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Fractured Kingdom #2
Odyssey
A shocking truth has come to light that will change the kingdom . . . but can Persephone and Azriel survive long enough to see it through? The epic YA romantic fantasy continues in the sequel to Prophecy and the second book of the Fractured Kingdom trilogy.
In the final moments of Prophecy, a truth was revealed to Persephone and Azriel—one that could change everything forever. For her. For him. For them. For the entire kingdom.
But the murderous Regent Mordesius wants this truth buried and them along with it. Cornered and out of options, Azriel boldly bargains: release them, and they will seek out the mythical healing pool. Mordesius agrees but warns that if they do not find it, he'll make those dearest to them suffer—starting with King Finnius.
Persephone has never needed Azriel's teasing warmth more, but she is discovering that there is a price to pay for having broken past promises. Together, the pair set off on a journey that will take them to the farthest corners of the kingdom. Danger will ever lie ahead and behind them; they will battle men and beasts alike.
Will Persephone and Azriel survive these perils? And will this quest see their romance grow cold—or will it burn hotter than ever?
Odyssey is the dramatic, heartpounding second book in the atmospheric, deeply romantic and epic Fractured Kingdom trilogy.
In the final moments of Prophecy, a truth was revealed to Persephone and Azriel—one that could change everything forever. For her. For him. For them. For the entire kingdom.
But the murderous Regent Mordesius wants this truth buried and them along with it. Cornered and out of options, Azriel boldly bargains: release them, and they will seek out the mythical healing pool. Mordesius agrees but warns that if they do not find it, he'll make those dearest to them suffer—starting with King Finnius.
Persephone has never needed Azriel's teasing warmth more, but she is discovering that there is a price to pay for having broken past promises. Together, the pair set off on a journey that will take them to the farthest corners of the kingdom. Danger will ever lie ahead and behind them; they will battle men and beasts alike.
Will Persephone and Azriel survive these perils? And will this quest see their romance grow cold—or will it burn hotter than ever?
Odyssey is the dramatic, heartpounding second book in the atmospheric, deeply romantic and epic Fractured Kingdom trilogy.
402 pages, Paperback
First published October 1, 2013
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M.L. Fergus
4 books43 followersAuthor also writes as Maureen Fergus
M.L Fergus also writes illustrated kids books under the name Maureen Fergus. Her many books have been translated into more than a dozen languages, optioned for television, adapted for stage and won or been shortlisted for numerous prestigious awards. She lives in Winnipeg, Canada with her family.
M.L Fergus also writes illustrated kids books under the name Maureen Fergus. Her many books have been translated into more than a dozen languages, optioned for television, adapted for stage and won or been shortlisted for numerous prestigious awards. She lives in Winnipeg, Canada with her family.
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December 21, 2024
I thankfully got approved for Book 2 almost as soon as I finished Book 1. So I like to thank NetGalley and the publisher for allowing me to jump right back into the world and continue on.
Let me tell you, it's been FOREVER since a villain is 100% a piece of shit in a story and absolutely delights in being a said piece of shit. M.L. Fergus has me wide eyed in delight on this person she has written. It's like taking Alan Rickman's Sheriff of Nottingham, making him younger (hotter in face, maybe not in body), a cripple (we found out how he became cripple too!), horny, and absolutely sadistic.
Our ML is so rogue, and the way he does things to the FL to catch her off her guard! Changing her tune of 'ugh, him' to make her go 'oh, him!' was perfect.
The world building got better! Seeing more people, journeying to the various places that they need to go to was a delight and made the world not seem so confined to the castle.
A couple things came to mind in this book:
I'm surprised on how much I'm enjoying this fantasy romp. Shame it'll be over in three books. I feel like there is more to go on in this world. But, nevertheless, I can't wait for Book 3.
Let me tell you, it's been FOREVER since a villain is 100% a piece of shit in a story and absolutely delights in being a said piece of shit. M.L. Fergus has me wide eyed in delight on this person she has written. It's like taking Alan Rickman's Sheriff of Nottingham, making him younger (hotter in face, maybe not in body), a cripple (we found out how he became cripple too!), horny, and absolutely sadistic.
Our ML is so rogue, and the way he does things to the FL to catch her off her guard! Changing her tune of 'ugh, him' to make her go 'oh, him!' was perfect.
The world building got better! Seeing more people, journeying to the various places that they need to go to was a delight and made the world not seem so confined to the castle.
A couple things came to mind in this book:
I'm surprised on how much I'm enjoying this fantasy romp. Shame it'll be over in three books. I feel like there is more to go on in this world. But, nevertheless, I can't wait for Book 3.
May 7, 2013
Anybody who has heard me talk about this series knows I am in love with it. Not only does it have great characters, awesome settings, an engaging love story, and an interesting and intriguing plot, but it has AMAZING writing. Maureen Fergus is definitely a talented writer that everyone should be familiar with. If you liked The Gypsy King, expect to love A Fool's Errand!
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- Amy Smith, Marketing Associate
October 11, 2013
Finished
In short: YOU ARE KILLING ME BOOK.
Okay, a slightly more coherent review now. (Please note: it'll be sorta vague due to the major spoiler alert nature of the book, I'll try to refrain from ruining anything)
So, if you guys remember the ending of The Gypsy King really left us hanging. A Fool's Errand starts off right there! (so slight-ish spoiler alert for the ending of The Gypsy King coming up). So crazy evil Regent Mordecai has Persephone and Azriel trapped in a corner, ready to send them off with their heads, when suddenly big revelations are announced (sorry can't tell you!). Azriel bargains for their safety and that of King Finnius, in exchange, they will find proof of the magical healing pool that can help Mordecai's with his disfigurement. Not a fool, Mordecai decides to let them search for it (while already planning to back stab them when they get back - this isn't spoilers because we all know Mordecai is crazy evil). Persephone and Azriel have 100 days to return to Parthania with proof, or heads will roll. And so Persephone and Azriel (and friends) trekking across the land, through the snowy mountain lands of the Khans, to the Islands of storms, and to the mines in search of evidence.
It's quite the page-turning adventurous story as Persephone and Azriel face some crazy obstacles. I was definitely kept on the edge of my seat. The book still has the great details (again, a brick of a book) and the same dark undertones, especially with the subplot with Mordecai and Finn. I swear, Mordecai gets crazier and more evil with every page. This subplot definitely followed the court intrigue outline. We do get to see more of Finn, and I really enjoyed watching be more of a character of capability rather than just a puppet.
Another aspect of the book I really enjoyed was Persephone and Azriel romance. Just when Persephone finally may accept her feelings for Azriel, outed secrets change the dynamic all around. I still adore Azriel. He's just so charming and quite the silly guy, but knows what he needs to do and sacrifice in order to help Persephone. I also really like Rachel, Persephone's doppelganger, she's so adorable.
Okay, so why only the 4 stars? It had adventure, intrigue & romance, all well written and engaging, what more would I ask for? ... An ending. AGAIN! I'm left hanging /teaaaars. It's killing me a bit.
