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The Rite of Radnick
The Handmaid’s Tale meets The Hunger Games in this award-winning, dystopian fantasy romance. Packed full of lush world-building and jaw-dropping twists, The Rite of Radnick will appeal to fans of fast-paced, plot-driven books like Alchemised, Powerless and Red Rising.
CHOSEN TO KEEP THE DARKNESS AT BAY
In the theocratic state of Argacia, where ears listen behind closed doors and the watchful eye of the Sect sees all, Braya Farroe has two options: sacrifice herself for the betterment of her people or face banishment. Not much of a choice, she knows. And despite the Sect Elders’ wishes, Braya wants more than a life of service and sacrifice. She wants to be free.
But when two members of the dreaded Mollakai arrive early to perform the sacrificial ceremony, she finds herself inextricably drawn to them — the deadly and enigmatic Mollakai she should fear and revile. But fate is a twisted mistress and the men who should be her damnation may instead offer her salvation.
NO ONE CAN OUTRUN THEIR DESTINY
They’ll help Braya escape if she pretends to be an Apexer — the ruthless governing class who value strength above all else. But of course, there’s a catch. As part of the ruse, she needs to enter the Rite of Radnick, a once-in-a-generation rite of passage to choose the future ruler of Argacia. Even if it means competing against the man who rescued her from the Sect.
And when she finds herself thrust into a sacred land surrounded by competitors more vicious than the mythical creatures trying to kill her, Braya must discover who is worthy of her trust and her heart. Because once you enter the Rite of Radnick, there are only two choices:
RISE OR DIE
A Fantasy for readers who love:
- Dystopian Vibes
- Battle Royale Style Quests
- Strong Heroines
- Fantasy > Romance
- Forbidden Romance (Open Door)
CHOSEN TO KEEP THE DARKNESS AT BAY
In the theocratic state of Argacia, where ears listen behind closed doors and the watchful eye of the Sect sees all, Braya Farroe has two options: sacrifice herself for the betterment of her people or face banishment. Not much of a choice, she knows. And despite the Sect Elders’ wishes, Braya wants more than a life of service and sacrifice. She wants to be free.
But when two members of the dreaded Mollakai arrive early to perform the sacrificial ceremony, she finds herself inextricably drawn to them — the deadly and enigmatic Mollakai she should fear and revile. But fate is a twisted mistress and the men who should be her damnation may instead offer her salvation.
NO ONE CAN OUTRUN THEIR DESTINY
They’ll help Braya escape if she pretends to be an Apexer — the ruthless governing class who value strength above all else. But of course, there’s a catch. As part of the ruse, she needs to enter the Rite of Radnick, a once-in-a-generation rite of passage to choose the future ruler of Argacia. Even if it means competing against the man who rescued her from the Sect.
And when she finds herself thrust into a sacred land surrounded by competitors more vicious than the mythical creatures trying to kill her, Braya must discover who is worthy of her trust and her heart. Because once you enter the Rite of Radnick, there are only two choices:
RISE OR DIE
A Fantasy for readers who love:
- Dystopian Vibes
- Battle Royale Style Quests
- Strong Heroines
- Fantasy > Romance
- Forbidden Romance (Open Door)
385 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 2, 2024
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Tara O’Toole
3 books33 followersTara O’Toole is an award-winning, Irish author of adult fantasy and thriller novels. She is known for writing fast-paced, intricately plotted books with unexpected twists that both delight and horrify her readers in equal measure.
Tara’s villain origin story began when growing up in the Irish countryside. She often struggled to get her sticky little hands on the first books in popular YA series. Not one to be easily deterred, she would read the sequels instead and use her imagination to deduce the rest. Thus began her fascination with plotting and writing.
These days, Tara’s favourite pastime is to visit the bookstores in every new place she visits. She especially loves when a dog wanders in and wags their tail at the smell of freshly printed paper. It makes her smile every time.
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Tara’s villain origin story began when growing up in the Irish countryside. She often struggled to get her sticky little hands on the first books in popular YA series. Not one to be easily deterred, she would read the sequels instead and use her imagination to deduce the rest. Thus began her fascination with plotting and writing.
These days, Tara’s favourite pastime is to visit the bookstores in every new place she visits. She especially loves when a dog wanders in and wags their tail at the smell of freshly printed paper. It makes her smile every time.
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August 31, 2024
Somehow you get about 5 conventionally attractive men who could be potential love interests, and I won't say another word so I don't spoil anything but it's not a harem situation. Kind of like the opposite 😵💫
What mostly annoyed me and ruined it for me is how everything is happening under really bad, tragic circumstances, the stress and danger levels are through the roof and lets not forget the missing (almost presumed dead) sister we're trying to save and the teenagers dying around us constantly. IN THAT ENVIRONMENT miss girl frolics about and has her first kiss and gets down and dirty on the forest floor one hour after seeing her teammates get butchered like????? How are you turned on and not having a panic attack sobbing in a corner rn?? 🤨
The unrealistic part aside, I still enjoyed it though not as much as I'd hoped. The last 15% were when I found the story picking up and finally made me care about the plot, unfortunately everything before that only seemed like a prologue just waiting for the main story to start.👏
But you know it's subjective, maybe I'm just a prude and SHOULD grab the nearest attractive man I spent the previous days (bc of course I met him like three days ago) hating on and lose all our clothes to do it right there next to our few surviving colleagues while the bodies of our deceased ones are still warm! To really immerse myself I'd have to find myself a sister and put her in a deadly situation only I can save her from so I really don't have anything more important to think of than kissing a pretty boy 😊🥰
[Arc review, honest opinion]
What mostly annoyed me and ruined it for me is how everything is happening under really bad, tragic circumstances, the stress and danger levels are through the roof and lets not forget the missing (almost presumed dead) sister we're trying to save and the teenagers dying around us constantly. IN THAT ENVIRONMENT miss girl frolics about and has her first kiss and gets down and dirty on the forest floor one hour after seeing her teammates get butchered like????? How are you turned on and not having a panic attack sobbing in a corner rn?? 🤨
The unrealistic part aside, I still enjoyed it though not as much as I'd hoped. The last 15% were when I found the story picking up and finally made me care about the plot, unfortunately everything before that only seemed like a prologue just waiting for the main story to start.👏
But you know it's subjective, maybe I'm just a prude and SHOULD grab the nearest attractive man I spent the previous days (bc of course I met him like three days ago) hating on and lose all our clothes to do it right there next to our few surviving colleagues while the bodies of our deceased ones are still warm! To really immerse myself I'd have to find myself a sister and put her in a deadly situation only I can save her from so I really don't have anything more important to think of than kissing a pretty boy 😊🥰
[Arc review, honest opinion]
May 6, 2025
In "The Rite of Radnick", Braya finds herself the unlikely contestant in the eponymous competition to identify the next generation of divine leaders. But as one of Gaia's chosen, girls who have the ability to harvest the power of their world's magic source, Braya's destiny was always to sacrifice herself for the good of her country. In her search for the freedom to choose her own path, she falls into the upper echelon of society, navigating complex political relationships and learning more about what the Elders have kept from her and all the other women who have given their lives so freely to Gaia.
