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Twice-Spent Comet
The fall from hopeful revolutionary to prison labourer is a hard one. Fer's world has shrunk from the whole damn universe to this anonymous asteroid and the four other convicts who share it with them. It's a fitting end, for someone who used to wish on stars but now can only seem to collect endings.
But magic and falling stars have ways of finding those who need them, and when Fer takes a chance and looks up, there's a mermaid staring back at them, silhouetted by stars.
twice-spent comet is a fairy tale for forgotten places and the people whose stories are stuck waiting for the next sentence.
But magic and falling stars have ways of finding those who need them, and when Fer takes a chance and looks up, there's a mermaid staring back at them, silhouetted by stars.
twice-spent comet is a fairy tale for forgotten places and the people whose stories are stuck waiting for the next sentence.
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Published December 3, 2024
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December 8, 2024
I was sent this book as an advanced copy by the publisher via NetGalley for reviewing purposes, but all opinions are my own.
I read this novella slowly, on sleepless nights, and I was surprised at the ease in which I got into the story and this world. The writing was immersive and almost lyrical, which sometimes works for me and sometimes it doesn't. Here I never felt like I was being pushed by the writing itself towards feeling certain emotions, which sometimes this type of writing style tries to do. What I felt was fully my own, and I appreciated that.
I read this novella slowly, on sleepless nights, and I was surprised at the ease in which I got into the story and this world. The writing was immersive and almost lyrical, which sometimes works for me and sometimes it doesn't. Here I never felt like I was being pushed by the writing itself towards feeling certain emotions, which sometimes this type of writing style tries to do. What I felt was fully my own, and I appreciated that.
August 8, 2024
This book hits the heartstrings so hard! Love Ziggy Schutz's writing and love this book.
September 2, 2024
4.75/5
First, I'd like to thank NetGalley and the Independent publisher, Meerkat Press, for making this title available as a 'Read Now' option. This was a brilliant short form story. I'm a fan of novellas, and this novellete was a delight to read. It was unputdownable and a compelling read, one you will want to finish in one sitting.
If you are fans of Becky Chambers, Martha, Wells, and Nghi Vo, then I believe you will not only connect with and enjoy this tale, but you will also be able to comfortably enjoy the fluidity of the characters. And though shorter than those books, it does not lack in depth.
My first experience with Ziggy Schutz's writing, and I can positively say I'm now a fan, shocked actually with the quality of writing produced. And I don't mean that with any disrespect to the author, but this was such a strange premise and such short form that I confess I didn't hold high expectations. I grabbed it for the cover art and premise and only expected quick fun. I was very wrong and apologize to all involved with its publication in not considering it in higher regard.
The story flowed like a fairy tale in space, with beautiful prose and fantastical themes. I always love me a found family story. And I was impressed by how much political intrigue and social injustices that Ziggy was able to weave into less than 80 pages. And better yet, how much you can believe in the love story that enfolds.
And while this is an eArc and generally I wouldn't quote, I did think this one covered much of what the story had to say - "Sometimes, secrets aren't secrets at all. They're just stories, waiting for someone to notice them."
I feel it captures the story themes of 'fighting the man', making assumptions, building trust, combatting loneliness, and creating/finding a space and people that feels safe. It's a tall order for a story that takes place on an asteroid, a prison for four criminals. Each has their own story, and heart of secrets, that brought them to this outcome. The story does take place over time, though short. I think the active story line is over about a month but might be just a little bit longer. Though it is eluded that the relationships of the characters has been developing for a little while longer.
You are introduced to an Earthbound, a Moony, a Shiprat, and a space migrant - Fer, Benat, Rack, and Moll respectively. And while the setting suggests the opposite, I was pleasantly pleased and surprised to learn the circumstances that led each of them to be labeled as criminals. In this, you will learn that not all is as it seems - and it is those who made the laws and past judgements that are the real enemies of the verse.
And before I go further, I did want to warn that Ziggy tries to break your heart at chapter 17. But persist. It's worth it and has some nice twists to share before the end. This would be a very different kind of review, I'd think, if otherwise.
I do have a few critiques. The obvious one is that I wanted a little bit more. I'd invest in more from this universe and this band of characters (not going to lie, hope that's a consideration of the author). I want more from Moll's history. And while a lovely side character, I don't feel there was really enough for me to feel too much for Rack either way. He may need a little tweaking and expansion. I also wasn't satisfied with the short blips about Mark (ironically one of the few with a traditional Earth name, yet no history). He was mentioned twice, I believe, but no context. Maybe just there as foreshadowing...IYKYK.
Also, and this is more a shortcoming of myself, but the gender fluidity of the verse was a bit hard to follow. As a fan of the previously mentioned authors, I have become accustomed to pronouns of they/it, so much so that I noted immediately when I read the first mention of alternative pronouns for another, Fer's family member who they'd been separated from at their arrest (chapter 6 mention). It felt like such a stark contrast to how the story was unfolding - and confused me a bit wondering if perhaps the initial description had a typo. But from there, many of the others begin mixing pronouns when talking of their special people - though they themselves are consistent (Moll/she; Benat/she, Rack/he, Fer/they).