Overall, it was a exciting follow up to The Gypsy King, with lots of crazy twist and turns, macabre moments, and adorable romance. A definite must-read if you read the first one, and a fantastic series to check out (maybe once the whole series is out so ya ain't left hanging haha) if you want a little more to your historical romance/action. Basically, I need the last book now please, I need to know what happens from here!!
{*Thanks to the publisher and Goodreads First Read Program for providing a copy in exchange for an honest review. Original review @ Bookmunchies.
September 9, 2013
"A Fool's Errand" which I won from Goodreads Giveaways combines intrigue, adventure, mystery and danger in the realm of Glyndoria, a kingdom divided by the atrocities and bloodlust of a ruthless regent.
This novel picks up where "the Gypsy King" left off after a secret is revealed that not only endangers Persephone and Azriel but could change the monarchy in Parthania. When their lives are threatened by Regent Mordecai, Azriel negotiates a bargain that takes them on a quest across Glyndoria in search of the legendary Pool of Genezing. But, the Regent 's agreement takes on a sinister overtone, agreeing to keep King Finnius alive if they return to Parthania in one hundred days with proof that they've discovered the miracle waters.
In a fascinating subplot King Finnius is threatened and manipulated by the lowborn Regent who wants to be declared heir to the throne. In the political intrigue that follows the king must decide whether or not he is strong enough to defy Mordecai , and whether he should agree to marry Lady Aurelia, Lord Bartok's daughter.
When the storylines intersect the future of the kingdom could be changed as Destiny begins to play its hand in this game of intrigue and adventure.
Like the Gypsy King the story is well-written and flows smoothly as the characters face one challenge after another. Their personalities naturally grow and expand as the story progresses, especially King Finnius who begins to show a kingly nature, refusing to succumb to or weaken under the deadly machinations of the Regent. Even his servant Moira shows her strength, courage and determination in her incarceration. Persephone begins to resolve some of the fears and anxieties born of her years of enslavement and to accept her Destiny, while Azriel remains witty, smart and tenacious in the service of the woman and the gypsy clan he loves. Even Rachel, Persephone's doppelganger, begins to change, showing new strength and resilience in the face of danger.
But as the characters develop new strengths, their antagonists show an even crueler side to their natures. Regent Mordecai takes on a mephistophelian persona, his bloodthirsty deeds and diabolical plotting increasing with his lust for power. Even his henchman General Murdoch grows more sinister and cold-hearted, caring little for the lives of the New Men he commands.
I found Maureen Fergus's second book even more exciting than the first; a roller-coaster ride of twists and turns that kept me riveted. Even the conclusion still raises questions. Will Persephone, Azriel and Rachel survive the Regent's schemes and plotting? Who is the Gypsy King of prophesy and will he be able to heal the divided kingdom? I love this enthralling fantasy series, and hope the final book will not only answer all my questions, but will be available very soon.
This novel picks up where "the Gypsy King" left off after a secret is revealed that not only endangers Persephone and Azriel but could change the monarchy in Parthania. When their lives are threatened by Regent Mordecai, Azriel negotiates a bargain that takes them on a quest across Glyndoria in search of the legendary Pool of Genezing. But, the Regent 's agreement takes on a sinister overtone, agreeing to keep King Finnius alive if they return to Parthania in one hundred days with proof that they've discovered the miracle waters.
In a fascinating subplot King Finnius is threatened and manipulated by the lowborn Regent who wants to be declared heir to the throne. In the political intrigue that follows the king must decide whether or not he is strong enough to defy Mordecai , and whether he should agree to marry Lady Aurelia, Lord Bartok's daughter.
When the storylines intersect the future of the kingdom could be changed as Destiny begins to play its hand in this game of intrigue and adventure.
Like the Gypsy King the story is well-written and flows smoothly as the characters face one challenge after another. Their personalities naturally grow and expand as the story progresses, especially King Finnius who begins to show a kingly nature, refusing to succumb to or weaken under the deadly machinations of the Regent. Even his servant Moira shows her strength, courage and determination in her incarceration. Persephone begins to resolve some of the fears and anxieties born of her years of enslavement and to accept her Destiny, while Azriel remains witty, smart and tenacious in the service of the woman and the gypsy clan he loves. Even Rachel, Persephone's doppelganger, begins to change, showing new strength and resilience in the face of danger.
But as the characters develop new strengths, their antagonists show an even crueler side to their natures. Regent Mordecai takes on a mephistophelian persona, his bloodthirsty deeds and diabolical plotting increasing with his lust for power. Even his henchman General Murdoch grows more sinister and cold-hearted, caring little for the lives of the New Men he commands.
I found Maureen Fergus's second book even more exciting than the first; a roller-coaster ride of twists and turns that kept me riveted. Even the conclusion still raises questions. Will Persephone, Azriel and Rachel survive the Regent's schemes and plotting? Who is the Gypsy King of prophesy and will he be able to heal the divided kingdom? I love this enthralling fantasy series, and hope the final book will not only answer all my questions, but will be available very soon.
May 3, 2025
Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for an advanced reader copy
Odyssey by M.L. Fergus is the second book in the third person multi-POV YA political fantasy Fractured Kingdom trilogy. After learning that she is the long-lost sister of King Finn, Persephone has a new goal of finding a mysterious body of water that contains healing waters. But Mordesius wants the healing waters for himself and his political scheming reaches new heights as he attempts to take the throne from both Finn and Persephone.
Whereas I felt that the last book could be called a romantic fantasy, I felt that the romance wasn’t quite as prominent in this one. Azriel and Persephone’s relationship does continue to develop and their feelings are no longer subtext, but the romance-coded language has been toned down and there’s a lot of page time devoted to other things. For me, this is fine in a YA fantasy that is focused on political movements and never really felt like the romance was the whole point or was going to carry the series forward. I still want to see how their story ends in the last book, but I’m expecting it to be developing more to the side of the political storylines or will be a massive portion of the last book.
Mordesius is just as much of a terrible person in this book as he was in the last book. He’s still full of himself, deeply misogynistic, thinks about women in really uncomfortable ways, and he’s such a Humperdink-type character that I don’t mind being in his head. I’ve read a lot of fantasy where there's’ a male lead who’s head I hate being in specifically because of this kind of content but Mordesius doesn’t create that same ick factor because he’s just such an over the top terrible person who is so disconnected from reality that he feels like a character. For me, all of this really contributes to how Princess Bride-esque the book feels so I’m here for it.
The political storyline takes center-stage this time. The last book set-up a lot of the dynamics of the counsel and the courts as well as how those with power view Mordesius (and it’s certainly not favorable). Mordesius wants the throne and he even holds Finn’s trusted former nanny hostage in order to not only remain regent but to also become the heir and then tries to strongarm the court into supporting him. You can feel how everyone in the room is thinking ‘Are we really going to just go along with this?’ but there’s not a lot of things that some of them can do as the ones who can do something are doing their own scheming.
Content warning for misogyny, slut shaming, and mentions of sexual assault
I would recommend this to fans of the Princess Bride looking for a YA fantasy and readers who like political fantasies with more over-the-top characters
Odyssey by M.L. Fergus is the second book in the third person multi-POV YA political fantasy Fractured Kingdom trilogy. After learning that she is the long-lost sister of King Finn, Persephone has a new goal of finding a mysterious body of water that contains healing waters. But Mordesius wants the healing waters for himself and his political scheming reaches new heights as he attempts to take the throne from both Finn and Persephone.