This book has good bones--the lore and the magic system seem unique and interesting, clearly with many secrets yet to be unraveled later in the series. The political machinations of not just the society she finds herself in during the Rite, but also lower in the Dregs and in the sect, made me want to keep reading as well. The realizations near the end complicate these even more, so I'd be interested to see where the second book takes this. And you know I can't resist a ragtag group of friends or companions, and I definitely got that vibe with Daemon, Heyden, and Marissa. While I'm not sure we'll get the same grouping in book two, I'm hoping this won't completely disappear in book two.
Unfortunately, this book needs a bit more editing for me to really like it. The first half dragged on for me, and I wasn't invested until about halfway when conflict began branching out beyond the sect. Much of the world building relies on fantasy tropes that aren't developed enough in places, so seem like attempts to lure an a certain type of audience into reading it (and it certainly worked on me). The competition, the love triangle (maybe?) with the blond-haired love interest and the dark-haired love interest, the omnipresent war, the secretly badass heroine who despite living a cloistered life had time to carry out combat and weapons training with her sister who was similarly busy working in the factories. I liked the flirtation she had with the man she eventually finds a connection with in this book, which made for some fun banter. However, I didn't feel like where their relationship ended up before the final twist of the book made much sense for the trajectory established for the reader. It all seemed too quick and too unrealistic, not only to her character, but just how first relationship for young people usually go. Beyond the plot, there were some distracting sentence fragment patterns, some issues with parallel structure, and some undeveloped dialogue that made the reading experience a bit confusing and frustrating at times for this reader.
I really like the concept of this book and wonder if this will be a stronger series in book 2 whereupon in rereads I can just skip to the halfway point of book 1 to recap. I'll likely read the second as I'm intrigued with how this book ended, but this book on its own just wasn't for me.
This book has good bones--the lore and the magic system seem unique and interesting, clearly with many secrets yet to be unraveled later in the series. The political machinations of not just the society she finds herself in during the Rite, but also lower in the Dregs and in the sect, made me want to keep reading as well. The realizations near the end complicate these even more, so I'd be interested to see where the second book takes this. And you know I can't resist a ragtag group of friends or companions, and I definitely got that vibe with Daemon, Heyden, and Marissa. While I'm not sure we'll get the same grouping in book two, I'm hoping this won't completely disappear in book two.
Unfortunately, this book needs a bit more editing for me to really like it. The first half dragged on for me, and I wasn't invested until about halfway when conflict began branching out beyond the sect. Much of the world building relies on fantasy tropes that aren't developed enough in places, so seem like attempts to lure an a certain type of audience into reading it (and it certainly worked on me). The competition, the love triangle (maybe?) with the blond-haired love interest and the dark-haired love interest, the omnipresent war, the secretly badass heroine who despite living a cloistered life had time to carry out combat and weapons training with her sister who was similarly busy working in the factories. I liked the flirtation she had with the man she eventually finds a connection with in this book, which made for some fun banter. However, I didn't feel like where their relationship ended up before the final twist of the book made much sense for the trajectory established for the reader. It all seemed too quick and too unrealistic, not only to her character, but just how first relationship for young people usually go. Beyond the plot, there were some distracting sentence fragment patterns, some issues with parallel structure, and some undeveloped dialogue that made the reading experience a bit confusing and frustrating at times for this reader.
I really like the concept of this book and wonder if this will be a stronger series in book 2 whereupon in rereads I can just skip to the halfway point of book 1 to recap. I'll likely read the second as I'm intrigued with how this book ended, but this book on its own just wasn't for me.
April 19, 2025
Dance of Thieves meets Fourth Wing meets Hunger Games meets From Blood and Ash, all of this but still very much its own story!
Tara O'Toole has incredible style of writing. Each line felt like a smooth wave of the ocean lapping against the shore. You're to busy admiring the waves to realize you're being pulled deeper into the tide until you are completely drowning in her all consuming words.
The Rite of Radnick is a dark romantic fantasy tale of class antagonism, social justice, religious manipulation, courage against all odds, and the concept of choice.
Braya was born as a "chosen" vessel for the Goddess Gaia's power. Her twenty one years of life has been nothing but preparation for the day she is presented the ultimate choice of Gaia's chosen: Sacrifice herself for the greater good of her people or banishment. For others like Braya, there is no choice to make. Their lives were never really theirs to begin with. Therefore, there is no hesitation when it comes to their sacrifice. However, Braya doesn't share the same sentiments. She has people she cares deeply for in her life which is a detrimental weakness in the eyes of the Sect. leaders overseeing all of Gaia's chosen. We see this heavily exploited throughout the book.
When it comes to Braya's choice, plans for everyone go awry. Her defiance lands her caged and desperate. Braya's desperation flails and her hope diminishes until an unsuspecting individual facilitates her escape. She is presented a bargain that requires her participation in the ritualistic game with the future ruling class of her country. As a "dreg" (low class) Braya holds no sympathy for the crowd of Apexes (ruling class) she finds herself mixed in with as she battles her way through a deadly competition. Justice is to be had, loved ones are to be saved and truths are to be kept hidden. That is, until everything changes and plots twist.
This was an unexpected, phenomenal, unputdownable read. The Rite of Radnick is part one of a duology set to be released in 2025. I, for one, am highly anticipating the conclusion of this high stakes fantasy!
Tara O'Toole has incredible style of writing. Each line felt like a smooth wave of the ocean lapping against the shore. You're to busy admiring the waves to realize you're being pulled deeper into the tide until you are completely drowning in her all consuming words.
The Rite of Radnick is a dark romantic fantasy tale of class antagonism, social justice, religious manipulation, courage against all odds, and the concept of choice.
Braya was born as a "chosen" vessel for the Goddess Gaia's power. Her twenty one years of life has been nothing but preparation for the day she is presented the ultimate choice of Gaia's chosen: Sacrifice herself for the greater good of her people or banishment. For others like Braya, there is no choice to make. Their lives were never really theirs to begin with. Therefore, there is no hesitation when it comes to their sacrifice. However, Braya doesn't share the same sentiments. She has people she cares deeply for in her life which is a detrimental weakness in the eyes of the Sect. leaders overseeing all of Gaia's chosen. We see this heavily exploited throughout the book.
