Wow. I usually try not to write such a negative review. But, I just cannot help wondering what in the world I just read. Realistically, this was more flash fiction than anything else. And I generally have no objection to that. I have seen some beautifully written flash fiction. But this? This really should have seen another pair of eyes before the author hit the publish page.
It is an interesting premise. An asteroid headed for Earth could mean the end of the world. I had hoped the author would have done more with it, and yet I found this really lacking. The editing issues are glaring. Their when the word there should be, things like that.
Overall, I was sorely disappointed with this particular story.