Whereas I felt that the last book could be called a romantic fantasy, I felt that the romance wasn’t quite as prominent in this one. Azriel and Persephone’s relationship does continue to develop and their feelings are no longer subtext, but the romance-coded language has been toned down and there’s a lot of page time devoted to other things. For me, this is fine in a YA fantasy that is focused on political movements and never really felt like the romance was the whole point or was going to carry the series forward. I still want to see how their story ends in the last book, but I’m expecting it to be developing more to the side of the political storylines or will be a massive portion of the last book.
Mordesius is just as much of a terrible person in this book as he was in the last book. He’s still full of himself, deeply misogynistic, thinks about women in really uncomfortable ways, and he’s such a Humperdink-type character that I don’t mind being in his head. I’ve read a lot of fantasy where there's’ a male lead who’s head I hate being in specifically because of this kind of content but Mordesius doesn’t create that same ick factor because he’s just such an over the top terrible person who is so disconnected from reality that he feels like a character. For me, all of this really contributes to how Princess Bride-esque the book feels so I’m here for it.
The political storyline takes center-stage this time. The last book set-up a lot of the dynamics of the counsel and the courts as well as how those with power view Mordesius (and it’s certainly not favorable). Mordesius wants the throne and he even holds Finn’s trusted former nanny hostage in order to not only remain regent but to also become the heir and then tries to strongarm the court into supporting him. You can feel how everyone in the room is thinking ‘Are we really going to just go along with this?’ but there’s not a lot of things that some of them can do as the ones who can do something are doing their own scheming.
Content warning for misogyny, slut shaming, and mentions of sexual assault
I would recommend this to fans of the Princess Bride looking for a YA fantasy and readers who like political fantasies with more over-the-top characters
September 25, 2025
I need book 3 now!! Such a great read!!
December 14, 2014
I write this review at 3:15 - even though I have an appointment at nine this morning - because, as with The Gyspy King, the call of A Fool's Errand was irresistible. An hour ago, I contemplated leaving the last hundred pages for a more decent hour, but I found myself still flipping the pages.
Bravo, Maureen Fergus.
My full review can be read on my blog, at My Bibliophile Mind - A Fool's Errand Review
But there are some things I have to say right now Like how once you manage to push aside the desire to fondle the book, you're graced with passages such as:
"Lift her head higher that I may watch her eyes - first as the scalp is peeled from the head of this Gypsy cockroach with whom she so brazenly defiled herself, and thereafter as her life's blood drains from the mortal wound that you shall presently inflict upon her pretty white throat."
...
Whoa.
Maureen Fergus has a talent for writing the delightfully grotesque, make no mistake.
I was, I have to admit, a little disappointed that the Regent Mordecai had such a big chunk of the story line because he gives me seriously chills and curdles my blood. To have to be in his presence so much during the story was quite unsettling, but that may have been the effect Maureen Fergus was going for, given the precarious and uncertain situation Persephone and Azriel found themselves in. Mordecai was, as ever, equal parts pitiful and terrifying.
There were three big "oh my gosh, she (Maureen) wouldn't...she won't... she...OH MY GOSH", one of which the reader doesn't get to find out in this book, leaving me in high anticipation for the third.
And then there's Persephone, whose best line in the entire book was: "Yes" (italics are not my own, and their presence in that one word just sent shivers down my spine!)
The final sentence did me in. I closed the book thinking, boy is the third book going to be a treat!
Bravo, Maureen Fergus.
My full review can be read on my blog, at My Bibliophile Mind - A Fool's Errand Review
But there are some things I have to say right now Like how once you manage to push aside the desire to fondle the book, you're graced with passages such as:
"Lift her head higher that I may watch her eyes - first as the scalp is peeled from the head of this Gypsy cockroach with whom she so brazenly defiled herself, and thereafter as her life's blood drains from the mortal wound that you shall presently inflict upon her pretty white throat."
...
Whoa.
Maureen Fergus has a talent for writing the delightfully grotesque, make no mistake.
I was, I have to admit, a little disappointed that the Regent Mordecai had such a big chunk of the story line because he gives me seriously chills and curdles my blood. To have to be in his presence so much during the story was quite unsettling, but that may have been the effect Maureen Fergus was going for, given the precarious and uncertain situation Persephone and Azriel found themselves in. Mordecai was, as ever, equal parts pitiful and terrifying.
There were three big "oh my gosh, she (Maureen) wouldn't...she won't... she...OH MY GOSH", one of which the reader doesn't get to find out in this book, leaving me in high anticipation for the third.
And then there's Persephone, whose best line in the entire book was: "Yes" (italics are not my own, and their presence in that one word just sent shivers down my spine!)
The final sentence did me in. I closed the book thinking, boy is the third book going to be a treat!
August 1, 2025
Let’s start with the good-
This book was as good as the first.
The bad- I now have to wait again for another!
I love this series so much. For anyone who loves banter and doesn’t need really nasty s*x scenes, please read this. (I do enjoy a nasty s*x scene by the way) this book is labeled YA and the while there are plenty of suggestions and talk of the naughty it’s very tame.
It reminds me of the Princess Bride or Men in Tights. A really great tale. I wish they would make a tv series of it. I don’t watch much Tv, but I would watch it.
This book was as good as the first.
The bad- I now have to wait again for another!
I love this series so much. For anyone who loves banter and doesn’t need really nasty s*x scenes, please read this. (I do enjoy a nasty s*x scene by the way) this book is labeled YA and the while there are plenty of suggestions and talk of the naughty it’s very tame.
It reminds me of the Princess Bride or Men in Tights. A really great tale. I wish they would make a tv series of it. I don’t watch much Tv, but I would watch it.
January 31, 2025
I am so lucky to have received an ARC of this book right after I finished Prophecy. Odyssey continued right where Prophesy left off and had all of the tension and fantastical elements that the first book promised. Azriel and Persephone were perfect and the side characters were so detailed. The world really expanded in this book which allowed some amazing adventuring to take place. The ending was an amazing cliffhanger so I will be anxiously awaiting the conclusion to this fairytale-like YA fantasy series!
Thank you NetGalley and Penguin Canada for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
Thank you NetGalley and Penguin Canada for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
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October 19, 2013This review originally posted at More Than Just Magic
After reading, and loving, The Gypsy King earlier this year I couldn’t wait to get my hands on A Fool’s Errand and continue the adventure.
I am a sucker for the quest-style fantasy novel – Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, Alice in Wonderland. All of them. I love the journey. Particularly the way characters grow throughout. But I also think this style of fantasy novel provides a broader view of the world and the people in it. Authors spend so much time world building in this genre it’s a shame when they can’t show it off and let the reader explore as well. A Fool’s Errand is so rich with detail you can tell just how much thought and planning Fergus has put in it. It’s not just a city or village you’re immersed in. It’s an entire kingdom.