When it comes to Braya's choice, plans for everyone go awry. Her defiance lands her caged and desperate. Braya's desperation flails and her hope diminishes until an unsuspecting individual facilitates her escape. She is presented a bargain that requires her participation in the ritualistic game with the future ruling class of her country. As a "dreg" (low class) Braya holds no sympathy for the crowd of Apexes (ruling class) she finds herself mixed in with as she battles her way through a deadly competition. Justice is to be had, loved ones are to be saved and truths are to be kept hidden. That is, until everything changes and plots twist.
This was an unexpected, phenomenal, unputdownable read. The Rite of Radnick is part one of a duology set to be released in 2025. I, for one, am highly anticipating the conclusion of this high stakes fantasy!
April 16, 2025
Thank you to the author for reaching out to me about their book, I had a great time reading this and I’m rating it 4.0 stars.
The story has some religious elements surrounding gods and how this splits them into different factions. Our POV is from our FMC who is a follower of Gaia, her tale is dark and heart wrenching to be honest.
The story had secrets, betrayals, found friendship and sacrifice. You never know who to trust and whose identity is authentic. I will say the punishment for traitors is a top 3 worst punishment I’ve ever read, it feeds directly into my phobias.
I will happily continue this series to see what happens next.
The story has some religious elements surrounding gods and how this splits them into different factions. Our POV is from our FMC who is a follower of Gaia, her tale is dark and heart wrenching to be honest.
The story had secrets, betrayals, found friendship and sacrifice. You never know who to trust and whose identity is authentic. I will say the punishment for traitors is a top 3 worst punishment I’ve ever read, it feeds directly into my phobias.
I will happily continue this series to see what happens next.
August 8, 2024
The Rite of Radnick is officially my favorite book of 2024, and I cannot wait for book 2 to be released.
This book is so well written, and from the moment I picked it up I couldn’t put it down. The layout of the story is so well done, it’s easy to understand what’s happening from the beginning.
It’s also quite unique. I was expecting a regular sacrifice and when I went on to explain about the sleepers, it was so well done and unexpected. Also, the entire aspect of the sleepers was unique. I’ve not seen or heard of that sort of thing in books before so it’s a refreshing take on it all.
The characters are well written and lovable. The extent Braya is willing to go to, to save her loved ones is clear.
The unexpected events of this book keep a tight grip on your attention. The character twists were perfect. You never know what will happen next. I had to force myself to put it down whenever I needed to do something.
The mythical creatures within the book are fantastic and unique. The concept of Gaia's chosen, and the chosen one is perfectly executed without feeling overdone.
This book is fantastic. If you loved Acotar, or any fantasy books like that, you will love this book without a doubt. I will also say it’s a fantastic book if you are just trying to get into reading fantasy. I highly recommend reading this book. You will not regret it. Author Tara O’Toole did a fantastic job with the book.
I can honestly say this is by far my favorite book of 2024.
I would also like to say that I received this book as a free advanced reader copy, this is my honest review and opinion on the book.
This book is so well written, and from the moment I picked it up I couldn’t put it down. The layout of the story is so well done, it’s easy to understand what’s happening from the beginning.
It’s also quite unique. I was expecting a regular sacrifice and when I went on to explain about the sleepers, it was so well done and unexpected. Also, the entire aspect of the sleepers was unique. I’ve not seen or heard of that sort of thing in books before so it’s a refreshing take on it all.
The characters are well written and lovable. The extent Braya is willing to go to, to save her loved ones is clear.
The unexpected events of this book keep a tight grip on your attention. The character twists were perfect. You never know what will happen next. I had to force myself to put it down whenever I needed to do something.
The mythical creatures within the book are fantastic and unique. The concept of Gaia's chosen, and the chosen one is perfectly executed without feeling overdone.
This book is fantastic. If you loved Acotar, or any fantasy books like that, you will love this book without a doubt. I will also say it’s a fantastic book if you are just trying to get into reading fantasy. I highly recommend reading this book. You will not regret it. Author Tara O’Toole did a fantastic job with the book.
I can honestly say this is by far my favorite book of 2024.
I would also like to say that I received this book as a free advanced reader copy, this is my honest review and opinion on the book.
August 11, 2025
3.5Stars!
I just finished The Rite of Radnick by Tara O’Toole (Thank you to NetGalley for the free Arc!).
I loved the premise...Handmaid’s Tale dystopian mixed with Hunger Games. It absolutely delivered on that!
I adore strong female characters and stories about breaking down patriarchal systems and/or oppressive theocracies. That’s basically my catnip, and this book was giving.
The world building was rich and tense, the monsters were genuinely creepy, and the found family vibe was great. That said, some parts felt rushed and incomplete, especially the romance. I also wanted more character development...a few characters stayed too surface level. I struggled with the writing style at first, but I’m glad I stuck with it.
The ending was awesome and completely shocked me, which is hard to do nowadays! Well done! I’m ready for book two.
I just finished The Rite of Radnick by Tara O’Toole (Thank you to NetGalley for the free Arc!).
I loved the premise...Handmaid’s Tale dystopian mixed with Hunger Games. It absolutely delivered on that!
I adore strong female characters and stories about breaking down patriarchal systems and/or oppressive theocracies. That’s basically my catnip, and this book was giving.
The world building was rich and tense, the monsters were genuinely creepy, and the found family vibe was great. That said, some parts felt rushed and incomplete, especially the romance. I also wanted more character development...a few characters stayed too surface level. I struggled with the writing style at first, but I’m glad I stuck with it.
The ending was awesome and completely shocked me, which is hard to do nowadays! Well done! I’m ready for book two.
August 4, 2024
ARC review-
This was such a magical book. The story of Gaia’s children is such a sad and powerful tale. Full of beauty and betrayal, I had a wonderful time reading this. It had so many unforeseen twists, powerful women, familial challenges, and loss. Also the imagery of ‘timid’ young girls in pink dresses lays the ground for so much empowerment and Braya delivers this and I believe she’ll continue that in the next book. I’m so pleased I got to read it and I can’t wait for the second book, and other books from this author.
This was such a magical book. The story of Gaia’s children is such a sad and powerful tale. Full of beauty and betrayal, I had a wonderful time reading this. It had so many unforeseen twists, powerful women, familial challenges, and loss. Also the imagery of ‘timid’ young girls in pink dresses lays the ground for so much empowerment and Braya delivers this and I believe she’ll continue that in the next book. I’m so pleased I got to read it and I can’t wait for the second book, and other books from this author.
May 19, 2025
Thanks to NetGalley for an ARC of this book. It was a GREAT surprise! I had a blast reading it and was intrigued from the beginning and I read it so quickly.