The bio of the author suggests the same fluidity, so I appreciate the introduction and will work on educating myself more and expecting more in the future. But we don't get much description overall for our small band and their special people, and in general, the human mind likes to categorize. It's a survival skill and universal trait. But in this regard, do want to mention that I appreciate the comment in chapter 10 about how Fer reminisced about themselves having been introduced to the duality of using 'she/he' as opposed to 'they' or a chosen singular pronoun - felt a bit of "I'm right there with you!". So, please, readers, go into this with an open mind. And if you do start to struggle, switching to they for a moment helped me stay grounded in understanding who was being discussed.
And I think my last critique is about that the story telling - specifically the chapter intros. They really felt genre bending and I generally loved. It was really where the atmosphere of fantasy was incorporated into the SciFi. However, I feel some became longwinded and a little too philosophical to follow. I did end up highlighting quite a bit, but often had to reread the passages more than once. I can see how for some they may be off putting. Beautiful as they are, maybe toning down to be a little less abstract would benefit the reader. If the author wasn't a reader and fan of Dune, I'd be shocked. The prose and high level of thought here reminded me of passages out of that book.
And strangely, a burning question of mine is whether the author had read Chain Gang All Stars. It could be coincidental, but I found similar themes and specific concepts to be similar when it came to the judicial system, how sentences are carried out, isolation, transport and even the wrist cuffs. And if indeed inspired, kudos for being so well incorporated. As I also found that book compelling and a fantastic read. Love to see it expanded into this world.
And my final thoughts has nothing to do with the story, but more about the format and how NetGalley eARCs are incorporated into the Kindle app. I'm devastated after every book that my notes and highlighted quotes don't get saved to Goodreads. *cries yet again*.
In summary, check out this story. And if you have other suggestions for me like this one, please share!
First, I'd like to thank NetGalley and the Independent publisher, Meerkat Press, for making this title available as a 'Read Now' option. This was a brilliant short form story. I'm a fan of novellas, and this novellete was a delight to read. It was unputdownable and a compelling read, one you will want to finish in one sitting.
If you are fans of Becky Chambers, Martha, Wells, and Nghi Vo, then I believe you will not only connect with and enjoy this tale, but you will also be able to comfortably enjoy the fluidity of the characters. And though shorter than those books, it does not lack in depth.
My first experience with Ziggy Schutz's writing, and I can positively say I'm now a fan, shocked actually with the quality of writing produced. And I don't mean that with any disrespect to the author, but this was such a strange premise and such short form that I confess I didn't hold high expectations. I grabbed it for the cover art and premise and only expected quick fun. I was very wrong and apologize to all involved with its publication in not considering it in higher regard.
The story flowed like a fairy tale in space, with beautiful prose and fantastical themes. I always love me a found family story. And I was impressed by how much political intrigue and social injustices that Ziggy was able to weave into less than 80 pages. And better yet, how much you can believe in the love story that enfolds.
And while this is an eArc and generally I wouldn't quote, I did think this one covered much of what the story had to say - "Sometimes, secrets aren't secrets at all. They're just stories, waiting for someone to notice them."
I feel it captures the story themes of 'fighting the man', making assumptions, building trust, combatting loneliness, and creating/finding a space and people that feels safe. It's a tall order for a story that takes place on an asteroid, a prison for four criminals. Each has their own story, and heart of secrets, that brought them to this outcome. The story does take place over time, though short. I think the active story line is over about a month but might be just a little bit longer. Though it is eluded that the relationships of the characters has been developing for a little while longer.
You are introduced to an Earthbound, a Moony, a Shiprat, and a space migrant - Fer, Benat, Rack, and Moll respectively. And while the setting suggests the opposite, I was pleasantly pleased and surprised to learn the circumstances that led each of them to be labeled as criminals. In this, you will learn that not all is as it seems - and it is those who made the laws and past judgements that are the real enemies of the verse.
And before I go further, I did want to warn that Ziggy tries to break your heart at chapter 17. But persist. It's worth it and has some nice twists to share before the end. This would be a very different kind of review, I'd think, if otherwise.
I do have a few critiques. The obvious one is that I wanted a little bit more. I'd invest in more from this universe and this band of characters (not going to lie, hope that's a consideration of the author). I want more from Moll's history. And while a lovely side character, I don't feel there was really enough for me to feel too much for Rack either way. He may need a little tweaking and expansion. I also wasn't satisfied with the short blips about Mark (ironically one of the few with a traditional Earth name, yet no history). He was mentioned twice, I believe, but no context. Maybe just there as foreshadowing...IYKYK.
Also, and this is more a shortcoming of myself, but the gender fluidity of the verse was a bit hard to follow. As a fan of the previously mentioned authors, I have become accustomed to pronouns of they/it, so much so that I noted immediately when I read the first mention of alternative pronouns for another, Fer's family member who they'd been separated from at their arrest (chapter 6 mention). It felt like such a stark contrast to how the story was unfolding - and confused me a bit wondering if perhaps the initial description had a typo. But from there, many of the others begin mixing pronouns when talking of their special people - though they themselves are consistent (Moll/she; Benat/she, Rack/he, Fer/they).
