Very little story, feels like written down porn. Also very repetitive. Every time the first timer spoke it started with a stutter, repeating the first letter of the first word of each sentence. It became tiring and boring. In every scene the person got spat on, often things happened then a paragraph later it happened again. Inconsistent - skin prickling with the heat of the fire place, but then goosebumps because it was a cold place??? Walking down a stone circular stair well but being able to see the junk of the guy walking ahead in bad flickering torch lighting??? Ugh! Felt a bit AI written.