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First published April 23, 2024
Page 40
I understand there is instant attraction, it's an actual trope, but this is their 2nd meeting. Why is her 🐱 throbbing when he is being stern with her? Why is he thinking about doing spicy things to her when this is their 2nd meeting? She is 41, he is 36, why are they acting like hormonal teenagers? I hate insta-lust. You can just acknowledge that the other person is attractive without being a creep...
Page 48
Woah, the POV changes are very sudden, very abrupt. It sort of feels like getting whiplash. They aren't smooth or even divided by chapters. POV changes happen in the middle of conversations, in the middle of chapters. Eva is walking her dog with Krystal and boom, we have a new paragraph with Sean talking to Felix in the firehouse. Way to switch up so suddenly.
Page 62
This book is so dull, I am bored out of my mind. Nothing is happening. Everyone is just having trivial conversations and they bore me to no end.
- We have a 5-year age gap between the MCs, FMC is older this time, so Age-Gap trope.
- We have Insta-Lust because they have seen each other twice and they are throbbing all over.
And
- We have a fake dating trope, but really in 62 pages they spent about 20 pages together.
Now to the list of must haves in romance books nowadays
- The LGBTQ characters who feel like the token gay characters so far.
- The toxic families. Both of them sound like they should be monitored so we have the toxic family dynamic to tick off as well, because nowadays having a healthy family dynamic is an outrageous notion.
Last, but not least
- We have a toxic and @busive ex to mix it up.
A bit generic so far.
Page 150
My god, this book is full of words but nothing to say. I don't like to be mean, but this book makes me want to pull my hair, it is so damn dull. If the characters aren't doing the deed because smut is necessary by chapter 14, then they are doing nothing. We had a few scenes with toxic people, and I hate those, but I am trying to cling onto anything that is not dull at this point.
The time jumps are terrible. They start it in one paragraph and end it in another. Waste of words. And the dialogues. They're trying to be funny, but they're so flat, it's actually painful. And the type of conversations they're having... it wants to seem important, but they are so boring. 150 pages and not one word seemed significant. 150 pages and nothing happened that I would deem entertaining. I'm disappointed.
Page 224
If, after all of this, Eva changes her mind, I will be p!ssed. I hope that won't be the case because not only would it absolutely negate all the struggles the MCs are going through, but it would also prove that false narrative in which women can only achieve happiness in one way.
Page 286
This took me a long time to read. I'm glad it ended the way it did, but that is about the only thing I liked. I found the story mostly dull except maybe around the 70-80% mark. The characters were also average. They were sweet and kind but weren't interesting or intriguing. And it was insta-lust, which I am not a fan of. The pacing suffered in a few places and the transitions between the narratives were not smooth.
"Aku cuma ingin memastikan dia baik-baik saja." (p.24)
"Aku gugup saat berada di dekat wanita cantik." (p.32)
"Jangan berani-berani menyebut pacarku seperti itu." (p.36)
"Aku hanya menginginkan yang terbaik untuk gadisku." (p.84)
"Mereka akan berusaha sangat keras untuk membuatmu merasa kecil."
"Ehm... Kau mungkin memperhatikan bahwa aku tidak kecil. Kuduga aku mungkin lebih tinggi daripada ayahmu dan jauh... lebih berat."
"Ya. Kurasa kau tahu maksudku, Bocah Besar. Bukan kecil secara ukuran, tetapi kecil sebagai manusia. Bagi mereka, kau bukan orang penting. Tak punya gelar besar yang hebat. Tak punya pekerjaan besar yang hebat."
"Ayahmu menyelamatkan nyawa, aku menyelamatkan nyawa. Sama saja."
(p.122-123)