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Crueler Mercies
“Vita’s rage overflowed until she was prepared to drown in it, and she knew that she would never again dam this anger to please another.”
After nine years as the people’s beloved princess in the sun-soaked Kingdom of Carca, Vita witnesses the execution of her mother by her father’s hand. Forced into exile, Vita fades into obscurity with her only friends—the crows that visit her window.
Eleven years later, Vita is given a marry an enemy general, granting him legitimacy to take the throne, or die as the forgotten princess. With time running out, Vita meets Soline, an intriguing lady-in-waiting who introduces her to the powerful-but-unstable magic of alchemy.
If Vita and Soline can learn to control it—and the undeniable spark between them—they could burn the world of men to the ground.
After nine years as the people’s beloved princess in the sun-soaked Kingdom of Carca, Vita witnesses the execution of her mother by her father’s hand. Forced into exile, Vita fades into obscurity with her only friends—the crows that visit her window.
Eleven years later, Vita is given a marry an enemy general, granting him legitimacy to take the throne, or die as the forgotten princess. With time running out, Vita meets Soline, an intriguing lady-in-waiting who introduces her to the powerful-but-unstable magic of alchemy.
If Vita and Soline can learn to control it—and the undeniable spark between them—they could burn the world of men to the ground.
397 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 3, 2025
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Maren Chase
1 book36 followersMaren Chase is a writer and frequent museum-dweller from Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. She studied history in the UK, where she led tours through monastic cloisters and across plague pits on the weekends. Since returning home, she works in the contemporary art world. Her favorite stories are about vengeful women, forbidden romance, and the inherent angst of immortality.
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November 17, 2025
If you enjoy a slower plot, don’t mind lighter world-building and love the idea of a Rapunzel inspired sapphic romance this could be a good choice for you.
I really wanted to love this one but sadly it didn’t really work for me. I do think if you go into with tempered expectations you may enjoy this one.
Overall it felt a bit YA for a book marketed as adult and that was the biggest let down for me. Perhaps it is my fault for not drawing the conclusion that 9 years as a princess and 11 years locked away means our main character is only 19. She makes choices that are age appropriate but feel somewhat immature for an adult book.
Additionally, the world building is light and there are a number of things that do not feel fully fleshed out. I also would have enjoyed a deeper connection and greater focus on the romance.
Thank you NetGalley and Bindery (Fantasy & Frens) for sending this book (eARC) for review consideration. All opinions are my own.
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I really wanted to love this one but sadly it didn’t really work for me. I do think if you go into with tempered expectations you may enjoy this one.
Overall it felt a bit YA for a book marketed as adult and that was the biggest let down for me. Perhaps it is my fault for not drawing the conclusion that 9 years as a princess and 11 years locked away means our main character is only 19. She makes choices that are age appropriate but feel somewhat immature for an adult book.
Additionally, the world building is light and there are a number of things that do not feel fully fleshed out. I also would have enjoyed a deeper connection and greater focus on the romance.
Thank you NetGalley and Bindery (Fantasy & Frens) for sending this book (eARC) for review consideration. All opinions are my own.
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April 29, 2025
This started out with such an intense event (a royal beheading!), so I don't know how the rest of the novel became such a huge bust.
This is one of those instances where this is actually a YA novel that the publisher is trying to upsell as adult fiction, so definitely manage your expectations.
The one huge thing that really bothered me throughout this novel was the FMC's lack of agency. I know that she was basically under house arrest for most of her life, but even when she had the rare opportunity to make a break for it, she kept second guessing herself. It was extremely irritating.
And because of her lack of agency (which didn't include feeding and talking to her wild birds and interacting with Soline), it read like she was just passively participating in everything that happened to her, while men dictated the actual story. Maybe this was the entire point, but it didn't make for an exciting read.
This entire thing was frustrating because it felt like Vita didn't even try.
And when she finally did decide that enough was enough, the events at the end made no logical sense. No spoilers, but why would anyone bother to listen to her if she barely made an impact on the people around her? It read like a wish fulfillment fantasy catered towards YA readers.
The romance was also mild to nonexistent. It felt like Vita and Soline were friends working within a loose superior/subordinate relationship. Vita pretty much fell in love with Soline because Soline was the only one there who was willing to listen to her and indulge in her whims.
Thank you to Fantasy & Frens and NetGalley for this arc.
This is one of those instances where this is actually a YA novel that the publisher is trying to upsell as adult fiction, so definitely manage your expectations.
The one huge thing that really bothered me throughout this novel was the FMC's lack of agency. I know that she was basically under house arrest for most of her life, but even when she had the rare opportunity to make a break for it, she kept second guessing herself. It was extremely irritating.
And because of her lack of agency (which didn't include feeding and talking to her wild birds and interacting with Soline), it read like she was just passively participating in everything that happened to her, while men dictated the actual story. Maybe this was the entire point, but it didn't make for an exciting read.
This entire thing was frustrating because it felt like Vita didn't even try.
And when she finally did decide that enough was enough, the events at the end made no logical sense. No spoilers, but why would anyone bother to listen to her if she barely made an impact on the people around her? It read like a wish fulfillment fantasy catered towards YA readers.
The romance was also mild to nonexistent. It felt like Vita and Soline were friends working within a loose superior/subordinate relationship. Vita pretty much fell in love with Soline because Soline was the only one there who was willing to listen to her and indulge in her whims.
Thank you to Fantasy & Frens and NetGalley for this arc.
June 28, 2025
dnf halfway and 3 stars is being very kind…
literally nothing happens. i should not be halfway through a book with absolutely no plot to describe. vita is such a passive mc and the “sapphic romance” is nonexistent.
it started off SO WELL in the first couple chapters too but i don’t have time for the rest of this baloney because for an adult fantasy this was also giving very much YA
literally nothing happens. i should not be halfway through a book with absolutely no plot to describe. vita is such a passive mc and the “sapphic romance” is nonexistent.
it started off SO WELL in the first couple chapters too but i don’t have time for the rest of this baloney because for an adult fantasy this was also giving very much YA
March 30, 2025
Thank you so much to Bindery books and Zoranne for gifting me an ARC copy of Crueler Mercies in exchange for an honest review.
Crueler Mercies was such a captivating and addicting read! A book I would definitely recommend for anyone that’s interested in starting the fantasy genre.
The story follows Princess Vittoria who has been sent away to exile by her father after he executed her mother right in front of her very eyes. For 11 years she was hidden in a high tower, until she was discovered by Ardaric, a general from enemy territory who gives her an ultimatum between marrying him, or die as a forgotten princess.
What unfolds is a gripping tale of reclaiming what’s rightfully hers—while navigating schemes, power struggles, and an unexpected romance with her closest lady-in-waiting. BRING ON THE PINING AND FORBIDDEN ROMANCE!
From the very first page, this book had me hooked. Maren Chase’s vivid, immersive writing and fast-paced storytelling make it literally impossible to put down. Some of the plot twists had me audibly gasping.
Though this book isn’t perfect it still captivated me from start to finish. There are some minor plot holes and I would have loved to see deeper chemistry between Vita and Soline, but that’s simply the hopeless romantic in me speaking, as their love story was the subplot. Despite these minor quibbles, I thoroughly enjoyed every moment spent with this book. Im exciting to see how this story plays out.
March 19, 2025
i will read any sapphic fantasy book and this was no exception!! i really enjoyed the characters and their story (i wish we got more yearing tho) but i felt that the ending was really rushed.
overall, i enjoyed myself & i can’t wait for everyone to read this!!
overall, i enjoyed myself & i can’t wait for everyone to read this!!
July 30, 2024
Read for work but absolutely slapped, love when the lesbians are vengeful!!!!! Am I fantasy head now????
July 1, 2025
Re-read July 1st, 2025: Holds up on a re-read, and still the most perfect piece of political fantasy I've ever read 🥹
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I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
Who are you, Maren Chase, and how is your debut novel the best political fantasy I’ve ever read???
Crueler Mercies was a masterclass in the genre from start to finish. It has impeccable build-up of tension, incredible payoffs, and amazing characters. I’m usually a big yapper in reviews, but I don’t even know what to say about this book other than, “Wow.”
I initially had reservations since the book starts with Vita as a nine-year-old—I was worried it would turn out to be YA. But no! Vita spends over a decade in captivity and is a full-fledged adult by the time the book kicks off. And it shows—Vita’s has a sharp mind and a gift for strategy, even if she’s understandably awkward after so many years in isolation. I loved her as a protagonist, and found her characterization incredibly astute.
Rapid-fire things I loved about the book:
- The book includes a map that’s ANNOTATED—like a character took notes on it—and it’s spoiler-free!
- The character growth! And how realistic their portrayal is.
- The political intrigue is lifelike and utterly fascinating.
- The feminist themes are thoughtful and nuanced—nothing is dumbed down for readers.
- The magical elements are so understated they’re barely there (yes, this is a pro. Trust me!).
