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I won my brother’s rival in a Date the Player auction… and had the best night of my life.

Davis Guidry is Orleans University’s starting rookie pitcher.
He’s handsome, charming, and an all-around flirt.

After spending a hot, spontaneous night together, we can’t seem to keep our hands off each other.
But our no-strings fun comes crashing down when my overbearing brother, who happens to be Davis’s biggest rival, catches us in action.
Even that seems to only make the fire burn hotter when we’re together.
And suddenly, our secret fling starts to feel like something more than either of us bid on.

Are these casual hookups between us just a fun way to pass my freshman year…
Or have we made the ultimate rookie mistake and caught feelings?

Rookie Mistake is approximately a 36k word novella in the Orleans University world. It is a complete standalone.
This is high spice, low plot and lots of fun!

Tropes:
- College Baseball
- Playboy Rookie x Wild Child
- "Good Boy"
- Rival's Sister
- Secret Hookups

155 pages, Kindle Edition

Published September 24, 2024

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443 reviews881 followers
September 23, 2024
The Rookie Mistake was SO HOT 💗🔥

I read this in one sitting, and the way I need Zara's confidence as a woman... agh 💅 Davis and Zara meet at a charity auction where Zara bids on Davis to be her date for the night. Little did she know she was going to insta-fall in love with him. EACH PAGE WAS SO CUTE AND SPICY 💕🌶️ Seriously, I’m still shocked by how much I loved it! The book is filled with amazing scenes that will keep you engaged, and next thing you know—BOOM, happily ever after 💘

It's the perfect novella after reading the Orleans University trilogy, especially when you already met Davis in Walkoff Wedding!!

Nothing says 5-star read like a man who falls to his knees for you, and let me tell you, he falls multiple times 😏

Tropes
💘 college baseball
💘 secret romance
💘"good boy"
💘 spicy scenes

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𝗽𝗿𝗲-𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱: if Maren Moore writes it, i'm gonna read it.
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1,006 reviews1,551 followers
October 3, 2024
oh to be young and in love
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557 reviews67 followers
September 24, 2024
Another banger from my girl Maren 😜💋

“You are fucking trouble.”

“Always have been and always will be. Good thing you love trouble, huh?” 😏

I am absolutely obsessed with Zara. Her personality is hands down the best! I have loved the timid, awkward female characters in the past but Zara’s feistiness had me in love! And DAVIS? Oh my goodness. From the first scene of him on the stage I knew he was going to be downright delicious! I love love love these two together! Their chemistry is undeniable and I loved getting to see these two not help but fall for one another!

“When I think of my future?  It’s Zara. Of all the uncertainties the future holds, I know that part for a fact.  She makes me better.”

This was the perfect novella- a quick read, full of banter and spice and everything nice 😌
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60 reviews4 followers
September 30, 2024
Let me give you a real summary:

- I’m NoT LiKe oThEr GiRls
- sHe’s NoT LiKe oThEr GiRls

And the rest is them fucking

You’re welcome 🫶🏼
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429 reviews116 followers
September 26, 2024
📖 𝐑𝐨𝐨𝐤𝐢𝐞 𝐌𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞 𝐛𝐲 𝐌𝐚𝐫𝐞𝐧 𝐌𝐨𝐨𝐫𝐞

“𝘌𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺 𝘱𝘪𝘦𝘤𝘦 𝘴𝘩𝘦 𝘨𝘪𝘷𝘦𝘴 𝘮𝘦, 𝘪𝘵 𝘰𝘯𝘭𝘺 𝘮𝘢𝘬𝘦𝘴 𝘮𝘦 𝘥𝘦𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘦 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘦, 𝘢 𝘩𝘪𝘨𝘩 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘐 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘴𝘦 𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘳.“

❤️‍🔥🔥🤭 This was such a quick & deliciously spicy book! It was literally so steamy and I loved it!

I need Zara to be my bestie because I want to live vicariously through her. Davis & Zara are two people who are completely comfortable with living spontaneously. The date he takes her own was so freaking fun! ✨

Both leads are comfortable being exactly who they are and I found that so refreshing! Davis was caught up in Zara’s orbit right from the get go and he matched her energy every step of the way.