The world is really interesting and I really liked Braya. My one complaint is I feel like there was literally no development at all between the love interests. That was a very undercooked romance, in my opinion. I wish more time was spent on their relationship.
With it being fast-paced, I do think more pages and world building could have been added to make this even more wow-worthy. There were a lot of twists and turns but everything happens a little too quickly, it’s hard to wrap your head around fully.
There is so much that was revealed at the end that really had me at the edge of my seat, and I needed the explanation because I felt there was a lot going on. OMG. Looking forward to the second book in this duology!
If you love romantasy, I’d definitely add this to your list!
The world is really interesting and I really liked Braya. My one complaint is I feel like there was literally no development at all between the love interests. That was a very undercooked romance, in my opinion. I wish more time was spent on their relationship.
With it being fast-paced, I do think more pages and world building could have been added to make this even more wow-worthy. There were a lot of twists and turns but everything happens a little too quickly, it’s hard to wrap your head around fully.
There is so much that was revealed at the end that really had me at the edge of my seat, and I needed the explanation because I felt there was a lot going on. OMG. Looking forward to the second book in this duology!
If you love romantasy, I’d definitely add this to your list!
November 24, 2025
I’ve tried getting into this story twice and can’t seem to stick with it. Pushing through on a third try, it’s the little things that are bothering me. Some of the sentence structures seem a bit off, sometimes it’s as though there’s an error in the narrative (ex: it’s emphasized it’s morning, but characters will then say it’s night). I couldn’t click with the MC and her decisions/actions.
Thank you to NetGalley & the author for a copy!
Thank you to NetGalley & the author for a copy!
July 31, 2024
I had the immense pleasure of reading this book before it was published and I cannot recommend it enough. The Rite of Radnik is an intriguing epic fantasy where we follow our main character Braya who lives in an oppressive system where she is destined to sleep for eternity to fuel the riches of the elite. Instead of being put to sleep, she joins the resistance movement and participates in an incredibly dangerous rite to free herself. The more time passes, the clearer it becomes that the system she was raised in is a farce. Will she manage to free herself and her loved ones from the shackles of this system?
Tara manages to create a vivid and intriguing world that is thoroughly thought through. Her writing is lyrical and immediately pulls you in. Braya herself is a fiercely loyal, strong and independent main character (and I know there’s nothing i love more than a woman i can trust to get the job done). The romance that unpacks on the side is sizzling and our main man is… well you should see for yourself.
If you get the chance to pick it up, you should do so immediately! (Check it out on Booksprout!)
Tara manages to create a vivid and intriguing world that is thoroughly thought through. Her writing is lyrical and immediately pulls you in. Braya herself is a fiercely loyal, strong and independent main character (and I know there’s nothing i love more than a woman i can trust to get the job done). The romance that unpacks on the side is sizzling and our main man is… well you should see for yourself.
If you get the chance to pick it up, you should do so immediately! (Check it out on Booksprout!)
August 21, 2024
A Gripping Start to an Epic Fantasy Adventure
The Rite of Radnick is an enthralling, adrenaline-fueled journey into a world where power, freedom, and destiny collide in the most breathtaking ways. From the first page, I was completely immersed in Braya's story, the life in a land where every move is watched, and every whisper is heard. The stakes are high, the dangers are real, and the tension is palpable.
Braya Farroe is a protagonist you can't help but root for. As one of Gaia’s Chosen, she carries the weight of immense power, but also the burden of a future dictated by others. Braya’s journey is one of self-discovery, courage, and the pursuit of a life beyond the confines of a repressive regime. The characters are richly developed, with each interaction revealing layers of complexity and hidden motives. The relationships that unfold are intricate and charged with emotion, adding depth to the narrative and marking every twist and turn of the story.
The plot is a rollercoaster of action and suspense, with the Rite of Radnick serving as a thrilling centerpiece. The quest is not just a physical challenge but a test of trust, loyalty, and survival. And then there's the ending. I’m still reeling from it. The final chapters are a whirlwind of revelations and shocking twists that left me desperate for more. In summary, The Rite of Radnick is a masterful blend of epic fantasy, romance, and adventure. It’s a book that not only entertains but also makes you think about the choices we make and the paths we choose. I’m already counting down the days until the next book. If you’re a fan of epic fantasy with strong characters, a gripping plot, and an ending that will leave you wanting more, this is a must-read.
The Rite of Radnick is an enthralling, adrenaline-fueled journey into a world where power, freedom, and destiny collide in the most breathtaking ways. From the first page, I was completely immersed in Braya's story, the life in a land where every move is watched, and every whisper is heard. The stakes are high, the dangers are real, and the tension is palpable.
Braya Farroe is a protagonist you can't help but root for. As one of Gaia’s Chosen, she carries the weight of immense power, but also the burden of a future dictated by others. Braya’s journey is one of self-discovery, courage, and the pursuit of a life beyond the confines of a repressive regime. The characters are richly developed, with each interaction revealing layers of complexity and hidden motives. The relationships that unfold are intricate and charged with emotion, adding depth to the narrative and marking every twist and turn of the story.
The plot is a rollercoaster of action and suspense, with the Rite of Radnick serving as a thrilling centerpiece. The quest is not just a physical challenge but a test of trust, loyalty, and survival. And then there's the ending. I’m still reeling from it. The final chapters are a whirlwind of revelations and shocking twists that left me desperate for more. In summary, The Rite of Radnick is a masterful blend of epic fantasy, romance, and adventure. It’s a book that not only entertains but also makes you think about the choices we make and the paths we choose. I’m already counting down the days until the next book. If you’re a fan of epic fantasy with strong characters, a gripping plot, and an ending that will leave you wanting more, this is a must-read.
June 10, 2025
4.8⭐️
If you’re looking for something that gives vibes of The Hunger Games and divergent this is definitely something you’ll wanna look into. It’s a great read it’s packed with information and building up the characters
Once I saw what it was about I knew I would enjoy this. However I didn’t expect each chapter to keep me on my toes lol I mean that in a good way. The FMC is a strong character you’ll grow attached to such as you’ll wanna know what happens next and why.
Overall it’s a great read i enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next book! The author did a great job of putting everything together especially the small details.
August 9, 2024
What a great combination of plot, setting, and character! Lots of action with unpredictable outcomes, giving a hint of mysteries to be unraveled. The protagonist, Braya, is likable even with her flaws, and I enjoyed seeing her character growth across the story. The world-building was extremely well-done, with creatures, myths, and magic that worked together in a tightly-knit plot. I can't wait for book two, when all of the questions are answered.
A protagonist you'll root for. Action to keep you on the edge of your seat. Magic, creatures, mythology--all fresh and interesting. Characters we grow to love and to despise. Lots of great components in this book. Highly recommended.