- The romance is a true slow burn, with the love interest showing up much later in the story, after the scene has been thoroughly set.
- The "villains" aren’t Disney caricatures—they have clear motivations and believable goals.
- The narration doesn’t shy away from cruelty, ugliness or gore, but it presents it plainly and never glamorizes it.
- I was gutted by some of the events in the book. I actually whisper-screamed "NO!" out loud at one point. This book had me in a chokehold the whole time!
Things I didn’t like about the book:
- crickets.
I’m now on my knees begging for more from this author. I will consider selling everything I own for their next book. Please feed me mother.
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Original post-read review
mid-january and I already found my fav book of the year lol it's over
(RTC because that's an ARC 😭)
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I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
Who are you, Maren Chase, and how is your debut novel the best political fantasy I’ve ever read???
Crueler Mercies was a masterclass in the genre from start to finish. It has impeccable build-up of tension, incredible payoffs, and amazing characters. I’m usually a big yapper in reviews, but I don’t even know what to say about this book other than, “Wow.”
I initially had reservations since the book starts with Vita as a nine-year-old—I was worried it would turn out to be YA. But no! Vita spends over a decade in captivity and is a full-fledged adult by the time the book kicks off. And it shows—Vita’s has a sharp mind and a gift for strategy, even if she’s understandably awkward after so many years in isolation. I loved her as a protagonist, and found her characterization incredibly astute.
Rapid-fire things I loved about the book:
- The book includes a map that’s ANNOTATED—like a character took notes on it—and it’s spoiler-free!
- The character growth! And how realistic their portrayal is.
- The political intrigue is lifelike and utterly fascinating.
- The feminist themes are thoughtful and nuanced—nothing is dumbed down for readers.
- The magical elements are so understated they’re barely there (yes, this is a pro. Trust me!).
- The romance is a true slow burn, with the love interest showing up much later in the story, after the scene has been thoroughly set.
- The "villains" aren’t Disney caricatures—they have clear motivations and believable goals.
- The narration doesn’t shy away from cruelty, ugliness or gore, but it presents it plainly and never glamorizes it.
- I was gutted by some of the events in the book. I actually whisper-screamed "NO!" out loud at one point. This book had me in a chokehold the whole time!
Things I didn’t like about the book:
- crickets.
I’m now on my knees begging for more from this author. I will consider selling everything I own for their next book. Please feed me mother.
_____
Original post-read review
mid-january and I already found my fav book of the year lol it's over
(RTC because that's an ARC 😭)
December 23, 2024
Crueler Mercies didn’t hold back any punches. This book was full of feminine rage and vengeance and I ate it up. The tension was palpable and I had to put my book down a few times because just when I thought it couldn’t get worse for Vita….it got WORSE. Her character development throughout the story was so incredible to witness. She went from being a princess locked in a tower to being so much more than that. I can’t really elaborate because I don’t want to spoil anything. I thought the world building was well fleshed out and the side characters were very well developed. There was a lot of political intrigue and scheming. I also have never cried over a crow before, but here we are!!!! The last half hour of reading this had me UNWELL. I truly loved this book so much.
Thank you so much to NetGalley and Bindery for the ARC in exchange of an honest review!!
Thank you so much to NetGalley and Bindery for the ARC in exchange of an honest review!!
February 14, 2025
Thank you to Netgalley and Bindery Books for an e-Arc in exchange for an honest review!
Crueler Mercies was a dark fairytale with a nice slow-burn romance that I found to be sweet. From the beginning the author was able to portray Vita's situation and her mistreatment effectively. However, while continuing the book I found Vita to be contradictory. At some points she was very childish and naive, which I found understandable at the beginning since she was in isolation for 11 years from the age of nine. However, later in the book she was having thoughts about politics and had knowledge about the political state while she was still living with her father. This didn't seem realistic to me for a nine year old, whom I was under the impression was a kid that didn't take her schooling seriously, to be remembering any of this information, especially after 11 years in isolation.
Another problem I had was that I didn't find the main villain, the conquerer, to be all that scary. I actually just wasn't sure how I was supposed to feel about him. I also didn't understand the magic and alchemy system in the book. I feel that it was under used and could have been further explored.
The writing itself at times would read to me as choppy and hard to read through. I honestly was struggling to get through this book towards the end. It had good potential but I don't think it was executed well.
Crueler Mercies was a dark fairytale with a nice slow-burn romance that I found to be sweet. From the beginning the author was able to portray Vita's situation and her mistreatment effectively. However, while continuing the book I found Vita to be contradictory. At some points she was very childish and naive, which I found understandable at the beginning since she was in isolation for 11 years from the age of nine. However, later in the book she was having thoughts about politics and had knowledge about the political state while she was still living with her father. This didn't seem realistic to me for a nine year old, whom I was under the impression was a kid that didn't take her schooling seriously, to be remembering any of this information, especially after 11 years in isolation.
Another problem I had was that I didn't find the main villain, the conquerer, to be all that scary. I actually just wasn't sure how I was supposed to feel about him. I also didn't understand the magic and alchemy system in the book. I feel that it was under used and could have been further explored.
The writing itself at times would read to me as choppy and hard to read through. I honestly was struggling to get through this book towards the end. It had good potential but I don't think it was executed well.
October 24, 2025
Not my favorite but great quality still. If you're into war storylines and a more historical feel, go ahead.
May 7, 2025
✧₊‧˚⁀➷ 4.00/5 .ᐟ
❝ “if you want me to remember your name, i will pay scribes to write it across time, across history. our legacy will be carved into the very core of this kingdom, and they will remember us. but it can’t happen yet. we’re not done yet. do you understand me? there’s too much left for us to do.”
➺ lesbians killing their husbands and marrying women instead is the best romance trope of all time. i accept no argument.
ʚɞ ⁺˖ setting .ᐟ takes place on carca, an island country in the alstrin continent (?). carca is surrounded by several other island nations, enemies and (barely) allies alike. vita, princess of carca, is exiled as a child after her father has her mother executed. vita grows up locked in a tower, her only company the birds she feeds from her window. the town vita lives in during her exile is conquered by a kasrian (from one of the other islands), who forces her to marry him to give him legitimacy for when he takes carca's throne. vita develops a friendship with soline, a noblewoman from the kasrian party, and through their relationship, rediscovers herself after being confined for a decade. and she practices killing her husband. very important to the story. and to me.
ʚɞ ⁺˖ plot / pacing .ᐟ honestly, pretty slow for the first 2/3 of the book. maybe even the first 3/4. the story is mainly an exploration of vita's mentality as she is trapped by tyrant after tyrant and watches her family die around her. it's also about the female role in marriage and the nuclear family + vita realizing that even if she is scared about the consequences of taking any form of action, she will never gain any safety from such a structure and she should protect herself. (this makes it sound very dark and triggering, but while it does deal with heavier topics, it's honestly not as far as new adult fantasy goes.) the last 8-10 chapters were very action-heavy however, and the last chapter alone convinced me to raise my rating from 3.8 to 4.
ʚɞ ⁺˖ characters .ᐟ
➺ vita is so perfect. i love everything about how she is portrayed, from her introduction as a child to her life in the tower, how the abuse she faced impacted her mental development, how she navigated her life hampered by her fear, how she gained the confidence to take control of herself again, how she loved soline. vita is definitely one of the better depictions of abuse victims that i have read in ya/na fiction.
➺ soline. love her relationship with vita and her protective nature. she starts out consumed with rage, and it's insane that she's able to quiet that in order to protect vita. she's also witty and fun and ridiculous at times, and her determination, whether it's focused on revenge or shielding vita from a certain goblin, is intrinsic to the novel.
➺ the cast of side characters (marius and isotta) were equally vivid, with motivations and backstories of their own. ardaric is a miserable misogynist with no redeeming qualities and my desire to see him burn is half of what made this such an immersive read.
ʚɞ ⁺˖ romance .ᐟ lesbians + murder always makes excellent romance. and aside from that, vittoline had realistic pacing and development, the best confession i've read recently, and the sweetest romantic scenes. i love that you can see exactly why/how/when they fall for each other and what each of them bring to/sacrifice for the relationship.
➺ such an enjoyable read. i actually read this own my own time, instead of when i was on the train or bored at work like i usually do, so that shows how good this is. thank you to netgalley for the advanced copy!
❝ “if you want me to remember your name, i will pay scribes to write it across time, across history. our legacy will be carved into the very core of this kingdom, and they will remember us. but it can’t happen yet. we’re not done yet. do you understand me? there’s too much left for us to do.”
➺ lesbians killing their husbands and marrying women instead is the best romance trope of all time. i accept no argument.
ʚɞ ⁺˖ setting .ᐟ takes place on carca, an island country in the alstrin continent (?). carca is surrounded by several other island nations, enemies and (barely) allies alike. vita, princess of carca, is exiled as a child after her father has her mother executed. vita grows up locked in a tower, her only company the birds she feeds from her window. the town vita lives in during her exile is conquered by a kasrian (from one of the other islands), who forces her to marry him to give him legitimacy for when he takes carca's throne. vita develops a friendship with soline, a noblewoman from the kasrian party, and through their relationship, rediscovers herself after being confined for a decade. and she practices killing her husband. very important to the story. and to me.
