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A Debt To Pay

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Alessandro

My whole life I've been expected to collect my family's missing debt. Who knew she was so close?

Growing up I heard about this missing debt. A marriage contract for my grandfather but never collected. Then one night I find our little collection and grab her from a bar. Now I must marry the woman who drives me crazy to collect her family's debt.

Luci

My grandparents never spoke about their past. Now I know why.

Growing up I always knew my grandparents had secrets. Regardless, I've always done what they needed without question. Then one night I stop in a bar and meet the man who will throw my world upside-down. Now I must marry the man I hate to pay off my family's debt.

421 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 29, 2024

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December 19, 2025
The writing is killing me

I can't. The hero sounds like a college bro. How am I supposed to take him seriously as a mafia man/boss? 🥱



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190 reviews11 followers
October 29, 2024
This book follows the story of Alessando and Luci, it is a Mafia Romance with the following tropes:
• Enemies to lovers
• Catholic FMC
• Obsessive MMC
• Forced Marriage
• She is payment to a debt
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The twists, the turns and the intensity had me reading this book so so quickly! I loved it 🙌🏻
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Their relationship was amazing, but I absolutely love all the characters including the relationships played out with the side characters, the banter was done so so well and was a really nice touch!
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I cannot wait to read the next book!
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413 reviews60 followers
October 28, 2024
4.25 ⭐️/2 🌶️

The plot was amazing, and the writing style held up well throughout the story! Luci and Allesandro were such solid main characters, each thoughtfully crafted with layers of emotion and complexity. Their chemistry and banter were on point—definitely gave those true enemies-to-lovers vibes, lol! 🔥

The depth in their personalities and their journey from enemies to something so much more kept me hooked. I’d absolutely love to see books on some of the side characters too!
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109 reviews2 followers
October 29, 2024
I simply loved this book! i read it in one sitting, I enjoyed the story, and definitely through out the book I kept wanting to know more about the other characters aswell! i will DEFINITELY be reading the next book ❤️
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181 reviews15 followers
October 29, 2024
I love Mafia Romance!!! Alessandro and Luci's story kept me in my toes!!! The twist were so perfect and I really didn't expect them to come. Which I loved. It kept me reading and read this 500 page bad boy or ( girl) in 2 days. I am so over the moon. This book was so so good.
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119 reviews8 followers
November 2, 2024
*ARC Review*

🔥 5-Star Read Alert! 🔥

If you’re craving a book that’s equal parts spicy, twisted, and utterly addictive, buckle up! This story sizzles from page one with two enemies caught in a web of long-forgotten promises and a debt that won’t die.

Meet Alessandro—an enforcer of old family secrets who’s got one job: to track down a lost family debt. Just your average night of collections, right? Until he stumbles across Luci, the one woman who ignites his temper and his desire. She’s feisty, stubborn, and absolutely off-limits, but he needs her for more than he wants to admit.

And then there’s Luci, a firecracker whose world is flipped when Alessandro sweeps in like a storm. With a family past that’s messier than she ever realized, she’s roped into a marriage arrangement she had zero idea was lurking in the shadows. Now she's stuck between her family’s legacy and a man she can't stand…but maybe can't resist either.

Packed with sizzling tension, steamy scenes, and enough chemistry to set the pages ablaze, this is an enemies-to-lovers romance you won’t be able to put down. Alessandro and Luci’s battle of wills is as thrilling as it is explosively passionate—perfect for anyone who loves a romance with bite!
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81 reviews2 followers
October 24, 2024
okay okay okay. before we start our review, shout out to the author for sending me an arc and choosing me to a part of her team!

this is an honest review-
spoilers in the last paragraph -

also, if you choose to read this book PLEASE check the trigger warning list first. a little bit going on that may trigger you if you’re not into spicy books.

this book was amazing. had me in a chokehold the whole time. i loved the enemies to lovers mafia romance story. The way Alessandro would burn the world for Luci is beautiful. i never wanted to put this book down and loved reading about all the different characters. I love El , everyone needs an El in their lives. I can’t wait to continue reading this series and see if the other characters get stories too. I wish they were already out so I could keep reading.

