Author P J A Cahill contacted me to review his book N.I.C.E.F (Neutral-interface Controlled Exo Frame.) A YA space opera inspired by mecha and battle academy anime. Roughly 1000 pages long, Cahill takes us on a journey of inclusivity, sticking it to the big man, defiance and inner strength. Although there are lots of battles throughout the book, it feels cosy and warm, most certainly a safe space to get lost in for hours at a time. Although advertised towards younger audiences, I think this is an enjoyable read for people of any age. It’s written so well and with so much inclusion that everyone should feel welcome and a part of Cahills demographic.
Characters:
Cahills characters are mainly school aged teenagers, with a couple of adults sprinkled in. Each character shows immense emotional intelligence and depth. Communication is a forefront in priorities in this book. I think this adds to the legitimacy of the plot as well, due to the character dialogue there is little to no space for plot holes. Everything the reader thinks, or questions is usually answered between the characters themselves.
As my usual readers know, I am always looking for well written women and Cahill lived up to my expectations. Every female character is strong, smart and has purpose and agency. From the youngest to the eldest characters, each woman knows their own mind, has set goals and never deviates. I’m not sure if intended, but it does feel like Cahill has written a feminist powerhouse and I absolutely love it! Women are so often over sexualised in anime’s and sci-fis, but Cahill avoids anything problematic. In an ideal world this wouldn’t need to be mentioned or celebrated, but I’ve read too many books, this year alone, that have proved that we still need to champion authors like Cahill.
Even romantic relationships in the book, between young teenagers, are written with maturity, consent and safety in mind. Although the romances don’t go above PG (as it should be in a YA book!) There is an age gap which is discussed by the characters involved and friends of the characters. I really liked this as, although I already know about the dangers (I was a victim myself when I was a teenager) this will educated Cahills readers, this might be the first time that teenagers come across an age gap and they will learn what to question, what's safe, when it’s okay and when it isn’t.
An honourable mention without giving spoilers, one of the characters is a morally grey woman hell bent on vengeance, and dear reader, I love her. She gives every book girlfriend trope you could ask for and she is an adult so it's okay for me to simp over her before you worry she’s one of the teenagers I have already written about!
Keeping the inclusive bus running, Cahill includes the queer community with representation via a sapphic relationship. Again, this is so important in a YA as it shows that firstly, it’s okay to be your true self and love whoever you want to, but also that its normal if your friend comes out and nothing should change between you. Allyship is such an important lesson to teach and Cahill does that so well with his writing.
Plot
The plot follows House Aroi, but not all students in the house were Aroi themselves. They are students often trodden on by society, victims of the elite medical companies and their large bills. Pushed out from other houses because they dared to oppose the choices of the elite. They are joined by a mysterious powerful student who has her own agenda to the house, but gets swayed to abandon it for the greater good. The plot follows how the students navigate a world not welcoming of them, and how they rise through the ranks. There are darker themes of genocide, racism and erasure, very real hideous things going on in our world right now. But handled with the best of humanity, resilience and family. The rise of the Aroi and those trodden on for so long is so heartwarming, tears were shed and dialogue sent shivers and goosebumps racing up and down your body. Aroi victare!
Feedback
I do feel like the chapters need to be shorter for an easier reading experience. I think there are 18 chapters but it's around 1000 pages long. You can't ‘just finish the chapter’ before you go to bed etc. Especially for younger audiences who don’t have long attention spans. I also felt like the dialogue doesn't flow as well as it could in places, there is over use of ... and stuttering, I know the stuttering probably comes from the anime side of it and at first I didn’t even notice, but after a while it started to take a bit more effort.
The book felt like it came to a satisfying conclusion at 70% but with 300 pages left I kept waiting for something bad to go wrong or another plot development. Instead it was just a long happy ending, focusing on the individual members of Aroi House. For me personally this was too long, I prefer succinct endings but if you love to lose yourself in the lives after the story then you'll really enjoy it. This is purely a preference.
Overall I think this book deserves 4 stars! Fit for all ages, this YA is there to educate and provide a safe welcoming space for all.