ʚɞ ⁺˖ plot / pacing .ᐟ honestly, pretty slow for the first 2/3 of the book. maybe even the first 3/4. the story is mainly an exploration of vita's mentality as she is trapped by tyrant after tyrant and watches her family die around her. it's also about the female role in marriage and the nuclear family + vita realizing that even if she is scared about the consequences of taking any form of action, she will never gain any safety from such a structure and she should protect herself. (this makes it sound very dark and triggering, but while it does deal with heavier topics, it's honestly not as far as new adult fantasy goes.) the last 8-10 chapters were very action-heavy however, and the last chapter alone convinced me to raise my rating from 3.8 to 4.
ʚɞ ⁺˖ characters .ᐟ
➺ vita is so perfect. i love everything about how she is portrayed, from her introduction as a child to her life in the tower, how the abuse she faced impacted her mental development, how she navigated her life hampered by her fear, how she gained the confidence to take control of herself again, how she loved soline. vita is definitely one of the better depictions of abuse victims that i have read in ya/na fiction.
➺ soline. love her relationship with vita and her protective nature. she starts out consumed with rage, and it's insane that she's able to quiet that in order to protect vita. she's also witty and fun and ridiculous at times, and her determination, whether it's focused on revenge or shielding vita from a certain goblin, is intrinsic to the novel.
➺ the cast of side characters (marius and isotta) were equally vivid, with motivations and backstories of their own. ardaric is a miserable misogynist with no redeeming qualities and my desire to see him burn is half of what made this such an immersive read.
ʚɞ ⁺˖ romance .ᐟ lesbians + murder always makes excellent romance. and aside from that, vittoline had realistic pacing and development, the best confession i've read recently, and the sweetest romantic scenes. i love that you can see exactly why/how/when they fall for each other and what each of them bring to/sacrifice for the relationship.
➺ such an enjoyable read. i actually read this own my own time, instead of when i was on the train or bored at work like i usually do, so that shows how good this is. thank you to netgalley for the advanced copy!
December 22, 2025
3.5 stars
December 31, 2024
If you're a fan of Barbie's Rapunzel and you're looking for something to convey those vibes, only with darker twists and sapphic female rage to sate your thirst for revenge, search no more because Crueler Mercies will not be merciful with those who don't deserve it. With the evil witch reincarnated into a brutal warrior in search for a kingdom to rule over and a fierce lady-in-waiting playing the role of the charming prince, our Vita must come to realise she is not a damsel in distress, but a queen in her own right. I promise you, this book delivers what it says and more. You won't want to put it down and soon, when the last page will be upon you, you will hunger for more.
This book is not a pretty fairytale in which the princess sits idly while others fight in her name. No, far from it. Our Vita, locked away for days on end, takes matters into her own hands and does not shy away from getting dirty. She transforms from a fearful girl, content with a soothing touch from a pitying maid every fortnight to a queen willing to do anything for her people and her own happiness. And she just won't have it any other way. We start humble and the progress of our heroine feels so real, tangible all the way through. You cannot help wondering whether she is out there, in our own history books. The Merciless Queen. I could talk about Vita my whole life. She is every bit the human we all are and more. Pages flew by and my love for her kept growing.
As for the action, any reader into political intrigue, wars, strategies, schemes, and most importantly, evolution, will eat this up. It might seem as predictable, but if you look at the fine layers keeping everything together, you will figure out that seldom things are what they seem to be. From cannibalism to the intricacies of a proper siege, there is not chance of getting bored. I absolutely loved how the author handled all the waiting and preparations for the major plot twists, focusing on building characters growth and strengthening the ties already formed. The execution was, I must say flawless in this regard. And don't even get me started on the brutality of it all! The dark side of humanity brought to the surface în the best bone chilling way. The villains crafted by this author were utterly despicable and by that alone you can tell how well this story was written. They make you hate them ardently, make you feel disgust and hate and all the right things when they are close to defeat.
However, the jewel of this book was the romance. Less than a subplot, it managed to find its way inside my battered heart and never leave it. You must understand: the love in this book is a quiet thing. A love spent in dark corners, in hushed whispers, and careful touches. But it is such a precious love, dear reader. It melts your heart, moulding it according to the song of two young women finding happiness in a world trying to keep them in the unyielding dark. Two young women harbouring such rage for the cage they've been locked into.
All in all. I would die for this book. It was a journey of self-discovery, an empowering tale of a princess unwilling to be forgotten, a lady in waiting ready to love her, a maid who's won her freedom and a warrior most kind and honourable. You must know not one character was overlooked and that made everything even more special.
Initial thoughts: This is the best book I've ever read. I will die for my girls. I will die for feral lesbians. Give me more. This is female rage. This is it. Fuck me. FUCK MY FACE. I LOVE MY ENRAGED LESBIANS. GIVE ME MORE. MORE. I AM BROKEN. SO BROKEN. BUT SO SO HAPPY. I HAD A FEELING when I requested this book. I knew something about it would be fire. This is the genuine portrayal of rage, of fear, of FUCKING love. Kill me now, and I will be in peace. Give me a love like theirs and I will never ask for anything else. Please. Ugh. I am not well. But they. They are my life. And I need so much more. For a debut author, Maren Chase has killed me. And if an author managed that, then they can do anything. I'm brambling, but fuck. I'm crying. 🫠 So many HAPPY AND SAD TEARS. I will be back with coherent thoughts. If by chance the author sees this, know that I thank you so much for this book. It was a journey I will always treasure. A journey I will never forget. I'll repeat my loves' names until I'm nothing but dust. Thank you once again. You have my infinite gratitude and congratulations. ❤️
Many thanks to Netgalley and Bindery Books for offering this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
This book is not a pretty fairytale in which the princess sits idly while others fight in her name. No, far from it. Our Vita, locked away for days on end, takes matters into her own hands and does not shy away from getting dirty. She transforms from a fearful girl, content with a soothing touch from a pitying maid every fortnight to a queen willing to do anything for her people and her own happiness. And she just won't have it any other way. We start humble and the progress of our heroine feels so real, tangible all the way through. You cannot help wondering whether she is out there, in our own history books. The Merciless Queen. I could talk about Vita my whole life. She is every bit the human we all are and more. Pages flew by and my love for her kept growing.
As for the action, any reader into political intrigue, wars, strategies, schemes, and most importantly, evolution, will eat this up. It might seem as predictable, but if you look at the fine layers keeping everything together, you will figure out that seldom things are what they seem to be. From cannibalism to the intricacies of a proper siege, there is not chance of getting bored. I absolutely loved how the author handled all the waiting and preparations for the major plot twists, focusing on building characters growth and strengthening the ties already formed. The execution was, I must say flawless in this regard. And don't even get me started on the brutality of it all! The dark side of humanity brought to the surface în the best bone chilling way. The villains crafted by this author were utterly despicable and by that alone you can tell how well this story was written. They make you hate them ardently, make you feel disgust and hate and all the right things when they are close to defeat.
However, the jewel of this book was the romance. Less than a subplot, it managed to find its way inside my battered heart and never leave it. You must understand: the love in this book is a quiet thing. A love spent in dark corners, in hushed whispers, and careful touches. But it is such a precious love, dear reader. It melts your heart, moulding it according to the song of two young women finding happiness in a world trying to keep them in the unyielding dark. Two young women harbouring such rage for the cage they've been locked into.
All in all. I would die for this book. It was a journey of self-discovery, an empowering tale of a princess unwilling to be forgotten, a lady in waiting ready to love her, a maid who's won her freedom and a warrior most kind and honourable. You must know not one character was overlooked and that made everything even more special.
Initial thoughts: This is the best book I've ever read. I will die for my girls. I will die for feral lesbians. Give me more. This is female rage. This is it. Fuck me. FUCK MY FACE. I LOVE MY ENRAGED LESBIANS. GIVE ME MORE. MORE. I AM BROKEN. SO BROKEN. BUT SO SO HAPPY. I HAD A FEELING when I requested this book. I knew something about it would be fire. This is the genuine portrayal of rage, of fear, of FUCKING love. Kill me now, and I will be in peace. Give me a love like theirs and I will never ask for anything else. Please. Ugh. I am not well. But they. They are my life. And I need so much more. For a debut author, Maren Chase has killed me. And if an author managed that, then they can do anything. I'm brambling, but fuck. I'm crying. 🫠 So many HAPPY AND SAD TEARS. I will be back with coherent thoughts. If by chance the author sees this, know that I thank you so much for this book. It was a journey I will always treasure. A journey I will never forget. I'll repeat my loves' names until I'm nothing but dust. Thank you once again. You have my infinite gratitude and congratulations. ❤️
Many thanks to Netgalley and Bindery Books for offering this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
May 19, 2025
Content warnings: death of a parent, parental neglect, physical abuse, sexual coercion, blood, gore, historical violence. There are several animal companions (birds and horses) who meet brutal ends.