A protagonist you'll root for. Action to keep you on the edge of your seat. Magic, creatures, mythology--all fresh and interesting. Characters we grow to love and to despise. Lots of great components in this book. Highly recommended.
September 7, 2024
This was an ARC Reader Review from BookSirens, and I rate this book 4.5⭐ rounded up!!
I was THRILLED the entire time I was reading this book.
The twists and turns of Braya's journey were wild and captivating. I truly hope she can save the people she loves, and some joy comes from all of the tragedy.
I was on the edge of my seat the entire time, hoping she would find a strong ally who was a truly good person. Maybe...
It could have had a touch more smut, IMO, because I love it! Maybe with a few more people.
I cannot wait for the second book of this duology. I will 100% be anticipating the ARC review of The Act of Ascension!!!
I was THRILLED the entire time I was reading this book.
The twists and turns of Braya's journey were wild and captivating. I truly hope she can save the people she loves, and some joy comes from all of the tragedy.
I was on the edge of my seat the entire time, hoping she would find a strong ally who was a truly good person. Maybe...
It could have had a touch more smut, IMO, because I love it! Maybe with a few more people.
I cannot wait for the second book of this duology. I will 100% be anticipating the ARC review of The Act of Ascension!!!
August 16, 2024
I binged this amazing book in 2 days because I couldn't stop turning pages. "The Rite of Radnick" has heart, suspense, mystery, steam, romance, and fantasy bursting at the seams. This storyline is addictive and binge-worthy, and these characters are complex and fascinating. I am so excited for the 2nd book in "The Rite of Radnick" Duology. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
September 1, 2024
In a world where fantasy books usually follow the same pattern this one was refreshingly different. The world building is unique and the characters each have their own secrets. I NEED book 2.
May 20, 2025
This kicks off with a gripping premise: an oppressive theocracy, a fascinating magic system, and a girl raised for sacrifice who dares to want something more. The opening section is moody, intense, and full of potential, drawing you into a world where devotion and control are dangerously intertwined.
The structure unfolds in three distinct parts, each with a different tone and energy. The first is probably the strongest for me. Then things shift into the actual Rite, with its deadly competition and new characters, and finally, the last act ramps up the stakes with a cascade of secrets, action, and twists. There’s no shortage of ideas here, but the transitions between each section are a bit abrupt, and I found myself wishing for a smoother, more cohesive arc.
The worldbuilding itself is creative and layered. Between the resistance movement, the religious control, and Braya’s unique role in it all, there’s so much here to explore. But just as we start to dig into one idea, the story pivots to something new. I was left wanting more time with each element: more development, more connection, more depth.
There were also some story choices that didn’t fully land for me. Braya’s combat skills felt a little too convenient given her sheltered background, and some of the emotional beats (especially in the romance) moved much faster than I expected. The chemistry is there, but the buildup was missing. Certain character decisions, like Sayleth’s misplaced blame or Wren’s fate, didn’t quite make sense to me. And while the Rite itself adds excitement, its rules and stakes were a little under-explained.
The romantic and spicy elements felt a bit sudden, too. Not necessarily out of place in this type of story, but they needed more emotional groundwork to really resonate, especially given the darker themes of trauma and resistance that the book sets up early on.
That said, there’s a lot to enjoy in this debut. The themes of defiance, identity, and choice are interesting, and Braya’s desire to break free from the life she’s been forced into is something I rooted for from the beginning. The ideas are strong and the ending suggests even more complexity to come.
I’m curious to see how things evolve in the sequel. With more cohesion and deeper character work, I think this series could really shine. Right now, it feels like a bold, ambitious story that just needed a bit more room to breathe.
Thanks to the author and book sirens for the complimentary copy. This review is voluntary and all opinions are my own.
The structure unfolds in three distinct parts, each with a different tone and energy. The first is probably the strongest for me. Then things shift into the actual Rite, with its deadly competition and new characters, and finally, the last act ramps up the stakes with a cascade of secrets, action, and twists. There’s no shortage of ideas here, but the transitions between each section are a bit abrupt, and I found myself wishing for a smoother, more cohesive arc.
The worldbuilding itself is creative and layered. Between the resistance movement, the religious control, and Braya’s unique role in it all, there’s so much here to explore. But just as we start to dig into one idea, the story pivots to something new. I was left wanting more time with each element: more development, more connection, more depth.
There were also some story choices that didn’t fully land for me. Braya’s combat skills felt a little too convenient given her sheltered background, and some of the emotional beats (especially in the romance) moved much faster than I expected. The chemistry is there, but the buildup was missing. Certain character decisions, like Sayleth’s misplaced blame or Wren’s fate, didn’t quite make sense to me. And while the Rite itself adds excitement, its rules and stakes were a little under-explained.
The romantic and spicy elements felt a bit sudden, too. Not necessarily out of place in this type of story, but they needed more emotional groundwork to really resonate, especially given the darker themes of trauma and resistance that the book sets up early on.
That said, there’s a lot to enjoy in this debut. The themes of defiance, identity, and choice are interesting, and Braya’s desire to break free from the life she’s been forced into is something I rooted for from the beginning. The ideas are strong and the ending suggests even more complexity to come.
I’m curious to see how things evolve in the sequel. With more cohesion and deeper character work, I think this series could really shine. Right now, it feels like a bold, ambitious story that just needed a bit more room to breathe.
Thanks to the author and book sirens for the complimentary copy. This review is voluntary and all opinions are my own.
May 18, 2025
I do love it when I find a book that draws me in from the start and then keeps me hooked. And this did that for sure.
Think magic, fantasy dystopia vibes and not knowing who to trust throughout. Then add some awesome twists at the end I did NOT see coming and this is easily a five star read for me.
I honestly kept switching thoughts on different characters but was still blown away in the last few chapters with the plot twist revelations.
I so wanted to see Breya escape the clutches of the Sect and save her friend and sister. Then it was edge of your seat high stakes fantasy action as she took part in the Rites of Radnick. Right up till the final pages I honestly couldn't see that ending coming.
As a fantasy debut this was brilliant. So many characters I just wanted to see make it, a romance I hoped would be a HEA and trials to the death I didn't know the outcome of.
Definitely have to read book two now, because honestly that ending broke me!
Highly recommend this to all fantasy fans, especially those who love twisted magic systems, friendships, betrayals and high stakes trials.
Thanks to netgalley for my gifted copy. All thoughts are my own.
Think magic, fantasy dystopia vibes and not knowing who to trust throughout. Then add some awesome twists at the end I did NOT see coming and this is easily a five star read for me.
I honestly kept switching thoughts on different characters but was still blown away in the last few chapters with the plot twist revelations.