Another huge draw for this series is the romance between Persephone and Azriel. It doesn’t distract from the central plot but is still totally swoon worthy. I love the kind of relationship where the couple is so similar they’re constantly butting heads. It makes for more than a few laughs. I also loved that no matter what they were going through, no matter how many doubts they had at the romantic side of the partnership, they could always depend on one another. They weren’t just in love, they were friends and comrades. They shared a common goal and they respected each other. This kind of healthy partnership is one I would like to see more often in Young Adult novels.
My one real complaint about The Gypsy King was that we didn’t know anything substantial about the Regent or his motivations. Just that he was a gigantic, evil creep. But the Fool’s Errand definitely expanded his character. Chapters would alternate between Persephone and Azriel’s voyage, and the Regent’s evil plans back at the castle. His conversations with an imprisoned servant really helped draw out some of the intricacies of his character and if anything made him even more terrifying.
The characters continue to be the strongest elements of this series. Everyone has such large, beautiful personalities, good and bad. I was extremely happy to find that we got more time with Rachel and the Gypsies. Out of all the groups we meet along the way, they remain my favourites. But I also loved that we got to know Finn better as well. Though he’s physically weak, he is such a strong, beautiful person and I found myself getting very attached to him.
A Fool’s Errand is an action packed, funny and addictive read. It draws you in from the first page and keeps you hanging on with every twist and turn. Fantasy fans – you need to read this series!
After reading, and loving, The Gypsy King earlier this year I couldn’t wait to get my hands on A Fool’s Errand and continue the adventure.
I am a sucker for the quest-style fantasy novel – Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, Alice in Wonderland. All of them. I love the journey. Particularly the way characters grow throughout. But I also think this style of fantasy novel provides a broader view of the world and the people in it. Authors spend so much time world building in this genre it’s a shame when they can’t show it off and let the reader explore as well. A Fool’s Errand is so rich with detail you can tell just how much thought and planning Fergus has put in it. It’s not just a city or village you’re immersed in. It’s an entire kingdom.
Another huge draw for this series is the romance between Persephone and Azriel. It doesn’t distract from the central plot but is still totally swoon worthy. I love the kind of relationship where the couple is so similar they’re constantly butting heads. It makes for more than a few laughs. I also loved that no matter what they were going through, no matter how many doubts they had at the romantic side of the partnership, they could always depend on one another. They weren’t just in love, they were friends and comrades. They shared a common goal and they respected each other. This kind of healthy partnership is one I would like to see more often in Young Adult novels.
My one real complaint about The Gypsy King was that we didn’t know anything substantial about the Regent or his motivations. Just that he was a gigantic, evil creep. But the Fool’s Errand definitely expanded his character. Chapters would alternate between Persephone and Azriel’s voyage, and the Regent’s evil plans back at the castle. His conversations with an imprisoned servant really helped draw out some of the intricacies of his character and if anything made him even more terrifying.
The characters continue to be the strongest elements of this series. Everyone has such large, beautiful personalities, good and bad. I was extremely happy to find that we got more time with Rachel and the Gypsies. Out of all the groups we meet along the way, they remain my favourites. But I also loved that we got to know Finn better as well. Though he’s physically weak, he is such a strong, beautiful person and I found myself getting very attached to him.
A Fool’s Errand is an action packed, funny and addictive read. It draws you in from the first page and keeps you hanging on with every twist and turn. Fantasy fans – you need to read this series!
October 25, 2013
Turns out even though Persephone grew-up as a slave, she was the long lost twin sister of the young King Finnus. Finding out brings its lot of trouble though and to save her life, as well as the one of her friends and her brother, she must set out on a foolish quest to discover the Pool of Genezing. There’s only one problem though, no body knows if it really exist. When your very life is in the balance though, you are willing to take leaps of Faith!
What an awesome second installment to this trilogy! Written by a fellow Canadian, this series is available in print, only in Canada, BUT, it’s available in the US in kindle format, so fear not! I truly loved the first encounter, The Gypsy King, even though I thought it didn’t quite live up to Cashore or Snyder. The same is true for A Fool’s Errand, but I think I enjoyed it even more than I did the first book.
The characters we came to love, or despise depending on the character, are still an intricate part of the story and I was pleased to see Finn and Rachel being granted a bigger role. We discover a more serious side to them, and even though I liked the touch of humor of the first book, circumstances being what they are, the tone was simply perfect. King Finnus exceeded my expectations and proved to be a lot more than many thought.
This time around, the better part of the novel took place in the forest and the different tribes (which where amazing to discover, Fergus created such unique customs for them!) while our heroes face countless dangers on their quest for the pool. Throughout the whole mission, I was simply hooked onto the characters steps, and I have to confess, I was frustrated when we left Persephone’s point-of-view to go back to Mordecai’s POV. I had this strong Need to know what would happen to Persephone and Azriel, and while the Regent’s perception provides depth to the story, I never really cared for him. There is also a mysterious character chasing after our heroes, and I thought it added a nice suspense not knowing what his intentions really were.
The plotline was exciting and engrossing. Truly, despite being over 500 pages long, this novel was a real page turner. True to herself, Fergus also ended this novel with a bang and I truly can’t wait to see if my suspicion concerning some plot points were founded. No title or tentative release date were revealed (to my knowledge) so I hope I won’t have to wait too long for the last novel! If you are a fantasy lover, I strongly suggest you give this novel a try
What an awesome second installment to this trilogy! Written by a fellow Canadian, this series is available in print, only in Canada, BUT, it’s available in the US in kindle format, so fear not! I truly loved the first encounter, The Gypsy King, even though I thought it didn’t quite live up to Cashore or Snyder. The same is true for A Fool’s Errand, but I think I enjoyed it even more than I did the first book.
The characters we came to love, or despise depending on the character, are still an intricate part of the story and I was pleased to see Finn and Rachel being granted a bigger role. We discover a more serious side to them, and even though I liked the touch of humor of the first book, circumstances being what they are, the tone was simply perfect. King Finnus exceeded my expectations and proved to be a lot more than many thought.
This time around, the better part of the novel took place in the forest and the different tribes (which where amazing to discover, Fergus created such unique customs for them!) while our heroes face countless dangers on their quest for the pool. Throughout the whole mission, I was simply hooked onto the characters steps, and I have to confess, I was frustrated when we left Persephone’s point-of-view to go back to Mordecai’s POV. I had this strong Need to know what would happen to Persephone and Azriel, and while the Regent’s perception provides depth to the story, I never really cared for him. There is also a mysterious character chasing after our heroes, and I thought it added a nice suspense not knowing what his intentions really were.
The plotline was exciting and engrossing. Truly, despite being over 500 pages long, this novel was a real page turner. True to herself, Fergus also ended this novel with a bang and I truly can’t wait to see if my suspicion concerning some plot points were founded. No title or tentative release date were revealed (to my knowledge) so I hope I won’t have to wait too long for the last novel! If you are a fantasy lover, I strongly suggest you give this novel a try
January 29, 2014
I was fortunate enough to be introduced to Maureen Fergus' YA debut The Gypsy King earlier this year through Penguin Canada, and it's no surprise to people that know my taste in books that I love a good, fun YA fantasy.
*Note: This review is spoiler-free for the series! (Although the synopsis is not completely.)
