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In retrospect, it might not have been the wisest idea to hand in my v-card to a hot librarian I picked up at my mother’s cocktail party.

In my defense, the man has a French accent, gray hair, and knows a lot about books. The cards were really stacked against me making good choices, folks.

I was probably naïve to expect a call after that, but when he didn’t, it hurt to accept he didn’t feel that same connection I did.

If that isn’t a sign you need to make a change, I don’t know what is. Too bad the “change” I get is six months in a remote French chateau, working as a nanny to an adorable little girl. Who happens to be the daughter of the single dad I had sex with in a grocery store parking lot.

Ellis Delvaux has made it clear he isn’t interested in a relationship. Unfortunately, when you’re a hopeless romantic spending that much time with someone you’re attracted to, in what might be the most beautiful place on the planet, things happen.

And sometimes, to avoid those things happening, you come up with a list of rules to facilitate six-months of secret, no strings attached sex with a man who is as off-limits as it gets.

What could go wrong?

282 pages, Paperback

Published August 14, 2024

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Cleo White

17 books1,341 followers
Cleo White's affinity for all things dramatic and hopelessly romantic began the day she was born, which happened to be in the middle of a record-breaking snowstorm on Valentine’s Day. Her love of literature came soon after, and she spent the better part of her childhood with both a book and a notebook full of unfinished stories in hand. Later in life, she found a love of writing spicy books with complicated characters and dysfunctional family drama. Cleo currently lives in Vermont with her husband and two daughters. When not writing, she can be found hiking, gardening, painting, and consuming excessive quantities of caffeine.

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646 reviews219 followers
August 15, 2026
Second Edition by Cleo White

5/5 stars

This book really surprised me in the best way possible. I instantly liked it and it felt like a solid 4 star book. But the further along I got the more I fell in love with the characters and the harder I started to love it. When I read the last few words I knew this was a five star read for me. This book feels so wholesome and it just made me truly happy while reading it.

Second Edition is the story of Josephine and Ellis. Josephine is a 22-year old dedicated student who never rebelled in her teens and as a young adult. She wants to take a break to find out what she really wants. But her parents are involved in her college and want her to finish her education and start working on her career. Jo is attending a party her parents organized but she feels really out of place. 

Ellis is a father of a young girl with autism and is struggling to juggle his job and raising her since his ex-wife left the both of them. He is attending the party to talk to Jo's mother and beg for her understanding that he will get everything in order very quickly. 

When Jo gets overwhelmed she flees the party and locks herself in a quiet room. The second she sighs she hears a voice and realizes a man is there. He is older than her, graying hair, but she is instantly drawn to him. They decide to leave together and make dinner together. But they never make it home. The tension sizzles between the two of them and after they leave the supermarket they fall into each other's arms in the car and have an intense and all-consuming moment.

Josephine gives him her number but he never calls her. Ellis needs to put his baby girl Zoe first. But faith isn't done with them. Jo's mother arranges a 6 month sabbatical for her daughter. She will travel to France to be a nanny for a man who is working for the college. When she meets the man she realizes it's Ellis and the hurt that he never called her stings. 

Everything changes the second Josephine meets Zoe. They immediately kick off and Zoe even starts talking to Jo. Which she rarely does to others. Ellis and Josephine decide to go on that trip and it will be Ellis' job to catalogue an entire library left behind by a man who left his library to the college.

I really, really loved this story. Ellis is such a kind man. He is super respectful towards Josephine and he is the best father for Zoe. I like his gentle personality and I love how he takes care of those around him. He's honest, open and someone to be admired. He truly is a gentle soul. But is also a beast in the bedroom. I must admit that I often can't get into books where the man is super kind and wild in bed. I often feel a disconnect between the two and it doesn't feel natural at all. But in this one. I loved the change Ellis goes through when he truly wants someone. I love that his gentle soul and his darker urges complement each other and I never felt any disconnect at all. Cleo truly nailed his personality.

