Still good, but not as good as the first book. There were a bunch of things that were just…disappointing.
I felt like this book tread a lot more into tired cliche territory — the human girl Emma is now attracted to some random guy she JUST met five minutes ago, and it creates friendship drama and a brief friend breakup with XR until she and XR reconcile. It’s boring, it’s tired, it made Emma look like a brat, and it took too much time away from the plot. Thankfully things got better again after Emma and XR reconciled.
Keller felt too much like a plot device and not enough like a character of his own. Like, I know he’s just there to create drama. And he didn’t really serve much purpose in the team other than to be the target of Emma’s hormones until the climax where his forklift handling and climbing skills make a difference. I kept asking myself, where are this kid’s parents? Do they know he just up and left? Are they okay with this? In the end he was an okay character, and I liked that the team got another human friend, but I didn’t like the unnecessary romantic drama, and I sort of feel like Keller’s joining the group could have been done better.
The plot of this book felt less “fresh” than the first book. Fall of the Robots reads more like a paint-by-numbers kids’ movie — we’ve got a heist that goes awry, we’ve got a team of cartoonish villains that’s almost straight out of Pokémon, we’ve got the obligatory love interest, we’ve got the moment where the friends have a falling out and then reconcile, we have a moment where one character dies and then he comes back to life very soon afterward with zero consequences. Rinse and repeat. A lot of eyeroll-worthy moments from an author that I know can do better.
The pacing felt a little off this time too. A lot of stuff felt like it got resolved too fast and easily, but maybe that’s just me.
Also I felt like this book had more…idk, plot holes? Like why aren’t the Machine Breakers using guns. Has so much time passed since the robot uprising that guns just don’t work anymore? Did the robots destroy all the guns? Is the use of guns just too against their low-tech aesthetic and outlook? It felt kind of silly to see them use swords and shields and crossbows like they’re medieval knights, and even more hi-tech stuff like electromagnetic bolas, but never guns. Like yeah, I get it, it’s a kids’ book, you probably can’t include guns…but still. I wish there was at least a passing mention as to why there were no guns.
I thought it was weird that XR immediately wrote off indoor rock climbing as illogical when it serves a logical purpose, at least for humans — exercise, recreation, practice for outdoor rock climbing. And why didn’t XR get a balaclava or ski mask to hide its face??? That’s like the number one thing that’d give XR away as a robot. I’m sure they have that stuff in an outdoor recreation store, right? Is it more suspicious to see a guy in a balaclava? How the hell did XR not get spotted by a single human when it first went inside anyway ? — before it tried on clothes and got spotted by Keller.
Why the hell did Keller’s bunker have an indoor climbing wall in the first place?? Not his parents’ store once they’re above ground —- the bunker. The bunker built to survive the ROBOT APOCALYPSE. The previous book went on and on to talk about how Emma’s bunker just had the bare necessities to live and not much else, but Keller apparently lived in some kind of boutique apocalyptic bunker with an INDOOR ROCK CLIMBING WALL. That didn’t make much sense to me.
It also ticked me off a little that the Fortress was so secret and secure, when that goes against the whole modus operandi of how the Hive works, or how I thought it was supposed to work — full transparency and trust and no secrets, right? I mean, it was mentioned that the Machine Breakers were able to hack into the Hive and disable it so easily because it wasn’t built with security in mind, because of how robot society was structured. So then why does the Fortress’s location need to be secret from the rest of the Hive, and why does it need to be secure if robot society is built in such a way that they don’t expect dissent or uprising to begin with? The robots were upset in the last book that PRES1DENT kept secrets from them, which went against the Hive code, but now apparently in this book it turns out PRES1DENT had even more secrets that every other robot was just already aware of and cool with. Like, yes, I understand WHY a society would want a secure secret fortress for their leader, I’m just saying it feels kind of contradictory to what we’ve been presented about robot society in these books. Am I making sense here?
*Sigh* But groaning and nitpicking aside, it’s a perfectly fine book. It’s decent. It’s readable. It’s not like I didn’t enjoy it enough not to finish it. I’m sure kids will like it just fine. I liked the extra illustrations in this one that the last book didn’t have. I liked spending more time with this world and characters, and if there’s another sequel I will most likely read it. It’s just that there were a lot of frustrating aspects to this book. Perhaps I’m just too old and ornery, it’s not like I’m in the targeted ~8-12 age range, I don’t know.
2.5 stars rounded up to 3 — I liked it enough to want to round up rather than down, honest, I just really needed to vent my frustrations.