I couldn’t really get into this story. Once I got to where she went to the stables, it was better to read. The thing I noticed is that this author puts too many words on the page, and sometimes its just boring to read. I just wanted to skim&scan it half the time.
The wench thing where he hired a wench for some guy, but the guy didn’t want her, so he just decided to take her himself was repulsive &I should have stopped reading there.
And also at the comment where he could give the pox to Freddie. If you’re seriously thinking you might have the pox, then you shouldn’t get with anyone, especially an innocent girl. But this innocent girl was an idiot who knew what she was getting into, so maybe she deserves it.
He didn’t go 2 days w/o sex! Should have stopped reading there.
you plan to use discretion with your affairs after you marry Freddie. Well arent you considerate!
“sweetie and sweet pea” and “this is suicide” are modern. So go ahead and use them in a book set over a hundred years ago.
‘Unka Benky’ sounds stupid!
After he sleeps with the main character, he grabs this maids butt and then proceeds to kiss her. Idc if it was a kiss of gratitude. You.dont.freaking.do.that.
‘janie had been dear to his heart-and some of his other organs, too.’ comments like this raise my blood pressure to dangerous heights.
Oh great. The situation was difficult enough without her getting pregnant. Ugh, this sucks!
Her ‘innate French insight’ made her see that Freddie was pregnant.
“a lax lifestyle.” How modern!
His butler had no accent and then suddenly says “verra gude, my lady,” which makes him sound like the butler in Mr. Deeds.
I thought they were close, but suddenly Rannoch just up&says you’re breeding, mking her sound like a horse. &she keeps calling him sir.
Theres way too many names in here to keep up with, and who’s related to who.
Rannach had a child out of wedlock?! &is it zoe? Im so confused!
“monogrammed soup spoon.” do you really think they said that back then?
She’s from Portugal? She doesn’t even have an accent! Then you say she’s brown. How could you leave that out?
Zoe is annoying. &Rutledge really needs to stop touching women. Placing a finger on her lips is innapropriate.
“penciled into my social calendar.” Nothing more frustrating than modern expressions!
WHAT THE H***! He had a kid with some girl named mary. This author loves throwing surprises at us. Really really bad surprises that you should tell us in the beginning. So I can slam it down before I get too far in the book. Before I put that I am “currently reading” this piece of trash.
I cant believe she’d make a joke about how he’s probably sired a whole cricket team. And he actually says just one, as if that isn’t more than enough. What is it with this author? All the guys in here are rakes, and have had illegtimate children.
“somebody’s vengeance f***.” That sounds so stupid.
He keeps saying stuff and then apologizes for it. im getting sick of that already.
He ended a 3 year affair with his mistress, and then is all woe-is-me about ending his usual habits. Grow up.
Idk why Bentley said he secretly loved Frederica when he acted like he was being sent to the gallows over marrying her when he had to end his 3 year affair.&then says ‘got myself leg-shackled’ in a letter. Um, yeah, sounds like he’s real happy for this wedding.
Rannoch&his wife sounded young, but I think they are really kinda old-ish. And cam sounds old, even though he’s supposed to be young.
I cant BELIEVE he warned his brother against getting with his wife. Who does that?! &then has another weird moment where he panics. this guy's got issues.
&whats up with his weird freakout moments? I cant take it because its so confusing.
He told his brother he likes her, but doesn’t love her. I swear the beginning hinted at or even said he secretly had feelings for her.
This book just isn’t romantic. It sounds like he has some serious issues.
&then he tells her not to turn away from him, and she says she sees ‘the potential for both cruelty and kindness’ in his eyes. Um, that’s not good.
This guy isn’t romance material at all. Or husband material. Or anything material. Idk why anyone would get with him, considering the way he is. The illegitimate child. the fact that he's constantly getting with women.
‘has been bedding women on a daily basis since he was sixteen-probably a dam*** sight younger.’ And ‘not a week went by that Bentley wasn’t caught diddling one of the dairy maids or shoving himself under the skirts of some tavern wench.’ And this is our main character.