The bio of the author suggests the same fluidity, so I appreciate the introduction and will work on educating myself more and expecting more in the future. But we don't get much description overall for our small band and their special people, and in general, the human mind likes to categorize. It's a survival skill and universal trait. But in this regard, do want to mention that I appreciate the comment in chapter 10 about how Fer reminisced about themselves having been introduced to the duality of using 'she/he' as opposed to 'they' or a chosen singular pronoun - felt a bit of "I'm right there with you!". So, please, readers, go into this with an open mind. And if you do start to struggle, switching to they for a moment helped me stay grounded in understanding who was being discussed.
And I think my last critique is about that the story telling - specifically the chapter intros. They really felt genre bending and I generally loved. It was really where the atmosphere of fantasy was incorporated into the SciFi. However, I feel some became longwinded and a little too philosophical to follow. I did end up highlighting quite a bit, but often had to reread the passages more than once. I can see how for some they may be off putting. Beautiful as they are, maybe toning down to be a little less abstract would benefit the reader. If the author wasn't a reader and fan of Dune, I'd be shocked. The prose and high level of thought here reminded me of passages out of that book.
And strangely, a burning question of mine is whether the author had read Chain Gang All Stars. It could be coincidental, but I found similar themes and specific concepts to be similar when it came to the judicial system, how sentences are carried out, isolation, transport and even the wrist cuffs. And if indeed inspired, kudos for being so well incorporated. As I also found that book compelling and a fantastic read. Love to see it expanded into this world.
And my final thoughts has nothing to do with the story, but more about the format and how NetGalley eARCs are incorporated into the Kindle app. I'm devastated after every book that my notes and highlighted quotes don't get saved to Goodreads. *cries yet again*.
In summary, check out this story. And if you have other suggestions for me like this one, please share!
September 30, 2024
From wishing upon falling stars to being imprisoned on an asteroid the wonderous possibilities to be found in space collide in Twice-Spent Comet by Ziggy Schutz.
To read this, and other book reviews, visit my website: http://makinggoodstories.wordpress.com/.
Sentenced to imprisonment on an asteroid with hard labor to prepare it for future settlement by the rich, Fer’s world has changed drastically from what they recall of their Earth-bound life to a rather lonely existence with three other prisoners of Moll, Benat, and Rack, each of whom has their own memories, fond or not, of their lives before the asteroid sustaining them. Though the four have mostly kept to themselves, they’ve slowly started opening themselves up to one another and sharing stories about their pasts; however, when Fer meets a celestial body that they call a Mermaid it’s all too easy to fall into old habits of harboring secrets. The Mermaid, named Ophelia, spends time with Fer and the two draw closer as their relationship becomes more firmly definable. When an opportunity for a rescue arises with the arrival of a ship with distinctive art on the side, they all seize upon it only to find that the vast cosmos is surprisingly, and happily, smaller than they all could have anticipated.
In a quick-to-read and captivating novella, each chapter opens with a fairy tale-stylized snippet that provides a generalized summary of the relevant portion of the prisoners’ tale while the heart of the chapter delves into the specific detail to provide the narrative’s main focus and propel events forward. The premise of the story was intriguingly strange with political injustices, relationship dynamics, and, of course, space travel and cosmic mermaids; it’s impressive to include such a vast array of topics in such a condensed number of pages and it would be fascinating to explore this world in deeper depth. Through the stories that are shared between the characters, with glimpses into their unique galactic origins and experiences, there’s a thread woven between them that binds them together to form a family of the found variety within the confines of the circumstances they find themselves in, though the reveal of two characters who unknowingly had someone in common between them outside of the boundaries of the asteroid was a sweet and optimistic note for the tale to close on.
Overall, I’d give it a 4.5 out of 5 stars.
*I received a copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
To read this, and other book reviews, visit my website: http://makinggoodstories.wordpress.com/.
Sentenced to imprisonment on an asteroid with hard labor to prepare it for future settlement by the rich, Fer’s world has changed drastically from what they recall of their Earth-bound life to a rather lonely existence with three other prisoners of Moll, Benat, and Rack, each of whom has their own memories, fond or not, of their lives before the asteroid sustaining them. Though the four have mostly kept to themselves, they’ve slowly started opening themselves up to one another and sharing stories about their pasts; however, when Fer meets a celestial body that they call a Mermaid it’s all too easy to fall into old habits of harboring secrets. The Mermaid, named Ophelia, spends time with Fer and the two draw closer as their relationship becomes more firmly definable. When an opportunity for a rescue arises with the arrival of a ship with distinctive art on the side, they all seize upon it only to find that the vast cosmos is surprisingly, and happily, smaller than they all could have anticipated.
In a quick-to-read and captivating novella, each chapter opens with a fairy tale-stylized snippet that provides a generalized summary of the relevant portion of the prisoners’ tale while the heart of the chapter delves into the specific detail to provide the narrative’s main focus and propel events forward. The premise of the story was intriguingly strange with political injustices, relationship dynamics, and, of course, space travel and cosmic mermaids; it’s impressive to include such a vast array of topics in such a condensed number of pages and it would be fascinating to explore this world in deeper depth. Through the stories that are shared between the characters, with glimpses into their unique galactic origins and experiences, there’s a thread woven between them that binds them together to form a family of the found variety within the confines of the circumstances they find themselves in, though the reveal of two characters who unknowingly had someone in common between them outside of the boundaries of the asteroid was a sweet and optimistic note for the tale to close on.
