Thank you to Caroline Frank and Booksprout for my eARC of “Fall Into You” in exchange for my honest review.
Let me preface this by saying I am a typical white b*tch in that I love the autumn, it’s basically a requirement as a New Englander. So, the premise of “Fall Into You” and the cover alone had me clamoring to read this.
FYI, spoilers lay ahead.
However, I was a bit confused at the start where Matt kinda instantly falls for Liza. He doesn’t remember he’s met Liza a few times when she visited her brother, Vinny, at college and he was her brother’s roommate. But he immediately calls her “well-read, smart, and quick-witted” and says “I was dying to get to know her better but was scared it would be too obvious if I only focused on her…” This is like just after being re-introduced to her as a more mature adult but he doesn’t remember her. It makes it sound as though he was pining away for her during their like six years apart. How can he assess and think she’s well-read, smart, and quick-witted from their like two minute interaction? And saying that he was “dying to get to know her better” - it just seemed like he was the one who had a crush on her.
When I read it though, I felt a bit annoyed with Liza. She is constantly trying to keep her relationship with Matt a secret from her brother, Vinny. She also pushes Matt away multiple times and just makes childish and rash decisions. Matt, I loved him. He is caring, sweet, intelligent - a great person and partner but Liza kinda takes advantage of his caring nature.
I think there was some wasted opportunity here with the plot that Matt didn’t remember Liza. Maybe like him feeling more guilty about it? Or having him not immediately fall for Liza in quite the same way but have them interact more before he gets warned off by Vinny? Or have Liza more forward in her desire of Matt at the beginning?
And the other thing that really bothered me, spoilers, is the pregnancy trope. Liza has finals coming up and she gets sick, says it’s normal for her to throw up all the time when she’s nervous but “Oh no! She’s actually pregnant!” and then it’s basically happily ever after from there. The pregnancy trope is one of my least favorites so some readers may enjoy this but I didn’t.
While the chemistry is there for Liza and Matt and there are some sweet, tender, and a few steamy moments, I feel like the potential for a fabulous fall romance was missed. It started out great with the pumpkin patch (ignoring the Matt kinda instantly falls for her bit) but then wavers as Liza begins to get on my nerves with her persistence that they don’t let anyone know they’re dating and how she shuts Matt out multiple times. I wanted cute fall dates and since it was billed as “erotic romance,” I wanted some more steam, more spice. I left feeling that Matt deserved better and so did the reader.
While it may sound like I am bashing the book, please do not think so. It’s still a decently good read. I’m glad I did have the chance to read it. I just think with the amount of potential it had, it was squandered. I will pick up another one of Frank’s books in the future because I do think the author is talented but this just didn’t hit the mark for me.