I don't know whether to continue with this series. It's a kind of frustrating reading experience, because it has the seeds of what could be incredible, but it gets so bogged down in Art 101 lessons that it loses track of its characters. For so much emphasis on "composition" and "drawing the eye," you'd think Yamaguchi would be better about drawing the reader's attention to some actual character development.
I was initially hopeful that we'd gotten past the "here is how to draw a still life" bits of the first volume, and when we were purely interacting with the characters, it had some sparks of greatness. I was glad we got to see more of Yatora hanging out with his old friends, and his new prep school classmates are interesting - although not explored too much beyond the surface level.
This volume finally has some intriguing stuff with Yuka, in particular, although I'm not really sure what Yuka's deal is. A guy who identifies as male and simply (as stated in the text) enjoys dressing in women's clothes, being pretty, and dating men? Or is that just Yatora's limited understanding of how gender works? We're mostly getting all of this filtered through his eyes, so while he is starting to think of Yuka as a little less "weird," he still files people in certain categories. It doesn't seem to have occurred to him that Yuka might be a woman - and he continues to use Yuka's birth name, which no one else does. I assume (hope?) this is something that changes as they get to know each other more in future volumes.
At least they bonded a little after Yuka's devastating breakup, although some of that impact got wiped away by how quickly Yuka bounced back and just moved on to the next guy. I really would've liked to spend more time with Yuka and to see more of a relationship - friendship, mutual understanding, etc - developing between Yuka and Yatora.
There were a few other good bits. I liked Yatora's conversation with his mom, with the emphasis on how art helped him to understand and appreciate her more. For all that he talks about how art is important to him and this is his passion now and he's giving up everything else to pursue it, I just...don't really see that in practice. There's none of that same passion from his initial blue painting, when he truly saw the world differently and it transformed his entire perspective on life. Now he's just slogging through typical art classes, trying to get into school, to do...what? He's been creating art for about a year, and he's already lost his inspiration? Why does he even WANT to paint?
That's kind of the message of this volume, I think - figuring out the answers to those kinds of questions - but it gets way too bogged down in material that made me feel kind of like I was sitting in an introductory college course. Yamaguchi hasn't really figured out how to blend exposition with the natural storytelling flow; when a literal art instructor isn't on the page to give lectures, other students will step in with paragraphs of expository text, in ways that just do not happen in normal day-to-day conversations, even if you are in an art museum.
The pacing was also really, really weird. There were numerous points where I rubbed the pages between my fingers to try to figure out if some were stuck together and if I'd missed transitions. We time-jump a lot, and it's not always clear why or when or what's happening. While the character bios at the beginning of the book call Yatora a second year, he's already gone through his senpai's graduation and turned into a third year barely a handful of pages into this volume. Then he does his spring prep school, then summer prep school, and I really have no idea what's going on with the rest of his classes (or life) in the meantime. It's all...confusing. Fragmented and muddy, like the low-quality reproductions of art that's supposed to be a series of impressive oil paintings but look like badly photocopied charcoals instead.
Even the conversation with Yatora's mother - a high point of this volume - was odd, because in Volume 1, it seemed like she'd already accepted that this was his path, but this time around, they argued about it for so long that he had to nap in a classroom to recover. It's disjointed and disorienting and I can't figure out what's supposed to be happening next. If we've already skipped basically an entire year between volumes, what's the rest of this series like? With the current pacing, he'd be getting into art school in the next volume, which means the next 10 volumes would be...him taking college art classes? Just the idea of sitting through those lectures is making me tired.
I think the reality is that I keep trying to like this manga, but I don't. I feel like I'm missing something, when all the other reviews for this series seem to be absolutely glowing. I just don't see it. I can't connect to the characters, which makes the story fall far too flat.
I'll still try the anime when it's released - my delighted gasp when I came upon the four colored pages in the middle of this volume mean that I'll probably respond a lot better when all these longwinded discussions about color theory are actually reflected by color images. I'd hope, too, that the anime's pacing will be handled better, with more focus on the characters themselves, but we'll see.
I would love to learn more about Yuka, and to find out if Yatora ever discovers what he wants to say with his art, and what his style really looks like. I think Yamaguchi using other artists' work is actually a major flaw. There's no wow factor like with that huge, detailed painting that made Yatora want to pursue art to begin with. Most of the other pieces are small, indistinct, and created by other artists. Using someone else to paint Yatora's pieces distances the creator from their own main character and makes me feel like...if they don't even understand Yatora, how am I ever supposed to?
I gave it a good try, but I think two volumes is where I'm stopping, at least for now. Like Yotasuke, I'm calling it quits...this extended prep school is not for me.