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While She Watches
A charity auction brings out Cara’s wildest fantasy yet; she wants to watch Nick with her best friend, Elise. While Nick is into his girlfriend’s crazy fantasy—after all, Elise is a pretty brunette with a body that makes him want to do bad things to her—he never considers really doing it. That would be insane, right? However, when he wins a date with Elise that night, Nick discovers Cara plans to make her fantasy a reality.
33 pages, ebook
First published June 2, 2012
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August 14, 2013
Solid 2.5 Stars
**Mild Spoilers**
The only thing I really liked about this one is the guy Nick he is your typical "guy" when it comes to fantasies and whatnot, but hey, at least he was honest about it. His girlfriend Cara, I didn't like her at all. She was a bully. She kinda pushed the issue with Nick about sleeping with her friend Elise too much, without being completely honest with him in the process of why she really wanted him to do it. And her childish antics while he was on a date with her friend, were just irritating...
Cara didn't come off as someone who was free in her need or want to really "explore" this with her man, she came off more like a female insecure in her own ability in holding her man's interest while knowing he finds her friend attractive. Also, I got the impression that she was just really wanting to sleep with her friend again too.
The encounter that Nick has with Cara's friend Elise, was hot yes, but since I'm not one who is big on the "Female Lovin" this encounter quickly went south for me...
So if your cup of tea is a short erotic read with M/f/f,(heavy on the f/f lovin) this is the one for you.
**Mild Spoilers**
The only thing I really liked about this one is the guy Nick he is your typical "guy" when it comes to fantasies and whatnot, but hey, at least he was honest about it. His girlfriend Cara, I didn't like her at all. She was a bully. She kinda pushed the issue with Nick about sleeping with her friend Elise too much, without being completely honest with him in the process of why she really wanted him to do it. And her childish antics while he was on a date with her friend, were just irritating...
Cara didn't come off as someone who was free in her need or want to really "explore" this with her man, she came off more like a female insecure in her own ability in holding her man's interest while knowing he finds her friend attractive. Also, I got the impression that she was just really wanting to sleep with her friend again too.
The encounter that Nick has with Cara's friend Elise, was hot yes, but since I'm not one who is big on the "Female Lovin" this encounter quickly went south for me...
So if your cup of tea is a short erotic read with M/f/f,(heavy on the f/f lovin) this is the one for you.
September 20, 2017
Just wow!
This was one of the hottest things I've ever read. It was the first piece I've read by this author, but it certainly won't be the last.
This was one of the hottest things I've ever read. It was the first piece I've read by this author, but it certainly won't be the last.
February 2, 2025
If it were just a matter of how the sex is written, likely I would read anything by Kenny Wright. He admits to being a man intentionally writing to male erotic imagination. I am his target audience. Some of his themes do not work for me, and just writing to male imagination leaves out the frequently more interesting female literary libido.
This being a short sexy story it is pretty much what the title tells you. There is a set up giving us beautiful, loving hot couple, Cara and Nick. With her money in a charity auction, funding a date with her also sexy friend, Elise; Cara arranges to have Nick and Elise together while she watches. Clever title what? There is a tad more to the 41 pages but that would be telling.
In terms of the time to the main event, Clara is more than a little eager to bring about the not entirely private showing and no one, including Nick seems to care if he is more than satisfied with Cara. Clearly there is room for more than 41 pages, if only to make add credibility to the story. Elise’s may have other than feelings of arousal, but this is not about much other than arousal.
In other words, this easily could have been a longer story, one with more depth, and BTW more beddings. OTOH that might have resulted in this being yet another series of several short “books” and those I would have ignored.
This being a short sexy story it is pretty much what the title tells you. There is a set up giving us beautiful, loving hot couple, Cara and Nick. With her money in a charity auction, funding a date with her also sexy friend, Elise; Cara arranges to have Nick and Elise together while she watches. Clever title what? There is a tad more to the 41 pages but that would be telling.
In terms of the time to the main event, Clara is more than a little eager to bring about the not entirely private showing and no one, including Nick seems to care if he is more than satisfied with Cara. Clearly there is room for more than 41 pages, if only to make add credibility to the story. Elise’s may have other than feelings of arousal, but this is not about much other than arousal.
In other words, this easily could have been a longer story, one with more depth, and BTW more beddings. OTOH that might have resulted in this being yet another series of several short “books” and those I would have ignored.
July 27, 2022
A very sensual plot with, thank goodness, no unrealistic hot wife and feminized cuckold wimp husband to sicken me.
Thank you KENNY!
Thank you KENNY!
October 20, 2024
This was a super quick, super hot read. Would you watch your partner sleep with your best friend? Cara does and she loves it.
