January 2025 Review:
Thanks to NetGalley and Bindery Books for giving me an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
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The Unmapping is story in which women rely entirely on men for their sense of self, nobody learns anything, and there are no consequences. Yes, it is as frustrating as it sounds. Spoilers follow.
The strength of this book is mostly in the central event of the Unmapping itself. There are an infinite number of interesting stories to be told, particularly from the NYC Emergency Management Department, struggling to deal with the crisis as it first unfolds. We do get to see some of those stories, and that is where the book is at its best, in the early days.
It was the characters that bothered me the most, though, especially the weirdly sexist depiction of women. Esme, an Emergency Management team leader, is shown to be a capable and intelligent person in her own right, with a strong sense of responsibility to the city—so why does that all get sidelined in place of her having an emotional breakdown over her fiancé going missing, realizing that she basically can’t function without him and never has? It undercuts her character so fundamentally. She only really starts to come alive again when she starts dating Arjun, another protagonist and Emergency Department worker, who she has been unkind to the entire book until that point very close to the end. Whether intentionally or not, she is portrayed as needing a man to keep her stable, which just felt gross.
Rosemary, another female character, literally waits for her husband to get home every day to tell her what to do and devoted her life entirely to his interests, but the narrative doesn’t explore her getting a newfound sense of freedom when he disappears. No, instead she’s pretty immediately seduced by a cult and becomes indoctrinated, before conveniently getting free and immediately going back to her husband, who helps her start to get better. The narrative fails to actually challenge her status in any way, actually making it seem like she needs a man to survive, like Esme.
And Arjun is an incompetent fool with a crush on an engaged woman, careless and driven entirely by emotion, but always magically succeeds despite being pretty objectively creepy.
I did not like these people, Esme was at least interesting to read but no character truly changes or faces consequences here. There are no stakes, and no one learns anything. The mayor of New York City magically disappears near the end of the book and is revealed to be hiding out in New Jersey, dating a married man with no repercussions. It’s just so difficult to care.
And then there’s the hamfisted environmental component of the story. We never get a definitive answer on what causes the Unmapping, but the widely accepted explanation in-universe is that it has some vague ties to climate change and pollution. This just annoyed me. Climate change is brought up but nothing is actually said about it. It feels like the author wanted to try and get an environmental message in without actually committing to one. I’m not bothered by not knowing fully what caused the Unmapping, but I am bothered by a lazy message like “pollution is bad.”
There were other issues, like jarring tone shifts—this book couldn’t decide if it wanted to be lighthearted or serious, grounded or fantastical—and not committing to wrapping up certain stories, but my largest issues really were the characters.
I was very disappointed by this one.
2/5 stars.