Hunted Omega: Part Two

Puritan City Alphas #2

by Poppy Carter

How to mend a broken heart, and definitely not fall in love again.

Remember when I said I'd never love again? Turns out, my first instinct was right—I really can't afford to.
I went from hiding my omega status to living with four alpha mates, only to have my heart shattered into a million pieces. Now, instead of trying to keep alphas, I'm back to losing them—and myself—as fast as possible.
Malachi, Quinn, Dash, and Zane think they can win me back, but trust isn't exactly my strong suit. And just when I think things can't get any worse... my past comes knocking. Loudly.
My ex is back, and he's not just after me anymore. He's targeting the pack, the home, the life I almost had. And he's not alone.
Now I have to decide if I can trust the alphas who broke me, keep my ex from destroying everything, and, oh yeah, try not to get myself killed in the process.
Did I mention I'm also dealing with my first heat in years? Because apparently, the universe thinks I need more complications.
They say love gives second chances, but what happens when you're too scared to take one? I guess it's time to find out if this omega has what it takes to not just survive, but to dare to love again.

Spoiler It's going to be one hell of a week. And this time, I'm not sure my heart will make it out in one piece.

Genres: Omegaverse, Romance

419 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 10, 2024

Reviews

[Suzanne · Rating 2 out of 5]

I really liked book one. It was a bit chaotic, but loved it for what it is - OV smut. Part One ended on a cliffhanger. Aria has run from the pack and her ex-boyfriend is still hunting her. I was hyped for the conclusion. It was not what I had hoped for.

The inconsistencies between the characters in the two books are outrageous. They don't even act the same. They have had complete character makeovers, changing their essential personalities. Aria has become a bitch. And her supportive friends are now anti- the pack who was lovingly supporting her. She withheld vital information about herself, her Omega status, and then got angry when they were surprised and hurt by the secret. Now she's making them grovel and pay for her secret. Quinn knew her secret in Part One, so why is she mad at him? And Dash was the guy she had fun with all the time, but now she's angry at him for repeated disappointing behavior that he never exhibited previously. Zane, who was the biggest ass about her secret, kept his own secret and is the first forgiven. WTF?

There are also several plotline and situational consistencies that were difficult to read. She agreed to meet Zane at a cafe for "neutral ground." On the next page he's at her door and they end up in bed.

This book did not make a whole lot of sense. And Aria needs new friends and probably some common sense.

[Jessica Scott · Rating 2 out of 5]

ok what?

The first book was really good and then the second book didn't even make sense? The way she acts like the guys abused her or something? Yes, they were mad she lied and they got in an argument but all the other issues with the guys but Zane made no sense. The endless drama made no sense, the plot holes were huge. Then she bonded with one and was saying she didn't know if she'd accept then two pages later, really disappointed as I liked the first book. Author should have continued with the Noah storyline and let the guys find her and beg for forgiveness, all the other stuff made no sense.

[Kristy Parsons · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF. I was already frustrated with the first book - how the hell did they NOT know she was an Omega 🙄 and the second. She’s mad at all of them?? Zane was the only one who did anything???? It’s like a different book. The repetitiveness with some of the sayings it was like I was reading the previous sentence from a chapter before. Ugh so frustrating, Aria was at fault too so she should also be making an effort not just the guys.
The book was all over the place, get to the bloody point!!!!

[Annelie · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF 37%

Well, it didn't make sense anymore... She forgave one guy, and not the most forgivable one but she was still angry not angy with the others at the same time...🙄🤦🏻‍♀️

[Jackie · Rating 1 out of 5]

2nd book has the same problem the 1st book has, which is it wasn't edited. paragraphs repeat, there's no order, and the backstory of each character changes.

It's getting a one star because the absolutely gross misrepresentation of Alcoholism, and Therapy.

There was absolutely 0 indication that Dash was an alcoholic. But he hasn't touched a drink since Aria left and has been sober the months she's been gone. The inclusion of this is random and unnecessary. All through the book we hear Dash say, God I need a drink, Maybe if I had just one to take the edge of, and at one point Malachi publicly calls him out randomly telling Dash he can't fuck this up by getting drunk. Absolutely disgusting move by the author to toss all that in there when it wasn't a part of his character development in book one.

While the premise of the story is appealing, the execution falls flat. Plot points change or are just forgotten about entirely.