Josephine is an amazing person and I love how straightforward and honest she is. I love that she isn't afraid to speak up and that she is not afraid of failure. She is such a strong woman and I love how she loves Zoe. And speaking about Zoe. She was by far my favorite character in this book. She has such a beautiful heart and I love how perceptive and kind she is. And that little time jump at the end of the book where we see Zoe as a teen felt so wholesome and made me grin instantly. Feisty Zoe stole my heart as well.

Ellis' mother was also such a joyful character and I love how down to earth and forthcoming she was right from the get go.

This book just felt wholesome and it made my heart thump with joy. But the spicy scenes. Goodness gracious they truly burned right through me. I really loved how well Cleo White balanced those two elements perfectly together.

There is also another small storyline woven through this book that explains the title of the book. I was immediately invested in that storyline and I love how it evolved and made sense in the end. ♥

So that's why this beauty deserves 5 stars! And I will definitely reread this one in the future. ♥
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927 reviews166 followers
June 18, 2025
I didn't really care enough about these characters or their antics. But the smut was excellent.
A decent read overall.

Story: 3 ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Narration: 3 ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Heat Level: 4 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
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190 reviews23 followers
July 29, 2024
“𝕀𝕗 𝕚𝕥’𝕤 𝕗𝕠𝕠𝕝𝕚𝕤𝕙 𝕥𝕠 𝕡𝕣𝕖𝕥𝕖𝕟𝕕 𝕨𝕖’𝕣𝕖 𝕟𝕠𝕥 𝕒𝕥𝕥𝕣𝕒𝕔𝕥𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕠 𝕖𝕒𝕔𝕙 𝕠𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕣, 𝕚𝕥 𝕤𝕖𝕖𝕞𝕤 𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕟 𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 𝕗𝕠𝕠𝕝𝕚𝕤𝕙 𝕥𝕠 𝕡𝕣𝕖𝕥𝕖𝕟𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕞𝕖𝕒𝕟𝕤 𝕟𝕠𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘.”

• Now listen, I can’t give away too much because I had the exclusive early access, how lucky am I? But, let me tell you this, I absolutely cherish these two and their story.

• Josephine aka Jo, I want a friend like this chick. She is just sweet as can be, smart, caring. The best kind of woman. But she’s also super fierce in her own way. She makes a big life change in the beginning that causes a huge domino effect. Ultimately intertwining them.

• Ellis, this man!!! French, librarian, single dad? His life is sort of a mess, but he’s doing his best. He is so swoon worthy, with his little French words and that dominant beast lingering under his cool and suave demeanor. He’s also, an incredible dad.

• His autistic daughter Zoe, my little babe, of course a huge part of the story as well. You’ll fall in love with her just as much as the MCs.

• Basically, if the tropes are for you, then I cannot recommend this book enough. Cleo writes books that make you smile, giggle, and sweat. They’re always these couples that completely capture you. I am impatiently waiting and looking forward to the next one.
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1,745 reviews586 followers
August 18, 2024
Awnnn this story is so beautiful, my heart is full of love! It’s simple but shows the strength and connection between the characters. Great read.
It’s worth reading!
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334 reviews47 followers
August 14, 2024
Daddy Ellis oh my goodness I can't say enough about that man Zoe is adorable :) jo is amazing she is everything Zoe and Ellis needed .maude is one of my favorites .the end of chapter 13 oh lord right there and then I wish I was Josephine in that scene. Ellis definitely gives off "Daddy" he can be my daddy any day .he on my list forever
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2,726 reviews16.3k followers
October 4, 2025
Such a good age gap, forbidden romance! She's in college and the daughter of the university president and hooks up with someone at her parents' faculty party. He happens to be the university's librarian and had assumed she was faculty, not a student. She decides to not finish school, and her mom isn't happy, so when they hear about a position in France to go through a library of rare second editions, her mom offers the job to the librarian and offers her daughter to be the nanny for his daughter, who he says he must bring along. I loved the setting of being at this huge estate in France where the hero was going through the library. His daughter was adorable and connected with the heroine so well. And obviously they can't ignore their feelings being so close for so long...

Cleo White knows how to write addicting age gaps where they just cannot resist their attraction towards one another and I love it!!
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1,191 reviews303 followers
December 1, 2024
*+:。.。 Re-read: 5 stars 。.。:+*
"I wish to fall in love."

