I hardly ever give books 1 star ratings, so please know I do not give this rating lightly!
But The Fiancé Dilemma is one of the very few books that I wish I hadn’t read. I enjoyed The Spanish Love Deception, and thought The American Roommate Experiment was okay (I should have rated it lower, to be honest). After those two books, I never felt the need to read Armas’s work again, and have been just fine doing so! But when my friend had the ARC and let me have it, I figured why not give it a shot.
I will say, maybe I would have enjoyed this more had I read The Long Game. And not just enjoyed, but maybe understood it better. While it says that this can be read as a standalone, I didn’t feel that way for a lot of reasons, which I’ll explain below. But had I read TLG, I might have loved the Adalyn and Cameron cameos! There were plenty and those were cute moments.
But without having read TLG, I was so confused about…everything. The book read like you had read TLG, and had understood the Underwood family drama, the relationship between Adalyn and Josie, and how Matthew fits into the friend group in the first place. Nothing was ever explained: not how Josie knew him before he showed up in North Carolina, not how Cameron and Matthew became friends despite idol worshipping him (?), and why I should care about Matthew and Josie getting together in the first place. While I can see not wanting to explain all of this over again, the point of standalone romances part of the same universe is that they can be read as standalone, which might mean repeating necessary information for readers without necessary context! It was infuriating.
Next to that, back to Matthew and Josie as characters. The entirety of the book was narrated from Josie’s POV, and it was a very readable POV. I typically love small town romances, and typically love characters like Josie. However, I felt that a lot of her affiliations with the town weren’t explained. Why did she love it there so much that she became voluntary mayor, for one? Why does she own a coffee shop, and why does it seem like she’s never there or thinking about it when she isn’t? How do her relationships with townsfolk affect her living in her small town, why are they important to her, etc? I felt like none of those questions were really answered, which made the best part about small town romances nonexistent here.
And not only that, but she really bugged me in general for having no spine and not standing up to Bobbi and just saying “no, I don’t want any part in this!” Because she was not obligated, at any point, to do anything, but she did anyways….just because?! She literally went through with a whole farce for zero reason, and I could not stand it. It was beyond baffling.
As for Matthew, I couldn’t understand why Josie had fallen in love with him, because I couldn’t tell you anything about him past the fact that he’s a built, blond man from Boston who has brown eyes with glasses and has a moral compass that meant he left his job in Chicago. That’s it. He’s hot, he says hot things. But despite leaving Chicago for his job, we don’t get any hint of him job searching (until Josie helps him out) or really talking about anything meaningful in his life. But sure, why not pretend to be fake engaged to this woman that, for all intents and purposes, I’ve never met before. I couldn’t trust him, I truly did not understand who he was or why I should care.
So you can see how my not really understanding these two characters at all would lead to me not being invested in their getting together one bit. Especially since their first kiss didn’t appear until 344 pages into a 410 page book. Yes, you read that correctly. Despite the fake engagement trope, despite the forced proximity of lying to the press, they don’t actually kiss until the book is next to over.
This wasn’t even because of a slow burn (which, for the record, even if it was, that’s too late for a first kiss). It was because the pacing was so off. The whole book dragged. 70 pages in I was so incredibly lost as to who the characters were and what their motivations were, and I seriously considered DNFing. It didn't help that there were beyond random scene breaks, some of which don't get resolved at any point, which meant losing the thread over and over and over. Nothing really ever happened the whole book—I’m not sure I could describe a single scene outside of the opening one and the closing two.
And so, at the end of the day, I gave this one one star. It’s one of the very few books I wish I hadn’t read, and wouldn’t recommend unless you love the author’s previous books or read and loved the other one in the series. I won’t be reading another book by this author, but I hope that her readers really love this one, and it’s for them!