Crueler Mercies is about a princess locked in a tower both literally and metaphorically, the people who help her see her value beyond her inheritance, and the men standing in the way of her both finding this actualization and her literal throne. It’s a quieter, grim fantasy about survival, with the light within Vita growing brighter and brighter as she learns to navigate a world of fantasy politics that has none of her best interests in mind. Her relationship with those around her moved me, leading to an incredibly satisfying comeuppance that stems from our protagonist finding her own worth.
This is a book that is a slow burn of the main character finding strength in herself. Though she ends up a badass in her own right, Vita is not the one brandishing a sword and physically fighting for her own freedom. Chase works impressively with fantasy tropes and historical figures to explore the ways one can fight for oneself in ways more quiet than heroic. The stakes are much more personal in this fantasy story. While there is political intrigue that extends beyond Carca to various neighboring lands kingdoms, the points of tension largely happen in Vita’s immediate vicinity. Most of the negotiation happens within her own heart as she tries to wrangle any morsel of control.
Soline and Vita bounce off each other well in a hand-maiden and princess romance that worked for me. They yearn for each other, and when they are afforded moments of intimacy, it hits. It’s not just Soline that Chase graces Vita with. She has her pair of other attendants, who both love her in different ways, helping her work within the limitations imposed by her tenuous hold on her literal political value and encourage more drastic action once the pieces are mostly set. While there there are several tender interactions woven throughout, the overall world of Crueler Mercies is a brutal one. There is graphic violence on page befitting the grimdark world this book inhabits. Lives aren’t entirely expendable, but neither are they precious except in very specific circumstances. While the terrors aren’t acute, the feeling of having to walk on eggshells is palpable, which made the villain, General Ardaric, so scary to me. The way he lures Vita to his side with ultimately selfish promises of a return to her kingdom made him such a compelling villain. The depiction of that kind of protective manipulation is refreshing to see, but also heavy to read.
The cover copy mentions alchemy, and I do want to warn that the alchemy is very much a background element. There is no skeleton key or a deus ex machina of magic arriving at just the right time to save Vita. There is no chosen one arc with her, only lessons from fellow women like her predecessors. Instead of gaining proficiency in magic, she develops her own ability to navigate conversations and negotiations while leaning on the tight bonds of a family she chooses.
If you’re someone who got a lot out of reading Damsel by Elana K. Arnold in the young adult fantasy space, there is so much to appreciate with this adult fantasy debut that feels very much in conversation.
Crueler Mercies is about a princess locked in a tower both literally and metaphorically, the people who help her see her value beyond her inheritance, and the men standing in the way of her both finding this actualization and her literal throne. It’s a quieter, grim fantasy about survival, with the light within Vita growing brighter and brighter as she learns to navigate a world of fantasy politics that has none of her best interests in mind. Her relationship with those around her moved me, leading to an incredibly satisfying comeuppance that stems from our protagonist finding her own worth.
This is a book that is a slow burn of the main character finding strength in herself. Though she ends up a badass in her own right, Vita is not the one brandishing a sword and physically fighting for her own freedom. Chase works impressively with fantasy tropes and historical figures to explore the ways one can fight for oneself in ways more quiet than heroic. The stakes are much more personal in this fantasy story. While there is political intrigue that extends beyond Carca to various neighboring lands kingdoms, the points of tension largely happen in Vita’s immediate vicinity. Most of the negotiation happens within her own heart as she tries to wrangle any morsel of control.
Soline and Vita bounce off each other well in a hand-maiden and princess romance that worked for me. They yearn for each other, and when they are afforded moments of intimacy, it hits. It’s not just Soline that Chase graces Vita with. She has her pair of other attendants, who both love her in different ways, helping her work within the limitations imposed by her tenuous hold on her literal political value and encourage more drastic action once the pieces are mostly set. While there there are several tender interactions woven throughout, the overall world of Crueler Mercies is a brutal one. There is graphic violence on page befitting the grimdark world this book inhabits. Lives aren’t entirely expendable, but neither are they precious except in very specific circumstances. While the terrors aren’t acute, the feeling of having to walk on eggshells is palpable, which made the villain, General Ardaric, so scary to me. The way he lures Vita to his side with ultimately selfish promises of a return to her kingdom made him such a compelling villain. The depiction of that kind of protective manipulation is refreshing to see, but also heavy to read.
The cover copy mentions alchemy, and I do want to warn that the alchemy is very much a background element. There is no skeleton key or a deus ex machina of magic arriving at just the right time to save Vita. There is no chosen one arc with her, only lessons from fellow women like her predecessors. Instead of gaining proficiency in magic, she develops her own ability to navigate conversations and negotiations while leaning on the tight bonds of a family she chooses.
If you’re someone who got a lot out of reading Damsel by Elana K. Arnold in the young adult fantasy space, there is so much to appreciate with this adult fantasy debut that feels very much in conversation.
June 12, 2025
I just read Crueler Mercies by Maren Chase and here is what I thought about it:
This is the second book I have read from Bindery Books and Zoranne’s Fantasy & Frens imprint, and while I preferred And the Sky Bled more, Crueler Mercies is a strong addition to the small press’s roster. I see this book being a home run for readers that enjoyed Uprooted by Naomi Novik and fans of fairytale retellings that tend to lean more towards the young adult side of the spectrum.
There is much to admire about the book going in with the right expectations. It delivers on its fairytale-esque atmosphere with a soft and strong female lead. The characters are familiar yet original to the specifics of this story and once I cracked through a bit of a slow first quarter of the book, the plot of the story mostly kept my attention.
I think the book suffered from a lack of consistency in nearly every area at times: pacing, character work, and thematic considerations. While the ideas in the book captured and carried attention, the development of these ideas often felt underdeveloped or unresolved. Without getting into major spoiler territory, the ending of the book felt incredibly abrupt, and I wondered if there was something missing from the digital ARC copy I was reading.
That being said, there are details of the main character’s suffering and her growth throughout the story that will stick with me. If Chase nailed anything, she really captures the atmosphere of the genre well.
3.5/5 rounded up
This is the second book I have read from Bindery Books and Zoranne’s Fantasy & Frens imprint, and while I preferred And the Sky Bled more, Crueler Mercies is a strong addition to the small press’s roster. I see this book being a home run for readers that enjoyed Uprooted by Naomi Novik and fans of fairytale retellings that tend to lean more towards the young adult side of the spectrum.
There is much to admire about the book going in with the right expectations. It delivers on its fairytale-esque atmosphere with a soft and strong female lead. The characters are familiar yet original to the specifics of this story and once I cracked through a bit of a slow first quarter of the book, the plot of the story mostly kept my attention.
I think the book suffered from a lack of consistency in nearly every area at times: pacing, character work, and thematic considerations. While the ideas in the book captured and carried attention, the development of these ideas often felt underdeveloped or unresolved. Without getting into major spoiler territory, the ending of the book felt incredibly abrupt, and I wondered if there was something missing from the digital ARC copy I was reading.
That being said, there are details of the main character’s suffering and her growth throughout the story that will stick with me. If Chase nailed anything, she really captures the atmosphere of the genre well.
3.5/5 rounded up
November 17, 2025
Wow! Just wow!
Flaunt the words ‘Sapphic Fantasy’, and I’m there. Show me a book cover with a wispy freckled lonely girl surrounded by twining leaves with gold rings and coins hung from them, and spattered with blood, and I’m there with bells on.
This is everything I want in a lesbian-fantasy-siege-narrative-with-alchemy-and-female-rage (and crows – the crows!). Honestly, this might be The Starving Saints, Part Deux.
2025 seems to be turning out as the best year for my ‘type’ of book, so the bar is set higher than ever, yet ‘Crueler Mercies’ announced itself as ding-ding-dinging all five of my stars from early on. It’s up there with a few right on top as flawless, immaculate, could-not-ask-more-from-this-book 2025 releases (think This Vicious Hunger by Francesca May).
Chase is flooded with five-star reviews on NetGalley, and deservedly so. In fact, I could not find the end of the five-star scroll. And LOTS of capital-letter shouting. LOTS AND LOTS!
So I hereby add my voice to all those shouting, Maren Chase, write manymanymany more books now, please!
I couldn’t be more thrilled to be auto-approved for Bindery Books on NetGalley, because it means I enjoy the supreme pleasure of viewing books like this (and Strange Beasts last year).
Wells of gratitude to author and publisher for the privilege.
Flaunt the words ‘Sapphic Fantasy’, and I’m there. Show me a book cover with a wispy freckled lonely girl surrounded by twining leaves with gold rings and coins hung from them, and spattered with blood, and I’m there with bells on.
This is everything I want in a lesbian-fantasy-siege-narrative-with-alchemy-and-female-rage (and crows – the crows!). Honestly, this might be The Starving Saints, Part Deux.
