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Teen Wolf Fanfic
Agent McCall/Stiles Stilinski, Derek Hale/Stiles Stilinski
An alternate (but compliant) canon wherein Rafael McCall and Stiles hook up pre-werewolf shenanigans. When McCall comes back to Beacon Hills, it quickly spirals out of Stiles' control. Derek becomes his sole confidant, his anchor, and maybe something more.
Words: 115390 complete in 13 parts
Original Post: http://archiveofourown.org/series/55628
Agent McCall/Stiles Stilinski, Derek Hale/Stiles Stilinski
An alternate (but compliant) canon wherein Rafael McCall and Stiles hook up pre-werewolf shenanigans. When McCall comes back to Beacon Hills, it quickly spirals out of Stiles' control. Derek becomes his sole confidant, his anchor, and maybe something more.
Words: 115390 complete in 13 parts
Original Post: http://archiveofourown.org/series/55628
231 pages, ebook
First published September 3, 2013
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December 11, 2014
ETA: upping my rating to 4 stars, because those first chapters haunt me in the best and kinkiest way possible. Yeah..:')
RemainNameless dips a toe in murkier waters, when she decides to explore daddy kink. And I didn't know I could be this much into it *giggles awkwardly*
Stiles comes across the dad, Rafael McCall, of his best friend Scott in a night club where he isn’t supposed to be. After a messy divorce, ‘Rafa’ is pretty much out of the picture and only regarded as the asshole that put both Scott and his mum through shit. When Rafa comes on to Stiles and the boy realizes that the man who once used to comfort him when he and Scott came home with scraped knees, he decides to get back at him by leading him on. And by pulling out at the last minute. Only, his revenge doesn’t go according to plan..
So hot! I had no idea...
RemainNameless pulled off the mixture of childhood memories (mmm, creepy, considering the daddy kink), humiliation and D/s perfectly here, I could cry fangirl style. I read the first chapters of this story holding my breath and happily recommended it to all my darker fare loving friends.
Unfortunately, as soon as the canon material was introduced and Derek entered the stage, the story spiraled into sap, weirdness, a lack of asshole-factor and became a chore to finish.
Still, 5 stars for the first so-wrong-so-damn-right chapters. I can see myself rereading those when the mood strikes. I challenge you to do the same. he he he..
RemainNameless dips a toe in murkier waters, when she decides to explore daddy kink. And I didn't know I could be this much into it *giggles awkwardly*
Stiles comes across the dad, Rafael McCall, of his best friend Scott in a night club where he isn’t supposed to be. After a messy divorce, ‘Rafa’ is pretty much out of the picture and only regarded as the asshole that put both Scott and his mum through shit. When Rafa comes on to Stiles and the boy realizes that the man who once used to comfort him when he and Scott came home with scraped knees, he decides to get back at him by leading him on. And by pulling out at the last minute. Only, his revenge doesn’t go according to plan..
So hot! I had no idea...
RemainNameless pulled off the mixture of childhood memories (mmm, creepy, considering the daddy kink), humiliation and D/s perfectly here, I could cry fangirl style. I read the first chapters of this story holding my breath and happily recommended it to all my darker fare loving friends.
Unfortunately, as soon as the canon material was introduced and Derek entered the stage, the story spiraled into sap, weirdness, a lack of asshole-factor and became a chore to finish.
Still, 5 stars for the first so-wrong-so-damn-right chapters. I can see myself rereading those when the mood strikes. I challenge you to do the same. he he he..
April 26, 2014
The beginning of this story is 
is humpingly divine.
The start was banking with Oh-pleeeease-be-my-Daddy-I-need-it-Daddy-stuff-me-Daddy-give-it-to-me-hard-Daddy-oh-fuck-fuck-fuck-me-stupid-Daddy-kink-action.
Unfortunately it doesn't stay ^w/that theme^ and it all starts going to hell in a stupid hand basket.
Backstory: This is fan fiction based on 'Teen Wolf' (TV series) of a group of high school teens mixing it up with the local werewolves population. It features the show characters Derek Hale and Stiles Stalinski ('Sterek' fanfic fandoms). Stiles's a snarky cutie-patootie-slice-of-apple-pie goodness while Derek is the resident-brooding-sexy-werewolf..and him and Stiles have this hate-you-fuck-me-love-thing going on.
I like me a good bastard character and Rafe (Stiles best bro Scott's dad) is primo in this role. Rafe left Scott and his mom when he was an adolescent so when Stiles (closeted homo-teen) bumps into him cruising a local gay club..Stiles is positive Rafe doesn't recognize him and succumbs to the hook up.