This book is so beautiful.

Josephine was such a mature and well-rounded character. She was thoughftul and kind, yet had a lot of respect for herself, which was shown through her actions.

"How did wanting to be happy and fall in love become a shameful, lesser desire?"

Ellis was real and flawed, but just such a compelling character. Together they made an amazing match. I'm obsessed with everything about this.


"I hate that I have no firsts to offer you, but if I can heal what I've broken between us, I swear on my life you'll have all my lasts."

CW's writing is a great example of the fact that a story doesn't have to be flashy or dramatic to be compelling. I loved this so much.

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(original read)

Everything about this book was stunning- from the cover to the characters, and to the meaning behind the name. This was such a real and thoughtful novel, and I genuinely enjoyed everything about it. The way that the MCs understood each other was just so special.

I genuinely didn't expect to love the book this much- and I can 100% see myself re-reading it in the future. I wished that this was longer 😭. CW has done it again 🥹.
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765 reviews1,400 followers
July 27, 2025
I absolutely ADORED this book. Jo is the daughter of the university president. Going into her senior year, Jo withdraws from school, needing a change from the stringent routine that has been laid out for her. Hiding during one of her mother’s host events, she meets Ellis (the university librarian), who becomes her one night stand. She doesn’t hear from him again until they are sitting across from each other in the president’s office, with Jo being offered as Ellis’ nanny during her time off, and Ellis now realizing exactly who it is he spent the night with.

Jo and Ellis had an easy chemistry from the moment they met. Their interactions never felt forced. They met each other at a time when they needed each other. Jo needed to find a new purpose in life, which she found during her time with Ellis and his daughter, Zoe. She learned to stand up for herself and fight for what she wanted out of life and love. Ellis needed someone who loved him and his daughter unconditionally, after the trauma of his marriage. He had begun to think himself unworthy of love but slowly realized it’s all about finding the right person.

The setting being the countryside of France was so nice and lended a relaxed feel to the story. Jo and Zoe’s relationship was precious. But can we talk about how HOT these two were behind closed doors? Ellis brought a new meaning to librarian Daddy kink and I wasn’t mad at it. He was obsessed with Jo both in and out of the bedroom, which translated to them having a physical relationship that felt like more than just sex.

I ate this up and will definitely be reading more of this author’s backlist!

What to Expect: single dad/nanny, age gap (14 years), forbidden, one night stand, librarian H, autism rep, Daddy kink, set in France countryside

Trigger Warnings: mentions of cheating (described in the past), parental abandonment, mental health discussions
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99 reviews93 followers
December 15, 2024
Tropes:
🍓 forbidden romance
🌿 single dad/nanny
📚 second chance
🍓 cottagecore vibes
🌿 forced proximity
📚 age gap
🍓 set in a french chateau
🌿 pra!se and d@ddy k!nkś

I took my sweet time reading this book because I wanted to savor every single word and I never wanted to let these characters go.
I honestly loved everything about this novel.
The relationship between Jo and Zoe was so pure. I couldn’t help falling in love with honey girl the same way Jo has. It’s always heartwarming when we get to see one of the main characters fall in love with their partner’s kid, especially when they have special needs.
Josephine and I have a lot in common, and seeing her finally stand up for herself and become her own person was the cherry on top.
I don't even know what to say about Ellis. He really is the package deal. Good man, even better father. He’s a librarian, and on top of it all, he is a dirty talker and dominant in the bedroom. The perfect man, if you ask me. Unfortunately, that's how I know he was written by a woman. Sure, I wanted to smack some sense into him at some point, but it’s okay, I forgive him.

I feel like the letters Ellis kept finding deserve a special mention because they were both so beautiful and heart-wrenching all at once.
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48 reviews
July 29, 2024
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.5/🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

Thank you Cleo White for the opportunity to read the ARC of Second Edition!