2025 seems to be turning out as the best year for my ‘type’ of book, so the bar is set higher than ever, yet ‘Crueler Mercies’ announced itself as ding-ding-dinging all five of my stars from early on. It’s up there with a few right on top as flawless, immaculate, could-not-ask-more-from-this-book 2025 releases (think This Vicious Hunger by Francesca May).
Chase is flooded with five-star reviews on NetGalley, and deservedly so. In fact, I could not find the end of the five-star scroll. And LOTS of capital-letter shouting. LOTS AND LOTS!
So I hereby add my voice to all those shouting, Maren Chase, write manymanymany more books now, please!
I couldn’t be more thrilled to be auto-approved for Bindery Books on NetGalley, because it means I enjoy the supreme pleasure of viewing books like this (and Strange Beasts last year).
Wells of gratitude to author and publisher for the privilege.
February 25, 2025
I hope my girl Vita is finally getting some PEACE!!
In all seriousness, this book was the fabulous feminist fantasy I didn’t know I needed. Vita grows throughout the novel through masterful storytelling, going from damsel in distress to merciless Queen Vita with the help of beloved characters and those you absolutely love to hate.
I ate up every ounce of the not-quite-sub-plot romance! The tension and yearning between Vita and Soline was written with the most beautiful prose!! My heart needed this story of vengeance but also hope in these dark times we are living in. Chase writes their characters with such vulnerability and relatability that it’s easy to see bits and pieces of all of the strong, intelligent, beautiful women I know and love, and even those whom history forgets.
All in all, I loved every bit of this beautiful work of art. I am so grateful to Bindery and NetGalley for granting me an ARC in exchange for my honest review!! <3
In all seriousness, this book was the fabulous feminist fantasy I didn’t know I needed. Vita grows throughout the novel through masterful storytelling, going from damsel in distress to merciless Queen Vita with the help of beloved characters and those you absolutely love to hate.
I ate up every ounce of the not-quite-sub-plot romance! The tension and yearning between Vita and Soline was written with the most beautiful prose!! My heart needed this story of vengeance but also hope in these dark times we are living in. Chase writes their characters with such vulnerability and relatability that it’s easy to see bits and pieces of all of the strong, intelligent, beautiful women I know and love, and even those whom history forgets.
All in all, I loved every bit of this beautiful work of art. I am so grateful to Bindery and NetGalley for granting me an ARC in exchange for my honest review!! <3
June 27, 2025
3.75
And onto my next Rapunzel-inspired story! (I did not realize I had picked up two 😅)
Thank you to Bindery Books and Netgalley for this ARC.
Crueler Mercies is a dark fantasy fairytale inspired by Rapunzel. I wouldn't go as far as calling it a retelling but definitely heavily inspired.
I always read criticism and negative reviews of books to see if missed some obvious flaws and this time the negative reviews have not swayed my initial rating. I went in with absolutely no expectations and no prior knowledge and maybe that helped.
This debut novel is wonderfully written. The prose is far above average and I also enjoyed the more slower pacing. I hope Chase continues her writing journey. I would definitely not mind reading from her again!
The world-building on the other hand is very shallow and that usually bothers me but considering the circumstances, I kinda understand. The narrator has very little - or rather very specific - knowledge herself and due to her own childish moods is unreliable. If you dislike heavily flawed MCs I wouldn't recommend this book to you. Vita is by far not the smartest, the bravest nor the most emotionally put-together. She is heavily flawed and unlikeable a lot of the times but I enjoy that in a book every now and then. Give me messy, give me a heroine who isn't a leather-clad badass.
I am disappointed, though, at how one-dimensional the villains and flat and NPC-like the side characters were. I'm noticing this more and more in recent media and it's quite worrisome. If you only put effort into your MC, it's hard to care for the story or the relationships she has with others. Spending more time fleshing out characters should be a higher priority in books like these.
Regarding the genre being adult and not YA, I don't think every adult book needs to have a mature MC but that's just how I see it. I can def see why people would've preferred a YA label. Also- if there's gore and violence, I don't quite understand why we were so prudish about romance and sex. Seems a bit weird.
Overall, a book I enjoyed reading and would recommend to some of my friends. It also added inspiration to start my 2nd DnD campaign 👀
And onto my next Rapunzel-inspired story! (I did not realize I had picked up two 😅)
Thank you to Bindery Books and Netgalley for this ARC.
Crueler Mercies is a dark fantasy fairytale inspired by Rapunzel. I wouldn't go as far as calling it a retelling but definitely heavily inspired.
I always read criticism and negative reviews of books to see if missed some obvious flaws and this time the negative reviews have not swayed my initial rating. I went in with absolutely no expectations and no prior knowledge and maybe that helped.
This debut novel is wonderfully written. The prose is far above average and I also enjoyed the more slower pacing. I hope Chase continues her writing journey. I would definitely not mind reading from her again!
The world-building on the other hand is very shallow and that usually bothers me but considering the circumstances, I kinda understand. The narrator has very little - or rather very specific - knowledge herself and due to her own childish moods is unreliable. If you dislike heavily flawed MCs I wouldn't recommend this book to you. Vita is by far not the smartest, the bravest nor the most emotionally put-together. She is heavily flawed and unlikeable a lot of the times but I enjoy that in a book every now and then. Give me messy, give me a heroine who isn't a leather-clad badass.
I am disappointed, though, at how one-dimensional the villains and flat and NPC-like the side characters were. I'm noticing this more and more in recent media and it's quite worrisome. If you only put effort into your MC, it's hard to care for the story or the relationships she has with others. Spending more time fleshing out characters should be a higher priority in books like these.
Regarding the genre being adult and not YA, I don't think every adult book needs to have a mature MC but that's just how I see it. I can def see why people would've preferred a YA label. Also- if there's gore and violence, I don't quite understand why we were so prudish about romance and sex. Seems a bit weird.
Overall, a book I enjoyed reading and would recommend to some of my friends. It also added inspiration to start my 2nd DnD campaign 👀
June 4, 2025
Coming of age grows into coming of rage as an exiled and imprisoned princess is let out of her tower after nearly a decade only to exchange the prison she knew for the unknown and unwanted prison that is a forced engagement to a warlord.
If you took the song “Look What You Made Me Do” and gave it a tavern song arrangement, then I think that would be the end credits song on a movie made from this book. Part of what makes this book a great read is how Vita’s (our protagonist) personality grows and character develops throughout the book, from the truly naive and sheltered girl who’d been isolated and hated for so long to a cunning and considerate woman who knows when to stand tall and when to bend in order to turn tides and get what she needs. By the time the climatic scenes toward the end of the book hit, she’s a glorious creature of rage and power.
Likewise, this book has a fantastic supporting cast that really keeps this book character-focused, which I enjoyed. This book isn’t heavy on world building and while the plot does involve alchemy it doesn’t go too heavily into it, either. The emphasis is truly on the characters and it’s nice to get that in a fantasy novel and have the characters be so nuanced. There’s a lot of gray morality in the supporting characters and that helps take the shine off of Vita so we don’t always see her as some sort of savior in an ivory tower.
This was an engaging read with a lot of great action scenes and I really enjoyed it. 4⭐️
I was provided a copy of this title by the author and publisher via Netgalley. All thoughts, opinions, views, and ideas expressed herein are mine and mine alone. Thank you.
File Under: Adult Fantasy/Coming of Age/Fantasy/Forbidden Romance/LGBTQ Fantasy/Political Fantasy/Sapphic Romance/Standalone
If you took the song “Look What You Made Me Do” and gave it a tavern song arrangement, then I think that would be the end credits song on a movie made from this book. Part of what makes this book a great read is how Vita’s (our protagonist) personality grows and character develops throughout the book, from the truly naive and sheltered girl who’d been isolated and hated for so long to a cunning and considerate woman who knows when to stand tall and when to bend in order to turn tides and get what she needs. By the time the climatic scenes toward the end of the book hit, she’s a glorious creature of rage and power.
Likewise, this book has a fantastic supporting cast that really keeps this book character-focused, which I enjoyed. This book isn’t heavy on world building and while the plot does involve alchemy it doesn’t go too heavily into it, either. The emphasis is truly on the characters and it’s nice to get that in a fantasy novel and have the characters be so nuanced. There’s a lot of gray morality in the supporting characters and that helps take the shine off of Vita so we don’t always see her as some sort of savior in an ivory tower.
This was an engaging read with a lot of great action scenes and I really enjoyed it. 4⭐️
I was provided a copy of this title by the author and publisher via Netgalley. All thoughts, opinions, views, and ideas expressed herein are mine and mine alone. Thank you.
File Under: Adult Fantasy/Coming of Age/Fantasy/Forbidden Romance/LGBTQ Fantasy/Political Fantasy/Sapphic Romance/Standalone
June 7, 2025
Vita, as our main character, goes through an incredible transformation through this story. She starts her journey as a young princess..loved and adored. Through political machinations, she finds herself without her mother and locked away far from her home. Her only company a servant and some crows she feeds, she remains for 11 long years cut off from the world.