I so wanted to see Breya escape the clutches of the Sect and save her friend and sister. Then it was edge of your seat high stakes fantasy action as she took part in the Rites of Radnick. Right up till the final pages I honestly couldn't see that ending coming.
As a fantasy debut this was brilliant. So many characters I just wanted to see make it, a romance I hoped would be a HEA and trials to the death I didn't know the outcome of.
Definitely have to read book two now, because honestly that ending broke me!
Highly recommend this to all fantasy fans, especially those who love twisted magic systems, friendships, betrayals and high stakes trials.
Thanks to netgalley for my gifted copy. All thoughts are my own.
August 31, 2024
This book was good. There were a lot of different paths it took they maybe jumped too quickly from one to the next (the nunnery, then the quest, then the love story). It’s billed as an epic fantasy and maybe each stage of the story needs a little more space to breathe in order to actually be called an epic.
Because I think the writing was good and the action is good. It just all felt so rushed I didn’t have time to get invested in the characters and absolutely didn’t feel invested in the romance. I think the magic could have been fleshed out a little more too. Even the big reveal cliffhanger ending felt like “where did that come from”? I wasn’t prepared for it cause there didn’t seem enough build up to it.
Overall I enjoyed the concept and the writing style. Just felt like I would have like to settle into a longer story so I could have world built and character built a little more.
I will read the sequel so I know what happens.
I received an advanced copy from Book Sirens in exchange for an honest review
Because I think the writing was good and the action is good. It just all felt so rushed I didn’t have time to get invested in the characters and absolutely didn’t feel invested in the romance. I think the magic could have been fleshed out a little more too. Even the big reveal cliffhanger ending felt like “where did that come from”? I wasn’t prepared for it cause there didn’t seem enough build up to it.
Overall I enjoyed the concept and the writing style. Just felt like I would have like to settle into a longer story so I could have world built and character built a little more.
I will read the sequel so I know what happens.
I received an advanced copy from Book Sirens in exchange for an honest review
May 28, 2025
Single POV, feminine rage, unique magic, everything is a lie, so much betrayal and backstabbing, sign language rep, rivals(?) to lovers to ??, terrifying monsters, deadly rite that influential families send their children into, ruthless society, chosen one, the land is unbalanced
Braya is chosen. Which is a fancy way of saying she is destined to sacrifice her life to help fuel her society. But she won't go down without a fight. When she is caught trying to escape with her friend, everything gets so much worse. But she is rescued by an unlikely ally and is given the chance to try to rescue her sister by entering a deadly competition that will determine the next generation of rulers of the land.
Breya had always been ready to risk herself to try to protect others, even when it often got her in trouble, and through this book she expanded that protection to a much larger extent. I was kept guessing for a bit as to who the MMC was, which was kind of fun. The betrayals kept on coming and by the time we were through I was sort of mad at most everyone😆. I will be finishing the duo!
Braya is chosen. Which is a fancy way of saying she is destined to sacrifice her life to help fuel her society. But she won't go down without a fight. When she is caught trying to escape with her friend, everything gets so much worse. But she is rescued by an unlikely ally and is given the chance to try to rescue her sister by entering a deadly competition that will determine the next generation of rulers of the land.
Breya had always been ready to risk herself to try to protect others, even when it often got her in trouble, and through this book she expanded that protection to a much larger extent. I was kept guessing for a bit as to who the MMC was, which was kind of fun. The betrayals kept on coming and by the time we were through I was sort of mad at most everyone😆. I will be finishing the duo!
September 11, 2024
I know I’m little late but here I am 🤍 Who is up for a dystopian fantasy !! A romance !! A dystopian romantic fantasy!!! This one is for you.
Many thanks to the publisher and booksiren for the arc!
After a slightly rocky start in which the writing confused me a bit, the story really gets going and in new and surprising ways. I loved the setting, the tone, the rhythm, pacing, and phrases used flowed so effortlessly. The world building and most of the characters makes you to completely lost in its world. The author has a beautiful way with words, and her descriptions are eloquent. Nothing was choppy or out of place. All you need is to pay attention to characters and their revelations.
Knowing that this is the first in what is supposed to be a duology, you get a good base understanding of the main and supporting characters with the full knowledge that a deeper relationship with them will come as the story continues to unfold.
The way this woman's mind works...Morbid, magical, beautiful, satisfying. Do I recommend this book? Yes! 4.5 stars. Despite the polarising ending, this book is a fast read. I'm definitely looking forward to book two.
Pick this up if your new personality is dystopian 🖤❤️
Many thanks to the publisher and booksiren for the arc!
After a slightly rocky start in which the writing confused me a bit, the story really gets going and in new and surprising ways. I loved the setting, the tone, the rhythm, pacing, and phrases used flowed so effortlessly. The world building and most of the characters makes you to completely lost in its world. The author has a beautiful way with words, and her descriptions are eloquent. Nothing was choppy or out of place. All you need is to pay attention to characters and their revelations.
Knowing that this is the first in what is supposed to be a duology, you get a good base understanding of the main and supporting characters with the full knowledge that a deeper relationship with them will come as the story continues to unfold.
The way this woman's mind works...Morbid, magical, beautiful, satisfying. Do I recommend this book? Yes! 4.5 stars. Despite the polarising ending, this book is a fast read. I'm definitely looking forward to book two.
Pick this up if your new personality is dystopian 🖤❤️
May 15, 2025
3,5⭐️ thank you to netgalley and the author for the ARC! I had a hard time at the beginning but halfway it started to flow and the twists at the end left me floored. it is rather rare nowadays that I don't see the twists coming so that was fresh! there was a little bit of Handmaid's Tale vibe at the beginning and Hunger Games in the Rite itself! I enjoyed it and would like to read the other to finish this duology🙂↕️ the names and world building were sometimes confusing but it just took some getting used to. Some of the characters and relationships also felt a bit distant (they've known each other for like a day so it can't be that deep) but I enjoyed the characters and the nature almost folklore vibes! overall very solid and fast paced story!
July 29, 2024
I really enjoyed this book. If you liked A Fate Inked in Blood or The Serpent and the Wings of Night, you’ll probably enjoy this too.
August 9, 2025
I absolutely love the concept of this book, with the magic fire (sylla) and how much society runs on it to the secretive society of sisters who help keep the country going with sylla. There are women who are chosen for their special abilities and the world knows them as Gaia’s chosen, they’re called to sacrifice themselves for the greater good. Braya is one such woman and born to the bottom rung of society (dregs). Though she’s unconvinced at sacrificing herself. She finds herself thrust into a competition with some of the top of society (Apexes) to select the country’s divine rulers. Will she come out on top? This is a super fun read and book one in a duology!