Overall, I’d give it a 4.5 out of 5 stars.
*I received a copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
September 14, 2024
Space Mermaids? Rebels and Murderers (and everything in between) imprisoned on an asteroid? Lots of emotions? Yes- this book has all this and maybe a bit more.
Thanks to NetGalley for the opportunity to read this novella that's set to come out later this year- I see one can pre-order it now.
This novella has an interesting writing style- ethereal and lyrical, bordering on poetry which made it enjoyable, and probably quotable (once it's pubbed).
Life on this small asteroid is very routine for Fer and their team- as they create swimming pools and sort of terraform this asteroid for future rich settlers. They are all working off various criminal sentences and finding their way into community. One day Fer encounters what they decide is a mermaid. They are named Ophelia and they are beauty personified, stunning. This of course, - changes almost everything.
This book will appeal to readers interested in Science Fiction/Fantasy, Character driven novels, and those interested in gender expression.
I did feel that I wanted a bit more context-maybe a tiny bit more world building, and more of the interesting characters the author has created. While that is a criticism, it’s also a praise, better to leave readers intrigued, rather than bored.
Thanks to NetGalley for the opportunity to read this novella that's set to come out later this year- I see one can pre-order it now.
This novella has an interesting writing style- ethereal and lyrical, bordering on poetry which made it enjoyable, and probably quotable (once it's pubbed).
Life on this small asteroid is very routine for Fer and their team- as they create swimming pools and sort of terraform this asteroid for future rich settlers. They are all working off various criminal sentences and finding their way into community. One day Fer encounters what they decide is a mermaid. They are named Ophelia and they are beauty personified, stunning. This of course, - changes almost everything.
This book will appeal to readers interested in Science Fiction/Fantasy, Character driven novels, and those interested in gender expression.
I did feel that I wanted a bit more context-maybe a tiny bit more world building, and more of the interesting characters the author has created. While that is a criticism, it’s also a praise, better to leave readers intrigued, rather than bored.
September 3, 2024
Our story takes place in space, at a prison camp on an asteroid, and we learn about our main character and their fellow convicts: how did they all end up on that desolate rock? One day, magic, in the form of a celestial "mermaid", appears and changes their fate!
I liked this: it was interesting and creative, and played with gender in a unique way. While the verb tense interrupted my reading flow at times, the style of writing otherwise made for a vividly described read. The minimal backstories and world building told you just enough to sink into this short narrative, without adding unnecessary bulk, while keeping some aspects magically mysterious.
Overall, this was imaginative, and a very successful short work with a lot of meaning and heart.
Thank you to Netgalley and Independent Publishers Group for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I liked this: it was interesting and creative, and played with gender in a unique way. While the verb tense interrupted my reading flow at times, the style of writing otherwise made for a vividly described read. The minimal backstories and world building told you just enough to sink into this short narrative, without adding unnecessary bulk, while keeping some aspects magically mysterious.
Overall, this was imaginative, and a very successful short work with a lot of meaning and heart.
Thank you to Netgalley and Independent Publishers Group for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.
September 16, 2024
This was a gorgeous, heart-warming tale of losing and finding, of found family and beloved friends, and of how the absolute wrong things can lead to the absolute best. Plus, like, you know, space mermaids and shining-bright LGBTQ+ representation.
July 13, 2025
I really enjoyed Twice-Spent Comet. Sometimes a novella can feel a bit light, like there should be another 50-60 pages, but this isn't the case here. Ziggy Schultz does a great job having just the right about of story and background for Twice-Spent Comet to work, while also making me want to read more stories set in this world.
I absolutely loved the queer/gender-queer representation in the novella. I did find it odd to read a character's pronouns changing several times in the same sentence, I'd never come across that before (irl or in a book). I think it was to signal a genderfluid character. I've just never come across someone changing gendered pronouns constantly on someone else's behalf, when they're not there. So that was interesting to see!
I absolutely loved the queer/gender-queer representation in the novella. I did find it odd to read a character's pronouns changing several times in the same sentence, I'd never come across that before (irl or in a book). I think it was to signal a genderfluid character. I've just never come across someone changing gendered pronouns constantly on someone else's behalf, when they're not there. So that was interesting to see!
August 31, 2025
This is a mesmerizing novella about hope, the stories we tell ourselves, and the ways we find connection in a world that often tries to tear us apart.
Poetic, lovely, and shot through with mystery and romance, it's a glimpse into a future world that's as complicated — and beautiful — as our own.
Poetic, lovely, and shot through with mystery and romance, it's a glimpse into a future world that's as complicated — and beautiful — as our own.
March 1, 2025
Galactic space mermaids! What else can I say? Engrossing, well written queer / trans space opera novella about the power of storytelling.