When a saviour appears, can he be what he says he is? He promises to return her to her home as his queen and to punish her father for the atrocity he committed against her mother. Vita receives a new companion in Soline, who opens a new world of alchemy and more...even while her husband to be reveals himself to be heartless and cruel. As Vita comes into her feminine rage...she vows revenge on anyone who hurt her.
I really enjoyed this story! It's a little dark and that's ok. It's not fast moving but the progression keeps you wanting more.
Thank you to #NetGalley for this ARC to read and review. My thoughts are my own.
When a saviour appears, can he be what he says he is? He promises to return her to her home as his queen and to punish her father for the atrocity he committed against her mother. Vita receives a new companion in Soline, who opens a new world of alchemy and more...even while her husband to be reveals himself to be heartless and cruel. As Vita comes into her feminine rage...she vows revenge on anyone who hurt her.
I really enjoyed this story! It's a little dark and that's ok. It's not fast moving but the progression keeps you wanting more.
Thank you to #NetGalley for this ARC to read and review. My thoughts are my own.
March 19, 2025
Thank you to Bindery for the complementary ebook in exchange for an honest, unbiased review.
This book started strong and ended strong, but everything in between felt a bit herky jerky.
I was absolutely hooked for the first hundred pages or so: the action was gripping, the setup was interesting, and I really enjoyed how the author introduced different themes and plot lines.
The ending was intense and dark and, frankly, very satisfying. I loved the plotting and seeing all of Vita’s hard work come to fruition (trying to be vague enough to avoid spoilers while also specific in my feedback).
My issue lies with everything in between. Plot lines felt like they kept getting dropped and picked up and random points. The passage of time felt clunky and confusing. Regarding inter-character relationships, I found the chemistry lacking in the main romance and too much telling (rather than showing) between everyone else, which took the impact out of some of the more emotional moments. Additionally, the magic system felt ill-thought out and could have been incorporated in a way that felt more organic to the story rather than a footnote.
All in all, I do think was a decent debut novel and hope to see more from this author in the future. I enjoyed her prose and the ideas she brought to the story and look forward to seeing her growth as an author in years to come!
This book started strong and ended strong, but everything in between felt a bit herky jerky.
I was absolutely hooked for the first hundred pages or so: the action was gripping, the setup was interesting, and I really enjoyed how the author introduced different themes and plot lines.
The ending was intense and dark and, frankly, very satisfying. I loved the plotting and seeing all of Vita’s hard work come to fruition (trying to be vague enough to avoid spoilers while also specific in my feedback).
My issue lies with everything in between. Plot lines felt like they kept getting dropped and picked up and random points. The passage of time felt clunky and confusing. Regarding inter-character relationships, I found the chemistry lacking in the main romance and too much telling (rather than showing) between everyone else, which took the impact out of some of the more emotional moments. Additionally, the magic system felt ill-thought out and could have been incorporated in a way that felt more organic to the story rather than a footnote.
All in all, I do think was a decent debut novel and hope to see more from this author in the future. I enjoyed her prose and the ideas she brought to the story and look forward to seeing her growth as an author in years to come!
March 15, 2025
Crueler Mercies is a story of a damsel in distress who finds friendship, romance and revenge.
We are introduced to Vita as a small child who watches her mother publicly executed by her father, the king. Confused and distraught she is then whisked away from the life she knew and locked in a tower - as frequently happens to inconvenient and unwanted princesses.
For well over a decade she is completely alone, aside from the maid who bathes her and the birds who come to her window. Until an army rises against her father, and sees how she could be of use…
This book starts out strong (albeit incredibly depressing), and ends on a strong and memorable note. At times in the middle I felt it kind of lulled a bit and I was just waiting for something to happen, but the writing and character development was strong throughout.
My one dislike with this book was that it felt like I waited a long time for the big, dramatic ending, and it was just over so quickly. After so many chapters of Vita being neglected and abused I wanted to see her enjoy her power and vengeance more.
That being said, I think this was a great debut novel and I look forward to reading more from this author.
(Thank you to NetGalley for providing an ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review.)
We are introduced to Vita as a small child who watches her mother publicly executed by her father, the king. Confused and distraught she is then whisked away from the life she knew and locked in a tower - as frequently happens to inconvenient and unwanted princesses.
For well over a decade she is completely alone, aside from the maid who bathes her and the birds who come to her window. Until an army rises against her father, and sees how she could be of use…
This book starts out strong (albeit incredibly depressing), and ends on a strong and memorable note. At times in the middle I felt it kind of lulled a bit and I was just waiting for something to happen, but the writing and character development was strong throughout.
My one dislike with this book was that it felt like I waited a long time for the big, dramatic ending, and it was just over so quickly. After so many chapters of Vita being neglected and abused I wanted to see her enjoy her power and vengeance more.
That being said, I think this was a great debut novel and I look forward to reading more from this author.
(Thank you to NetGalley for providing an ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review.)
June 14, 2025
I didn’t connect with this book as much as I expected to. Every element that could have made the story better felt a bit underused, which left the overall experience feeling somewhat flat for me.
The book has a juvenile tone - not necessarily a bad thing - but considering it's marketed as an adult novel, I was surprised by how YA it felt. I found the characters intriguing in concept, but they never quite came to life for me. I couldn’t connect with them emotionally and their development felt very surface-level.
The plot builds slowly, which can work in the right context, but here, with not much else holding my attention, it dragged. Vita and Soline’s relationship felt sudden and lacked chemistry - I wasn’t invested in them as a couple, though I was curious enough to see how the rest of the story would unfold.
Overall, this isn’t a bad book but it just wasn’t for me. I don’t think I was the intended audience for it.
A thank you to the author, the publisher and NetGalley for providing me a copy of the book in exchange for an unbiased and honest review.
The book has a juvenile tone - not necessarily a bad thing - but considering it's marketed as an adult novel, I was surprised by how YA it felt. I found the characters intriguing in concept, but they never quite came to life for me. I couldn’t connect with them emotionally and their development felt very surface-level.
The plot builds slowly, which can work in the right context, but here, with not much else holding my attention, it dragged. Vita and Soline’s relationship felt sudden and lacked chemistry - I wasn’t invested in them as a couple, though I was curious enough to see how the rest of the story would unfold.
Overall, this isn’t a bad book but it just wasn’t for me. I don’t think I was the intended audience for it.
A thank you to the author, the publisher and NetGalley for providing me a copy of the book in exchange for an unbiased and honest review.
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July 13, 2025Dnf at 55%
Thank you so much to Netgalley, Bindery Books, and Fantasy & Frens for the e-arc!!
I want to take the weight off my chest by just dfning this. Tbh I don't wanna dnf this, I've really been enjoying the majority of this book and even bought it because I was so sure I would end up finishing it and rating it 4 stars. But unfortunately it's gotten to a point where nothing has been happening for ages, the book just drags and drags with no plot or character development and since it's lost that kind of momentum, I've lost interest in this book. This novel starts out really strong in the first couple chapters and honestly I was so into it.
I spent hours and hours reading it and becoming invested. The plot and dynamics were interesting and I was so in love with the writing style and the book had a lot of tension. Then, after they set out to war, the plot (ironically) stops progressing, the tension somehow dissipates, and the plot overall disappears. And at some point in trying to push through and trying to find excitement in the words and events that were transpiring, I was put into a TERRIBLE reading slump. I could no longer read, process, or focus on the words on the page.
I know this book picks up at some point towards the end and there are mixed reviews on whether the ending was satisfying or not, but at the end of the day due to that dissipation of pacing, plot, and tension, I no longer care. This book had so much potential and it could've kept building and building and building, but instead chose to slow down significantly and make it so that your connection to the characters and potential future events becomes disconnected. We also barely get to see any of the "magic"?? We only get failed attempts at alchemy and we really have no idea how it works. The synopsis phrases it in a way that's like "and then Vita meets a charming girl named Soline who introduces her to alchemy and teaches it to her". Um???
No she doesn't????? And I'm sorry but what kind of magic system sets itself up that the main user of it doesn't even know how it works, nevermind that it was barely explored??? So overall, I liked Soline as the love interest (and I never like love interests nowadays but yk she was actually nice and playful), Marius is my favorite character but was obviously set up to die in some terrible way, I liked the relationship Vita had with her crows and how much she values them, there were some generally shocking moments, I did think that the majority of this book was a very good political fantasy, and at the end of the day even though it doesn't make sense I liked how intelligent and book smart Vita was about certain subjects like politics, war, (but still didn't know how sex worked so yk, ehhhh, like I said doesn't make sense) etc. But at the end of the day, I realized the plot was non existent, the pacing slowed down way more than it should've, the magic system was barely explained and even less practiced, and I think the romance should've been more explored. I think this is really good for a debut but it needed to be a lot better
Thank you so much to Netgalley, Bindery Books, and Fantasy & Frens for the e-arc!!