Like what happened to the apothecary lady?

Aria and Noah's backstory changes from meeting at a bar after graduating her cosmetology program, to meeting when she was 16 after her parents died.

Aria gets captured and they loose all their tracking information, including the tracker that couldn't be tracked hidden under her skin, but a paragraph or two later they magically have the ability to read her vitals?

Aria asks how the pack knows Noah/Logan, they all tense up in the vehicle when Aria asks. That never gets resolved.

And the whole pack is just a mess. Like for people who run the best security company in the area, they miss a lot of details. At the end, there's a mole, but they were so careful with their information. They weren't. But also, there's no discussion after that how Noah learned of their operation.

[Brief Happenstance · Rating 1 out of 5]

This book and the first one are a hot mess. Full of continuity errors, erratic miscommunication, personality changes, inconsistencies, plot confusion, characterization and writing style changes... It's difficult to read them. Big plot points are revealed to MCs, aha! moments are had, and then completely forgotten. Concepts and people are introduced, never to be explained and then those plot points or ideas are left unfinished. Overreactions are had to things that previously had been discussed as not a big deal. So much repetition occurs, and then is irrelevant or contradicted. The plot reads like a wattpad novel.

In the first book, Zane is angry at a previous love for betrayal, but in the second book, he's simply sad at her loss/death. A big one for me is Malachi and Zane declaring themselves lifelong protectors of the weak & helpless and using their strength for good, then seeming to have no initial negative reaction to laws that basically enslave and oppress all Omegas. They don't seem to be happy about how they themselves are affected by those laws, but even their feelings about how the laws affect Aria are mixed. They should have been outraged or something but they weren't at all. The reactions were really strange and self-motivated, self-serving, with a flavor of bowing down to the government, assuming government is unquestionable; un-alpha-like and contrary to their previous characterization. Then they seem to suddenly remember who they are and make off-page changes and Aria is credited with showing them the error of their ways and the plight of omegahood, when she wasn't present or inspiring. Motivations are fickle at every turn so the book is just frustrating. At every corner you're left with: "What?!? But that doesn't make sense!"

Even the transition between books one and two is so strange. The end of the first book is a hyper-dramatic cliffhanger, with Aria on the run for her life, in immanent danger, helpless, missing, going into hiding while the pack wildly looks for her with the help of her friends (she's lost her phone all left all possessions behind.) Then as the next book starts, she's living her life normally, in public, not in hiding, acting like she's in no danger at all. She has the help of her friends, who are suddenly against the pack. They somewhat casually showed up and were able to become permanent fixtures in her daily life when for some reason they weren't before. The only prior reference to Ginger was similar to the aunt so I thought we were going to find out she was killed too. Nope, she just was randomly incommunicado, and now she's relocated to town and is a central character. And wasn't Noah the murderer immanently on her trail? Why is he not mentioned at all for the whole first part of the book? Whiplash I tell you.

Finally, all the "character arcs" in the second book are out of left field. Three of the four pack members were great guys who never treated her poorly. Not one time. Throughout the book they were gentle, careful, supportive, went at her pace, etc. They didn't push and they worked hard to make her comfortable at every turn. Even at the close of the first book when a miscommunication was happening they reacted in a normal, healthy way to receiving shocking new: they were surprised and a little hurt but tried to slow things down and talk to reach an understanding. Zane alone rejected her while the others tried to put a stop to it. (Even that was really inconsistent with their personalities and pack dynamics, the strong leader Malachi and his lieutenant Zane suddenly switched roles uncharacteristically.) Then in this book they spend the whole time making up for being terrible people they'd never been to prove what they'd already proven. And she took the misbehavior of one and broadly applied it to them all. I just can't. She spends so much of the first book telling herself to open up and be honest because she is afraid her secrecy will hurt them (maybe even get them killed) and then when all her secrets come to light and they are hurt, the pack alone takes all the blame for being awful. I always understood why she kept her secrets but all the alphas' groveling and lifestyle changing in this second book were so frustrating. Her own lack of any remorse was a personality change. Quinn and Dash made perfect book boyfriends, but then you read things like this part: "I study him, searching for any sign of the old Dash—the charming manipulator and the self-centered alpha who thought the world revolved around him—but all I see is sincerity and a vulnerability..." then later , "“It wasn’t just that night, Dash. It was a pattern—a long, painful pattern.”" Dash was not like that in the first book. He is literally described as a golden retriever and is so, so sweet. A people-pleasing sweetie was his pattern. Yeah he's charming, but he was never manipulative or self-centered, so I was disgusted with these kinds of foundationless "arcs." Same with Quinn and Malachi. They didn't really have anything to make up for except not noticing her walking out while they reprimanded Zane. Malachi may have been a bit AHole-ish with accusing her of putting them in danger, but he was trying to talk it out and take care of her during the conversation. Somehow the first one she forgives and accepts is Zane, randomly asking for his bite. The one she punishes the longest is Dash. Poor Dash. That slayed me.

