Simplified for Beginners
In Witchbringer, the Astra Militarum series shines its rotating spotlight on the Sanctioned Psyker. Their lives are nothing but conflict. Every Imperial citizen is taught to abhor the witch from a young age. Joining the trigger-happy cannon fodder of the Guard doesn’t change this, as even her allies are weary of her existence. The kicker is that our protagonist is the prodigal daughter returning to a regiment she once led, and her outsider status lends itself towards an Inquistorial-style mystery with hidden daggers instead of lasguns.
Unfortunately, the author didn’t recognize the strengths of the cast. Despite the interpersonal drama, Witchbringer is all about traitors at the gates. The battle for Visage is basic. Flanking is the apex of tactical brilliance, and the strategic picture consists of two maneuvers. The sole Infantry regiment lacks combined arms, and none of the other Imperium factions make a token appearance. It’s particularly galling that the Ordos Hereticus doesn’t bat an eye at a planet known for its bumper crop of psykers, and the only explanation is that the author was trying to minimize references to the larger universe.
The author focused on bringing Witchbringer’s shadowy antagonist to life, spending his budget of worldbuilding references on side effects of the Imperium’s fascist government. The undercurrent of deceit is this novel’s redeeming factor, despite a preponderance of meat grinder scenes. When action fails to engage the reader, one knows the author has failed to pace the novel correctly. The first act is too slow and cerebral, and the second act is the literary equivalent of a quagmire. The ending holds clever surprises, but its backdrop is another uninspired set-piece battle. The author has the outline of an Inquisition story but tried to shoehorn it into the Astra Militarum series. It’s a failure on both fronts.
Not Recommended, with Reservations.