Reasons to Read:
1. A sequel that starts off with a bang:
The Gypsy King ended in the midst of a very exciting scene and a bit of a cliffhanger - I loved that A Fool's Errand picked up right where the first book left off! It really made the story feel continuous and flowed nicely, rather than feeling jolted. Sometimes reading the sequel to a book feels like you missed something in between the first book and the second book, because the sequel picks up leaving a lengthy period of time between it and the first book.
2. A developed fantasy world:
To me, this is a must-have in a good fantasy book: well-crafted and devoted world-building. I definitely expect this in my fantasy reads, and I think this is where A Fool's Errand really shined. We were introduced to parts of Glyndoria in The Gypsy King, but A Fool's Errand takes Persephone on an adventure to surrounding areas and introduces us to different groups of people.
3. Riveting storytelling:
I'm a big of Maureen's writing style. She has this great sense of humour in real life that carries over so well in her writing - I always find that so tricky to get across, but she does it flawlessly. And she weaves it into this amazing story with a very dark underbelly, which makes it an engrossing read.
And the best part is that we still have this great bantering and romance, strong friendships being showcased, and plenty of fight scenes! It's all there still, which is great because those are things I loved about The Gypsy King.
I did find that some parts of the story felt a bit over-done to me. I'm still hoping to get a bit more reason behind the main villain, besides his evil posturing. So there were a few parts of the book that still felt under-developed for the second book of a series.
This is a series I highly recommend to fans of YA, both those who enjoy fantasy books and those who may not read much fantasy. I think this is better described as an adventure story, rather than pure fantasy.
ARC received from Penguin Canada for review; no other compensation was received.
*Note: This review is spoiler-free for the series! (Although the synopsis is not completely.)
Reasons to Read:
1. A sequel that starts off with a bang:
The Gypsy King ended in the midst of a very exciting scene and a bit of a cliffhanger - I loved that A Fool's Errand picked up right where the first book left off! It really made the story feel continuous and flowed nicely, rather than feeling jolted. Sometimes reading the sequel to a book feels like you missed something in between the first book and the second book, because the sequel picks up leaving a lengthy period of time between it and the first book.
2. A developed fantasy world:
To me, this is a must-have in a good fantasy book: well-crafted and devoted world-building. I definitely expect this in my fantasy reads, and I think this is where A Fool's Errand really shined. We were introduced to parts of Glyndoria in The Gypsy King, but A Fool's Errand takes Persephone on an adventure to surrounding areas and introduces us to different groups of people.
3. Riveting storytelling:
I'm a big of Maureen's writing style. She has this great sense of humour in real life that carries over so well in her writing - I always find that so tricky to get across, but she does it flawlessly. And she weaves it into this amazing story with a very dark underbelly, which makes it an engrossing read.
And the best part is that we still have this great bantering and romance, strong friendships being showcased, and plenty of fight scenes! It's all there still, which is great because those are things I loved about The Gypsy King.
I did find that some parts of the story felt a bit over-done to me. I'm still hoping to get a bit more reason behind the main villain, besides his evil posturing. So there were a few parts of the book that still felt under-developed for the second book of a series.
This is a series I highly recommend to fans of YA, both those who enjoy fantasy books and those who may not read much fantasy. I think this is better described as an adventure story, rather than pure fantasy.
ARC received from Penguin Canada for review; no other compensation was received.
October 21, 2013
After reading this, Book 2 in the series, I went back and amended my comments on the first book. That ended up essentially being a review of the two books in the series so far, so I will repost my Gypsy King comments here:
At first glance, comparing Book 1 to others of its kind (Graceling, Girl of Fire and Thorns, Grave Mercy, Demon King, Throne of Glass, etc), I almost dismissed it as too fluffy and diluted, too contrived. I imagined it would appeal to younger readers but didn't expect it hold up for older fans of the genre. Further into the series, however, I came to appreciate the dark humor created by combining the light, flippant tone with the surprisingly gritty, twisted, graphic descriptions. I have to say I underestimated the author and now I totally see what she was doing. There's something very clever and magical - almost Princess Bride-ish - about the whole thing.
I have also very much grown to adore the characters, and was captivated by the story the longer the series went on. By Book 2, as Persephone and Azriel's world got bigger and their adventures more epic, I found myself making favorable comparisons to my other (aforementioned) favorite YA high fantasy romances. I have been totally won over by Azriel, and am finding the (non-triangular!) love story to be far deeper and more compelling than I first expected.
I can't say I didn't enjoy reading Book 1 the first time around (I read it in one sitting), but for some reason I didn't have faith about where things were going from there. I didn't expect to be so invested. Now I see this first book as just the beginning of a story I ended up really loving. I cannot wait for the third book.
At first glance, comparing Book 1 to others of its kind (Graceling, Girl of Fire and Thorns, Grave Mercy, Demon King, Throne of Glass, etc), I almost dismissed it as too fluffy and diluted, too contrived. I imagined it would appeal to younger readers but didn't expect it hold up for older fans of the genre. Further into the series, however, I came to appreciate the dark humor created by combining the light, flippant tone with the surprisingly gritty, twisted, graphic descriptions. I have to say I underestimated the author and now I totally see what she was doing. There's something very clever and magical - almost Princess Bride-ish - about the whole thing.
I have also very much grown to adore the characters, and was captivated by the story the longer the series went on. By Book 2, as Persephone and Azriel's world got bigger and their adventures more epic, I found myself making favorable comparisons to my other (aforementioned) favorite YA high fantasy romances. I have been totally won over by Azriel, and am finding the (non-triangular!) love story to be far deeper and more compelling than I first expected.
I can't say I didn't enjoy reading Book 1 the first time around (I read it in one sitting), but for some reason I didn't have faith about where things were going from there. I didn't expect to be so invested. Now I see this first book as just the beginning of a story I ended up really loving. I cannot wait for the third book.
February 6, 2014
*Sighs*
So, it took a while for me to get over the amazingness of this book. I needed time to wallow and sulk and really to wholly fathom how this book made me feel.
I'm a quiet person. Anti-social, you could say. I've read many a book. But aside from a couple, not one as ever made me feel so.... so empty.
*Sighs again*
It's books like these that make me wish that it's characters were real. Seriously. But, alas, Azriel is just too gosh-darn gorgeous for our world. And Persephone, well, Persephone would probably be a fugitive running from the law in our dimension.
I find that the books that I've read by Maureen Fergus are very skillfully written. I admire the fact that there is never a dull moment and that the characters seem so human. The language is great and I love the medieval undertone in the novel. Exquisite book. Really.
I'll just wait until Tomorrow's Kingdom.Just go back to lurking in the shadows until the release date.
*Sighs, once again*
So, it took a while for me to get over the amazingness of this book. I needed time to wallow and sulk and really to wholly fathom how this book made me feel.
I'm a quiet person. Anti-social, you could say. I've read many a book. But aside from a couple, not one as ever made me feel so.... so empty.
*Sighs again*
It's books like these that make me wish that it's characters were real. Seriously. But, alas, Azriel is just too gosh-darn gorgeous for our world. And Persephone, well, Persephone would probably be a fugitive running from the law in our dimension.
I find that the books that I've read by Maureen Fergus are very skillfully written. I admire the fact that there is never a dull moment and that the characters seem so human. The language is great and I love the medieval undertone in the novel. Exquisite book. Really.