November 25, 2024
This was a FANTASTIC read in my opinion. The inner monologue at the top of each chapter made me feel like I couldn’t wait to see what would come next. Fer was SUCH a complex character, as were the mermaid clan. It was so interesting to learn about each arrest, and what led each of the characters to be where they ended up. I wish I could read this again for the first time. The fantasy elements, dystopian elements, and found family events all came together so beautifully and the book was so well written I really connected to each individual character.
December 28, 2024
** I received an ARC for an honest review **
Twice Spent Comet is a unique blend of science fiction world building which is outwardly dystopian but a fantastical twist. At a moment of despair, the convict Fer looks up at the stars from his asteroid prison. For once, the stars look back in the outline of a mermaid. Science fiction needs solid world building and here, Schultz does not disappoint and we learn the world, universe, history, truth from lies from four convicts ostracised on a remote asteroid prison. This novella could easily have fallen info pitfalls of both science fiction and fantasy. Through descriptive prose and strong character development, this universe shines with the magic of a fairy tale.
Schultz writes incredibly well to deliver a truly unique, engaging novella with in-depth characters emotional sensitivity. Well worth the read!
Conclusion
Science fiction is not usually my comfortable forte but the dystopian and fantastical collide in a novella that’s intelligent, emotionally compelling and as magical as the mermaid in the stars. A Recommended read!
** This is my personal opinion and does not reflect any judging decisions **
Twice Spent Comet is a unique blend of science fiction world building which is outwardly dystopian but a fantastical twist. At a moment of despair, the convict Fer looks up at the stars from his asteroid prison. For once, the stars look back in the outline of a mermaid. Science fiction needs solid world building and here, Schultz does not disappoint and we learn the world, universe, history, truth from lies from four convicts ostracised on a remote asteroid prison. This novella could easily have fallen info pitfalls of both science fiction and fantasy. Through descriptive prose and strong character development, this universe shines with the magic of a fairy tale.
Schultz writes incredibly well to deliver a truly unique, engaging novella with in-depth characters emotional sensitivity. Well worth the read!
Conclusion
Science fiction is not usually my comfortable forte but the dystopian and fantastical collide in a novella that’s intelligent, emotionally compelling and as magical as the mermaid in the stars. A Recommended read!
** This is my personal opinion and does not reflect any judging decisions **
September 7, 2024
"Sometimes, change is an intentional effort. One you've got to double down on to make stick, no matter how much it stings."
Thank you to NetGalley, Ziggy Schutz, and Meerkat Press for the E-ARC!
If you're looking for a quick book to read in one sitting, this is the one for you. While it's short, you get a complete story filled with magic, mermaids and friendships.
When I think about the writing of this book, all I can say is that it's mesmerizing. It's not simplistic, but it's not overly complex/filled with purple prose either. It's just magical. It pulls you in and keeps you reading. The story is less than 80 pages, but it doesn't feel like it.
With so little pages to develop characters, the author still manages to do it well. I felt like I knew so much about Fer, about the traumas they've suffered and how they've closed themselves off because of it. The other prisoners on the asteroid also brought so much personality to the novella. That's not even mentioning Ophelia and the other mermaids too. This was truly a story about found family in the most unexpected of places and times.
I'm glad I found this while browsing for E-ARC's and would highly recommend others pick it up when it releases!
Thank you to NetGalley, Ziggy Schutz, and Meerkat Press for the E-ARC!
If you're looking for a quick book to read in one sitting, this is the one for you. While it's short, you get a complete story filled with magic, mermaids and friendships.
When I think about the writing of this book, all I can say is that it's mesmerizing. It's not simplistic, but it's not overly complex/filled with purple prose either. It's just magical. It pulls you in and keeps you reading. The story is less than 80 pages, but it doesn't feel like it.
With so little pages to develop characters, the author still manages to do it well. I felt like I knew so much about Fer, about the traumas they've suffered and how they've closed themselves off because of it. The other prisoners on the asteroid also brought so much personality to the novella. That's not even mentioning Ophelia and the other mermaids too. This was truly a story about found family in the most unexpected of places and times.
I'm glad I found this while browsing for E-ARC's and would highly recommend others pick it up when it releases!
September 12, 2024
Twice-Spent Comet by Ziggy Schutz is a gripping and absorbing novel that will resonate deeply with readers who appreciate introspective, character-driven science fiction that explores the human condition, redemption, and the complexities of hope and resilience in the face of adversity.
Thank you Meerkat Press & Netgalley for making this book available as a Read Now book! This book was okay. It was very creative but I didn’t like it very much. I never felt emotionally invested in the story but it was a quick read.
Thank you Meerkat Press & Netgalley for making this book available as a Read Now book! This book was okay. It was very creative but I didn’t like it very much. I never felt emotionally invested in the story but it was a quick read.
October 13, 2024
Twice-Spent Comet, by Ziggy Schutz, is a quick, sci-fi fairytale. I liked the found family element, and learning about each characters arrest. The ending was satisfying and sweet. Thank you NetGalley for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
September 11, 2024
A rich land developer had planned to build luxury space mansions on Adrastea. “Every swing of the shovels adds…value to some faceless entrepreneur’s portfolio.” Five prisoners arrived by transfer ship, to the asteroid Adrastea, to perform hard labor in deep space.