🥵🌶️🔥
🥵🌶️🔥
April 28, 2025
Enjoyable quick read and Nick is a lucky boy!
November 15, 2012
Really 4.5 Stars
Original review up at http://scorchingbookreviews.blogspot....
Cara has always wanted to watch her boyfriend Nick have sex with her best friend, Elise. When Nick wins a date with Elise in a charity auction, on the instructions of Cara, she sees this as an opportunity to set up her fantasy. Elise is a very attractive woman; it doesn’t take much to convince Nick that her fantasy could become a reality. When she starts to mention Elise in her dirty talk in the bedroom, it becomes clear that Nick is as up for it as she is. Well, he is in the land of make-believe because he realises that if they make it a reality it could change the relationship he values for just one night of pleasure.
Convincing Nick is one problem she feels she can overcome. Convincing her best-friend is another. Can she coerce the two people she loves the most to do this and will it be worth it in the end?
This is Erotica for men written by a man. Kenny and I have had many conversations, when I first started to get review requests for the EC for men line, over what Erotica for men should look like. Let’s be honest, I am missing a particular appendage that makes my opinion on the matter not incredibly relevant J Do I recommend that men buy this novella? Do I think women should load up their men’s kindle with this type of Erotica? In a word, YES! This is a well written story that even managed to make me hot and it wasn’t even aimed at my gender!
There are obvious differences in this to erotica for women. At no point did I see the size/girth of Nicks penis mentioned. I did, however, get quite a bit of description of the women but without any flowery euphemisms. I got a lot of positions, but with less thoughts/feelings/laboured descriptive terms. It was refreshing. The storyline was straight out of a man’s fantasy land; we have a male being given permission to have sex with his girlfriends hot best friend, then some lesbian sex and to finish it all we have a F/MF threesome. It’s fun.
There was character development over the length of the novella and all characters were well fleshed out for a tale this size. Elise was probably the vaguest of all the characters but this wasn’t her tale; this was the tale of Nick and Cara and them accepting each other warts, kinks and all!
This is what I imagine Erotica for men to look like. I can’t comment on the effectiveness of it in arousing men, but I thought the tale was hot and was very well written. It’s something that’s definitely worth a try.
Original review up at http://scorchingbookreviews.blogspot....
Cara has always wanted to watch her boyfriend Nick have sex with her best friend, Elise. When Nick wins a date with Elise in a charity auction, on the instructions of Cara, she sees this as an opportunity to set up her fantasy. Elise is a very attractive woman; it doesn’t take much to convince Nick that her fantasy could become a reality. When she starts to mention Elise in her dirty talk in the bedroom, it becomes clear that Nick is as up for it as she is. Well, he is in the land of make-believe because he realises that if they make it a reality it could change the relationship he values for just one night of pleasure.
Convincing Nick is one problem she feels she can overcome. Convincing her best-friend is another. Can she coerce the two people she loves the most to do this and will it be worth it in the end?
This is Erotica for men written by a man. Kenny and I have had many conversations, when I first started to get review requests for the EC for men line, over what Erotica for men should look like. Let’s be honest, I am missing a particular appendage that makes my opinion on the matter not incredibly relevant J Do I recommend that men buy this novella? Do I think women should load up their men’s kindle with this type of Erotica? In a word, YES! This is a well written story that even managed to make me hot and it wasn’t even aimed at my gender!
There are obvious differences in this to erotica for women. At no point did I see the size/girth of Nicks penis mentioned. I did, however, get quite a bit of description of the women but without any flowery euphemisms. I got a lot of positions, but with less thoughts/feelings/laboured descriptive terms. It was refreshing. The storyline was straight out of a man’s fantasy land; we have a male being given permission to have sex with his girlfriends hot best friend, then some lesbian sex and to finish it all we have a F/MF threesome. It’s fun.
There was character development over the length of the novella and all characters were well fleshed out for a tale this size. Elise was probably the vaguest of all the characters but this wasn’t her tale; this was the tale of Nick and Cara and them accepting each other warts, kinks and all!
This is what I imagine Erotica for men to look like. I can’t comment on the effectiveness of it in arousing men, but I thought the tale was hot and was very well written. It’s something that’s definitely worth a try.
May 27, 2020
very good read!!
July 5, 2015
The other reviews were correct
The reviews about the character's development are spot on. Loved it. Story was unfolded very well and the setting up the " encounter" was very realistic. The sex scenes for this type of scenario are great
The reviews about the character's development are spot on. Loved it. Story was unfolded very well and the setting up the " encounter" was very realistic. The sex scenes for this type of scenario are great
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