April 16, 2025
Loved the ending, the story was fast-paced, and the FMC was NOT whiny which are all wins in my eyes! I also loved the worldbuilding- this author does an amazing job of balancing the worldbuilding with the story and keeping the plot moving smoothly. Love that so much. The stakes are high in this one and there is magic! IMO, this is a classic high fantasy read that felt quick!
April 13, 2025
Captivating and brilliant! Characters oozing defiance who don’t just question authority they punched it in the throat. Brave Braya who has no ability to quit and so many unlikely allies. The pace of this story was at times heart stopping, but never boring. Not exactly a cliffhanger but there’s definitely more to this and I’m looking forward to book two.
April 8, 2025
The Rite of Radnick
Wow. What an unexpected but amazing read! This fantasy has so many twists that I was clutching my kindle needing to know what happened next. Loved the world building and the characters!
This amazing story has:
- [ ] Forced proximity
- [ ] Twists and surprising villains
- [ ] Corrupt society
- [ ] Trials
- [ ] Underdog who becomes the hero
Synopsis
Braya is one of the “Choosen”, meaning she will be put to sleep because she has the ability to harness the power that keeps their world alight. The problem is Braya does not want to be the Choosen, she wants to flee and see all the world has to offer. When the opportunity to leave presents itself, will she take it?
Wow. What an unexpected but amazing read! This fantasy has so many twists that I was clutching my kindle needing to know what happened next. Loved the world building and the characters!
This amazing story has:
- [ ] Forced proximity
- [ ] Twists and surprising villains
- [ ] Corrupt society
- [ ] Trials
- [ ] Underdog who becomes the hero
Synopsis
Braya is one of the “Choosen”, meaning she will be put to sleep because she has the ability to harness the power that keeps their world alight. The problem is Braya does not want to be the Choosen, she wants to flee and see all the world has to offer. When the opportunity to leave presents itself, will she take it?
August 31, 2024
Thanks to the author, publishers and the Booksirens website for the ARC of this book in exchange for my honest opinion. BRACE YOURSELVES, IT’S A LONG ONE! :D AND IF YOU’D RATHER JUST READ IT IN SHORT, SCROLL TO THE LAST PARAGRAPH.
Before I say anything else, you should know that I read “The Rite of Radnick” (RR for short further on) in one day and couldn't go to sleep until it was finished. I finished it at 7am, just saying. :D So, despite everything I'm about to say, I'm giving this book 4 out of 5 stars because I really enjoyed it.
To be honest, I don't think this book is very original (bear with me, this is not a bad thing this time!) in the sense that it would push the boundaries of its genre or surprise with new ideas in the field of fantasy. But, like I just said, it’s not a bad thing at all! RR fits perfectly into the modern YA fantasy romance genre and is a pretty good example of it. If you like to read about adventures, trials, quests, fantastic creatures, magical powers, romance, if you are curious about what lies behind the scenes of fanatical religions or sects, or if you liked such books like Hunger Games, Fourth Wing, etc., RR is for you! Here you'll find all of that (and more!), written in a simple, fast-paced style that makes reading a breeze and lot of fun. It's almost like reading a good AO3 story (and I don't just mean smut), but after an editor looked through it, lol. I personally may not always like such a writing style because often it can feel underdeveloped, but if I find myself in a reading slump (like one does), this is exactly what I need!
Braya is a 21-year-old girl known as Gaia's Chosen. She’s gifted with the magical power to summon fire; therefore, her life is dedicated to pure devotion and chastity for the good of her people (who need the eternal flames for their survival). From the outside looking in, it seems that her destiny (drawn by the Sect Elders many years ago) to sacrifice herself in the name of a noble cause should be satisfying, set and unchangeable. But not everything is always as it seems, not all noble spiritual ideas fall into the hands of good people, not every spiritual teacher wishes you well, and perhaps Braya herself desires more than her tragic fate has given her. Suddenly, as her sacrificial religious rite approaches, everything starts to change. We then follow Bray on her new adventurous journey - a kind of coming-of-age, self-discovery path where she comes face to face with herself, with her powers, friends, enemies, loved ones, where good and bad intentions mix and the boundaries between heroes and villains inevitably intertwine.
I like these types of stories; they usually promise a lot of imperfect, vulnerable characters, unreliable heroes, and human - therefore not always comfortable - emotions. While the RR promises this, and tries to deliver it, it doesn't always succeed.
Where this book delivers 100% on its promises is adventure. There is so much going on here: unpredictable, quick-paced, supernatural events, sometimes absurd and hilarious, sometimes scary and adrenaline-inducing, happen one after another. You find yourself on edge and invested the whole time. I was really happy about that and couldn’t wait to turn the proverbial ebook page.
But what remains unfulfilled, in my opinion, are the book's characters. They had so much potential, but felt rushed, unfinished, quite formulaic at times. Everyone, except of course the sect elders and the centenarian magical beings, are young, sexy and fit. Like, that’s their personalities. For most of the book, I felt no connection to the main character, Braya, or her love interest (I won't say the name to keep it a secret). So many important characters die in the story and there was only one (!) instance where I felt sympathy, grief for their death. Not to spoil anything, but it was the best friend of Braya’s love interest, and his character felt a bit more developed and human for me because of his back-story involving Braya’s sister. A sister, by the way, who felt much cooler than Braya herself.
Yes, I had a lot of bones to pick with Braya. I don't know if the author intended to make her an unreliable main character (I don't think so, it seems to have just happened by accident). The very first scene of the book - when she tries to save a little girl - tries to show us how noble and brave Braya is. And yes, there were situations where she really showed these qualities of hers, but at the same time, she so often made choices and actions that were completely selfish. That annoyed me to no end. :D For example, in many of the dangerous situations where her loved ones were at risk, she could have chosen to sacrifice herself for their well-being, but instead she chose what was best for her. And then whined about how everything was her fault. Come on!
The romance between the main love interests didn't convince me either. I just didn’t know them that well to root for them. Also, while it's understandable that tragic circumstances and danger can bring people together very quickly, but can love really grow so fast? Braya seemed to have a crush on almost every new guy she met, so when she finally met her love interest, I didn't immediately recognize that he was going to be the one (I thought it was just another *coughs* handsome man).
Like Leenasty has already mentioned in their review , it was kind of uncomfortable to read an intimate scene between Braya and her love interest happening on, literally, the battlefield just moments after their friends and comrades had died.
Of course, the spice itself was spicing and I have no complaints about that. :D
Another thing (might just be me). What's wrong with all of their eyes? Is it just that the main character has some kind of obsession about eyes? Emerald eyes. Obsidian eyes. Bright blue like the ocean. Black like the void. Etc etc. And why do most recent books in a similar genre necessarily have to have something so weird about the physical characteristics of the characters - eyes, tails, intimate packages? :D (If you know you know.)