I'll just wait until Tomorrow's Kingdom.Just go back to lurking in the shadows until the release date.
*Sighs, once again*
October 21, 2013
Goodness gracious I'm going to cry, why can't the final book be released faster!!!!!!!! I immensely enjoyed this book and tore through it in 3 days. I love Azriel and Persephone even more than I did in the first book. All their interactions and bantering is enough to make you melt and swoon. I'm glad she has finally come to terms with her feelings for Azriel. The plot was well developed and has you biting your fingernails in anticipation. Tons of action to keep you continuously turning the pages. Characters like Mordecai are so detailed and strong. I can't help but love how evil and self absorbed he is. Loved, loved, loved this book. Counting the days until March.
February 6, 2014
Wow... well first off I absolutely loved the first book and this one was almost better! I can't wait for the third and final book to come out! Maureen Fergus just loves to keep us on the edge of our seats. And don't even get me started on the characters...I absolutely fell in love with Azriel and Persephone. Their reluctant love story was just so captivating and heart breaking at the same time. All in all this book and the first of the series were both page turners that I just couldn't put down.
October 16, 2013
I thoroughly enjoyed this book! I found it hard to focus on anything else besides this book while I read it! The plot was great, the characters were amazing and the villain was truly a well-written villain! Mordecai is a villain one loves to hate! I will definitely be on the look-out for the previous and following novels in order to read the full story of Persephone and Azriel!
December 27, 2016
This was a thrilling sequel and I can't wait to finish off the trilogy!
October 6, 2014
This was a very good book. I will recommend this book to my reader friends.
April 15, 2014
Love this series!!!!
February 18, 2025
Not Finn unexpectedly carrying this book for me...
Odyssey is the second book in the Fractured Kingdom series, and I should've known by the title that it was going to be very travel heavy... Luckily, the pacing was still fast enough to keep me on my toes, and the cliffhanger is going to have me waitingrather impatiently for the next one on Netgalley. I've also watched The Princess Bride now, so I understand and agree with the comparisons between the two.
Picking up directly where the last book left off, we start with Persephone and Azriel making a deal with Mordesius: they will search for a legendary healing pool to save Finn...and to fix Mordesius. Persephone and Azriel set off on an adventure searching for this healing pool, and that journey takes almost the entire book. It was a bit less action-packed and exciting than the first book, in my opinion, but it kept my interest throughout and I liked the expanded worldbuilding. At first, I wasn't thrilled about the increased number of Mordesius (and a few other side characters) POV chapters, but I enjoyed the extra time with Finn. Overall, I think this book might suffer a bit from second-book syndrome, but I'm excited for the next one.
This part of the story was definitely meant to develop the characters and their relationships. I felt like Azriel wasn't as important to the plot itself in this book, but his banter was still fun for the most part. Persephone stepped into her role as princess well, and I liked seeing her gain confidence in herself and her identity. I'm interested to see how she'll change with the implications of this book's ending. Rachel is still kind of flat as a character, but there are hints of exciting subplots for her in the future. Finn was my favorite in this book, just because he's decided to take on the mantra "I will cause problems on purpose" and I love that for him. Also, I like how Mordesius is just plain villainous...he has no redeeming qualities and he doesn't shy away from being evil at all.
Odyssey is the second book in the Fractured Kingdom series, and it contains just as much court intrigue, banter, and adventure as the first book.
Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for the free e-ARC!
3.75/5
Odyssey is the second book in the Fractured Kingdom series, and I should've known by the title that it was going to be very travel heavy... Luckily, the pacing was still fast enough to keep me on my toes, and the cliffhanger is going to have me waiting
Picking up directly where the last book left off, we start with Persephone and Azriel making a deal with Mordesius: they will search for a legendary healing pool to save Finn...and to fix Mordesius. Persephone and Azriel set off on an adventure searching for this healing pool, and that journey takes almost the entire book. It was a bit less action-packed and exciting than the first book, in my opinion, but it kept my interest throughout and I liked the expanded worldbuilding. At first, I wasn't thrilled about the increased number of Mordesius (and a few other side characters) POV chapters, but I enjoyed the extra time with Finn. Overall, I think this book might suffer a bit from second-book syndrome, but I'm excited for the next one.
This part of the story was definitely meant to develop the characters and their relationships. I felt like Azriel wasn't as important to the plot itself in this book, but his banter was still fun for the most part. Persephone stepped into her role as princess well, and I liked seeing her gain confidence in herself and her identity. I'm interested to see how she'll change with the implications of this book's ending. Rachel is still kind of flat as a character, but there are hints of exciting subplots for her in the future. Finn was my favorite in this book, just because he's decided to take on the mantra "I will cause problems on purpose" and I love that for him. Also, I like how Mordesius is just plain villainous...he has no redeeming qualities and he doesn't shy away from being evil at all.
Odyssey is the second book in the Fractured Kingdom series, and it contains just as much court intrigue, banter, and adventure as the first book.
Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for the free e-ARC!
3.75/5
January 23, 2025
*Thank you to Netgalley, the publisher, and the author for this advanced copy in exchange for an honest review*
Before I start my review, I want to clear up any possible confusion. Apparently, both books in this series have two names. I will be using the names that were on my ARC, so I will refer to the first book as Prophecy and this one as Odyssey.
I was so excited to be able to read this book right after I finished the first one, so thank you thank you thank you to the author and the publisher, it was amazing to read them back-to-back. This book was just as engaging and entertaining as Prophecy. It had more of an adventure story, so I flew through it, finishing it in just a few settings. It also addressed some of the issues that I had with the first one. We get to see more of the world in this book, which was awesome. The different groups of people were interesting and I loved meeting them. Mordesius was just as sick and twisted in this book, which I appreciated; it’s nice to have a villain who is just evil for the sake of being evil. Speaking of evil, Murdock gets his own POV in this book, which was interesting, it also allows the plot to move forward more easily. One thing I am still waiting for is Azriel’s POV, I need him to have one in the next book. I enjoyed him a lot more in this book, and he did appear more, but he is still a little flat for me. He needs his own chance to shine. Him and Persephone were absolutely adorable and I was so glad that they got to explore their romance more. One thing I missed was the side characters. Because they moved so much and visited so many places, there were a lot of characters that were introduced and then forgotten about. Although Rachel was featured more than in Prophecy, which I liked.
The plot was engaging and I think I enjoyed it more than the first one. The plot twists were entertaining, even when I saw them coming.
Overall, I loved this book, and I really really want to read the next one.
Before I start my review, I want to clear up any possible confusion. Apparently, both books in this series have two names. I will be using the names that were on my ARC, so I will refer to the first book as Prophecy and this one as Odyssey.
