a little annoying here
October 6, 2024
Second chance shifter novel
This series was great. The only reason I gave it 4 out of 5 stars was because of some grammatical errors, a few chapters were repeats of previous ones and there were some mix ups with the names of the characters. Overall, it was a great series and I definitely recommend it!!! Thank you Park Kara!
This series was great. The only reason I gave it 4 out of 5 stars was because of some grammatical errors, a few chapters were repeats of previous ones and there were some mix ups with the names of the characters. Overall, it was a great series and I definitely recommend it!!! Thank you Park Kara!
November 22, 2024
Okay well my last review for book 3 was mostly correct except I forgot there was a 4th book. Again, storyline wasn’t terrible just very unrealized and almost too rough to keep up with. I shouldn’t really critique another author who has done more than myself but this story is really really hard to follow the further along you get.
January 21, 2025
Mmmm..
Good read, but definitely needs improving.
Halfway through, you kind of forget their hierarchy, especially the Alpha..
not very Alpha-ry if you get what I mean.
Would love for the characters to live up to their titles a bit more and develop a little more, including the Betas etc.
Good read, but definitely needs improving.
Halfway through, you kind of forget their hierarchy, especially the Alpha..
not very Alpha-ry if you get what I mean.
Would love for the characters to live up to their titles a bit more and develop a little more, including the Betas etc.
May 17, 2025
had to finish
The story was good but there’s lots of errors in the book which throws you off. (Spoiler Alert) the war was built up so huge and it was a flop. There wasn’t any intensity just boom it’s here and done. There were chapters that repeated in the book too, like 3 or 4.
The story was good but there’s lots of errors in the book which throws you off. (Spoiler Alert) the war was built up so huge and it was a flop. There wasn’t any intensity just boom it’s here and done. There were chapters that repeated in the book too, like 3 or 4.
June 18, 2025
Lola Luna book 4
Great ending, really needs proofreading though, becomes a bit annoying with so many typos. There’s a chunk that was repeated suddenly in there too which threw me for a minute.
I enjoyed the story and felt a connection to some of the characters, some are over dramatic but then people are all different I guess.
Great ending, really needs proofreading though, becomes a bit annoying with so many typos. There’s a chunk that was repeated suddenly in there too which threw me for a minute.
I enjoyed the story and felt a connection to some of the characters, some are over dramatic but then people are all different I guess.
August 11, 2025
Good plot line. Awful execution. I think AI wrote these. There are hundreds of spelling and grammatical errors. It also switched the character mid-sentence often. I hate that I have to finish everything I start. Incredibly anticlimactic. It's like the author didn't have it on them to draw out the scene.
September 28, 2025
Wolfish
My first in this genre and minus grammatical errors.... Absolutely loved the concept, the strength, the female heroine but most of all the love.
Would reread if books were proofed. Many folks took great issue with grammar however as a reader who looks herself into the story, guess I'm very lucky that my brain self corrects?! it's kind if cool actually.
My first in this genre and minus grammatical errors.... Absolutely loved the concept, the strength, the female heroine but most of all the love.
Would reread if books were proofed. Many folks took great issue with grammar however as a reader who looks herself into the story, guess I'm very lucky that my brain self corrects?! it's kind if cool actually.
October 14, 2025
Good plot
Good plot. Horrible writing! Amazon should have screened this before charging for it the last book had 4 chapters that were a repeat of the previous chapters. The first few books had such bad spelling errors and mixed up character names it was hard to follow. I wasted 20 bucks buying these books! Don't waste your money for the headache trying to read this!
Good plot. Horrible writing! Amazon should have screened this before charging for it the last book had 4 chapters that were a repeat of the previous chapters. The first few books had such bad spelling errors and mixed up character names it was hard to follow. I wasted 20 bucks buying these books! Don't waste your money for the headache trying to read this!
November 24, 2025
terrible grammar and inconsistencies but ok story
The earlier books in this series are a bit better but all need a good editor as there is an obvious language barrier between the writer and the English language. It sometimes makes some parts of the novel harder to navigate. Aside from that, it’s a decent plot and engaging story but pretty simple overall.
The earlier books in this series are a bit better but all need a good editor as there is an obvious language barrier between the writer and the English language. It sometimes makes some parts of the novel harder to navigate. Aside from that, it’s a decent plot and engaging story but pretty simple overall.
January 3, 2026
I can't believe I paid for these books
Did anybody edit these books before they were released? There are so many grammatical errors, misspelled words and character name changes mid paragraph that it was really hard to understand what was going on. The story line was fine, but someone needs to edit these books!
Did anybody edit these books before they were released? There are so many grammatical errors, misspelled words and character name changes mid paragraph that it was really hard to understand what was going on. The story line was fine, but someone needs to edit these books!
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