I would have read umpteen chapters on just Rafe and Stiles alone and been happier than a gopher in soft dirt. They were all kinds of steamy DILF-kink man-action until the writer f's it all up by throwing in Derek for some 'Sterek' fluff piece.
At 70% with Rafe's scenes bookmarked to capacity we called it a day.
is humpingly divine.The start was banking with Oh-pleeeease-be-my-Daddy-I-need-it-Daddy-stuff-me-Daddy-give-it-to-me-hard-Daddy-oh-fuck-fuck-fuck-me-stupid-Daddy-kink-action.
Unfortunately it doesn't stay ^w/that theme^ and it all starts going to hell in a stupid hand basket.
Backstory: This is fan fiction based on 'Teen Wolf' (TV series) of a group of high school teens mixing it up with the local werewolves population. It features the show characters Derek Hale and Stiles Stalinski ('Sterek' fanfic fandoms). Stiles's a snarky cutie-patootie-slice-of-apple-pie goodness while Derek is the resident-brooding-sexy-werewolf..and him and Stiles have this hate-you-fuck-me-love-thing going on.
I like me a good bastard character and Rafe (Stiles best bro Scott's dad) is primo in this role. Rafe left Scott and his mom when he was an adolescent so when Stiles (closeted homo-teen) bumps into him cruising a local gay club..Stiles is positive Rafe doesn't recognize him and succumbs to the hook up.
I would have read umpteen chapters on just Rafe and Stiles alone and been happier than a gopher in soft dirt. They were all kinds of steamy DILF-kink man-action until the writer f's it all up by throwing in Derek for some 'Sterek' fluff piece.
At 70% with Rafe's scenes bookmarked to capacity we called it a day.
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December 13, 2014Four Stars for the first two parts which were beyond filthy and, like the best "Daddy-kink," are troubling enough that I can't imagine forgetting them and will continue to ponder what I think it all means.
As other reviewers have noted, part three begins a bizarre sort of summary-on-the-fly of the first three seasons of Teen Wolf that will be incomprehensible to those who haven't watched the show, and was was pretty dull and confusing even for those like me who have. It did nothing to engage the reader with Stiles' budding relationship with Derek, quite the opposite, and there was not enough focus on Rafael McCall to serve as substitute. I quickly lost patience and gave up. It's too bad because the author's definitely sussed out something in the show that might be really fruitful--the Rafe/Stiles pairing offers up a lot of potential for an addictive, self-destructive relationship much like the best Steters, but even rampantly skimming, the episode summary seemed to go on forever, and there was not enough actual original content to keep me going.
Bottom line: highly recommend the first two parts for those who prefer the more psycho Teen Wolf fics.
As other reviewers have noted, part three begins a bizarre sort of summary-on-the-fly of the first three seasons of Teen Wolf that will be incomprehensible to those who haven't watched the show, and was was pretty dull and confusing even for those like me who have. It did nothing to engage the reader with Stiles' budding relationship with Derek, quite the opposite, and there was not enough focus on Rafael McCall to serve as substitute. I quickly lost patience and gave up. It's too bad because the author's definitely sussed out something in the show that might be really fruitful--the Rafe/Stiles pairing offers up a lot of potential for an addictive, self-destructive relationship much like the best Steters, but even rampantly skimming, the episode summary seemed to go on forever, and there was not enough actual original content to keep me going.
Bottom line: highly recommend the first two parts for those who prefer the more psycho Teen Wolf fics.
May 28, 2014
If you care, and please note that I have ZERO knowledge of this show and my comments are based solely on the story.
Multipart Series:
You hollow out my hungry eyes 3 Stars
Short story of Stiles actively seeking a sexual partner at age 15 and ending up losing the vcard to Scott's estranged Dad, Rafa. Quick, with some spanking, verbal humiliation and daddy kink.
Wanna break you down so badly 3 Stars
Continued from part one. Things don't go exactly as planned.
Wish you were the one that got away 2 Stars
Alright, maybe if you've watched the show that segment made sense, but the whole midsection with 12 different characters whirling through was a mass of confusion and undefined action--I fucking skipped it after attempting to make sense of the first six paragraphs and having ZERO clue. Once we drop that and have it back to Stiles and Rafa, I started reading again. Nice hot and dirty talk.
Something always brings me back 2 Stars
Another balls coming in from left field episode. Color me clueless.