i do feel like there was a few details in some chapters that could have been added like when luci was back with her family and all of the sudden her and elio were married. and then elio disappearing, like what happened with him? what did alessandro threaten him with? these are all little things so they don’t change my rating just things i questioned!
Profile Image for Makayla Cardwell.
53 reviews
October 18, 2024
EDEN FANNING MISS MAAM! I absolutely loved the book. Im not going to lie I’ve never really been into an enemies to lovers trope, but i just devoured this book. The plot of this story puts you into the world of Alessandro and Luci. And the banter between all the characters are amazing and funny. I know this is the first book but maam i need more. Does Marco, El and Andrea get there own story because that would be a hell of a why choose. I sorta want to know more about Enzo as well!
I cannot describe the way i was sobbing at the end of Gia journal entries. I Also really started to feel some type of way towards Aldo at the end. It would have been nice for him to meet his great granddaughter but i guess I’ll be happy enough for the little head nod her gave at the restaurant. All and all I can’t wait too see what’s next!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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19 reviews4 followers
October 28, 2024
To all my Mafia Romance lovers hold on to your panties there’s another morally grey book boyfriend getting ready to steal your heart and destroy your panties . Eden Fanning did a fantastic job on her first installment into this universe she has revealed there will be 5 books and a novella and I cannot wait to devour this series . I love all the characters and the relationships they have with each other. This forced marriage enemies to lovers was everything I had hoped for when starting this. Eden did an excellent job with the emotional turmoil and the guilt associated being raised a certain way. I felt emotionally connected to the characters. The ending of this book has me waiting to see what is instore for the next chapter of these characters lives.
188 reviews2 followers
November 4, 2024
A Debt To Pay by Eden Fanning

This book follows the story of Alessando and Luci, it is a Mafia Romance with the following tropes:
• Enemies to lovers
• Catholic FMC
• Obsessive MMC
• Forced Marriage
• She is payment to a debt

The twists, the turns and the intensity of the story. Their relationship was amazing, I absolutely love all the characters including the relationships played out with the side characters, the banter was done so so well and was a really nice touch!

Their chemistry and banter were on point—definitely gave those true enemies-to-lovers vibes. The depth in their personalities and their journey from enemies to something so much more

If you’re craving a book that’s equal parts spicy, twisted, and utterly addictive read this book!
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77 reviews12 followers
October 31, 2024
✔️Trigger Warnings - 18+ Adult Content read✔️
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ish
🌶️🌶️.5

This was a very enjoyable steamy and sexy Mafia Romance. The kind that pulls you in and maintains its hold on you.
I absolutely loved how fiercely protective the MMC was for Luci. Both of them became very easy to like in this novel as an enemies to lovers relationship. The author did a great job on the chemistry build up between the two of them.

I definitely recommend this book to all the Mafia Lovers out there like myself. Be sure to check your trigger warnings though.

Also, a huge Thank You to the author for allowing me the arc opportunity I was given.

All thoughts and opinions are my very own.
91 reviews1 follower
October 30, 2024
Smoulderingly hot

A debt to pay is brilliantly written and hard to put down. Alessandro and Luci start as a business arrangement/ kidnapping but turn into a true love story.

Luci is a good girl and a people pleaser who comes into her own when faced with adversity. Alessandro is a mafia style Italian debt collector who is hard and ruthless but has a softer side waiting to be brought out.

There is plenty of drama and plenty of heat to keep you going.

Loved this story and I hope there is more in the same universe. I want to hear Marco’s story
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17 reviews2 followers
November 5, 2024
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.5/5
💋💋💋.5 spice

ARC review
Who doesn’t love a hot spicy mafia romance? When lucía is forced to marry Alessandro in a debt that she must cover.

You get really good tropes in the book from obsessed MMC to a cheeky little enemies to lovers. I was really sat when reading this book and I was consumed when reading it. The book was really easy to like because the characters were well written and the plot was just too good and the spice was the there! I can’t wait from more from Eden so I’ll be sat here on my couch waiting for the next book that gets thrown our way.


I do not equate my reads to real life circumstances. Please be mindful of what your triggers are and how they can be different from mine. We all have varying tastes and preferences within books
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75 reviews1 follower
November 15, 2024
Book (ARC) Review 📓⛓️ A DEBT TO PAY BY EDEN FANNING
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🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

RUN RUN RUN and get this book it is a must I loved every part of this book spicy from the very first page 📄

I feel in love with Luci and Alessandro there physical pull they have to one another that they both can’t deny but yet there are things they need to over come. The letters 😭🥰

This is a fast pasted mafia romance and the story is to die for 🖤🌶️🥰🙌🏻 the ending is everything!!
i can guess what the next book will be about and I can’t wait for the next one ❤️‍🔥🤤
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11 reviews
October 31, 2024
Enemies to lovers. An old family debt to pay. A young, innocent woman unaware of her family's history. This book was well written and the development of the characters was fantastic! Plus those spicy scenes! This is one of the few Mafia books I have read, not usually my thing, but it was definitely worth the read! And I cannot wait for more in the series if some of the storyline is going where I think it is!
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427 reviews79 followers
October 31, 2024
Mafia romance is on my list of fave reads but don’t read them much until NOW!