"𝘠𝘰𝘶'𝘳𝘦 𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘺𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘧𝘪𝘳𝘦. 𝘐'𝘮 𝘵𝘸𝘰 𝘴𝘦𝘤𝘰𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘧𝘳𝘰𝘮 𝘣𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘣𝘢𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘰𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘦𝘦𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘪𝘧 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘵𝘢𝘴𝘵𝘦 𝘢𝘴 𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘥 𝘢𝘴 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘭𝘰𝘰𝘬, 𝘛𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘣𝘭𝘦. 𝘐'𝘷𝘦 𝘣𝘦𝘦𝘯 𝘥𝘺𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘤𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘮𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘐 𝘴𝘢𝘸 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘤𝘳𝘰𝘸𝘥."

This is a fast burn, high spice, and low drama story! There were a ton of great “good boy” moments. The spicy chemistry went both ways with these two! Maren outdid herself with this novella. She made me fall in love with these characters in half the number of pages as her full length books. This was such a nice way to get another story set in the world of the Orlean'S u series.

"𝘛𝘩𝘦𝘯 𝘣𝘦 𝘢 𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘥 𝘣𝘰𝘺 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘦𝘵 𝘰𝘯 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘬𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘴 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘮𝘦."

If you love fast paced romance stories packed full of the BEST spice, go add 𝐑𝐨𝐨𝐤𝐢𝐞 𝐌𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞 𝐛𝐲 𝐌𝐚𝐫𝐞𝐧 𝐌𝐨𝐨𝐫𝐞, to your TBR today!

𝘛𝘳𝘰𝘱𝘦𝘴:
⚾️ 𝘊𝘰𝘭𝘭𝘦𝘨𝘦 𝘉𝘢𝘴𝘦𝘣𝘢𝘭𝘭
🤭 𝘙𝘪𝘷𝘢𝘭’𝘴 𝘚𝘪𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘳
💋 “𝘎𝘰𝘰𝘥 𝘉𝘰𝘺”
❤️‍🔥 𝘍𝘢𝘴𝘵 𝘉𝘶𝘳𝘯
🔥 𝘌𝘹𝘵𝘳𝘢 𝘚𝘱𝘪𝘤𝘺 𝘕𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘭𝘭𝘢
🫶🏼 𝘚𝘦𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘵 𝘏𝘰𝘰𝘬𝘶𝘱𝘴
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585 reviews155 followers
September 20, 2024
Proof that I can always count on a Maren Moore read for a good time 🤩

This novella was sooo fun and steamy! I was just obsessed with Davis & Zara’s dynamic together — they literally call each other ‘Loverboy’ and ‘Trouble’ like?! 🤌

Zara has this alluring, confident energy about her, and seeing how well Davis matched her vibe no matter what she threw his way was just the best thing to witness. They were so perfect for each other, and I loved how they went from having spicy, fun times together to realizing they wanted each other in their lives forever 🫶

I could’ve read a whole book about Davis & Zara, but this novella was perfect and exactly what I needed so I can’t complain! I adore the Orleans U world, and I will always take anything I can get from it and leave with a great time 😌

Thank you so much to Maren Moore & her team for an ARC of this novella! 💗
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416 reviews23 followers
September 18, 2024
This novella was so much fun. In true Maren Moore fashion, it’s sweet and spicy (and I do mean 𝕤𝕡𝕚𝕔𝕪🔥🥵). 𝑹𝒐𝒐𝒌𝒊𝒆 𝑴𝒊𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒌𝒆 sucks you in with a whirlwind romance and manages to have you falling as fast and hard as Davis + Zara.

I loved it and I loved Davis + Zara. Tell me how Davis, the MMC, had me giddy and blushing from the very first time he speaks in this book?! Swoon. Zara was a total powerhouse and quite literally brought Davis to his knees. They were adorable together and the fact that they call each other Loverboy + Trouble?! So dang cute. Their dynamic was everything!

𝑹𝒐𝒐𝒌𝒊𝒆 𝑴𝒊𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒌𝒆 is truly such a fun and quick read! The tropes? Perfect. The romance? Swoon-worthy. I definitely recommend checking out this Orleans University stand alone novella!