We fuck till we come to conclusions 3.5 Stars
Well, half of that title is correct. I still don't have answers. Some hot daddy kink in inappropriate places and a story line that didn't make me nauseous. Yay.
The fear of falling apart 3 Stars
More inappropriate locations sex and some plot twists that I actually followed.
I lost myself again 4 Stars [Part 2 of "You hollow out my hungry eyes"]
Some more Daddy kink with voyeurism and emotional consequences.
We might be hollow but we're brave 3 Stars [Part 8]
Twisty turns and Stiles is left with some missing time.
Take only what you need 3.5 Stars [Part 9]
Clash of the titans! Whoop. LInes are drawn and chess pieces in play.
We all know how to fake it 2.5 Stars [Part 10]
Funny bits with Scott texting Stiles and then there's Lydia's plan--fuck all if I know what that's about
You were knocking me down with the palm of your eye 3.5 Stars {Part 11]
Hot damn. Stiles and Derek, finally. Gallon challenge? O_o Don't think that's physically possible
You always take it further than I ever can 2.5 Stars [Part 12]
Running around setting up for the wrap up.
Between the burning shad and the fading light 3 Stars [Final, Part 13]
This was probably way cooler for fans of the show, but since there was some righteous violence and a decent wrap up I went with it.
Overall, I'd say this is a true fans' fanfic rather than just a read alone story. All the crazy sex stuff happens in the first couple segments and then it peters out :) Ciao.
Multipart Series:
You hollow out my hungry eyes 3 Stars
Short story of Stiles actively seeking a sexual partner at age 15 and ending up losing the vcard to Scott's estranged Dad, Rafa. Quick, with some spanking, verbal humiliation and daddy kink.
Wanna break you down so badly 3 Stars
Continued from part one. Things don't go exactly as planned.
Wish you were the one that got away 2 Stars
Alright, maybe if you've watched the show that segment made sense, but the whole midsection with 12 different characters whirling through was a mass of confusion and undefined action--I fucking skipped it after attempting to make sense of the first six paragraphs and having ZERO clue. Once we drop that and have it back to Stiles and Rafa, I started reading again. Nice hot and dirty talk.
Something always brings me back 2 Stars
Another balls coming in from left field episode. Color me clueless.
We fuck till we come to conclusions 3.5 Stars
Well, half of that title is correct. I still don't have answers. Some hot daddy kink in inappropriate places and a story line that didn't make me nauseous. Yay.
The fear of falling apart 3 Stars
More inappropriate locations sex and some plot twists that I actually followed.
I lost myself again 4 Stars [Part 2 of "You hollow out my hungry eyes"]
Some more Daddy kink with voyeurism and emotional consequences.
We might be hollow but we're brave 3 Stars [Part 8]
Twisty turns and Stiles is left with some missing time.
Take only what you need 3.5 Stars [Part 9]
Clash of the titans! Whoop. LInes are drawn and chess pieces in play.
We all know how to fake it 2.5 Stars [Part 10]
Funny bits with Scott texting Stiles and then there's Lydia's plan--fuck all if I know what that's about
You were knocking me down with the palm of your eye 3.5 Stars {Part 11]
Hot damn. Stiles and Derek, finally. Gallon challenge? O_o Don't think that's physically possible
You always take it further than I ever can 2.5 Stars [Part 12]
Running around setting up for the wrap up.
Between the burning shad and the fading light 3 Stars [Final, Part 13]
This was probably way cooler for fans of the show, but since there was some righteous violence and a decent wrap up I went with it.
Overall, I'd say this is a true fans' fanfic rather than just a read alone story. All the crazy sex stuff happens in the first couple segments and then it peters out :) Ciao.
August 4, 2015
4.5 stars for sticking with me. It's kind of hard to forget and it took days to feel clean after.
Ok. Finally able to write a review. This fic was long but good. I feel gross having been turned on while being equally squicked by the situation.
Rafa is a manipulative dickbag and Stiles is 15 and too young to know better. Extra squicky is the reveal of childhood influence/interference. Wilfully parading your junk around an 8 year old boy is pretty creepy. It all starts before werewolves. Stiles is so unprepared for this.
Full of daddy kink that is seriously hot while being gross. It's smart because it puts you in Stiles' shoes. Young, turned on, wants it and doesn't at the same time, from this older attractive person who seems to care for and desire him. So innocent he has zero idea of how badly he is being treated, manipulated, and used until someone shows him how much better it could be.