Aria was a fun character to read for the first half of the first book: witty, relatable, fun, snarky, and reasonable. She started to go down for me in the latter part of the first book, then in this second book she was whiny, annoying, unreasonable, flippant. She stopped making any sense. She became really unlikeable.

The very worst part of the whole charade is the end. After a confrontation, you never find out what happens to Noah. Aria is rescued from him, a gun is taken from him, then all focus shifts onto the things Noah is involved in. It doesn't seem he was killed, it's not clear that he was arrested or prosecuted either. He was the boogyman in the first book and a footnote in the second. Weird.

[Holly · Rating 1 out of 5]

Confusing book and the plot dragged. Made me wonder what was removed from the first book since some plot lines didn’t really make sense and almost felt like someone else wrote book 2. Didn’t feel like the turmoil in their relationship made sense based on what happened in book 1.

Overall they were all getting along, she was living with them, and then one character gets upset with her and now she dislikes them all? But then bonds with that person first? Her secret was she was an omega but their reservations about her was she wasn’t one. Shouldn’t that have made them happy? She told them she was scared and hiding from an abusive ex that literally broke into her home so why is her not immediately trusting them and hiding that detail so world shattering? They also hadn’t trusted her with all their secrets.

Also, it didn’t make sense how a character that barely drank in the first book suddenly needs AA and talks about how he wronged her even though he was a teddy bear. That story line seemed unnecessary to me.

The series felt repetitive and like it would’ve done better as 1 book with an editor.

[Elizabeth Smith · Rating 3 out of 5]

I'm confused by the editing process....if there was one. There were several duplicate or almost duplicate paragraphs. There was zero timeline cohesion - the whole "current" story took place over about 6 months starting in fall, but seasons changed from fall to spring to fall to winter over the course of about a month. All the female characters wore shoes that clicked on the floor, but no other outfit descriptions occurred, or in one case, someone was wearing sweats but her heels clicked on the floor? Key information changed in the final scene from 27 to 12 with no explanation, and the main character seemed to completely forget that a major part of the plan was her idea? (Actually I think the author forgot to remove a few lines where the FMC was meek after making the FMC stronger)
The story was fine, few typos, but the editing was so disjointed.

[readwithalix · Rating 1 out of 5]

Have you ever read a book and thought this would be so much better with a deep edit? That was my thoughts when reading this series. There were spelling, grammar, and formatting mistakes (paragraphs repeating, straight after one another with slight sentence variation). This led to continuity issues, where in one scene the characters would all know something and in the next they wouldn’t.

In the second book, one of the MMCs called the FMC by a nickname, “using that ridiculous nickname that I pretend to hate but secretly love”, but that’s the first time in two books that the nickname was used.

However, I really liked the premise of the book, where I believe it had some really interesting plot twists and turns. Where with some edits, I believe it could easily become a terrific book.

[Dominique · Rating 1 out of 5]

Did not finish. Tried to push through and DNFd at 80%. Timeline was a mess, huge plot wholes, and consistently contradicted itself. Parts from book one were suddenly removed while things were added that did not make sense. So many changes made with no rhyme or reason. Got completely lost and was not worth it. While book one was great, book two threw everything in the trash and just set fire to it.

[Michael K · Rating 1 out of 5]

I've been dragged along by this continuation for weeks now and I'm so over it. Where are all the characters from book one? I had a huge issue to whatever minscommunication the author thought they were making at the end of the last novel--but this extreme miscommunication station 2.0 is...excessive.

This is the same plot--but none of these characters are recognizable. Imagine your own ending, for real, this one isn't worth sloughing through.

Good luck.