I want to take the weight off my chest by just dfning this. Tbh I don't wanna dnf this, I've really been enjoying the majority of this book and even bought it because I was so sure I would end up finishing it and rating it 4 stars. But unfortunately it's gotten to a point where nothing has been happening for ages, the book just drags and drags with no plot or character development and since it's lost that kind of momentum, I've lost interest in this book. This novel starts out really strong in the first couple chapters and honestly I was so into it.
I spent hours and hours reading it and becoming invested. The plot and dynamics were interesting and I was so in love with the writing style and the book had a lot of tension. Then, after they set out to war, the plot (ironically) stops progressing, the tension somehow dissipates, and the plot overall disappears. And at some point in trying to push through and trying to find excitement in the words and events that were transpiring, I was put into a TERRIBLE reading slump. I could no longer read, process, or focus on the words on the page.
I know this book picks up at some point towards the end and there are mixed reviews on whether the ending was satisfying or not, but at the end of the day due to that dissipation of pacing, plot, and tension, I no longer care. This book had so much potential and it could've kept building and building and building, but instead chose to slow down significantly and make it so that your connection to the characters and potential future events becomes disconnected. We also barely get to see any of the "magic"?? We only get failed attempts at alchemy and we really have no idea how it works. The synopsis phrases it in a way that's like "and then Vita meets a charming girl named Soline who introduces her to alchemy and teaches it to her". Um???
No she doesn't????? And I'm sorry but what kind of magic system sets itself up that the main user of it doesn't even know how it works, nevermind that it was barely explored??? So overall, I liked Soline as the love interest (and I never like love interests nowadays but yk she was actually nice and playful), Marius is my favorite character but was obviously set up to die in some terrible way, I liked the relationship Vita had with her crows and how much she values them, there were some generally shocking moments, I did think that the majority of this book was a very good political fantasy, and at the end of the day even though it doesn't make sense I liked how intelligent and book smart Vita was about certain subjects like politics, war, (but still didn't know how sex worked so yk, ehhhh, like I said doesn't make sense) etc. But at the end of the day, I realized the plot was non existent, the pacing slowed down way more than it should've, the magic system was barely explained and even less practiced, and I think the romance should've been more explored. I think this is really good for a debut but it needed to be a lot better
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 5, 2025
A wonderful first novel and a 3.5 rounded up to 4! Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC!
This novel had a lot of strengths. I really liked Vita as a protagonist, and her arc through the novel was compelling. In some ways, it's a pretty common arc for characters in Fantasy Books About Women's Empowerment (i.e. quiet girl to Girl Boss TM), but I found the rendition engaging. So many books these days claim to have the arc, but I felt it with Vita. There was a reason for her to be that sheltered and trusting, and it was something that she had to grapple with as she experienced the intrigue around her. I loved that she read as neurodivergent, a little treat for me, who would probably also be deeply confused by the intricate rituals of how exactly to be nice to your servants without having your weirdo fiance get too overprotective. She also had female friends! Yay! Isotta for the win! Soline maybe doesn't count as a friend (they were roommates), but still! Speaking of Soline, I liked her, and I thought the intimacy between her and Vita was really lovely and sweet. Happy Pride everyone.
I also really like Ardaric as an antagonist! He wasn't just some cardboard cut-out whose only personality trait was hating women; he was some guy obsessed with control and conquest, including of women. His tender moments with Vita were almost scarier than when he was outright being cruel, because you were waiting for the switch to flip. He feels like a real type of guy that exists, and that makes him a lot scarier. I also loved the De Bello Gallico reference (Chase, I got what you were putting down when you talked about the three walls well before the acknowledgements, and I was dreading the other really famous thing about that siege long before it appeared).
However, there were a lot of weaknesses alongside those strengths. The middle of it was a bit boring, I think because Vita didn't really have a concrete goal that she was working towards. I tend to need something pretty concrete for where we're going in a narrative, and Vita's was "survive", which wasn't solid enough for me in this type of story, where her basic needs are being met and the odds of that situation changing are low. Her motivations do pick back up, saving the book for me to be quite honest, but the gap isn't great. For how much alchemy is talked about in the blurb, I was expecting it to feature much more heavily. I don't hate that it didn't, but it basically disappears for like half of the book after being introduced. I think the concept needed either to be woven in a little better throughout the novel or cut entirely. However, these weaknesses mostly feel like first novel sort of problems.
Overall, it's a solid read, and I am excited to see what Chase comes up with next!
This novel had a lot of strengths. I really liked Vita as a protagonist, and her arc through the novel was compelling. In some ways, it's a pretty common arc for characters in Fantasy Books About Women's Empowerment (i.e. quiet girl to Girl Boss TM), but I found the rendition engaging. So many books these days claim to have the arc, but I felt it with Vita. There was a reason for her to be that sheltered and trusting, and it was something that she had to grapple with as she experienced the intrigue around her. I loved that she read as neurodivergent, a little treat for me, who would probably also be deeply confused by the intricate rituals of how exactly to be nice to your servants without having your weirdo fiance get too overprotective. She also had female friends! Yay! Isotta for the win! Soline maybe doesn't count as a friend (they were roommates), but still! Speaking of Soline, I liked her, and I thought the intimacy between her and Vita was really lovely and sweet. Happy Pride everyone.
I also really like Ardaric as an antagonist! He wasn't just some cardboard cut-out whose only personality trait was hating women; he was some guy obsessed with control and conquest, including of women. His tender moments with Vita were almost scarier than when he was outright being cruel, because you were waiting for the switch to flip. He feels like a real type of guy that exists, and that makes him a lot scarier. I also loved the De Bello Gallico reference (Chase, I got what you were putting down when you talked about the three walls well before the acknowledgements, and I was dreading the other really famous thing about that siege long before it appeared).
However, there were a lot of weaknesses alongside those strengths. The middle of it was a bit boring, I think because Vita didn't really have a concrete goal that she was working towards. I tend to need something pretty concrete for where we're going in a narrative, and Vita's was "survive", which wasn't solid enough for me in this type of story, where her basic needs are being met and the odds of that situation changing are low. Her motivations do pick back up, saving the book for me to be quite honest, but the gap isn't great. For how much alchemy is talked about in the blurb, I was expecting it to feature much more heavily. I don't hate that it didn't, but it basically disappears for like half of the book after being introduced. I think the concept needed either to be woven in a little better throughout the novel or cut entirely. However, these weaknesses mostly feel like first novel sort of problems.
Overall, it's a solid read, and I am excited to see what Chase comes up with next!
May 28, 2025
Overall Rating: 3.5/5 Stars (rounding up for overall star rating)
Maren Chase's debut novel, Crueler Mercies, delivers a political romantasy that’s driven by an alchemy-based magic system and a compelling slow-burn sapphic romance. At it’s core, this is a story of vengeance and self-discovery.
The narrative centers on Vita, the former princess of Carca, whose world shatters when her own father brutally executes her mother. This horrific act sends Vita into over a decade of isolated exile. As she enters adulthood, she's captured by an enemy general intent on using her to legitimize his claim to the Carca throne. Forced to choose between marriage and death, Vita finds an unexpected ally in her lady-in-waiting, Soline. Together, they plot to reclaim Vita's destiny and dismantle the patriarchal world that has consistently wronged them.
Chase absolutely nails the antagonists in this book. Vita's father and her betrothed are truly detestable, committing heinous acts that more than justify Vita's simmering rage and burning desire for revenge. Their villainy provides a potent emotional core for Vita's journey.
The magic system, based on alchemy, also felt underutilized. We're not introduced to it until halfway through the book, and its application largely remains limited to potion creation. For a romantasy, I expected a more robust and integrated magical element (this is not necessarily a problem, just out of alignment with my expectations).
I also struggled a bit with the pacing - while the first and last 10% of the book are incredibly fast-paced and gripping, the middle section slows considerably. This uneven pacing, combined with an underdeveloped world, made some of the political intricacies difficult to fully grasp.
Despite these issues, Crueler Mercies has a lot to offer, especially if you appreciate a strong revenge plot and a well-executed sapphic romance. If you enjoyed the political intrigue of The Bridge Kingdom or are looking for a standalone fantasy that leans into character-driven conflict without being overly complex, this debut is worth checking out.
Maren Chase's debut novel, Crueler Mercies, delivers a political romantasy that’s driven by an alchemy-based magic system and a compelling slow-burn sapphic romance. At it’s core, this is a story of vengeance and self-discovery.
The narrative centers on Vita, the former princess of Carca, whose world shatters when her own father brutally executes her mother. This horrific act sends Vita into over a decade of isolated exile. As she enters adulthood, she's captured by an enemy general intent on using her to legitimize his claim to the Carca throne. Forced to choose between marriage and death, Vita finds an unexpected ally in her lady-in-waiting, Soline. Together, they plot to reclaim Vita's destiny and dismantle the patriarchal world that has consistently wronged them.