It was a genuine pleasure to read the journey of Ellis and Jo. Their chemistry was seriously off the charts, and their emotional connection had me 100% invested from the start. (I actually had to pause on another book midway through to read this one the second I got my hands on it LOL 🫣)

The forbidden romance, forced-proximity, and second chance made this one a must read for me, and I was not disappointed!

These characters were so real and human in their flaws and choices, but so enchanting at the same time with the love and trust they fought for.
The title is so fitting, the FMC is extremely relatable, and the love story told is one I can truly appreciate.

As always, Cleo White has some incredibly tasteful and moving mental health/disability representation, and I felt very seen by one of the characters in this book which just makes it extra special in my heart. ♥️

I honestly loved this book so much and definitely recommend checking it out if you enjoy an emotional romantic age-gap.

P.S. I wanna play chess with Ellis.😩🙏🏻
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672 reviews73 followers
August 14, 2024
Oh my goodness!!! This was so undeniably cute, steamy, and full of heart!

I first discovered Cleo White with her book You’re It and just KNEW she was going to be one of my favorite authors. Second Edition, my second Cleo White, proved me absolutely right.

What I liked about the book:
1. Let’s start with our little found family. I loved both of our MCs, ESPECIALLY since they both had visible flaws!

Jo was a sexually inexperienced, burnt out, perfect daughter people pleaser, and if a character has ever been more relatable to me I’m not sure who it was. I loved that she was so bold and competent, but never came across as conceited. She definitely had the skills to pay the bills when it came to being a nanny to Zoe, and she treated it as an equal partnership rather than an adult telling a child what to do. She was just such an adorable main character that I was rooting for her the entire time!

Ellis was an older, divorced, single dad with commitment issues. I loved how nervous he was with Jo!! It was like she was his first crush, given the amount of time between now and his divorce and how strong his feelings were for her. It was completely adorable to watch him falter because of nerves.

I loved that they both did “everything right” and ended up unhappy before meeting each other. I didn’t love the ending up unhappy before they met each other part, but the feeling of doing everything that you are supposed to do on paper and still being unhappy and not at all content is so f*cking relatable. I loved that they both were afflicted with this, so they could connect on this and make their lives happier together.

2. I am a total ho for age gap romances! Toss in the daddy kink like in this one and I.AM.DEAD!!

What I especially appreciate about Cleo’s age gap romances is her ability to create something that makes me feel giddy and like no power imbalance is present.

- Despite Jo being 22-years old, she definitely stood up for herself against Ellis, but she also had incredible depth when it came to understanding why he did the things he did. I also admired that at this young age, she knew that her current life track wasn’t working so she swiftly changed tracks even though she was scared and her mother was trying to convince her not to. She may not have known what she wanted to do yet, but she knew what she didn’t want to do and she acted on it. That is such a great character trait, especially in someone so young, and I felt like she was so adult and mature because of it.

- I loved that Ellis was a total gentleman, often concerning himself with if her shoes would hurt her feet, how she would feel in certain situations, etc. But he was also this deeply insecure man based on the events life had thrown at him. He most definitely messed up several times in the story, but he made up for it in the end.

Side note, I loved how Ellis’s mom kept telling him that he was going to f*ck everything up with Jo! It was perfect and such a QUEEN move!

3. I have definitely been getting more into the single dad x nanny variety lately as well, and this one was done so well. I can’t speak enough about how great the Jo x Zoe relationship was and how much I loved them together to my core.

4. I loved the autism representation in this book. I felt it was described very well and without judgment on Zoe, Ellis’s daughter. I also loved how Jo researched even the most minute things to be able to connect better with Zoe and really foster that partnership relationship Zoe needed, rather than ruling with an iron fist.

5. While not a romcom, the book was definitely funny and had me chuckling throughout, which appears to be a staple in Cleo White books 😊

6. I loved the side story running throughout the book. I felt it was terribly romantic and tragic, but wasn’t daunting to the overall storyline.

7. Finally, we got the quintessential Cleo White gentleman in the streets, dirty talker in the sheets that makes me giggle and flush profusely!

Here are a few of my favorite lines:

“Is all this for me, mon amour? Have I made this pretty little pussy wet?”