[Brittney · Rating 4 out of 5]

Drama? Check.

Spicy Alphas? Check.

Reverse Harem with ALL the Feels? Big Check.

In Hunted Omega: Part 2, Poppy Carter delivers the perfect blend of heartbreak, humor, and irresistible chemistry. Our omega heroine thought she could close the door on love after a series of emotional rollercoasters with her four alpha mates, but nothing’s ever simple in the Omegaverse! 💥 This time, she faces not only her own fears but also a dangerous threat from her past that could destroy everything she's come to cherish—including the pack that once broke her heart.

As if healing from betrayal and heartbreak wasn't enough, she’s hit with a surprise visit from her ex, a first heat in years, and the universe’s relentless tests. Her ex’s threat looms large, putting her life and her chosen family at risk. The question is: can she trust the alphas who shattered her, or is her heart too bruised to give them another shot? 🌌

This book is a journey of resilience, found family, and rediscovering love when all hope seems lost. Carter's clever dialogue and steamy, laugh-out-loud moments make this a must-read for fans of why-choose romance with strong, unforgettable characters. If you’re into omegaverse with a blend of drama, sizzling romance, and humor, Hunted Omega: Part 2 is bound to captivate you.

🌹 Perfect for Fans of:

🔹 Why-Choose Romance

🔹 Reverse Harem Magic

🔹 Alpha/Omega Dynamics

🔹 Found Family Themes

🔹 Laughs with High Heat Levels

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[Koryn Ross · Rating 3 out of 5]

Great Story, Poorly Executed

This story has absolutely wonderful potential. I love the story line, the diverse characters, and the mystery and intrigue interwoven with the plot. But, in my personal opinion, it’s just poorly executed. I’ve highlighted a couple of points in the story where entire phrases were repeated, a small bit of misspelling here and there which is actually very easy to look over, and just “ehh?” moments.
Those moments mostly consist of scenes where the character’s actions don’t align with the character’s personality.
Example being Aria bonding with the alpha that hurt her the most first while not entirely forgiving the rest of the pack. It would have made more sense for her to bond with the alpha she was still on good terms with rather than the guy that she hasn’t completely forgiven. It was a very big, “ehh, that’s not really right” moment. And almost everything after that before she completely forgives them just read off as odd. Because it didn’t match with her character or where they were at in the story.
The other bits where phrases or descriptions made that could have easily been reworded to; One, fit the character better. And two, add more depth and understanding to the scene being played out. Otherwise, it’s a good story, I would just hope the author revisits it and has a retelling correcting some of these flaws before I read it again.

[Angela · Rating 3 out of 5]

Hunted Omega Pt 2 is the conclusion to the first set of Duologies set in the world of Puritan City. Aria has left the home of Pack Clarke after they found out her secret and made it known how betrayed they felt.

This book was ALL over the place. Certain things were explained in one chapter and then later completely forgotten. I feel like Aria was so wishy-washy, her friends were wishy-washy and things were repeated over and over in different chapters like it was the first time it was being said. The concept of time seemed all over the place and just like in the first book, the guys seemed to be making rookie mistakes for a company that was supposed to be a successful business.

I could appreciate Aria and her decision to not just jump right back into the packs arms. And I was glad that the guys knew they had their own issues to work on and got the help they needed. I really wanted to like this book but I was ready to DNF at about 50%. I pushed through to the end because I thought the concept of the book was really good but unfortunately it just didn't get any better for me.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

[Sue · Rating 1 out of 5]

I am beyond pissed! Not only does Aria make up with Zane before two of the other pack mates but she bonded with him first. He treated her the worse and did absolutely no groveling yet gets rewarded. At this point I just skimmed the rest.

And then she proceeded to distrust the pack asking why they care so much and that she was going to do things on her own terms because she wasn't their property and wasn't ready to forgive them. Then why did she bond with Zane? Make it make sense.

I also hated how she continued to be guard up against Malachi and Dash. I felt horrible for Dash. For some idiotic reason, Aria gave him the most wrath claiming her hurt her and that he would have a lot of making up to do. Why? But everytime it came to Zane all she wanted to do was "move forward". She didn't make him sweat one bit, of all people smh.

The story was completely useless with utter nonsense. The author must've gotten confused with her characters and/or storyline because I see no other explanations for this mess.