🅃🅁🄾🄿🄴🅂:
🌶️ Spicy Novella
💕 Rival's Sister
⚾️ College Baseball
🔥 Wild Child x Playboy
🤫 Secret Hook-Ups
🚫 Forbidden
🩷 "Good Boy"

A huge thank you to Maren Moore for providing me with an ARC of 𝑹𝒐𝒐𝒌𝒊𝒆 𝑴𝒊𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒌𝒆
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697 reviews52 followers
September 21, 2024
The Orleans U series has come to a close with this very quick and spicy novella! This one can be read as a true stand alone but I definitely recommend this whole series for all your fun, flirty and spicy college baseball needs!

Zara and Davis were SO fun 🤩 they were flirty, sexy, funny, spontaneous and such a good pairing. I loved Davis in the last book and was so happy to see more of him! Zara was WILD — confident and self-assured. I want to be her. I loved him and Zara together - their chemistry was off the charts hot and this one will definitely be one of those re-reads when you need something quick and spicy to carry you through!

“𝙕𝙖𝙧𝙖 𝙞𝙨 𝙖 𝙜𝙤𝙙𝙙𝙖𝙢𝙣 𝙛𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙢, 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙄’𝙢 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙮 𝙩𝙤 𝙬𝙖𝙠𝙚 𝙪𝙥.”

Though this novella is heavy on the spice and ‘light’ on plot, I did really enjoy their characters and their wild ways. The way Zara stood up for herself to her brother was so good! Davis and Zara weren’t expecting each other, but I loved how their relationship blossomed into one they both needed.

“𝙃𝙚 𝙙𝙤𝙚𝙨𝙣’𝙩 𝙛𝙞𝙩 𝙞𝙣𝙩𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙣 𝙄 𝙝𝙖𝙙 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙢𝙮 𝙛𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙝𝙢𝙖𝙣 𝙮𝙚𝙖𝙧 𝙤𝙛 𝙘𝙤𝙡𝙡𝙚𝙜𝙚, 𝙗𝙪𝙩 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙖𝙜𝙖𝙞𝙣, 𝙄’𝙫𝙚 𝙣𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙡𝙡𝙮 𝙗𝙚𝙚𝙣 𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙣𝙨.”

Add to your tbr if you like:
- college baseball romance
- brothers rival
- “One night” turned more
- Sneaking around
- Lots of flirty banter
- SPICE

Thank you for the arc, Maren and Katie! 🫶🏻
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324 reviews49 followers
September 21, 2024
I’m not usually a fan of novellas but I really enjoyed this one & finished it in like 3hrs. I’m so glad Davis got his own story🙌🏼 This book focuses more on the couple & their dynamic, & it’s very much spice > plot, so if that sounds like something you’d like, or if you want something quick, super short, fast-paced, deliciously sexy, fun, lighthearted, & spicy, then this is the perfect read for you👏🏼

Zara is a wild child. She’s ballsy, confident, & doesn’t care about what people think of her. Davis is a total charmer! He’s sweet, flirty, confident, & vocal about what he wants. These two were such a fun, spontaneous, carefree, electric & hot couple. There was low angst & tension, but their natural chemistry oozed through the pages. Loved it🩷

𝐑𝐞𝐚𝐝 𝐢𝐟 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞: Novellas, strangers to lovers, baseball player mmc, rivals sister, secret hookups

Thank you to Maren & Valentine PR for the arc🩷
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204 reviews34 followers
September 24, 2024
Ok but Zara + Davis are so HOT!
God I loved these two so much! The dynamic was incredible and their little digs at each other were so fun and playful.

“Then be a good boy and get on your knees for me.” YES ZARA. We love youuuuu 🥵

“This mouth,” I rasp darkly. “One day, I’m going to fuck it. Then, we’ll see just how much of a brat you are when your throat is stuffed full of my cock.” 🫠🫠🫠 OKAY DAVISSSSS

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️✨
🌶️🌶️🌶️
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382 reviews160 followers
November 16, 2024
this was such a fun novella! i’ve loved the books in the orleans university series that i’ve read so when i saw this i knew i needed to read it. it was a quick read, fun and spicy and just overall a good time! zara and davis were made for one another, even if it means bidding $1,000 to go on a date.
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515 reviews19 followers
September 27, 2024
✨Vibesss✨

If you are looking for a low angst/plot + high spice lil novella, look no further!! She was spicyyyyy! I loved Davis and Zara together; especially how their energy and antics always aligned! These two, hehe.