- UGGGGGGGHHHHH the French pet name makes this even better!!

“Come on, mon amour. Come for me. My cock aches. I need you to make it better. You’ll do that for me, won’t you? You’ll take the ache away?”

- God, I would do anything for this man and his ache.

“You get my cock when I say, sweetheart, and not a moment before.”

- Yes, daddy

“I’m going to have you every night, mon amour. Your c*nt will get wet whenever I walk into the room, because you’ll remember how good I make it feel.”

- *dripping*

8. And here are a few lines I liked that weren’t dirty talk 😉

I’m tired of working so hard to succeed at something that has done nothing but make me miserable.

- GIRL! YES!!!

I’m twenty-two years old. If this isn’t my panties era, will I ever have one?

- Go get those sexy panties STAT, Girl!!

There’s something quietly intelligent about her, as if she’s spent a good amount of time figuring out how to cover it up so as not to make people uncomfortable. I wish she wouldn’t. There’s nothing I’d like more than to be wildly intimidated by this woman.

- F*CK YES!!!! This is the uplifting MMC we all want!

Something about his tone, which sounds as though he’s practiced being strong even when he’s so clearly exhausted, makes my heart twist with sympathy.

- This is such incredible depth and analysis on her part.

Thank you to Cleo White for the opportunity to read a copy of this book. The thoughts and opinions expressed above are honest and my own.

4.5 stars!
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771 reviews71 followers
August 18, 2024
This was my first rendezvous with Cleo White and I really enjoyed her writing! Thanks to one of my book besties for her super gorg edit on Instagram which prompted me to download this!

second edition follows quiet librarian Ellis and the University’s Presidents daughter, Josephine. Following a quick bang in a supermarket carpark 😂 Josephine unexpectedly becomes Ellis’ nanny when he takes a position abroad. Now look, I don’t usually vibe with Insta love, and yes the connection probably could have been deeper BUT this book was A GOOD TIME. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Ellis’ daughter Zoe played a crucial and pivotal part in this book. The relationship she established with Jo was so beautiful; it literally had me tearing up over the smallest things. I just loved it so much, you could just feel Zoe coming out of her shell as the book went on. Their relationship was ultimately Ellis’ undoing.

“𝙄𝙛 𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙤𝙛𝙛𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙙 𝙢𝙚 𝙖 𝙢𝙞𝙡𝙡𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙙𝙤𝙡𝙡𝙖𝙧𝙨 𝙩𝙤 𝙡𝙤𝙤𝙠 𝙖𝙬𝙖𝙮, 𝙄’𝙢 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙛𝙞𝙙𝙚𝙣𝙩 𝙄 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙙𝙤 𝙞𝙩. 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙬𝙖𝙮 𝙨𝙝𝙚 𝙩𝙖𝙡𝙠𝙨 𝙩𝙤 𝙢𝙮 𝙜𝙞𝙧𝙡… 𝙈𝙚𝙧𝙙𝙚.”

“𝙂𝙞𝙫𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙢𝙮𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛 𝙥𝙚𝙧𝙢𝙞𝙨𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙩𝙤 𝙛𝙖𝙡𝙡 𝙞𝙣 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙅𝙤𝙨𝙚𝙥𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙚 𝙎𝙪𝙩𝙩𝙤𝙣 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙤𝙨𝙩 𝙣𝙖𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙖𝙡 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙.”

The reason this book is called “second edition”. Stick a fork in me. It was lovely. I love how it came full circle. AND THE SPICE. Ellis, the dirty librarian. WOW! This book had so many of my favourite things.

I really enjoyed this, and I’ll definitely be hitting up Cleo’s backlist!