[Alexia · Rating 1 out of 5]

Reading this was honestly painful. There’s so many errors throughout the entire book that I would be confused more often than not. There are sentences/paragraphs that are repeated word for word and conversations that have already happened being immediately discussed again but play out slightly different. There would be a scene that played out in one POV and then the next chapter is the same scene with another POV, except the scene/conversation is different. There was one point where they decided to stay in their cabin for the first time, but they’d been staying there for several chapters already?? So many things about Aria’s decisions made no sense, like how she was so pissed at Quinn for not telling the pack she was an omega when she was the one who demanded he keep it a secret… The only reason I didn’t DNF was because I wanted to know how things turned out with Noah but even that was underwhelming. Honestly I could keep going but unless this duet undergoes some significant editing, I would stay away.

[Louise Harrison · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hunted Omega Part 2 is the conclusion to Aria’s story and is set in the Puritan City Alphas universe. After really enjoying the first book in this story I was looking forward to reading this book and finding out how Aria and the packs story concluded. Nothing was what I suspected in this book which was brilliant, there were lots of surprises throughout. The story itself was really good, I found myself completely immersed in the story and I really loved every minute of reading it. I really liked the characters and I loved the fact that each character was on their own individual journeys as well as the journey they took together. Overall, this was an absolutely brilliant book and a great conclusion to Aria’s story. It left me feeling satisfied at the end, but also curious as to where the next book in the series is going to go.

[Leisel · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a brilliant conclusion to the two part series of Hunted Omega. As a new Author and a reader still new to the world of Omegaverse I was really pleased with this Author's version of reverse harem romance storytelling.
Loved the character of the lead female Aria, she was everything I had hoped for and more and well her four fated mates of the Clark pack were every bit the Alphas I think we'd all love in our lives.
A well created plot filled with action, dramas, betrayal, comraderie, girl power, resiliency and emotional strength and enough moodiness to really heat up those scenarios between an Omega and her Alphas.
Also a really great crew of secondary characters which I know have their own hidden back stories which will entice readers back for more.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Mellissa Johnson · Rating 4 out of 5]

almost there

Overall, this is a decent read. I love the concept of the story and did enjoy it. My biggest gripe is that the timing of events in the chapters do not make sense to me. Without understanding if days, weeks, or months have gone by, everything just seems odd to me. At the end of the first book, it feels like the guys have searched for her for hours, but come back home to find the letter about their scent match…but that might have been weeks? And she appears to forgive the guys in a matter of days/a couple weeks (at most), but that doesn’t really correspond to the guy’s POV timelines. Really, I would rate the story more 3.5 stars but I will round up because I did enjoy the concept of the story and finished it. Interested to read the next book in the series.

[Nicole Deanne Veracruz · Rating 2 out of 5]

I am completely lost. I feel like the first book in this book don't match up at all. The Cliffhanger that it was left off on in the first book doesn't match up to how the second book starts. Also Aria is playing the victim like the pack wronged her and ginger Willow and Cayenne are all backing her and bashing them like they did something wrong. When they did nothing wrong she's the one that lied and deceived them. I don't understand why there was this big boy for the guys to change and be better to win her back when she was the one in the wrong this book makes no sense. I almost felt like I was reading books that were written by different people because they didn't match up.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

[Katie · Rating 5 out of 5]

While the first book of the duet dealt with Aria’s fears and past, her escape from her abusive ex and finding Pack Clarke, the second book deals with with her coming into her own and realizing omega doesn’t mean weak. I loved the relationship between Aria and her best friends Cayenne and Ginger - HER pack and strongest supporters. It felt like this book took place early in the Omegaverse as she first accepted Noah, a single Alpha without a pack, and later seemed unsure of how pack dynamics work. I did like how she stuck to her guns - wanting to be wanted and loved as Aria, not just as an omega. Lots of heat, angst and action. Good story but a bit long.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

[Charlotte · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hunted Omega is the 2nd and last book in this duet that's part of the Puritan City Alpha's series. After the fallout of book 1 Aria (FMC) is left picking up the pieces of her life and starting a new one. Only for her Ex Noah and the 4 Alphas - Malachi, Quinn, Zane and Cash to break through to upset the new life she's started. I loved Aria's friendship with Cayenne and the other girls. A much needed sense of humour and backing for Aria in this book. I had a slight problem for me was how quickly Aria seemed to forgive the guys especially Zane. To me I didn't tell like they grovelled enough. Other than that the loose ends were tied up brilliantly. A great read and now I'm looking forward to Cayenne's book.

