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James, an Olympic swimming coach, and Drew, his charge, keep getting in each other’s hair. James promised himself that he would get Drew to the Olympics whatever it took, but his charge isn’t making it easy for him. A steamy breakfast encounter changes everything and now, coach and charge can’t get enough of each other. James begins teaching Drew a few things, his charge is only too keen on learning.
If you watched - and enjoyed - the recent Olympic Swimming events with their hot, young, well toned guys in tight fitting, wet swimwear, then you may will be in for a further splash of the same...
Only this time, it gets a lot more raunchy.
Hot, hot, hot gay erotica from one of the best authors to hit Deviant Erotica's gay selection since Christian Quinn.
Warning: This 6300 word short erotic gay story includes topics on m/m, anal, oral, rimming, dominance, lycra, and petite build. Not for the faint of heart.
If you watched - and enjoyed - the recent Olympic Swimming events with their hot, young, well toned guys in tight fitting, wet swimwear, then you may will be in for a further splash of the same...
Only this time, it gets a lot more raunchy.
Hot, hot, hot gay erotica from one of the best authors to hit Deviant Erotica's gay selection since Christian Quinn.
Warning: This 6300 word short erotic gay story includes topics on m/m, anal, oral, rimming, dominance, lycra, and petite build. Not for the faint of heart.
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First published July 12, 2013
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June 2, 2017
Well. That was short and to the point. I guess I can see where the whole thing is coming from. Years of eyeing each other finally took its toll and this is like a moment in time out of the big picture.
If you’re looking for if’s what’s and why’s this isn’t the place to find it but it was enjoyable if you can get in the moment with the characters. It’s over in a blink of an eye and there is no time for questions. Just read, and enjoy.
If you’re looking for if’s what’s and why’s this isn’t the place to find it but it was enjoyable if you can get in the moment with the characters. It’s over in a blink of an eye and there is no time for questions. Just read, and enjoy.
October 14, 2015
Hot steamy short
A very short but also very erotic story. I love the way its written. My second book of Louis and not my last
A very short but also very erotic story. I love the way its written. My second book of Louis and not my last
July 14, 2014
A review by The Blogger Girls.
What a sweet story this was!
Drew is training for the Olympics after missing his shot in previous qualifiers. James is the trainer hired by Drew’s father to get him there. They’ve been training together for a few years but have always kept things professional.
Then, Drew starts having trouble after showing up late for practice one day. James intends to find out what the problem is and gets his chance after Drew ends up in some more trouble. Once they act upon their attraction, they decide to take things further. These guys are very sweet together. James is the more dominant experienced of the two, and I love stories about first timers. This one did not disappoint.
For a short story, this was very well put together. These guys have a friendship that has grown through their years of training together, and the eventual sex was hot and sweet. The only thing that niggled at me was the use of some repetitive words or sayings, such as “the swimmer.” But, overall, this was a really enjoyable, afternoon read that was at times funny, sad but also sexy and heartwarming.
I’m definitely looking forward to reading more of Mr. Stevens’ work.
December 30, 2016
Great, incredibly sweet short! I can't wait to read more of Louis Stevens.
August 6, 2014
Great short story for a lazy afternoon!
September 23, 2015
Yes this was a HOT read!!! But what I also loved was there was a story behind the fabulous sex.
Drew is the one of the main characters and swimming is his life. James is his coach and mentor. The relationship they have of coach and athlete at the beginning is typical. But underneath there are other struggles and issues that each man is carrying. Finally at a moment of despair these two finally begin to understand what the other is going through and how they can use each other as strength to pull through it.
Loved this short story!!! Great Job Louis <3
Drew is the one of the main characters and swimming is his life. James is his coach and mentor. The relationship they have of coach and athlete at the beginning is typical. But underneath there are other struggles and issues that each man is carrying. Finally at a moment of despair these two finally begin to understand what the other is going through and how they can use each other as strength to pull through it.
Loved this short story!!! Great Job Louis <3
January 23, 2016
Fun short read! Really enjoyed it wish there had been more :/
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