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Betrayed Luna: Finding My Luna Wolf
As you know by now, my name is Evelyn Rots, one hundred percent werewolf, member of the Crescent Moon pack. I’ll be a rogue in ten minutes. You wonder why? Well, right now I’m deeply depressed. You see, I’ve been cheated by everyone who matters most to me. The ones I loved, the ones I needed to survive and succeed in life. I gave them my ultimate trust, they took it but gave nothing in return.
Betrayal has marked my entire life, from childhood to now.
My father, mother, childhood best friends and pack members, the love of my life, even my mate, they have all deceived me, contributed to my current state of mind.
Some say that when you give, you should never ask for anything in return. The Almighty will compensate you by blessing your path. Others argue that you should not count your misfortunes, only the blessings. I have yet to find out if all of that is true. But what I am truly convinced is that the Almighty has never consented to this deep pain that I now feel from this constant betrayal. NEVER! I strongly believe that He wants His creation to live a happy life and to prosper.
But maybe it was me who couldn’t distinguish between good and fake. Since this Higher One and the Moon goddess are in control of creation, I am so sure there must also be love and purity on this piece of rock called earth.
So, here I stand at the border of Crescent Moon, looking back one more time before breaking the bond with my pack and going rogue. Rogues are abandoned or runaway members of a pack, usually werewolves. And while I know that werewolves only survive in packs, I’m taking my chances.
My plan is to leave and live with humans, try a different culture, a different level of trust. I’ve read a lot about their way of life and I think I can do this.
Yes I can!!
Leave this stabbing pain behind and start over.
Betrayal has marked my entire life, from childhood to now.
My father, mother, childhood best friends and pack members, the love of my life, even my mate, they have all deceived me, contributed to my current state of mind.
Some say that when you give, you should never ask for anything in return. The Almighty will compensate you by blessing your path. Others argue that you should not count your misfortunes, only the blessings. I have yet to find out if all of that is true. But what I am truly convinced is that the Almighty has never consented to this deep pain that I now feel from this constant betrayal. NEVER! I strongly believe that He wants His creation to live a happy life and to prosper.
But maybe it was me who couldn’t distinguish between good and fake. Since this Higher One and the Moon goddess are in control of creation, I am so sure there must also be love and purity on this piece of rock called earth.
So, here I stand at the border of Crescent Moon, looking back one more time before breaking the bond with my pack and going rogue. Rogues are abandoned or runaway members of a pack, usually werewolves. And while I know that werewolves only survive in packs, I’m taking my chances.
My plan is to leave and live with humans, try a different culture, a different level of trust. I’ve read a lot about their way of life and I think I can do this.
Yes I can!!
Leave this stabbing pain behind and start over.
222 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 16, 2024
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October 17, 2024
Needs seriously editing
This seems like a very rough draft and story outline, then an actual book.
Needs heavy grammar work and to be fleshed out
This seems like a very rough draft and story outline, then an actual book.
Needs heavy grammar work and to be fleshed out
November 14, 2024
Cheating = mate of the h sleeps with anything with a va-jay-jay, not caring about the h.
h sees H? with OW = h walks in on her "mate" going to pound town with OW
Rejected mate = h leaves her mate and the pack who has continually snubbed her, but no formal rejection
This had such potential, but the writing is disjointed, confusing jumps, jagged storylines, h going from completely clueless to smart?, etc.
I skim read most of it and it ended on a cliffhanger, but I will not be continuing on. It reads like a subpar Wattpad story...
h sees H? with OW = h walks in on her "mate" going to pound town with OW
Rejected mate = h leaves her mate and the pack who has continually snubbed her, but no formal rejection
This had such potential, but the writing is disjointed, confusing jumps, jagged storylines, h going from completely clueless to smart?, etc.
I skim read most of it and it ended on a cliffhanger, but I will not be continuing on. It reads like a subpar Wattpad story...
December 31, 2024
Good story
Really interesting plot. Entertaining reading and a bit addictive. I went straight to the 2nd book.
Thanks, I love it.
Really interesting plot. Entertaining reading and a bit addictive. I went straight to the 2nd book.
Thanks, I love it.
December 13, 2025
dnf 22%
Unfortunately this was not great.
The writing was all over the place and choppy,definitely needs editing.
I made to 22% the story itself just wasn’t for me.
Unfortunately this was not great.
The writing was all over the place and choppy,definitely needs editing.
I made to 22% the story itself just wasn’t for me.
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