[Kimberly · Rating 5 out of 5]

Just loved this omega books. Aria had had a tough life and trying to start news. Scared of her own shadow she stays hidden and lays low. Until one night she asks her bestie to help get her a ride. Cheyenne is cunning and the best friend a girl could have. Their first meeting was eventful and Quinn was truly a breath of fresh air. Dash is a puppy dog with a bone and so adorbs. Malachi is the pack leader and Zane is harden. Together they all try to help Aria even though she is hinting something they vow to protect her. What a cliffy that was but at least we don’t have to wait too long.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

[Kassie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hands down, this was such an amazing read. I am waiting for book 2 now to come out with the way this one ended on that cliffhanger.

Trigger warning, there are numerous triggers in this book, so please be warned.

She is being hunted by a very evil Ex. Who would do anything to get his Omega back.

The FMC is a Omega who is always in hiding that takes Meds to smell like a beta. Her bestie would be anything to help her out.

She meets her pack by accident. Meet pack Clarke, 4 wonderful Alphas. Who aren't really looking for a Omega at the moment.

I loved this Omegaverse so much and can't wait to read more from this Author

[t schmoeger · Rating 3 out of 5]

Loved half of it

I loved the first half of the book, and then began the missteps and plot holes -so big you could drive a truck through them. This included confronting a politician and being shocked he didn't to over, making a big deal about deciding to go public for it to to nowhere 2 chapters after, to spending 2 chapters to discovering an incoming shipment and then not following through with any action to stop it or bring it to resolution. It all just seemed rushed in the second half, like they tried to cram too much in and it made the whole second half fail to resonate.

[Patilyn Lowery · Rating 2 out of 5]

Part 2?

This book was an interesting end to the story. While the plot was good I felt like I was re-reading the same thing over and over. Same scenes and same dialogue. Anytime one alpha said something all of the other alphas had to say the same thing.
It also kind of felt like a weird ending that wasn't actually an ending. I wanted to like it but found myself getting distracted because it was the same thing over and over.
**Slight spoiler** why did they keep letting Noah get away? It doesn't make sense. Like they let him get away when the police were coming.
Part one was good and this left me disappointed.

[Jeanéva Christie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Love this series.
Aria is no longer hiding that she is an omega. Now she hides from the four alphas she lived with before they turned on her. She may think she is somewhat safe from her abusive ex, but life is never that simple. When Aria receives mail, stating she has been matched with the Clarke pack, she is downright furious. She is an unregistered omega, and she never permitted anyone to match her with a pack, even if they are the four alphas for which she has a candle burning. Prepare for groveling as Malachi, Dash, Quinn, and Zane jump through hoops to protect and reclaim Aria. There is danger and adventure as this pack comes together. I can't wait to read Cayenne's book.

[Catherine · Rating 3 out of 5]

Poorly edited and executed follow on

I read this following part 1 yesterday. It continued with poor editing showing repeated paragraphs, scenarios frequently throughout the book.

The evidence for the things the pack were making up for wasn’t demonstrated clearly enough in book 1 to make sense in book 2 and the plot therefore had numerous holes throughout. I did read to the end to see what would happen but found the whole book frustrating and dissatisfying especially the ending.

I’m really disappointed given how promising book 1 was. Please consider an editor, proofreading more thoroughly or asking for beta readers as I feel all of this could have been overcome.

[Tonia Rodriguez · Rating 1 out of 5]

This was a good start to the series. There were parts that the author said the characters said or didnone thing and then started the next chapter with them having said or done something else. And one section where a conversation that could have been important was completely left out and we only get the results of it, but the characters are likeable and understandable. The storyline is well thought out and there is lots of room for improvement on the skipping and story holes. Overall a good start.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

[Chris06 · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book completely held me in its spell. I couldn’t put it down once I started … 4 am and I really want the next book.

I love Dash and Quinn…

Zane and Malachi… they were growing on me

Each of them let their past interfere with their present and possible future….

Logan .. I mean what the heck … and those boys aren’t smart enough to question his appearance and always being there when something happens??

And that call at the end ???? Really ????

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.