In short, Tara O'Toole is a great writer of narrative and adventurous stories. That is the greatest strength of this book, which literally kept me up at night because I couldn't put the book down. It gave me so much pleasure and is why I give the book 4 stars. I really can't wait for the second part of this duology. I wonder what other adventures and trials for the characters the author has in store, and how she will develop and connect all the dots at the end of their path. She's really strong in that, and it's very exciting that we're getting to see her sharp narrative tools that early on – in her debut romantasy book. I guess, I just wish we could get to know the characters better, and have more space for other topics in the book (theocratic regime, religion, politics, friendships and betrayals etc).
Before I say anything else, you should know that I read “The Rite of Radnick” (RR for short further on) in one day and couldn't go to sleep until it was finished. I finished it at 7am, just saying. :D So, despite everything I'm about to say, I'm giving this book 4 out of 5 stars because I really enjoyed it.
To be honest, I don't think this book is very original (bear with me, this is not a bad thing this time!) in the sense that it would push the boundaries of its genre or surprise with new ideas in the field of fantasy. But, like I just said, it’s not a bad thing at all! RR fits perfectly into the modern YA fantasy romance genre and is a pretty good example of it. If you like to read about adventures, trials, quests, fantastic creatures, magical powers, romance, if you are curious about what lies behind the scenes of fanatical religions or sects, or if you liked such books like Hunger Games, Fourth Wing, etc., RR is for you! Here you'll find all of that (and more!), written in a simple, fast-paced style that makes reading a breeze and lot of fun. It's almost like reading a good AO3 story (and I don't just mean smut), but after an editor looked through it, lol. I personally may not always like such a writing style because often it can feel underdeveloped, but if I find myself in a reading slump (like one does), this is exactly what I need!
Braya is a 21-year-old girl known as Gaia's Chosen. She’s gifted with the magical power to summon fire; therefore, her life is dedicated to pure devotion and chastity for the good of her people (who need the eternal flames for their survival). From the outside looking in, it seems that her destiny (drawn by the Sect Elders many years ago) to sacrifice herself in the name of a noble cause should be satisfying, set and unchangeable. But not everything is always as it seems, not all noble spiritual ideas fall into the hands of good people, not every spiritual teacher wishes you well, and perhaps Braya herself desires more than her tragic fate has given her. Suddenly, as her sacrificial religious rite approaches, everything starts to change. We then follow Bray on her new adventurous journey - a kind of coming-of-age, self-discovery path where she comes face to face with herself, with her powers, friends, enemies, loved ones, where good and bad intentions mix and the boundaries between heroes and villains inevitably intertwine.
I like these types of stories; they usually promise a lot of imperfect, vulnerable characters, unreliable heroes, and human - therefore not always comfortable - emotions. While the RR promises this, and tries to deliver it, it doesn't always succeed.
Where this book delivers 100% on its promises is adventure. There is so much going on here: unpredictable, quick-paced, supernatural events, sometimes absurd and hilarious, sometimes scary and adrenaline-inducing, happen one after another. You find yourself on edge and invested the whole time. I was really happy about that and couldn’t wait to turn the proverbial ebook page.
But what remains unfulfilled, in my opinion, are the book's characters. They had so much potential, but felt rushed, unfinished, quite formulaic at times. Everyone, except of course the sect elders and the centenarian magical beings, are young, sexy and fit. Like, that’s their personalities. For most of the book, I felt no connection to the main character, Braya, or her love interest (I won't say the name to keep it a secret). So many important characters die in the story and there was only one (!) instance where I felt sympathy, grief for their death. Not to spoil anything, but it was the best friend of Braya’s love interest, and his character felt a bit more developed and human for me because of his back-story involving Braya’s sister. A sister, by the way, who felt much cooler than Braya herself.
Yes, I had a lot of bones to pick with Braya. I don't know if the author intended to make her an unreliable main character (I don't think so, it seems to have just happened by accident). The very first scene of the book - when she tries to save a little girl - tries to show us how noble and brave Braya is. And yes, there were situations where she really showed these qualities of hers, but at the same time, she so often made choices and actions that were completely selfish. That annoyed me to no end. :D For example, in many of the dangerous situations where her loved ones were at risk, she could have chosen to sacrifice herself for their well-being, but instead she chose what was best for her. And then whined about how everything was her fault. Come on!
The romance between the main love interests didn't convince me either. I just didn’t know them that well to root for them. Also, while it's understandable that tragic circumstances and danger can bring people together very quickly, but can love really grow so fast? Braya seemed to have a crush on almost every new guy she met, so when she finally met her love interest, I didn't immediately recognize that he was going to be the one (I thought it was just another *coughs* handsome man).
Like Leenasty has already mentioned in their review , it was kind of uncomfortable to read an intimate scene between Braya and her love interest happening on, literally, the battlefield just moments after their friends and comrades had died.
Of course, the spice itself was spicing and I have no complaints about that. :D
Another thing (might just be me). What's wrong with all of their eyes? Is it just that the main character has some kind of obsession about eyes? Emerald eyes. Obsidian eyes. Bright blue like the ocean. Black like the void. Etc etc. And why do most recent books in a similar genre necessarily have to have something so weird about the physical characteristics of the characters - eyes, tails, intimate packages? :D (If you know you know.)
In short, Tara O'Toole is a great writer of narrative and adventurous stories. That is the greatest strength of this book, which literally kept me up at night because I couldn't put the book down. It gave me so much pleasure and is why I give the book 4 stars. I really can't wait for the second part of this duology. I wonder what other adventures and trials for the characters the author has in store, and how she will develop and connect all the dots at the end of their path. She's really strong in that, and it's very exciting that we're getting to see her sharp narrative tools that early on – in her debut romantasy book. I guess, I just wish we could get to know the characters better, and have more space for other topics in the book (theocratic regime, religion, politics, friendships and betrayals etc).
November 2, 2024
Wow amazing start to a new series,I could put this down once I started. The world building , the connections to the characters, the mentions the twist and turns will keep you on edge. This filled with darkness, action, magic , betrayal, and some spice. That cliffy left me with my heart numb and shredded. Now I am suffering a hangover and anxiety because I have to wait for the next book.This was also a first read from this author for me .
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 10, 2024
This book took me a moment to get into it and once I did... I was in for the ride of my year. Huge cast of characters. Lots of me yelling at them. This book gave me throw backs to George RR Martin's Game of Thrones in the way that no character was safe. The final twists? Chefs kiss. I have no clue how I will wait to read the next one. This book was amazing.
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