Read if you like:
- cottage core vibes
- single Dad x nanny
- forced proxmity
- age gap (F 22 / M 34)
- D@ddy / pr@ise kink
23 reviews3 followers
March 17, 2025
Probably would've been a 3 if not for the bad French.
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25 reviews1 follower
August 9, 2024
Hot single dad. Who's also a librarian. Oh and he's FRENCH!! Cleo... Ma'am... WHAT DO YOU PUT IN THESE BOOKS!?!?!? Narcotics. Has to be. No other excuse for the way I am simping after Ellis and looking desperately for my next fix. *ahem* Josephine and Zoe's relationship made my heart just melt into marshmallow goo. And Ellis and Zoe's relationship. Literally those three are goals. Family goals. And the spice. Ummm yeah. I was at the OBGYN (literally the appointment they told me about surgery) and reading this book. Don't do that folks. The doctor called me out about not getting excited until six weeks after surgery.
SORRY DOC BOOKSTAGRAM CALLS!! But yeah the spice is like haaaaawwt. Like grocery store parking lot sex hot. This is just jumped up to my top 5 reads of the year. Thank you Cleo!
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547 reviews76 followers
August 10, 2024
A forced proximity, age gap nanny romance where she calls him daddy?? Say no more 🤭

I love Cleo’s romances. They are always speedy, fun, spicy but full of heart and depth.

What happens when you have a one night stand and then find out she’s your new nanny??

• Age Gap
• Nanny
• Forced Proximity
• Single Dad
• Forbidden
• One Night Stand to Lovers
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442 reviews139 followers
November 12, 2024
Second Edition by Cleo White
4,5/5⭐
3,5/5🌶️

I'm hooked on Cleo's books after reading my fourth one! Can't believe it took me so long to dive into her stories. Each time, I fall for the characters just like I did with the others. Josephine (or Jo), who's in college suddenly realizes she's not happy with her life. Her mom is the president of her school, and Jo’s been trying to keep up with her parents’ expectations. One night, she runs into Ellis at her parents’ library, and they hit it off right away. Ellis is a librarian there and has no clue that Jo is the president's daughter. They have a one-night fling, and Jo thinks it might lead to something more. But then she's heartbroken when he doesn’t reach out afterward. However, one day, Jo's mom asks them to work on a project in Paris—Ellis to sort out the library books and Jo to look after his daughter.

I adore Jo! She's not just smart but also super caring and kind. The way she connects with Ellis's daughter, Zoe, is just the sweetest thing. I love how she knows her worth, but you can tell she has her own insecurities like any other young woman. Ellis can be a bit frustrating sometimes, but I get where he's coming from. He's trying his best to raise his autistic daughter on his own, and you really feel for him.

The pining, the tension, and the forbidden vibes in this book just make it even better. The character growth is on point, and the way Ellis and Jo's relationship unfolds is just great. Plus, every scene with the adorable Zoe is a highlight—she's such a crucial part of the story, and you can't help but fall in love with her. The French countryside setting makes everything feel so romantic and dreamy. The epilogue is perfect! I just wish the book was a bit longer. I want more moments with Ellis, Jo, and Zoe together because I cherish all these characters. The story behind the title "Second Edition" is also beautiful and fits perfectly with Ellis and Jo's story. I recommend this book if you're after something quick, spicy, and heartfelt.

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611 reviews1 follower
December 3, 2024
ellis needed to go to therapy so bad. like his divorce fucked him yup and made jo’s life a living hell. i hate when traumatized men traumatize the women they’re with because they emotionally unstable. bleh. zoe was adorable though. loved her. and maude rocked. i just didn’t love the fmc or mmc in this. 2.5/5
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17 reviews
March 22, 2025
A super smutty novel with a good plot. A diamond in the rough, really.

I thoroughly enjoyed this novel and actually cared about what the characters were thinking and feeling while fully clothed. Never once got the ick — which is a feat in itself.
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70 reviews13 followers
August 15, 2024
Cleo White, you’ve got my attention with that wonderfully wicked imagination of yours.

"Second Edition" follows Josephine Sutton, a 22-year-old college student overwhelmed by depression and the pressures of her demanding parents, who expect nothing less than perfection befitting the daughter of a college president. Jo's path crosses with Ellis Delvaux, the dashing silver-haired librarian at her college, and their connection ignites quickly. Both of them are independently trying to put the pieces of their life together when the college president, who happens to be Jo's mother, recommends they both participate in a six-month project in the French countryside—Ellis to catalog a bequeathed book collection, and Jo to care for his 6-year-old daughter with special needs. It’s a setup ripe for romance.