The chapter(s) involving the canon catch-up is jumbled and kind of unnecessary. The ending happens fast and it's a bit disappointing in that it doesn't entirely make sense to me and the whole secondary Lydia story is awkward. That said, the getting there was good. Derek's motivation made sense and while I wish he stepped in sooner I understand why he didn't. It's about not taking any more power away from Stiles. Justice is served, albeit a bit heavy and dubious.
I love that no one blames the victim even though Stiles blames himself and feels complicit. I wish this were the case for most in this kind of situation. Flawed but memorable. An exceptional look at childhood sexual interference and abuse of power over a child and a teenager. I still feel gross for finding the sex hot.
Ok. Finally able to write a review. This fic was long but good. I feel gross having been turned on while being equally squicked by the situation.
Rafa is a manipulative dickbag and Stiles is 15 and too young to know better. Extra squicky is the reveal of childhood influence/interference. Wilfully parading your junk around an 8 year old boy is pretty creepy. It all starts before werewolves. Stiles is so unprepared for this.
Full of daddy kink that is seriously hot while being gross. It's smart because it puts you in Stiles' shoes. Young, turned on, wants it and doesn't at the same time, from this older attractive person who seems to care for and desire him. So innocent he has zero idea of how badly he is being treated, manipulated, and used until someone shows him how much better it could be.
The chapter(s) involving the canon catch-up is jumbled and kind of unnecessary. The ending happens fast and it's a bit disappointing in that it doesn't entirely make sense to me and the whole secondary Lydia story is awkward. That said, the getting there was good. Derek's motivation made sense and while I wish he stepped in sooner I understand why he didn't. It's about not taking any more power away from Stiles. Justice is served, albeit a bit heavy and dubious.
I love that no one blames the victim even though Stiles blames himself and feels complicit. I wish this were the case for most in this kind of situation. Flawed but memorable. An exceptional look at childhood sexual interference and abuse of power over a child and a teenager. I still feel gross for finding the sex hot.
October 1, 2014
I can't explain.
You know when you go back to your read shelf, and you see that you've read a book, it even shows 3-4 stars, and might remember the cover...but you couldn't really say what the story was about?
This isn't one of those. A year from now, when I see this title, I'll remember it.
It wasn't perfect, but was memorable. (the fast forward chapter is the worst...but it was good to age Styles a little)
I wanted to shoot Scott's dad in the head.
The beginning was hot...but with a guilty feeling. Styles is only 15. Luckily they fast forward a bit an make him older. But then, the Daddy part goes from guilty hotness...to completely messed up.
The Sterek parts were good. I don't want to give spoilers, so...
I enjoyed the story a lot...and I'll be looking to see if the author has anymore fan fic.
You know when you go back to your read shelf, and you see that you've read a book, it even shows 3-4 stars, and might remember the cover...but you couldn't really say what the story was about?
This isn't one of those. A year from now, when I see this title, I'll remember it.
It wasn't perfect, but was memorable. (the fast forward chapter is the worst...but it was good to age Styles a little)
I wanted to shoot Scott's dad in the head.
The beginning was hot...but with a guilty feeling. Styles is only 15. Luckily they fast forward a bit an make him older. But then, the Daddy part goes from guilty hotness...to completely messed up.
The Sterek parts were good. I don't want to give spoilers, so...
I enjoyed the story a lot...and I'll be looking to see if the author has anymore fan fic.
May 6, 2015
This is one of the darkest fics I've read and I couldn't get eough of it. Actually, that's kind of a lie. The first parts made me really uncomfortable, but I could't stop reading, then it seemed to change focus a little. The middle was a bit bleh but the ending was great. Started with a really fucked up Stiles/Rafa situation and
I would love this to be edited and put together asw one fic rather than 13 different fics. Now the story is there and the author knows the focus it could be so good. Yet still as creepy and dark as all get out.
It made me question my views on right adn wrong...
I adored Stiles...
Not sure where the Peter needing to be dead came from in the last chapters...
Derek was cool...
The sheriff was cool...
My heart bled a little for Scott...
Despite it's flaws I'm favouriting it because I know I'll be thinking about it months from now.
If you like dark, this could be for you.
I would love this to be edited and put together asw one fic rather than 13 different fics. Now the story is there and the author knows the focus it could be so good. Yet still as creepy and dark as all get out.
It made me question my views on right adn wrong...
I adored Stiles...
Not sure where the Peter needing to be dead came from in the last chapters...
Derek was cool...
The sheriff was cool...
My heart bled a little for Scott...