The five had set foot on the asteroid; however, one’s safety line was cut. Now the work detail of four prisoners would plant atmosphere for seed development and dig holes for swimming pools and survival bunkers.
Who are the prisoners?
-Fer, a human, has served six months of her fifteen year sentence for revolutionary activity. “Touch hurts the same way sudden light does. Like their body isn’t made for it anymore.”
-Moll, a space migrant, tries to make her own luck. She hides a contraband tattoo gun in her prosthetic leg. She is everyone’s favorite.
-Benat, a moony, wears the metal cuff of a murderer and is a high risk prisoner.
-Rack, a shiprat, boasts that his best heist was the theft of a pair of lungs.
Serving time on the asteroid was not conducive to friendship. The prisoners were singular workers, not working within sight of each other. Sleeping arrangements consisted of open compartments separated by thin audio dividers. It was a dark, silent, and solitary existence.
One day, object-like large ships “streak across the horizon like comets…creature’s bodies trail off like ellipses of stardust…with hair that shines like nebula as it bounces around their heads, “Mermaid” feels just as impossible as “Angel”...they swam through the stars and knew of humans but knew none, until they happened upon a ring of space rock and bright eyes spotted them.”
“Touch was not a thing the four of them liked anymore so they filled the space around them with words of encouragement. The Mermaid [Ophelia] however gives contact with ease without expectation.” The ragtag convicts were learning to redefine what constitutes a family.
“Twice-Spent Comet” is a novella with heart. The writing excellently conveys the backstory of each character. The interwoven passages of magic include, “Magic, as everyone knows, must be Spoken and Heard and Believed, and so it was so, that stars were Magic…”.
This engaging read did however present challenges with frequently changing pronouns. This might be off-putting for some readers. All in all, a feel good sci fi fantasy!
Thank you Meerkat Press and Net Galley for the arc in exchange for an honest review.
The five had set foot on the asteroid; however, one’s safety line was cut. Now the work detail of four prisoners would plant atmosphere for seed development and dig holes for swimming pools and survival bunkers.
Who are the prisoners?
-Fer, a human, has served six months of her fifteen year sentence for revolutionary activity. “Touch hurts the same way sudden light does. Like their body isn’t made for it anymore.”
-Moll, a space migrant, tries to make her own luck. She hides a contraband tattoo gun in her prosthetic leg. She is everyone’s favorite.
-Benat, a moony, wears the metal cuff of a murderer and is a high risk prisoner.
-Rack, a shiprat, boasts that his best heist was the theft of a pair of lungs.
Serving time on the asteroid was not conducive to friendship. The prisoners were singular workers, not working within sight of each other. Sleeping arrangements consisted of open compartments separated by thin audio dividers. It was a dark, silent, and solitary existence.
One day, object-like large ships “streak across the horizon like comets…creature’s bodies trail off like ellipses of stardust…with hair that shines like nebula as it bounces around their heads, “Mermaid” feels just as impossible as “Angel”...they swam through the stars and knew of humans but knew none, until they happened upon a ring of space rock and bright eyes spotted them.”
“Touch was not a thing the four of them liked anymore so they filled the space around them with words of encouragement. The Mermaid [Ophelia] however gives contact with ease without expectation.” The ragtag convicts were learning to redefine what constitutes a family.
“Twice-Spent Comet” is a novella with heart. The writing excellently conveys the backstory of each character. The interwoven passages of magic include, “Magic, as everyone knows, must be Spoken and Heard and Believed, and so it was so, that stars were Magic…”.
This engaging read did however present challenges with frequently changing pronouns. This might be off-putting for some readers. All in all, a feel good sci fi fantasy!
Thank you Meerkat Press and Net Galley for the arc in exchange for an honest review.
September 11, 2024
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**✨ *Twice-Spent Comet* by Ziggy Schutz ✨**
**⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️**
*Twice-Spent Comet* by Ziggy Schutz is an absolute gem of a novella, filled with whimsy, hope, and unexpected magic in the unlikeliest of places. This fairy tale for the forgotten paints a breathtakingly beautiful story about Fer, a convict whose universe has shrunk to the confines of an asteroid, where they share space with other prisoners and lost hopes. But one magical moment changes everything—a mermaid, bathed in starlight, looks back at Fer, igniting a new spark in their otherwise bleak existence.
Schutz's prose is lyrical and poignant, capturing the isolation and longing that permeates Fer's life while weaving in the promise of something more. The metaphor of wishing on stars takes on new life as Fer's journey toward redemption and connection unfolds. This story is both fantastical and deeply human, offering a reminder that even in the darkest places, magic and hope can find a way to break through.
**💬 Favorite Quote:**
*"Some stars are spent, and some still burn, but none are ever truly gone."*
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**⚡️ Highlights:**
- **Characters**: Fer is a protagonist you can't help but root for, and the supporting characters are just as captivating in their own ways.
- **Setting**: The bleak asteroid, contrasted with the ethereal beauty of the mermaid, adds a dreamlike quality to the narrative.