Chase absolutely nails the antagonists in this book. Vita's father and her betrothed are truly detestable, committing heinous acts that more than justify Vita's simmering rage and burning desire for revenge. Their villainy provides a potent emotional core for Vita's journey.
The magic system, based on alchemy, also felt underutilized. We're not introduced to it until halfway through the book, and its application largely remains limited to potion creation. For a romantasy, I expected a more robust and integrated magical element (this is not necessarily a problem, just out of alignment with my expectations).
I also struggled a bit with the pacing - while the first and last 10% of the book are incredibly fast-paced and gripping, the middle section slows considerably. This uneven pacing, combined with an underdeveloped world, made some of the political intricacies difficult to fully grasp.
Despite these issues, Crueler Mercies has a lot to offer, especially if you appreciate a strong revenge plot and a well-executed sapphic romance. If you enjoyed the political intrigue of The Bridge Kingdom or are looking for a standalone fantasy that leans into character-driven conflict without being overly complex, this debut is worth checking out.
March 29, 2025
Crueler Mercies is the kind of book that sneaks up on you—quiet, simmering, but absolutely brimming with tension. It’s not loud or action-packed, but every moment feels dangerous. It’s a slow unraveling of power and desperation, and I loved every second of it.
Vita is such an interesting protagonist—naïve, traumatized, and passive for much of the story, but her transformation is so satisfying to witness. She’s both soft and furious, which adds a layer of female rage that I don’t often see depicted this well. This story isn’t just about rebellion—it’s about survival in a world where women are treated as ornamental, where power is wielded by men while women watch from the sidelines. And yet, Crueler Mercies makes that feel intentional rather than like a flaw in the narrative. The lack of action doesn’t mean a lack of stakes—this book pulses with danger, heartbreak, and the kind of tension that makes you hold your breath. And it does NOT pull its punches.
Vita and Soline’s sapphic relationship is woven into the fabric of the story in a way that feels natural and beautiful. Their connection is gorgeous, and their quiet moments are some of the best in the story. I also loved all the secondary characters, even if we didn't get to explore them too deeply.
That said, I did have some minor complaints. While the alchemy is fascinating, I wish it had been explored more—it felt like a plot device rather than a fully fleshed-out system. The ending, while satisfying, felt a little too easy and fast compared to the slow, methodical build of the rest of the book. And the pacing is a bit uneven at times, but honestly, I didn’t care. I devoured this story, heart aching the whole way through. It’s a book that lingers, that makes you feel the weight of what these characters endure. Maren Chase, you have my attention.
Thanks so much to Colored Pages Book Tours, Bindery Books, and the author for the opportunity to read and review. This review is voluntary, and all opinions are my own.
Vita is such an interesting protagonist—naïve, traumatized, and passive for much of the story, but her transformation is so satisfying to witness. She’s both soft and furious, which adds a layer of female rage that I don’t often see depicted this well. This story isn’t just about rebellion—it’s about survival in a world where women are treated as ornamental, where power is wielded by men while women watch from the sidelines. And yet, Crueler Mercies makes that feel intentional rather than like a flaw in the narrative. The lack of action doesn’t mean a lack of stakes—this book pulses with danger, heartbreak, and the kind of tension that makes you hold your breath. And it does NOT pull its punches.
Vita and Soline’s sapphic relationship is woven into the fabric of the story in a way that feels natural and beautiful. Their connection is gorgeous, and their quiet moments are some of the best in the story. I also loved all the secondary characters, even if we didn't get to explore them too deeply.
That said, I did have some minor complaints. While the alchemy is fascinating, I wish it had been explored more—it felt like a plot device rather than a fully fleshed-out system. The ending, while satisfying, felt a little too easy and fast compared to the slow, methodical build of the rest of the book. And the pacing is a bit uneven at times, but honestly, I didn’t care. I devoured this story, heart aching the whole way through. It’s a book that lingers, that makes you feel the weight of what these characters endure. Maren Chase, you have my attention.
Thanks so much to Colored Pages Book Tours, Bindery Books, and the author for the opportunity to read and review. This review is voluntary, and all opinions are my own.
May 18, 2025
3.5⭐️ Vita is a princess in exile after a traumatic betrayal by her own father. She lives a contented life in a tower, hardly seeing other humans, spending hours upon hours alone with her books and the birds who visit through her window. One day she notices a commotion outside, and before she knows it, her door finally opens and she’s thrust into a world of war, destruction, and political machination. She needs to learn quickly to stay alive and get the revenge she never even knew she wanted.
I have some mixed opinions on this book but overall enjoyed it. The characterization is great - I think Vita is a refreshing protagonist who acknowledges her faults and weaknesses and shows great character growth from sheltered princess to warrior queen (albeit a LITTLE unrealistic maybe). Her love interest Soline is a little more shallow, but still decently fleshed out with her own motivations and light backstory. The main antagonist even has his moments of humanity, something I found particularly refreshing since I hate one-dimensional villains. The political plotting was light enough to be easily understood while being complex enough to have an impact on the plot. But I will say overall this felt a little YA for some reason, and the romance was a little lacking for me. There’s also a magical element to the story that felt a little shoehorned in there and I wish it was explored further. I don’t see myself rereading this one, but I would recommend it if you like light political fantasy and satisfying female-rage endings.
Huge thanks to Netgalley, the publisher, and author for this Advanced Reader Copy! This review is my honest opinion and offered voluntarily!
I have some mixed opinions on this book but overall enjoyed it. The characterization is great - I think Vita is a refreshing protagonist who acknowledges her faults and weaknesses and shows great character growth from sheltered princess to warrior queen (albeit a LITTLE unrealistic maybe). Her love interest Soline is a little more shallow, but still decently fleshed out with her own motivations and light backstory. The main antagonist even has his moments of humanity, something I found particularly refreshing since I hate one-dimensional villains. The political plotting was light enough to be easily understood while being complex enough to have an impact on the plot. But I will say overall this felt a little YA for some reason, and the romance was a little lacking for me. There’s also a magical element to the story that felt a little shoehorned in there and I wish it was explored further. I don’t see myself rereading this one, but I would recommend it if you like light political fantasy and satisfying female-rage endings.
Huge thanks to Netgalley, the publisher, and author for this Advanced Reader Copy! This review is my honest opinion and offered voluntarily!
April 29, 2025
- sapphic slowburn
- rapunzel inspired
- political fantasy
- feminine rage
- vengeance
- strong character development
The character growth in Crueler Mercies is such a raw and realistic portrayal of feminism and feminine rage that has me floored. It is tragic, dark and SO human. Though it has too dark an undertone for younger me, her siege-fascinated self would have gobbled this portrayal of a strategic war. The narrative is so nuanced, never eclipsing the gore and the cruelty. The romance, even though a subplot, progresses in line with Vita's reservations: nothing feels out of character for a moment and LISTEN, for those of you looking for your next book girlfriend, might I present Vita? If you love books with strong character development and beautiful prose throughout -- this should be on your TBR. ALSO THAT TITLE IS GENIUS OKAY WHEN YOU UNDERSTAND WHERE IT CAME FROM.
THIS is the book for everyone who has been belittled and made to feel like they can't follow their dreams, this is the feminist dark fairytale we all needed. This is a reminder that you can conquer EVERYTHING.
Thank you Netgalley and Bindery Books for this lovely eARC.
- rapunzel inspired
- political fantasy
- feminine rage
- vengeance
- strong character development
The character growth in Crueler Mercies is such a raw and realistic portrayal of feminism and feminine rage that has me floored. It is tragic, dark and SO human. Though it has too dark an undertone for younger me, her siege-fascinated self would have gobbled this portrayal of a strategic war. The narrative is so nuanced, never eclipsing the gore and the cruelty. The romance, even though a subplot, progresses in line with Vita's reservations: nothing feels out of character for a moment and LISTEN, for those of you looking for your next book girlfriend, might I present Vita? If you love books with strong character development and beautiful prose throughout -- this should be on your TBR. ALSO THAT TITLE IS GENIUS OKAY WHEN YOU UNDERSTAND WHERE IT CAME FROM.
THIS is the book for everyone who has been belittled and made to feel like they can't follow their dreams, this is the feminist dark fairytale we all needed. This is a reminder that you can conquer EVERYTHING.
Thank you Netgalley and Bindery Books for this lovely eARC.
June 4, 2025
This was okay. I liked the writing style and prose. The beginning was fantastic, it drew me in immediately, and the ending packed a punch. I enjoyed the alchemical magic system. But, while I loved the beginning and ending, the middle was a slog and somewhat boring. I wanted more from the romance that felt very lackluster and underdeveloped. All the characters except Vita felt very flat. The world-building was decent but could have been better, and while I liked the alchemical magic system, I wished we would have had a more in-depth exploration.
For a debut novel, I thought this was okay but definitely had room for improvement.
For a debut novel, I thought this was okay but definitely had room for improvement.
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