ARC review for The Charity in Love by Everalda Ocampo
Thanks to Everalda for the ARC opportunity!
Featured tropes: instalove, hurt/comfort, single dad,
Triggers: past death of family members, childhood abandonment
Review: 2/5
Man, guys, I don't know what to say except I just couldn't get into this one. Unfortunately, there were a lot more things I didn't like than I did like and that made it rough for me.
Things I liked:
- I thought the idea of Sophia winning the week on set and date with Leo was a fun concept.
Things I disliked or missed the mark:
- Everything moved SO fast. And that's not necessarily always a bad thing but, in this case, I didn't feel like the story was fleshed out well. Pacing was all over the place. Heck, we reach the last chapter of the book and Sophia hasn't even met Leo's kids yet. That's right, Leo avoids dating for years because of his kids and these same kids don't meet the woman we're believing he'll be living his HEA with until the last chapter. Pretty much let's all just smile and nod and go on with life. There's no time left in the book for anything else!
- The repetition in the storytelling was a lot. I marked several instances as I was reading where the author makes the same sentiment in multiple scenes. Did you know that when you're in an airport, on a plane, in a restaurant, etc. that the other people in that same location talking create a hum of background noise? If you didn't, you'll know after reading this book. It's mentioned many times, in multiple different scenes. It's not a bad thing to set the scene but when the same thing is said so many times, it really took me out of the story.
- Continuity is a thing that I hold dear. I'm a stickler for details. So, in the prologue which is dated as 10 years earlier when it says Sophia is 25 and has a 14 year old niece and then in chapter 2 (presumably now 10 years past the prologue), the niece is now 29, it kind of takes you out of it. There were several instances where they're going out for a specified meal (breakfast, lunch, dinner) and then they get to the restaurant and are having a different meal (i.e. they say they're going for breakfast but then get to the restaurant and now they're having lunch) and in one restaurant scene, they're handed menus multiple times. I get that we're talking about a whole heckin' book here but the level of inconsistencies really stopped me from being able to focus on the story and just made me increasingly annoyed as I read.
- I don't feel like the blurb really lines up with the story. First, the blurb indicates Sophia bids on a "mystery date" package with Leo. Like yes, kind of. She bids on a whole freaking week trip on-set of the soap opera which includes a walk on role, studio tour, media days, etc. and happens to feature a date. The fact that it was a week long trip was not part of the mystery, they straight up advertise the whole package as part of the auction's appeal. Then, the blurb says Leo discovers his agent signed him up for this "mystery date" package without his knowledge. Okay, maybe? I guess that could be true. If it is, it doesn't give that indication AT ALL in the book. It also makes it seem like Leo goes on this "prove to Sophia love exists" mission but really, it's pretty low-key and really not all that heroic.
Overall, this book just didn't do it for me. There were so many things that took me out of the storytelling that I couldn't focus on Sophia and Leo and just got so distracted by everything else. I did finish the book but it clocks in at about 260 pages so it's pretty short. I was frustrated enough but, given the short length, powered through. If it was any longer, I likely would have DNF'd the book.