This was a quick read, a flash fiction story of about 600 words. It's written for a younger audience and has an encouraging lesson in it, though I feel that it had much too abrupt of an ending. It started off nicely and felt like it was going somewhere that a couple hundred words couldn't contain. I feel that that's why it ended like it did. The author possibly had a word limit (evident from the description mentioning it was for a competition), and had too ambitious of a story for the word count. I'd be interested to see if there was more to be written as a continuation. But since this story ends where it does, I couldn't fully enjoy it.