I feel like this series would've been better if written for Teens or Young Adults. Since it was written for middle schoolers (which is fine and dandy), a lot of the phrasing and sentence structure isn't complex; a lot of tell, rather than show. I read the original books when I was in middle school (so, the prime target audience) and I loved them. I don't remember the syntax or diction like this at all but then again, I've grown and this was my favorite book series when I was a kid so, obviously, I will romanticize it. Even though I think it's good to have books that are meant for younger kids, encouraging young readers to want to keep reading outside of school, as I get older, I feel like I've outgrown these books in a way, which is upsetting since this used to be my favorite book series.
The ending seemed extremely rushed too, with the Fairy Godmother taking Eli and his friends back home so that they go to sleep. We don't know what happened to the villains and if they agreed with Ursula or not. They were betrayed by her and held captive, described as almost dead, and we don't get see if they would keep their allegiance to her or not. It was set up previously that they held doubts about her power to take control of the parks, it would have felt nice for that to come full circle and show, hey, the villains are evil, but they also don't like it when someone who allies with them to knock them unconscious.
The ending with Eli and Finn took me back to Finn and Wayne saying goodbye though. I did like how they entered the It's A Small World attraction once again, showing that the Overtakers are gone now and there's no danger anymore. It also shows growth in Finn; he's no longer scared of the dolls and he's sharing his past and life as a Kingdom Keeper with his son. A lot of things have happened to Finn, it's nice to see this growth.
My only other gripe with this is the erasure of Mattie Weaver. Remember? The Fairlie with Amanda and Jess who could touch objects and people and see their emotions or stories or whatever? That Mattie Weaver? She was replaced by Storey Ming, who was her own character, a young woman (older than the original Kingdom Keepers) who just worked for Wayne or something. Storey didn't any powers, but Ridley Pearson, like, mashed the two together or something? Mattie was my favorite character, honestly, so I was really confused when Storey was the one with powers, since I thought that the Kingdom Keepers "banished" her or something because she betrayed or was lying to them. I do understand that Storey is named after Pearson's daughter, so I do get his attachment to that character, but I'm just confused. Did Pearson, in his rewrites, erase Mattie's character and give Storey Mattie's story? Because if so, then it seems I would have to read the rewrites and I own all of the original books.
I did still enjoy this book. It was like I was connecting with my younger, middle-school, self again.