I was so excited to be able to read this book right after I finished the first one, so thank you thank you thank you to the author and the publisher, it was amazing to read them back-to-back. This book was just as engaging and entertaining as Prophecy. It had more of an adventure story, so I flew through it, finishing it in just a few settings. It also addressed some of the issues that I had with the first one. We get to see more of the world in this book, which was awesome. The different groups of people were interesting and I loved meeting them. Mordesius was just as sick and twisted in this book, which I appreciated; it’s nice to have a villain who is just evil for the sake of being evil. Speaking of evil, Murdock gets his own POV in this book, which was interesting, it also allows the plot to move forward more easily. One thing I am still waiting for is Azriel’s POV, I need him to have one in the next book. I enjoyed him a lot more in this book, and he did appear more, but he is still a little flat for me. He needs his own chance to shine. Him and Persephone were absolutely adorable and I was so glad that they got to explore their romance more. One thing I missed was the side characters. Because they moved so much and visited so many places, there were a lot of characters that were introduced and then forgotten about. Although Rachel was featured more than in Prophecy, which I liked.
The plot was engaging and I think I enjoyed it more than the first one. The plot twists were entertaining, even when I saw them coming.
Overall, I loved this book, and I really really want to read the next one.
January 21, 2025
I want to say thank you from the bottom of my heart to the author, the publisher and Netgalley for allowing me the privilege of being allowed to read this book!
I am so grateful I was allowed to read the second book in the trilogy!! This book was everything I hoped it would be, you killed me with that ending though! It was completely not what I was expecting at all, the idea in my head on how that ending could have gone would have been incredible based on assumptions I was making in my head from their adventures and all that was said to them. I really wished it could have been that way because you stole something from me I wish we could get back.
Besides that point I am still so much in love! You made me feel literally all of the emotions and I really loved all surprise but perfect twists in this one! I am waiting for you to release the third because I need the ending like now. Until than though Prophecy will be coming home to me and Odyssey will be preordered!!
Thank you for giving me something new and incredible to love!!
I am so grateful I was allowed to read the second book in the trilogy!! This book was everything I hoped it would be, you killed me with that ending though! It was completely not what I was expecting at all, the idea in my head on how that ending could have gone would have been incredible based on assumptions I was making in my head from their adventures and all that was said to them. I really wished it could have been that way because you stole something from me I wish we could get back.
Besides that point I am still so much in love! You made me feel literally all of the emotions and I really loved all surprise but perfect twists in this one! I am waiting for you to release the third because I need the ending like now. Until than though Prophecy will be coming home to me and Odyssey will be preordered!!
Thank you for giving me something new and incredible to love!!
May 21, 2025
Thanks to NetGalley for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I have found that I really enjoyed Prophecy and now Odyssey. After learning she is the twin to the prince, the prince's regent is determined to get rid of her. With the help of the Methusian that she has feelings for, they set out on a journey to find The Pool of Genezing, which is supposed to be a healing pool. In order to earn the protect of Methusians, and to ensure that Methusians are accepted by the prince, Persephone and Azriel marry (solely to help their people). Afterwards, they go on a journey to three different islands in hopes of finding the pool in order to save Persephone's brother, the prince. The prince meanwhile, has to outwit his regent who is determined to claim his place in his stead.
This is a quick and fun read. I love the banter between Azriel and Persephone and their growing feelings for each other (well, Persephone's -- Azriel has always loved her).
I am excited for the third and final book in the series and recommend giving this series a chance!
I have found that I really enjoyed Prophecy and now Odyssey. After learning she is the twin to the prince, the prince's regent is determined to get rid of her. With the help of the Methusian that she has feelings for, they set out on a journey to find The Pool of Genezing, which is supposed to be a healing pool. In order to earn the protect of Methusians, and to ensure that Methusians are accepted by the prince, Persephone and Azriel marry (solely to help their people). Afterwards, they go on a journey to three different islands in hopes of finding the pool in order to save Persephone's brother, the prince. The prince meanwhile, has to outwit his regent who is determined to claim his place in his stead.
This is a quick and fun read. I love the banter between Azriel and Persephone and their growing feelings for each other (well, Persephone's -- Azriel has always loved her).
I am excited for the third and final book in the series and recommend giving this series a chance!
July 22, 2025
I hate to say it, but this book was incredibly slow-moving... It took me a very long time to get through the first half of the book. Thankfully, the second half kept my attention a little bit more.
Without getting into too many spoilers, let me just say that I am glad we got some tidbits of happy moments with Persephone and Azriel. If it hadn't been for those, I might not have kept going. Mordesius is evil but also quite annoying.
This is the middle book of a trilogy, so I anticipated a cliffhanger - I was right. I will read the final book, mainly because I want to know if Mordesius gets his just desserts.
This book was received through a LibraryThing Early Reviewers giveaway for an unbiased review.
Without getting into too many spoilers, let me just say that I am glad we got some tidbits of happy moments with Persephone and Azriel. If it hadn't been for those, I might not have kept going. Mordesius is evil but also quite annoying.
This is the middle book of a trilogy, so I anticipated a cliffhanger - I was right. I will read the final book, mainly because I want to know if Mordesius gets his just desserts.
This book was received through a LibraryThing Early Reviewers giveaway for an unbiased review.
October 2, 2025
The second book picks up exactly at the cliffhanger of the previous book which was great. Mordesius is continuing in his evil, bad guy, villaining ways but he’s added in even more lecherousness than previously seen to top it off. Azriel continues to be dreamy and sweet, and the banter between him and Persephone is cute at times. I liked the intro of the additional perspective of the guy trailing them and I still don’t know what Rachel’s role in all of this is but I’m interested to find out. I was also happy to see Lord Bartok step into his meddling role, but seriously, that ending! I don’t know why the author just killed Finn off like that and then Persephone being captured again. Aargh! I need the third book ASAP.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 7, 2025
An amazing sequel to book one, and let me tell you, I have questions! So so many.
But, instead of those because spoilers, I want to say how much I really liked this book. I love how the relationship between the main characters is evolving and expanding and all of the twists thrown into this to make it such an adventure. The settings are amazing, the detail is immaculate. The writing style is amazing. I just absolutely loved this book so much and I am hyped for book three to come out.
But, instead of those because spoilers, I want to say how much I really liked this book. I love how the relationship between the main characters is evolving and expanding and all of the twists thrown into this to make it such an adventure. The settings are amazing, the detail is immaculate. The writing style is amazing. I just absolutely loved this book so much and I am hyped for book three to come out.
July 30, 2025
Thank you very much to NetGalley, M.L Fergus, and Tundra Books for allowing me an ARC of Odyssey. I really enjoyed the second book in the Fractured Kingdom series. After the cliffhanger at the end of Prophecy, I was eager to read more about Persephone and Azriel. The romance in this series has been incredible, the world building and intensity has left it a very memorable book for me. I cannot wait to read the final book in the trilogy.
October 15, 2014
Last week I reviewed The Gypsy King, and LOVED it! It was a great YA fantasy adventure, and I couldn't wait to get my hands on book two, A Fool's Errand. It was fantastic to be able to dive right in to book two, especially considering the big reveal at the end of book one, so readers be warned, there are spoilers ahead for book one.
A Fool's Errand picks up right after the events of The Gypsy King. Persephone and Azriel are fleeing from the villainous Regent, Mordecai, when everyone learns that Persephone is the lost twin sister of the king, and she's also the true heir to the thrown. Mordecai is none too happy that Persephone was not taken care of the night she was born (ie. murdered), and has no intention of letting her disrupt his own plans to overthrown her brother and claim the crown for himself. The mustache twirling continues...