This book excels in so many ways. The forbidden romance is layered with tension, thanks to the age gap, the employer/nanny dynamic, and Jo's status as the daughter of Ellis’s boss. The French countryside is a stunning backdrop for their story, and Ellis’s bookish nature adds a dreamy touch to the narrative.

If you’re a fan of steamy romances, this one’s definitely for you.

Thank you so much to Cleo White for a digital advanced reader copy in exchange for an honest review.
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57 reviews9 followers
July 30, 2024
Thank you so much Cleo for allowing me to read an ARC copy of Second Edition.
I LOVED this book so much!! Now I'll admit I haven't really read a romance with the single dad or age gap trope as it is not something i would normally gravitate towards, but GOOD LORD Cleo may have just changed my mind. This book was so cute and sweet and spicyyyy (that strawberry scene 🥵).
Josephine (Jo) was so sweet and such a caring and kind soul, I loved her! The way she progresses throughout the book to be unafraid to stand up for herself (her being a people pleaser was so relatable). And Ellis, Mr. Ellis Delvaux. A librarian struggling with the realities of being a single dad to a daughter with special needs was the SWEETEST man. His and Jo's instant connection was amazing, and he was well and truly obsessed with her from day one. Also, the mouth on this man?? Good God. And Zoe, his daughter, is the absolute cutest and I love the bond she creates with Jo!!!
Will living together in a romantic French Chateau lead to love or heartbreak for Jo and Ellis? Find out when Second Edition releases on August 14th (GO READ IT)

(Brb while I plan a trip to the French countryside)
Profile Image for Inês Gomes.
205 reviews6 followers
August 31, 2026
✨Arc Review ✨

Overall this was a cute book. I liked all the characters, especially Jo and Zoe and I really like the autistic representation. I just felt like it was kinda rushed how their relationship was wrapped. They spent most of the book back and forth and then it’s all resolved in two chapters. I would’ve liked to see it a little more developed and I also would’ve liked to see more of Jo’s professional side.
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1,287 reviews29 followers
August 10, 2024
Thank you to Cleo White and her team for an ARC copy in exchange for my honest review.

This was such a sweet story! Single dad is my all time favourite trope and this gets bonus points for the neurodivergent representation in Zoe’s character. I loved the bond between Ellis and his daughter, and seeing Josephine and Zoe’s relationship form was so precious. I also loved the setting (French countryside in a chalet).

The spice was SPICING (I didn’t loooove the “Daddy” kink but to each their own). I do wish we got a little bit more about Miranda and on the forbidden romance aspect from them being colleagues - everything seemed to wrap up a little bit too quickly.
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268 reviews27 followers
September 5, 2024
I would also call Ellis daddy.

This was a sweet age gap romance with a side of she’s his nanny, set in a French Chateau. Does it get anymore romantic than that? I think not.
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710 reviews525 followers
November 12, 2024
The hottest single dad x nanny book ever and I’ll stand by that
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1,830 reviews129 followers
August 1, 2024
Every time I read another Cleo White novella, I fall more and more in love. She writes her characters with so much emotional depth that it is hard not to hope for their happily ever after.

💖Age gap
💖Single dad x nanny
💖Second chance
💖Daddy k!nk
💖Praise k!nk
💖Forbidden romance

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice level: 🌶️🌶️🌶️
Angst level: 💔

After one amazing night together, Ellis and Josephine, aka Jo, don't connect again. Until they are both in the office of the President of the university where Ellis works as a librarian and Jo is a student. And the daughter of President Sutton. Ellis is being tasked with relocating to France for six months for work and Jo is to go along as his daughters nanny. Should be simple to ignore their one night together because it obviously meant nothing to both of them, right?

WRONG.

The sexual tension when these two are in the same room as each other is crazy enough, but put them in same house for six straight months? It is explosive.

Ellis - my man Ellis. I am in love. Move out of the way Jo because I need to go get my man. But in all seriousness, Ellis is hands down my favorite Cleo White character. He is a self proclaimed hot mess with the filthiest mouth. I was NOT expecting the dirty talking that came out of his mouth! BUT I am HERE.FOR.IT.

