I was honored to read this book as an ARC.
What I Enjoyed
The cast of characters is delightful. Each character is vibrant and unique in personality and skill, and I found the leading characters to be sympathetic. It was easy to cheer them on in their accomplishments.
The setting is enjoyable and immersive. I had a clear image in my mind as the characters traversed from fantasy cityscapes to abandoned temples. I would love to adventure in these landscapes myself! I wanted to learn more about the setting's history, and the drive for answers kept me reading to the end.
Where I Struggled
As I just said, the writer has a talent for immersive setting and strong characters. In fact, I so badly wanted to read more about those. The three supporting adventuring characters clearly have fascinating backstories, abilities, and relationships. I'm hopeful that maybe there's a sequel for two of them in the future? But in this particular book, the narration seemed much less interested in exploring those characters and questions than I did.
Pacing was at times a struggle, in my opinion for two reasons. One, there is a bit of a "show don't tell" problem. Since the book is written in dual first person perspective, it makes sense that we're going to have internal monologue and firsthand explanations of the leading characters' thoughts and feelings. But considering their opinions about most things rarely changed, I don't think I had to be reminded nearly so often. Specifically about their opinion of each other's physical traits. I get it, you find each other hot and smart. I promise I remember. And when there was a change or new information, it was more or less hand-fed to me rather than demonstrated in character action. Or if it WAS demonstrated in character action, the narrating character would then reiterate and explain the point to me. I can promise you no reader will be confused, at least!
Two, the writing had different priorities than the genre. I knew this book had spice going in, don't get me wrong - but I didn't realize how high of a proportion the spice would be. This isn't a book for fantasy readers who enjoy spicy scenes; it's a book for spice readers who enjoy magical settings. Obviously that's not a bad thing! But I personally found it frustrating because, in my opinion, the lead characters' complete preoccupation with their attraction to each other started cutting into and taking attention away from other aspects of the story I wanted to be interested in. The best way I can describe it is that the fantasy parts felt like they were written for YA - every plot point explained as it happened and then repeated for clarity, every setting easily recognizable, every adventure familiar. But this obviously isn't a YA novel, so I think this was done because the priority for the story was to get to the spice scenes without having to explore world building or plot details.
Super Mild Spoiler
This book literally does the "they only had two days until retirement" trope. Be so for real right now.
Serious Spoilers
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I don't think every reader will agree with me on this one, but I'm frustrated by every aspect of the ending that didn't have to do with Cal and Hal's love for each other. That part was delightful, but there was no question of it happening because these two are obsessed with each other.
One, it felt like the original stakes of the expedition completely got dropped. This troupe managed to get in armed combat with the Mortal King's dragon army and when they get home... no one gets put on trial for endangering the kingdom's safety? You spent three straight chapters at the beginning telling me the punishment could be execution! Two, Hal's career decision really bothered me. The ending of the book wants me to believe that it would be impossible for her to be a governing politician and a researcher at the same time. But the beginning and the middle of the book was filled with evidence from both descriptive action and character dialogue of the exact opposite. Her father was described as a mostly cowardly and lazy ruler who did the minimum needed to maintain status quo, and had no positive relationships with the working class. And everyone was talking about how she was the opposite, how she's a natural leader, how she treats everyone with more respect. This made it really hard to believe that she couldn't both be a researching Dragon Rider and a monarch between her sheer capability and the support of her cousin and friends. I read this book thinking I was reading the rise of a badass queen who would lead the country to a new era... and then she basically decided to take permanent sabbatical leave, because suddenly in the last four chapters she has a revelation that she didn't get to choose to be queen. Again, I don't think every reader is going to agree with me here, but it felt sudden and out of character to me.
In Summary
If you love spice that's based on passionate attraction and adoration with a magical flavor, this very well could be the book you're looking for. If you're looking for a fantasy novel with spice, this isn't it. Either way you will be drawn to the characters and the intrigue of a setting filled with possibilities that I wish I had more of a chance to explore.