Despite it's flaws I'm favouriting it because I know I'll be thinking about it months from now.
If you like dark, this could be for you.
September 22, 2014
First half was great with some very hot and kinky scenes between Stiles and Rafe. However, once Derek came into the picture, the story went downhill, which is surprising because I typically love Sterek! I lost interest with the introduction of canon material, as I do not watch the show. It got a little better toward the end but felt like a chore to finish. With the uninteresting second half, I'm left feeling I can't give it more than 2.5 stars. I would only recommend the first few chapters if you're considering reading it, unless you watch the show.
July 29, 2016
Look at me. Adding a story to GR. Hope this is roughly how it's supposed to be done. I even managed to contact the author. Yay.
Review to come.
Review to come.
August 11, 2018
3.5 stars Overall, I liked this, although I've got to admit that sexy bits with Rafa were prob my favorite parts (as horrible as that is to say). But I still liked the Sterek development, their deep friendship and connection was nice and I liked the way Derek was there for Stiles. I feel like Stiles should be smarter than this, but I guess I've just gotta let that go.
1) You hollow out my hungry eyes - Holy. Fucking. YOWZA! Dirty wrong hotness. I hate that Rafa is still such a dick, but that’s kinda the point. And Stiles is so stupid.
2) Wanna break you down so badly - I saw the big reveal coming, hence Stiles was being stupid. But he’s also 15. More dirty hot wrong.
3) Wish you were the one that got away - This one ended so effen hot! But was also soooooo slow to get there. I get that there was 2 seasons worth of stuff to recap with a slightly different perspective, but I was just trying to push through it to find out if we were getting Sterek or more Stafa.
4) Something always brings me back - Liking the start of pre slash Sterek finally, their little bromance is sweet. The Rafa sex is never gonna not be super hot though. I will say, I’m annoyed Stiles didn’t learn his lesson with convoluted plans to manipulate Rafa. They don’t work.
5) We fuck till we come to conclusions - Again with the dirty wrong fucking. More Sterek progression which is sweet. Interesting Melissa reveal.
6) The fear of falling apart - samesies
7) I lost myself again - Holy Horrible Awkward Batman! That was painful. And hot? And sad. Moving on.
8) We might be hollow but we're brave - first one without sex (I think), interesting plot development. Derek is being an amazing friend but also... it has clearly gone past the point of a simple unhealthy relationship and I’m surprised he hasn’t broached the subject of telling th sheriff. Maybe cuz he knows Stiles would flip. Anyway, Stiles finally made a smart calculating move with Rafa. But then I feel like he blew it by peacing out to Derek’s. Clearly Rafa keeps an eye on Derek’s place and/or the help. Dumbass.
9) Take only what you need - Nice Derek POV. Glad someone’s finally taking action.
10) We all know how to fake it - more plot
11) You were knocking me down with the palm of your eye - Stiles and Derek definitely deserved a long sweet and slow finally moment, although I did skim some of the “exploring” because it was a bit too slow. But ended up really sweet and nice and the ending had me smiling.
12) You always take it further than I ever can - plots finally pushing full steam ahead, although still a lot of unanswered questions. Almost done!
13) Between the burning shade and the fading light - good ending, although I really didn't find the Peter bits necessary. He wasn't really in the story, didn't do anything especially bad, and he didn't contribute to Rafa's downfall, so why bother? I loved the bit with the sheriff.
*author is taking their stuff off A03 :(
1) You hollow out my hungry eyes - Holy. Fucking. YOWZA! Dirty wrong hotness. I hate that Rafa is still such a dick, but that’s kinda the point. And Stiles is so stupid.
2) Wanna break you down so badly - I saw the big reveal coming, hence Stiles was being stupid. But he’s also 15. More dirty hot wrong.
3) Wish you were the one that got away - This one ended so effen hot! But was also soooooo slow to get there. I get that there was 2 seasons worth of stuff to recap with a slightly different perspective, but I was just trying to push through it to find out if we were getting Sterek or more Stafa.
4) Something always brings me back - Liking the start of pre slash Sterek finally, their little bromance is sweet. The Rafa sex is never gonna not be super hot though. I will say, I’m annoyed Stiles didn’t learn his lesson with convoluted plans to manipulate Rafa. They don’t work.
5) We fuck till we come to conclusions - Again with the dirty wrong fucking. More Sterek progression which is sweet. Interesting Melissa reveal.
6) The fear of falling apart - samesies
7) I lost myself again - Holy Horrible Awkward Batman! That was painful. And hot? And sad. Moving on.