Thank you for the ARC, Maren!

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128 reviews63 followers
October 1, 2024
ARC REVIEW

4/5⭐️ 2.5/5🌶️

This was one HOT Novella… sheeshh 🥵😅

Maren has become one of my favorite authors this year and I absolutely LOVE this series!!

It was definitely fast paced and extra spicy! I really enjoyed how Zara and Davis had this instant chemistry with such fun banter! I definitely found myself smiling and laughing while reading their story. 😊

If you love…

-Baseball College Romance
-Rivals Sister
-Instant Chemistry
-Forbidden Romance
-Secret Relationship/Hookups

READ THIS BOOK!!

Thank you Maren for the ARC! You never disappoint ❤️
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239 reviews30 followers
May 22, 2025
Short, spicy, fun, flirty, minimal plot but still just, so good!

Zara and Davis go on one fun, unforgettable date. It’s supposed to be a one time thing, but they decide to break the rules. Spice level is fairly high hehe

Tropes ~
💓 baseball
💓 brother’s rival
💓 nicknames for each other
💓 only one time

⚾️ “Gonna be real disappointed if you’re not the highest bidder tonight, beautiful.”
⚾️ “I wanted you from the moment I laid eyes on you. I saw no one else. Only you, Trouble.”
⚾️ “Bring my favorite lipstick, Trouble.”
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627 reviews469 followers
September 28, 2024
RATING: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️✨
SPICE: 🔥🔥🔥💥

Sometimes you just need a spicy good time in the form of a fast burn novella, and that's exactly what we get here. And in true Maren fashion, she can make me fall in love with characters in 150 pages of less. I swear Davis and Zara were absolutely adorable and I loved every minute of them.

✨ Baseball Novella
✨ Brother's Rival
✨ Date Auction
✨ Wild Child and a Party Boy

Zara meets Dave when she bids on him at a frat party auction, and wins a one night date with him. The attraction between the two is instant, and both of them are wild and spontaneous, leading to an unforgettable night. Neither is looking for commitment or to settle down, but they cant deny how much they want each other.

These two are my spirit animals. I love how fun they both were and how much they fed off each other. Their chemistry was so so so good, and the spice between them was absolutely explosive.

They had a little blip when Zara's brother (Davis's rival) spun himself into a tizzy, but I loved how both Davis and Zara shut that behavior down really quick and let the other one know how much they cared.

Im just so glad I got more of my cute pie Davis Guidry, and am always greedy for more time in Orleans U.

Of course I loved this one, and if you need something quick and spicy, make this a go to read.
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598 reviews237 followers
September 24, 2024
I can always count on any Maren book to be a good time and she did not let me down with Rookie Mistake. This was full of 90s romcom sprinkles and mine 90s heart loved every second of it.

This one was short, sweet and packed all the spice. This is exactly what you need in a novella and I was so happy to see Davis get his own story. I always knew he had a filthy mouth. Zara was his perfect match. She fun and sassy, confident and wild….exactly what Davis needed. I loved how from the jump they were just drawn and obsessed with one another. This was absolutely spectacular and exactly what I needed to get out of this reading funk I have been in.

Overall: 4.5
Spice: 3.5

Tropes:
- Baseball Romance
- Novella
- One Night Stand
- Brother’s Rival
- Golden Retriever x Black Cat
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152 reviews14 followers
September 19, 2024
✨Review✨
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

How pretty is this pink stack with my girl @authormarenmoore in the middle?? This novella is EVERYTHING!!! I wanted more of Davi’s after Walkoff and boy did Maren deliver… This pretty paperback is SPICY. My goodness. It’s quirky and fun, short and sweet, and everything wrapped in a pretty pink cover. Davis is Orleans U’s playboy pitcher looking for a good time, and ZARA is exactly that. Just how long do you think this good time will last? I hope you find out😋

P.S. He can definitely hang with our 3 OG baseball boys ANYDAY

Available 9.24.2024 !!!
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108 reviews188 followers
September 24, 2024
This novella had me hooked from the very beginning!! It was so cute and fun and flirty and I just was basically giggling the entire time — this was such a perfect mini continuation of the Orleans U series!

