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I loved the premise and I loved the characters, I just don’t think everything was quite developed enough. The setting was amazing, especially the traveling queer river community. Ivy is an absolute gem, I loved her “fuck it” personality and how she didn’t care what society thought about her. I definitely would have bought a scandalous copy of her poems! Her dynamic with her brother was so adorable, it was quite endearing for her to put aside her own life to follow him across the country to make sure he settled in okay, and especially after he got sick. But what really melted my heart was how she treated Freya. Rather than shy away from society’s most eligible lady, she challenges Freya with her wit, knowledge, feelings, and actions.
Freya and her sisters totally made this story. They were so hilarious, and I loved how they always had each other’s backs and especially all the times they were competitive with one another. Even though it took longer for Freya to truly open up, once she did, her whole personality seemed to shift and it was nice to be able to see her journey through discovering her sexuality and not blindly agreeing with what society deems tradition. Her relationship with her father versus her mother was very interesting. His reaction to Freya’s reveal was heartbreaking but not surprising given the time and circumstance.
In terms of the chemistry between Freya and Ivy, I thought the build up was nicely written, but while I thought Ivy’s intentions were pretty clear from the beginning, it was frustrating to see Freya constantly entertain her male suitor and make Ivy wait so long and question her feelings. They were never quite transparent with each other which made the miscommunication obvious. Yes the plot is all about Freya being caught between duty and love, but I just wish they had been given more time together, especially after Freya’s father discovers them. I did love how caring and thoughtful Ivy was when it came to teaching Freya some things and being understanding with her figuring out her sexuality on her timeline.
Unfortunately the ending ruined a majority of the book for me. It was way too rushed and disappointing because we don’t get to see how things are resolved with Freya’s father/parents (which was a majority of the plot), and too much was forgiven without much of a fight or satisfying explanation. The time jump also did not help matters because we miss a huge amount of development to their relationship and explanation for their time apart and how all of the sudden everything is good enough for them to get engaged. Another unsatisfying part of the book was that we barely get a glimpse of the worldbuilding and politics that went into the story, especially in regards to why only certain parts seemed to be reimagined and why there is no backstory or history about the important laws regulating marriage, adoption, inheritance, and courting etiquette.
So overall, it was definitely an enjoyable story, but it could have been made better with more development in regards to the worldbuilding, certain plot points (mostly in the ending), and the relationship between Freya and Ivy once they come to terms with their feelings.
Thank you NetGalley and Wednesday Books for the early digital copy for review.