Technical:
- kaya basahin ng isang upuan, maikli lang sha
- may ilang grammatical errors lang (mga apat HWHSHSHAHAHAH mej meticulous kasi em sa grammar), fault na ni publisher/copywriter yun
-ganda the quality so much, mej maliit lang fonts pero I think normal naman yun sa pop fiction books
Characters:
- Medyo messed up ang characters— lalo na yung main villain, pero they all have their reasons. Parang di mo sila kayang ihate (except dun sa reason why sila napunta sa dollhouse)
- May variations ang characters, hindi sila parang carbon copy ng isa't isa
- I LOVE FLAMEEE SOOOO MUUCHHH
- Over sa loyal sa isa't isa HAHSHAHAHAHAHAH
- I hated lang yung isa sa kanila:(( I think that's not valid babe
- I think kaya pa nilang gawing more gruesome yung reason why sila nasa dollhouse. Mej kulang sha. Di dasurb ng Decagon (tawag sa friend group nila) nangyari sa kanila tbh WHSHAHAHAHAHAHHA
Storytelling:
- Love the POVS so so muchhh🫶🫶🫶 kasi you can distinguish which character is talking (may names na nakalagay, pero kahit wala yun maiintindihan pa rin)
- The kind ng book na mapagtatagpi tagpi lang ang pieces kapag natapos mo
- walang plot holes, although I feel like mej pilit ibang ships (pero that's just me WHHSHAHAAHAHAH you can feel naman tne chemistry, pero liek— siguro dat mas may background pa)
- Bilis ng phasing ng games (can be good or bad depends sa preference mo) pero I think mabilis phasing ng games for the sake talaga ng characters, so that di mawala sa plot.
Plot:
- SHEEEESSHHH LOVE EETTTT
- The plot twist omg?!?! Hindi sha mahahalata pero I think mas better ang unang outcome huhuhu😬😬😬
- yung ending is a hit or a miss, depends sa'yo kung maganda sha or nah. Pero for me, nde aq fan ng ganung ending AHSHHSHAHAHAHAH
- Walang tapon ✋️✋️✋️
Lastly, I wish it was longer💔💔💔