DNF @ %20
After highlighting half of what I read with annoyed notations, I called it quits.
The writing is extremely clunky and repetitive, the interactions are beyond awkward, the timeline and flow are just... weird, and the periodic attempts at campy similes and metaphors feel like a desperate attempt to distract from the inadequacy everywhere else.
Multiple POVs can be great, but not when the author uses them as a lazy way to get around having to tell a more complex story to get the same information across. Everyone's POV sounds the same - awkward clunkiness and all - and frankly I just can't past being dropped into what feels like the dead middle of a story, with a whole host of relationship and world building which apparently occurred wholly off-page.
There are a lot of unknowns that will probably be revealed later on, but I just don't care... the author already lost me.
P.S. Can people please stop using the word "mutter" for everything? Mumble, grumble, murmur, whisper, grouse, rumble, drone, moan, breathe, sigh... pick some variations! Christ on a cracker.
Get a freaking thesaurus.