- **Themes**: Themes of redemption, magic, and hope against the odds make this novella a powerful, emotional read.
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If you love fairy tales with a twist, magic in unexpected places, and stories that celebrate the forgotten, *Twice-Spent Comet* is a must-read. This novella left me enchanted and yearning for more.
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*I received this book through NetGalley as an ARC reader. This will not in any way affect my thoughts or opinions on the book.*
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**✨ *Twice-Spent Comet* by Ziggy Schutz ✨**
**⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️**
*Twice-Spent Comet* by Ziggy Schutz is an absolute gem of a novella, filled with whimsy, hope, and unexpected magic in the unlikeliest of places. This fairy tale for the forgotten paints a breathtakingly beautiful story about Fer, a convict whose universe has shrunk to the confines of an asteroid, where they share space with other prisoners and lost hopes. But one magical moment changes everything—a mermaid, bathed in starlight, looks back at Fer, igniting a new spark in their otherwise bleak existence.
Schutz's prose is lyrical and poignant, capturing the isolation and longing that permeates Fer's life while weaving in the promise of something more. The metaphor of wishing on stars takes on new life as Fer's journey toward redemption and connection unfolds. This story is both fantastical and deeply human, offering a reminder that even in the darkest places, magic and hope can find a way to break through.
**💬 Favorite Quote:**
*"Some stars are spent, and some still burn, but none are ever truly gone."*
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**⚡️ Highlights:**
- **Characters**: Fer is a protagonist you can't help but root for, and the supporting characters are just as captivating in their own ways.
- **Setting**: The bleak asteroid, contrasted with the ethereal beauty of the mermaid, adds a dreamlike quality to the narrative.
- **Themes**: Themes of redemption, magic, and hope against the odds make this novella a powerful, emotional read.
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If you love fairy tales with a twist, magic in unexpected places, and stories that celebrate the forgotten, *Twice-Spent Comet* is a must-read. This novella left me enchanted and yearning for more.
See more reviews at:
Casla Reads
*I received this book through NetGalley as an ARC reader. This will not in any way affect my thoughts or opinions on the book.*
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September 14, 2024
Right off the bat, Schutz's writing style in Twice-Spent Comet is comfortable and companionable in a way that makes the reader feel at home, like they and a friend just sat down in a big, round booth with a beer (or a latte) and their friend is telling them this crazy story about love and crime and the magic of a falling star.
I'm usually a stickler for "science fiction" and "fantasy" as opposed to "sci-fi & fantasy," as many outlets and publishers tend to call the PB&J of the Other Worlds, but this novella superbly blends the two together in a way I really, really enjoyed. Worldbuilding details are peppered in perfectly throughout, from Moon accents and bionic medicine to the sheer size of this known universe and the diversity of its occupants.
If you're into science fiction, fantasy, gender-neutral protagonists, the power of a name, the romance of the unknown and the magic of in-between spaces, this one's wholeheartedly and unreservedly the read for you. You may also be me--you might want to get that checked out.
Many thanks to NetGalley and Meerkat Press for providing this advance copy and the chance to share my thoughts!
I'm usually a stickler for "science fiction" and "fantasy" as opposed to "sci-fi & fantasy," as many outlets and publishers tend to call the PB&J of the Other Worlds, but this novella superbly blends the two together in a way I really, really enjoyed. Worldbuilding details are peppered in perfectly throughout, from Moon accents and bionic medicine to the sheer size of this known universe and the diversity of its occupants.
If you're into science fiction, fantasy, gender-neutral protagonists, the power of a name, the romance of the unknown and the magic of in-between spaces, this one's wholeheartedly and unreservedly the read for you. You may also be me--you might want to get that checked out.
Many thanks to NetGalley and Meerkat Press for providing this advance copy and the chance to share my thoughts!
September 1, 2024
Space scifi novella Twice-Spent Comet by Ziggy Schultz is so unique and imaginative! It follows former activist, now convict and prison laborer Fer as they serve sentence with four other convicts on a prison camp asteroid. One day a celestial “mermaid” comes down from space and joins them. We follow a non-linear story structure where we delve into the backstories of the convicts, how they ended up on the asteroid, and then the friendships that form between them.
The magic in the story (the mermaid) is described so vividly. The language used to described form, movement, space, texture is so exquisite that I had my eyes closed seeing it in my mind. What an unexpected joy to experience! I also really appreciated the beautiful found family storyline between the characters.
Thank you to Netgalley and Meerkat Press for this e-arc. This character driven, hopeful novella is a little gem with prose to sink into.
The magic in the story (the mermaid) is described so vividly. The language used to described form, movement, space, texture is so exquisite that I had my eyes closed seeing it in my mind. What an unexpected joy to experience! I also really appreciated the beautiful found family storyline between the characters.
Thank you to Netgalley and Meerkat Press for this e-arc. This character driven, hopeful novella is a little gem with prose to sink into.
October 5, 2024
Fer is one of the four prison laborers on an unknown asteroid. There is room for eight prison laborers but there is only the four. They follow a routine that first starts with eating metaphorical bread before the day’s labor. Humans can only go to certain prisons. One day he looks up from his work to the sky and sees a mermaid. How is that possible?