8) We might be hollow but we're brave - first one without sex (I think), interesting plot development. Derek is being an amazing friend but also... it has clearly gone past the point of a simple unhealthy relationship and I’m surprised he hasn’t broached the subject of telling th sheriff. Maybe cuz he knows Stiles would flip. Anyway, Stiles finally made a smart calculating move with Rafa. But then I feel like he blew it by peacing out to Derek’s. Clearly Rafa keeps an eye on Derek’s place and/or the help. Dumbass.
9) Take only what you need - Nice Derek POV. Glad someone’s finally taking action.
10) We all know how to fake it - more plot
11) You were knocking me down with the palm of your eye - Stiles and Derek definitely deserved a long sweet and slow finally moment, although I did skim some of the “exploring” because it was a bit too slow. But ended up really sweet and nice and the ending had me smiling.
12) You always take it further than I ever can - plots finally pushing full steam ahead, although still a lot of unanswered questions. Almost done!
13) Between the burning shade and the fading light - good ending, although I really didn't find the Peter bits necessary. He wasn't really in the story, didn't do anything especially bad, and he didn't contribute to Rafa's downfall, so why bother? I loved the bit with the sheriff.
*author is taking their stuff off A03 :(
February 23, 2018
DNF after the 5th part. normally I don't rate if I don't finish a book but I honestly didn't like what I was reading.
The first 2 parts were hot daddy!kink-smutty-galore but after that it just went downhill.
this was not for me, didn't like Stiles or Derek in this. I mean WHY would anyone let any of this happen to them. I know Stiles is a teenager and one could argue that he didn't really know what he's doing bla bla bla, but HE DID, he chose to time and time again...so NO, just fucking NO!
The first 2 parts were hot daddy!kink-smutty-galore but after that it just went downhill.
this was not for me, didn't like Stiles or Derek in this. I mean WHY would anyone let any of this happen to them. I know Stiles is a teenager and one could argue that he didn't really know what he's doing bla bla bla, but HE DID, he chose to time and time again...so NO, just fucking NO!
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February 3, 2015No rating, because in all honesty I didn't read it through. I have no clue what the plot was supposed to be, due to the fact I only read it for the crazy hot kink. Unbelievably crazy hot kink.
By part 4 I was just pressing Ctrl+F for "daddy" - I'm not even kidding - and the thing is, I don't even like daddykink. I like mindfucks.
And (the sex in) this fic walks perfectly down the line of creepy and sexy. I loved how Rafa and Stiles tried to manipulate each other, and were both betrayed by their desires. Rafa is unapologetically disturbed. Stiles is in over his head. Together, they cross into humiliation and incest, not to mention the entire relationship is rapey and Stiles is underage. The whole thing is just wrong.
But the author is able to blend their genuine attraction with their shared history; the 'exciting' age difference and the unambiguous violation against his person; the rush of semi-public sex with psychological blackmail. And though I wishStiles their interactions were more intelligent, the hot/creepy duality of this fic was intoxicating.
Now who knows what that says about me, lol. Not many stories can capture the allure of dangerous twisted characters doing dangerous, twisted things. But this one's a winner.
Be sure to check out Loederkoningin's and Lilia's reviews.
By part 4 I was just pressing Ctrl+F for "daddy" - I'm not even kidding - and the thing is, I don't even like daddykink. I like mindfucks.
And (the sex in) this fic walks perfectly down the line of creepy and sexy. I loved how Rafa and Stiles tried to manipulate each other, and were both betrayed by their desires. Rafa is unapologetically disturbed. Stiles is in over his head. Together, they cross into humiliation and incest, not to mention the entire relationship is rapey and Stiles is underage. The whole thing is just wrong.
But the author is able to blend their genuine attraction with their shared history; the 'exciting' age difference and the unambiguous violation against his person; the rush of semi-public sex with psychological blackmail. And though I wish
"Come on, let Daddy hear you."
Now who knows what that says about me, lol. Not many stories can capture the allure of dangerous twisted characters doing dangerous, twisted things. But this one's a winner.
Be sure to check out Loederkoningin's and Lilia's reviews.
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June 30, 2017Blurb:
Not my ship. Not interested.
Not my ship. Not interested.
October 6, 2014
I would have given this 4 stars if the ending was different. For how long the fic was, I found the ending to be really quick and vague. Otherwise, it was sketchy as fuck and it was awesome!
October 19, 2016
If I hadn't watched the show I think I would have been slightly lost on parts 2 and 8.
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