Before Mordecai can murder Persephone, Azriel does some quick thinking and tells Mordecai that he knows how to find the Pool of Genezing, a treasure that Mordecai covets even more than the thrown. While this saves both their lives, it's complicated by the fact that no one actually knows where the healing pool is and Persephone and Azriel are only give one hundred days to find it, or the true king will be killed.
Persephone and Azriel immediately depart for parts unknown, but of course, a quest is never that straight forward, and theirs is complicated by an impromptu marriage, bloodthirsty villains, and uncooperative weather. It soon becomes clear that finding the healing pool just might be next to impossible, if it exists at all, and the hundred days are quickly disappearing. A Fool's Errand continues with the elements that I loved so much in book one. Persephone is a great heroine, she's prickly and not exactly happy about the events that happen on her quest. But, unlike in book one, Persephone starts to change. She's no longer quite as distrustful of others as she was in the first book. She's still not comfortable relying on others, but she does start to put the needs of others before her own. I loved seeing this progression with this character and I think her conflicting wants made her a well-developed and interesting character.
What I also found interesting about A Fool's Errand is the juxtaposition of a more childish tale (ie. the quest element) and the more adult themes. The central idea of the quest for a mythical healing pool didn't scream adult fantasy to me, and actually makes me think more of the middle grade fantasy books that I've read. I liked the quest element and I think it's a lot of fun in many books, and I do think it worked in A Fool's Errand. But what I was surprised at was how this less mature plot device co-existed beside some very mature themes. In particular, I'm thinking of Mordecai's lecherous ways and recurrent threat of rape of the young women in the story. I'm not convinced that these two elements meshed well together, and this somewhat awkward pairing makes this a four star and not a five star read.
I also found that the use of multiple perspectives slowed down the pacing of A Fool's Errand. With the first book, I flew through the pages. In book two, the increased emphasis on Mordecai and his general's perspective really slowed down the book. They're both so dastardly, it was hard to want to read those chapters. I am hoping that the focus will be back to primarily Persephone in the final book.
The last thing that I'll mention is the romance element in A Fool's Errand. I will admit that I liked it, and I think it will appeal to a lot of romance fans; however, that means this title will not go over well with non-romance fans. I don't think this trilogy is a good choice for a wide audience, but will please a certain type of reader, one that I am. Persephone and Azriel have a rocky road ahead of them in book two. At the end of book one, Persephone has lied and betrayed Azriel, and he's certainly not happy with Persephone. I liked the fact that Persephone struggles with a relationship and I think her struggle is realistic. She was a slave, and she doesn't have much experience in trusting others. Luckily her handsome chicken thief seems to understand that about Persephone and is patient with her. That said, I personally think this romance would be stronger with the inclusion of Azriel's point of view (we have the villain's p.o.v. bogging it down after all!) since readers have to rely on Persephone's interpretation of Azriel's intentions. It would have been nice to have been inside Azriel's head and see his thought process in dealing with Persephone.
Ultimately, I thought A Fool's Errand was a solid follow-up to The Gypsy King. I think it will please fans of the first one, and the cliffhanger ending will leave readers clamoring for the last book, Tomorrow's Kingdom (good thing I have it sitting on my bedside table).
Originally published with similar reads at The Book Adventures.
A Fool's Errand picks up right after the events of The Gypsy King. Persephone and Azriel are fleeing from the villainous Regent, Mordecai, when everyone learns that Persephone is the lost twin sister of the king, and she's also the true heir to the thrown. Mordecai is none too happy that Persephone was not taken care of the night she was born (ie. murdered), and has no intention of letting her disrupt his own plans to overthrown her brother and claim the crown for himself. The mustache twirling continues...
Before Mordecai can murder Persephone, Azriel does some quick thinking and tells Mordecai that he knows how to find the Pool of Genezing, a treasure that Mordecai covets even more than the thrown. While this saves both their lives, it's complicated by the fact that no one actually knows where the healing pool is and Persephone and Azriel are only give one hundred days to find it, or the true king will be killed.
Persephone and Azriel immediately depart for parts unknown, but of course, a quest is never that straight forward, and theirs is complicated by an impromptu marriage, bloodthirsty villains, and uncooperative weather. It soon becomes clear that finding the healing pool just might be next to impossible, if it exists at all, and the hundred days are quickly disappearing. A Fool's Errand continues with the elements that I loved so much in book one. Persephone is a great heroine, she's prickly and not exactly happy about the events that happen on her quest. But, unlike in book one, Persephone starts to change. She's no longer quite as distrustful of others as she was in the first book. She's still not comfortable relying on others, but she does start to put the needs of others before her own. I loved seeing this progression with this character and I think her conflicting wants made her a well-developed and interesting character.
What I also found interesting about A Fool's Errand is the juxtaposition of a more childish tale (ie. the quest element) and the more adult themes. The central idea of the quest for a mythical healing pool didn't scream adult fantasy to me, and actually makes me think more of the middle grade fantasy books that I've read. I liked the quest element and I think it's a lot of fun in many books, and I do think it worked in A Fool's Errand. But what I was surprised at was how this less mature plot device co-existed beside some very mature themes. In particular, I'm thinking of Mordecai's lecherous ways and recurrent threat of rape of the young women in the story. I'm not convinced that these two elements meshed well together, and this somewhat awkward pairing makes this a four star and not a five star read.
I also found that the use of multiple perspectives slowed down the pacing of A Fool's Errand. With the first book, I flew through the pages. In book two, the increased emphasis on Mordecai and his general's perspective really slowed down the book. They're both so dastardly, it was hard to want to read those chapters. I am hoping that the focus will be back to primarily Persephone in the final book.
The last thing that I'll mention is the romance element in A Fool's Errand. I will admit that I liked it, and I think it will appeal to a lot of romance fans; however, that means this title will not go over well with non-romance fans. I don't think this trilogy is a good choice for a wide audience, but will please a certain type of reader, one that I am. Persephone and Azriel have a rocky road ahead of them in book two. At the end of book one, Persephone has lied and betrayed Azriel, and he's certainly not happy with Persephone. I liked the fact that Persephone struggles with a relationship and I think her struggle is realistic. She was a slave, and she doesn't have much experience in trusting others. Luckily her handsome chicken thief seems to understand that about Persephone and is patient with her. That said, I personally think this romance would be stronger with the inclusion of Azriel's point of view (we have the villain's p.o.v. bogging it down after all!) since readers have to rely on Persephone's interpretation of Azriel's intentions. It would have been nice to have been inside Azriel's head and see his thought process in dealing with Persephone.
Ultimately, I thought A Fool's Errand was a solid follow-up to The Gypsy King. I think it will please fans of the first one, and the cliffhanger ending will leave readers clamoring for the last book, Tomorrow's Kingdom (good thing I have it sitting on my bedside table).
Originally published with similar reads at The Book Adventures.
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December 8, 2025The author's continued use of dumb adjectives when she refers to Azriel is so annoying. This book took forever to end. I don't think there is any surprise here. Same storyline you find in any evil Royal court. I still dont get the point of Rachel being her look alike and following her around. That was a useless side story.
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