Davis and Zara were so much FUN! They both had such golden retriever energy which just made everything about their banter and their relationship so cutie. I feel like especially for a novella it can be really easy to make scenes and character development feel rushed, but this one honestly had such amazing pacing that it really didn’t even feel like a novella??? Everything just meshed together perfectly.

The date night from the beginning of the book was also OMGGG the cutest thing ever and it was so so fun. I loved this novella and I loved Davis and Zara so much!!

Tropes:
💌baseball player
💌playboy rookie x wild child
💌rivals sister
💌forbidden
💌secret romance
💌the BANTER
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338 reviews11 followers
September 21, 2024
i mean this with so much love for maren when i say this but sometimes you need a quick lil novella with not much plot (i’m not being mean she’ll admit it’s not plot heavy); it’s such a good cleanse in between books & a great way to get out of a slump if you’re in one! maren always delivers & this was no different!

i’m such a big freakin fan of orleans u so getting to go back there for a quick little visit when i thought the series was over was so exciting!! zara & davis’ story was fast, fun, and spicy—everything you want in a novella!!

thank you valentine pr for the arc!!
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316 reviews29 followers
September 24, 2024
I loved this novella!

I’m so glad our boy Davis got his moment but in even more obsessed with getting to meet Zara!!

This novella was short but packed with sweetness and spice! I loved Davis and Zara’s relationship and build up. The way Zara stoop up to her brother when he started meddling too much. I love seeing toxic family members be out in their place and having FMCs stand up for themselves.

I’m so sad that the world of Orleans U has officially come to an end though 😭 Thank you Maren for taking us on one last ride.
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196 reviews49 followers
September 24, 2024
I literally read this one sitting! Maren pens her books with a little bit of magic and well obviously romance (loads of it) and I had the biggest grin on my face the whole time I was reading Rookie Mistake! And I cannot get enough! I cannot believe I’ve finished this book already and I’m still left wanting more
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215 reviews27 followers
September 21, 2024
Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

-Rivals sister
-Novella
-College romance

What a fun quick read! This was the perfect novella and addition to the Orleans University series. If you want a big plot, skip this one. Here we have a deeper look into Davis from book 3, Walkoff Wedding. This book gives you a view into his sexy side and it definitely delivered. Zara is wild and full of trouble but her and Davis are a perfect match for one another. They are both equally spontaneous, fun and absolutely dirty!

Maren Moore NEVER misses when it comes to the spice and this novella was 100% what I needed for some fun reading!

Thank you Valentine PR for the ARC in exchange for an honest review ❤️
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1,907 reviews1,364 followers
October 26, 2024
Was this more spice than plot? Kind of, but sometimes that is just what we need.

Also, they were just fun! I loved their first night of the auction, the carefree, go wherever the night takes us. It is the epitome of the college era and freedom of adulthood!



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250 reviews16 followers
October 14, 2024
4/5 ⭐
4/5 🌶
i knew this going in, but this was basically all smut and no plot. i loved it though haha
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62 reviews
August 16, 2025
my bad for not reading the description where it says "high spice low plot" because this book really is just two hours of smut. nothing else to say really.
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367 reviews8 followers
October 3, 2024
This was a fun, spicy novella diving back into the world of Orleans University. A date with the player auction turns into a life changing night for Davis and Zara when they find how strong their chemistry is. They are even more surprised to find out Davis’ biggest rival on his baseball team is his new obsession’s brother.

Zara had such a fun, wild personality that consistently surprised me. I like how spontaneous she is and finds the fun in everything she does. Davis is immediately wrapped up in her charm and can’t help but fall for her. They bring out the best parts of each other and seeing their relationship develop was so sweet.

Maren always delivers on the plots and spice, even in her shorter stories. This was the perfect novella for my reading slump!

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/5 stars
🌶️🌶️🌶️.5/spice level
🖤Tropes/details: novella, forbidden romance/brother’s rival, secret relationship, insta-lust, obsessed with each other, college baseball player, wild child college freshmen
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October 2, 2024
I received this book as an arc in exchange for an honest review

This book was quick and straight to the point which I loved! I wish it was longer because these characters were such a vibe! I didn’t want it to end. It was definitely spicy! I can’t wait to see what the author comes out with next. This series has been amazing and I just want more
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