good story but…
First I enjoyed the story, a good love story with not enuff drama to even mention :(. Alot of inconsistency in the stories. Example when the MC goes to rescue Tris they take the 4x4s, then its cars, then its land rovers…the step brother with THREE men kidnap Tris but then its only two men. When they first arrive at the Bancroft house, after dinner the kids go to bed, the adults talk then Navy hugs the kids good night, umm they went to bed before the adults talked! So the author needs to pay attention to her story or keep better notes. There are several inconsistencies as mentioned, early in the story Gia is a personal admin, then towards the end she is a business manager - again the author didn’t pay attention to her notes and caused another inconsistency that her proofreaders should be catching these! As a US reader, I don’t mind British authors but with all the “ British speak” its often hard to understand. This was the first book of the series that I read, I will try another before I decide to move on. Thankfully it’s a KU!