Ok so, i could not focus on the romance in this book at all because I was way too caught up in how little the actual F1 elements of this story made sense (and how we spent waaaaaay too much of this book focusing on racing vs romance- the pacing of this book was awful but that’s another thing). I guess normally sports romances don’t bother me too much because other sports leagues are so much larger than F1, so it’s a lot easier to suspend your disbelief about a fake team existing or about the actual sports elements. But F1 is literally only 20 guys, so it’s impossible not to feel like the author is trying to portray real people.
The whole thing made me so uncomfortable- I’m definitely not at all into fanfiction about real people, I think it’s invasive and weird, and nothing about this even pretended not to be blatantly ripping off almost every driver’s likeness, including real rivalries between real drivers and actual team dynamics. The author did not even attempt to make this book a completely different F1 reality- we got the exact same drama and teams as the most recent seasons. The driver portrayals were so absurd it would border on being funny if it weren’t creepy as hell.
when I wasn’t uncomfortable with the way-too-real driver portrayals, I was laughing at how unrealistic any actual racing was in this book. For other fellow f1 fans to laugh at with me, in no order:
* driver is ordered to DNF because of a “technical issue,” but really the team principal just didn’t like him and ordered him to DNF to make him look bad (pretty sure the FIA would have an issue with this)
* driver is ordered to stay behind his teammate in p11 for the entire race despite having better pace than him (0.5 seconds 😭) bc the team principal doesn’t like him, so they finish the race p11 and p12
* Team principal has a dinner with “key drivers” and does not include one of the drivers on his own team to make him look bad
* Midfield driver fights and overtakes Hamilton, I mean “zaid yousef” for p1. Said driver is doing this on slicks despite the fact that it was just pouring rain and maintains this lead for the remaining 68 laps of the race
* Driver is surprised when a 6 car crash leads to a red flag, and also said red flag isn’t called for like, a full minute
* 3 American drivers on the grid, including a team where they only employ Americans by policy (is this legal?)
* Also these fucking driver names had me rolling 😭😭 she did not even a little bit try to make the names sound different; idk how no one stopped this in the editing room: bottas=otto, max=axel, norris=mcmorris. hell the fmc’s last name is williams
The only slightly redeemable thing was me jokingly telling my alonso stan bf that I bet the main guy was going to be based on Alonso, and then he literally was based on alonso if for nothing but the fact that the author made his teammate a nepo baby driver whose dad owns his team 😭
Once I stop laughing/cringing at the racing aspect of this book, I’m reminded it’s supposed to be a romance and then realize I can’t wrap my head around the relationship between hero/heroine at all. We spend so much of this book literally time jumping and starting chapters off with “and then I liked him even more!” There is 0 show, this book is ALL tell, and yet it moved so damn slowly.
I was not rooting for them at all- Alonso, I mean Dev’s manager, who told him not to date Willow (yes fmc’s name is fucking willow williams), was right. I will admit I found myself skipping through the few moments of romantic development we got (interactions between willow/Alonso were unironically few and far between) bc I wanted to laugh at how bad the racing was even more. Honestly there are no stakes, the exact conflicts you think will come in do, and are brought up and resolved within about 5 pages at the 95% mark. Truly bland
Girl this is not drive to survive and you are not crofty, this is wattpad fanfic that should not have left the drafts 😭
Also my favorite driver got no air time in this book. Justice for guanyu not even getting a shitty stand-in at all.
PS: the epilogue is actually fucking insane 😭😭😭😭 I can’t even get into it. Why did she paralyze leclerc for no reason?? The book was over why did she do that??? It has no bearing on the plot I’m in tears 😭😭 what did leclerc do to you