This is an amazing story. It was not what I expected. Though that wasn’t a problem as I kept reading page after page. It’s an unique science fiction novel. It can be read quickly but don’t or you may miss something important.
Disclaimer: I received an arc of this book from the author/publisher from Netgalley. I wasn’t obligated to write a favorable review. The opinions expressed are strictly my own.
This is an amazing story. It was not what I expected. Though that wasn’t a problem as I kept reading page after page. It’s an unique science fiction novel. It can be read quickly but don’t or you may miss something important.
Disclaimer: I received an arc of this book from the author/publisher from Netgalley. I wasn’t obligated to write a favorable review. The opinions expressed are strictly my own.
January 24, 2025
I'm late on this one as it got lost in the holiday shuffle.
This novella was very sweet. Cosmic mermaids? Yes please! I think I would've liked more information about how they came to be, but it's sufficiently mysterious. I thought the idea of magic being simple things like a trail of interconnected coincidences was sweet. Some things I didn't understand, But that's just me thinking too hard.
This novella was very sweet. Cosmic mermaids? Yes please! I think I would've liked more information about how they came to be, but it's sufficiently mysterious. I thought the idea of magic being simple things like a trail of interconnected coincidences was sweet. Some things I didn't understand, But that's just me thinking too hard.
September 24, 2024
This spacefaring fairy tale is as precociously trendy, whimsical, free-loving, diversity-box-checking, queer-geared, and gender non-conforming as the times salivate for. It would almost be tediously overdone (though I am very much for all the things listed above! ideally not as the only thing of note about the story.), had it not been so well written.
So, it ends up being rather charming in its way and at just 70-some pages smart enough not to overstay its welcome and overexploit its inherent whimsy.
Thanks Netgalley.
So, it ends up being rather charming in its way and at just 70-some pages smart enough not to overstay its welcome and overexploit its inherent whimsy.
Thanks Netgalley.
September 28, 2024
looking for an adorable, literally-star-crossed sapphic romance? looking for a story about revolution, community, and fighting for each other even when the worst has already happened to you? look no further, this is the novella you want to read (and i promise, you do want to read it). there is not a character in this story i don’t love; schutz does an amazing job weaving their backgrounds into fer’s story without ever distracting from our quiet protagonist. a really, really excellent read that will leave you with hope for our world.
September 28, 2024
Schutz writes about a kind of magic we need more of: where the fantasy of space mermaids and the reality of the bonds between ourselves are equally miraculous. From within the tight confines of a novella Schutz writes constellations out of every character and invites you to spend a while enchanted by their glow.
Was an honor to be a beta reader for this story and I look forward to having an official copy to curl up with this winter!
Was an honor to be a beta reader for this story and I look forward to having an official copy to curl up with this winter!
January 10, 2025
A short but impactful read! I'm always so down for letting love and hope thrive, especially when the Man is trying to tear up down. I love the critique on the prison system and capitalist society mixed with the embrace of found family and representation. On top of that, the writing itself flows so well, it's clever, and the imagery is incredibly vivid. Can't wait to see more from the author in the future!
February 26, 2025
I loved the book, simply loved it.
It is just the sort of book I like to read: a bit out of my comfort zone, fantasy, sweet, poetic.
There is magic, there is a kind of horror (being sentenced for 30 years and having to live on an asteroid is horror to me), there are gruesome details and there is all sorts of love in this story.
My favorite sentence:
Happy endings are just choosing to stop the story at the right time, Fer thinks.
It is just the sort of book I like to read: a bit out of my comfort zone, fantasy, sweet, poetic.
There is magic, there is a kind of horror (being sentenced for 30 years and having to live on an asteroid is horror to me), there are gruesome details and there is all sorts of love in this story.
My favorite sentence:
Happy endings are just choosing to stop the story at the right time, Fer thinks.
January 24, 2025
"The words they use to describe the prisons like this one would translate to 'inhumane', except that other species words for cruelty often sound awfully similar to 'human'."
This is a really immersive novella that felt like a sci-fi fairy tale about injustice, rebellion, and love. The whole thing also has a dreamy quality to it that just adds to the joy it brings.
4⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️✖️
This is a really immersive novella that felt like a sci-fi fairy tale about injustice, rebellion, and love. The whole thing also has a dreamy quality to it that just adds to the joy it brings.
4⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️✖️
December 3, 2024
Ziggy Schutz manages to put a great deal into a very slim book. It's a lovely story of freedom, love and how much friendships can mean. Don't miss this.
I hope we hear much more from this wonderful writer.
I hope we hear much more from this wonderful writer.
December 26, 2024
Absolutely incredible, and wonderfully captivating! Could not put it down from start to finish, and it left me wanting more. Beautiful storytelling and immersive world building. Such an amazing, roller coaster of a story, all in less than 100 pages. Cannot wait to see more from you! <3
January 17, 2025
Sent this book from Netgallery. I found it beautiful and poetic, reminiscent of The Little Prince in its simplistic portrayal of the complexity of love. It’s critic of humanity and social constructs and constructs. I will definitely be recommending to my students to see what they think.
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