I cant believe this idiot actually married him knowing he had a child, and his habits with women. Then he has the audacity to say “no, ive never been one for keeping women. And there wont be another, Freddie. Not while we live beneath the same roof.” Your childs mother was your mistress. &unless im mistaken, before your marriage you went and ended an affair with your mistress of 3 years. Im appalled and freakin mad that hes lying.
I find it funny that Frederica can be innocent about some things, like how to touch Bentley. I mean rlly, she didn’t even know how to touch his chest or w/e. just use your hands, you idiot. But then she knows that having sex wont hurt the baby. How would she know that?
authors never know how to do a blend of innocence and knowledge.
&then he says some women don’t wear well. &she actually makes a joke about it. who wants to hear about their husbands past sexual encounters?
The child says “weally” but then can pronounce “Bentley.” &She cant climb the bed but can shoot a gun.
“the pukes.” Well don’t that sound modern.
Babies brought by the stork. This author keeps using modern expressions!
Im already getting sick of their every sexual encounter being amazing and profound. I mean after that time in the woods, he’s all ‘he fell against her in a state of perfect bliss. Clean and new. And somehow a better man than he’d been before.’ but I know it wont last, because this character keeps sinking into his moods, and then panics about stuff. im not going to constantly be reading about him feeling good one moment, and then regressing the next. let's either make progress or not.
“oh! How perfectly amazing! I did not know one could do this standing up.” way to sound like an idiot.
Im not saying theres anything between Bentley and joan or that there has been in the past, but the way joan was talking about them being close made it seem like there was, and stupid Frederica is sitting there complimenting their relationship.
Why put a weird spin to the book in saying that everyone is charmed by Bentley, even children. Even his neice, who ‘smiled flirtatiously at her uncle.’ that's not funny or cute.
I really don’t like this character. she gave in to the marriage way too easily, and then opened the door for him when he was beating it like a psycho. &she was actually scared of him then. do you really want your character to be scared of her husband?
“you black-eyed protuguese witch.” How nice of Bentley.
It’s annoying how a character will all of a sudden whisper something, especially when she would be yelling at Bentley. &then he’s actually trying to explain how he grabbed the servant in a vulgar way&then kissed her on the mouth. What kind of explanation could you possibly have that would even atone for it, except if you were possessed by an evil spirit or the devil?
This book can go up in flames for all I care.
I shouldn’t have picked it up, I shouldn’t have kept reading it, especially after I found out he had a kid out of wedlock, had so many mistresses he cant keep count, and then makes a comment about maybe giving his wife the pox. That’s nothing to joke out, and so far from romance, its not even funny. Why would an author want a character like that? He’s not romantic. He’s a b******, plain and simple. This book absolutely sucks.
the pox is a serious issue, so im unclear about why authors write about male characters that get with a lot of women. do you want your character to end up with the pox? do you think the pox is romantic? I mean, do you really value experience in the bedroom so much that you'd endanger your character with that crap? that's directed at about 98% of romance authors. get it together, girls, and write about a male lead we'd actually care and root for. i.e.the exact opposite of Bentley.
Idc about his stupid psychological problems that will probably be blamed on his dad. Im sick of characters like this that excuse their behavior on the way they were raised or some event in their past, as if that makes it right. Grow up and own up to your mistakes and take some responsibility for the way you are.
He sits there and cheats on his pregnant wife and has the nerve, the absolute nerve, to go and act all pitiful and sad and tryin to be funny with his brother the next morning. Well it wasn’t funny. &I don’t give a crap if hes acting sad. Who cares what he feels like?think about how your wife feels, you know, the person you cheated on? If he cared about his pregnant wife he wouldn’t have done it in the first place. Plain&simple. Wth did he think he was doing? &im about to sit here and read Frederica forgiving him for it, because she will. &she’ll be an idiot for doing it.
Bentley doesn’t deserve love, he doesn’t deserve happiness. Anyone who could put up with him and all his problems is an idiot. This is the most undeserving character ive ever read about, and not only will I not finish this book, I will now steer clear of this author.
Just like this author is an idiot for writing this utter crap. Idk what happened in your personal relationships, but don’t ruin romance books.
i only kept reading this because of the occasional funny comment, but not even humor can keep me reading this filth. I actually don't know who could read this book when the characters-all of them-are so completely boring/unworthy/crappy. way to go there, author. you really wrote a winner.