So many twists and turns keeping my eyes glued to my kindle! I absolutely loved it! Enemies to lovers really do make amazing stories and the characters really proved that!

After all this was a great book and will definitely recommend to my Mafia romance friends! I received this as an ARC for my honest review and I can’t talk it up enough!
Profile Image for Rebekah Godfrey.
167 reviews1 follower
October 26, 2024
Loved!
Sometimes, the religious guilt and people pleasing in this book hit a little too close to home 😅 but I loved their story, and I can not wait to read more in this series!! Marco?? Enzo?? I need there to be books for both of them!! 😍

A little taste of what you get in the book 😉:
Kidnapping ✅️
Forced proximity ✅️
Arranged marriage (kinda)✅️
Mafia ✅️
Family drama ✅️
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48 reviews1 follower
October 29, 2024
I absolutely loved this book i can not wait for the next book to come out. This book kept me on edge wondering what would happen next. Plus alot of spicy. I love all the main characters. This book makes you laugh, cry, get made plus love and hate some of the characters. Thank you to the author got the free copy
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453 reviews18 followers
October 30, 2024
Rating ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice 🌶️🌶️🌶️

Alright mark yourself away on the calendar 🗓️ this book is a little thick and totally worth every page.
Please check author notes and warnings because mental health matters.
Mafia romance, enemies to lovers, Alessandro and Luci are 💋. I love a man who will burn 🔥 it all for his woman ❤️.
Can’t wait for more from this author ✍️
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240 reviews14 followers
November 1, 2024
A Debt To Pay is a spicy mafia romance with an enemies to lovers trope. This story follows Alessandro and luci. Alessandro kidnaps Luci because she is the heir that should settle the family contract. However, Luci and her family have no plans to allow this to happen. There's plenty of plot and twist with just the right amount of spice!
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Author 1 book8 followers
November 3, 2024
I’m a total Mafia book junkie, and let me tell you, this one is a gem! I devoured it in one go—seriously, I couldn't put it down! The plot had my jaw hitting the floor, and those twists? They had me perched on the edge of my seat like I was about to dive into a pool! You can bet I’ll be racing to grab the next book in this series. Oh, and fun fact: this is my first taste of Eden Fanning’s work, and I’m hooked!
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64 reviews1 follower
August 21, 2025
Thanks to Eden Fanning for a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.

This was a fun quick read! Lots of spice, a lot of twists and turns, enemies to lovers, pregnancy trope, Italian mafia of sorts. The story line was good, however, I did find the writing kind of choppy at times which is the reason it got 3.5 rather than 4 stars. Looking forward to the second book of the series ARC!
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468 reviews16 followers
October 29, 2024
Well first off, the chemistry and banter between these 2 mc’s was A*!! Enemies to lovers at its best.
The story kept me hooked and the side characters added a extra intrigue. I can’t wait to find out more!!

I love mafia romance and this book definitely did NOT disappoint!
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25 reviews
October 29, 2024
Solid Enemies to lover book

This book had me captivated and hooked after the first chapter. The portrayals of characters was fantastic especially the fmc and the religious guilt she faced through the book. The banter didn’t feel forced and gave true enemies to lovers.
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80 reviews
November 3, 2024
Love mafia romance 🥰 Okay.. this book got me hooked. I am obsessed with Alessandro and Lucy characters. Is an enemy to lovers. Forced marriage I seriously can’t wait for the next book in the series.

Spice level. And 5/5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

🔪 Enemies to Lovers
🔪 Arranged Marriage
🔪Mafia Romance
🔪 Kidnapping


82 reviews3 followers
November 8, 2024
I love Mafia romance!!!!

Luci and Alessandro's story was hot, full of twists, and kept me wanting more and more!!

Enemies to lovers was the perfect trope, and the author really captured that. The chemistry between them was perfect.
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16 reviews1 follower
November 15, 2024
i’ve never hated and loved a man more than Alessandro, he gave me so many mixed emotions. Luci is AMAZING. i loved her development throughout the book, but also staying so true to herself, and her heart. i do hope that they get their little boy✨
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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445 reviews16 followers
October 17, 2024
This book was amazing. It was full of action, love, and spice. Luci and Alessandro were perfect. But El was my favorite. I can't wait to read more. This book was nothing short of perfection.
13 reviews
October 19, 2024
I absolutely loved this book and wished there was more to the series ready now!
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83 reviews2 followers
October 29, 2024
This book is brill. I love a mafia romance and this doesn’t disappoint
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