Jo - Another amazing character. I loved how she put all of her feelings aside and allowed herself to be all in with Ellis's daughter Zoe. She proved time and time again that she will always put her first and they had such special moments together.

This book is so special and I can't wait for everyone to read it!
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236 reviews24 followers
August 3, 2024
I really enjoyed this book. This story was beautiful. It’s a cottagecore, age gap, romance dream featuring the best little girl ever! 😭💗 Jo is having what I would call her quarter life crisis. She’s 22 about to go into her final year of schooling for physics… but she’s not happy, and going that route, she never will be. To make matters worse her mom is the president of the college & doesn’t take well to her decision to quit and travel for a bit. Jo meets a man, Ellis, at a dinner party her mother is hosting for staff and faculty, and before we know it she’s losing her vcard in the backseat of his car… did I mention he’s in his late 30s? 🙈🤭 She gives him her number and waits for him to call… he never does. Then we get into the beautiful story that is Second Edition. Jo is hired by Ellis to nanny his daughter, who is on the spectrum, Zoe. But Jo is not just nannying her, she’s moving with them.. to France for at least six months while Ellis does a project for work. They move into this stunning chateau is the countryside of France, where there’s gardens, and streams, and beautiful little villages.
Second Edition truly was beautiful. The scenery depicted was envisioned perfectly in my head… can me & Jo switch places??? 😌💭 Zoe was an absolutely wonderful character. A single dad will do it for me everytime, but what really gets me is how sweet and adorable the kids are. The writing in this was so fairytale-esque. It was fast paced and before I knew it I had finished the book in one sitting. Loved every second!🙈💗 I love when we find out why the title is what it is, and this one did not disappoint. Second Edition indeed 😭💗
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1,003 reviews
August 7, 2024
4.5 stars

my first time reading anything by cleo and i had a blast with this book.

jo was a delight. she was sweetness wrapped in even more sweetness. she was caring, strong, and fierce. i really enjoyed her character.

you already know how i feel about single dad books, i go feral for them. and this book was no different, ellis really came to play. lord have mercy that man was scrumptious and that mouth on him, i definitely needed a fire extinguisher. he was everything and more and when he spoke french oh mon dieu, j'ai tout mangé, tellement bon. and don’t even get me started with him as a father, he was as sweet as can be and his relationship with his daughter, zoe was just amazing.

jo and ellis were spectacular. these two burned so freaking hot. the chemistry was downright electric, and their connection was superb. they were so good together and perfect for each other. the relationship and bond jo and zoe had was so beautiful and i just loved it.

second edition was a single dad/nanny romance with a forbidden touch and an age gap that was *chef’s kiss.* i really enjoyed this book and i’ll definitely be reading more by cleo because this book just made me want more of her words.

*thank you cleo white for an arc of this book*
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644 reviews72 followers
August 16, 2026
5🌟 | 3.5🌶️

This book completely caught me by surprise, and somewhere along the way, I fell head over heels for it.

What started as a romance I was simply enjoying became a story that made my heart feel so full. Jo, Ellis, and Zoe wormed their way into my heart, and by the end, I was smiling like an idiot and wishing I had more time with them.

I adored Jo’s journey of finding herself and finally choosing the life she wanted. Ellis was such a gentle, devoted dad, and I loved seeing his softer side alongside the very spicy man hiding underneath. Their chemistry felt so natural, their connection had so much heart, and watching them fall for each other was genuinely lovely. And Zoe completely won me over. Her bond with Jo was incredibly sweet and brought so much warmth to the story.

Between the dreamy French setting, the beautiful letters, the tenderness, the character growth, and the seriously hot chemistry, this story just made me happy. I finished it with a ridiculously full heart and that bittersweet feeling of not being ready to let the characters go.

Some books are simply enjoyable, but this one made me feel something, and that’s what made it so special.

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A huge thank you to Cleo White and Valentine PR for the ARC! 😍 All my bookish thoughts are completely my own. ✨
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