The Missing Sister

by singularritae

The owl appeared late at night and left just as suddenly, he recognised the handwriting immediately and ripped open the envelope.

She is yours.
If something happens to us, I want you to hide her. Name her Hermione, for she will have my last libation before I sleep and be the messenger of dreamers.
Moony and Mary know.

Three words. Three words that forever changed the course of the war.

Genres: Fan Fiction, Romance

2008 pages, ebook

Published February 20, 2024

Reviews

[Borislava G.]

преборихх ги тия 2008стр😆😆

[Ssayaxx · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was one of the GREATEST fics I've ever read, and I've read my fair share of it. Everything was so well thought, nothing was skipped over and the relationships were perfect

This goes right up my top 3

[inès · Rating 5 out of 5]

4,5⭐️
parce que j’aurais aimé des chapitres post war à la fin

[Kibriyah Pathan · Rating 5 out of 5]

i loved everything abt this fic oml. theo and hermione’s friendship. the found family trope was js too good in this fic

[Victoria Sanders · Rating 3 out of 5]

So overall I really enjoyed it. Just some general things I wish I’d known before investing in the fic.

SPOILERS!!

1. No smut - but c’mon guys, they’re underage.
2. Weasley bashing (to the point where I felt their personalities were totally misrepresented)
3. Due to Weasley bashing, golden trio dissolves after a few books
4. 75 long chapters- an average of 9 chapters per year. I thought it was perfect.
5. Hermione is a genius and can do no wrong
6. Harry/Pansy endgame.
7. Slytherin six are obsessed with Hermione and know things about her before she does… as 13/14 year olds…
8. Hermione ignores her muggle parents.

I loved wolfstar and I really loved the detailed canon rewrite idea. I know people talked about how Hermione has ravenclaw traits, but I do think if she wasn’t a muggle, she’d for sure be a slytherin. She’s always been fierce and ambitious.
I dig dramione so much, and am always wanting them as endgame. But I was still hoping for a Draco/Ron/Krum tug-o-war.

[A · Rating 3 out of 5]

if youd tell me que at my 30’s i’d be reading a 1000 pages worth of fanfiction of harry potter that would completely rewrite the canon of the entire series

i honestly think i would be like ok girl what are you doing get a life but you know what

it was fun and it was okay and im healing my inner child so whatever

it still better than a lot of books ive read in my time

[Abbie Williams · Rating 3 out of 5]

I want to start this review off same as I do always when reviewing Fan Fiction on Goodreads by saying that I understand the controversy around reviewing fanfic on good reads but it’s the only place I log my reading, so this is for personal looking back only.

Because of that I wanted to add a disclaimer:
It is illegal to purchase fan fiction and is a breach of copyright laws to make money from other peoples characters. If you want a physical copy of this book please download and bind yourself.


This fic took me a while to finish.. it is LARGE. It did also get a bit long in the middle. I don’t want to say boring because it DEFINITELY was not that but long.

This fic captures the perfect Draco for me, soft but only for her vibes. It gives off the other side of Draco that canon supporters refuses to see imo, him backed into a corner and surviving for his family.

The snakes as a whole were chefs kiss to be fair and although I love me some Ron bashing I feel like this was a good amount of neutral bashing - like he wasn’t a massive knob but almost irrelevant to their lives.

I have only rated this a 3 - one mainly for the middle, that’s why it took so long to read. Two because I’d have liked just a tincy bit more spice. I don’t think it would need loads, because they’re young for a GOOD CHUNK of this fic, but maybe just a tincy bit more detail than kissing and hands and lots of talks of dicks 😂

But well worth the hype in general

[Zianya Mauricio · Rating 4 out of 5]

Por donde empezar a reseñar está historia?
A pesar de que formo parte de la población que creció con Harry Potter (las películas, para ser exactos) y de que conozco mucho del lore, tengo que confesar que nunca he leído los libros jeje
Aún así, me siento en casa y siento que los personajes son mis amigos de toda la vida.
Leer esta historia fue muy interesante porque como ya dije, nunca he leído los libros, así que verlos crecer a todos desde su primer año de Hogwarts hasta que la historia acaba fue lindo. A los personajes los adoré a todos, los amo, daría mi vida por ellos, fue sorpresivo leer esta versión de Snape la vdd, pero me gustó.
Cosas que no me gustaron: A veces sentí que los personajes tenían monólogos internos MUY largos, pienso yo.
Hermione a veces me parecía muy insoportable, me daban ganas de decirle ya basta por favor cierra la boca jajaja (fuera de sus arrebatos me cayó muy bien)
En lo personal no me gustó el final, o sea el final sí, pero me hubiera gustado que acabará más a futuro (eso es solo opinión personal) me gustan los epílogos donde hay saltos de tiempo, me hubiera gustado ver un Draco más adulto, un Snape abuelo, unos Malfoy irremediablemente enamorados de su nieta
en general me gustó mucho, le doy un 4.75 ⭐

[Celeste · Rating 5 out of 5]

Credo che questa sia la mia seconda fanfiction con struttura "gli interi 7 libri originali rivisti". Per intenderci, l'altra è stata "Oh mu God, not again" quindi una rivisitazione molto più fedele ai libri.
Qui invece ho visto una storia simile eppure stravolta. Sarò sincera, ho fatto un po' una smorfia quando ho saputo che Hermione qui era la figlia di Severus e Lily.
Serpeverde? Quello ci può stare, ma il fattore genetico mi ha presa un po' contropiede, non sapevo come reagire e invece... alla fine mi sono completamente innamorata.
Mi sono innamorata della storia, di tutte le modifiche fatte rispetto alla storia originale, a tutti i personaggi (nuovi e già conosciuti).
Qui il trope FOUND FAMILY regna sovranissimo and I'm down for it. Ho adorato ogni singolo momento, le relazioni che si sono formate, la crescita di determinati personaggi.
La consiglio? Caldamente.
Ma non ve la venderei come Dramione, leggetela per tutto il resto, la Dramione è più un contorno.

[Asia · Rating 2 out of 5]

2/5⭐️ but also i dnf-ed at 85%

Story is amazing but writter so poorly. If you think about your worst fanfic work created by a teeneger without knowledge and skills - yep, that's it. (I'm so sorry to the author). Mostly its just re-written (and sometimes not even changed) literal scenes from original universum. Towards the end I only read thing that did not happen in books.
I love the idea of Snape as a father. The amount of caring he did! And when it was finally brought out to the open how they slowly build a dauhter-dad relationship and created an amazing mismatched but heartful family.
The way I SCREAMED when Malfoy betrayed her in 2 part. I'm so dissapointed he got out lightly and was forgiven so quickly. It has so much potential for the future.
And Parkinson and Longbottom storyline (separate work) - I devoured it.
All in all, it had a lot of potential, however execution failed spectaculary.

[Maria Alice · Rating 5 out of 5]

Simplesmente um dos melhores livros que já li. Absolutamente perfeito, as nuances e a reescrita MUITO inteligente com 100% de aproveitamento de eventos importantes do canon, as personalidades, os POVS, tudo. Comecei achando impossível não achar ABSURDO que Snape era pai da Hermione. Terminei convicta de que ESSA na verdade é a real história de HP e nada me convence do contrário, dane-se a J.K. quem escreveu o canon foi Singularritae. Podia ter mais SMUT? Sim, mas não era o objetivo nem o foco dessa história, e admiro a autora por se manter firme nessa decisão. As vezes precisamos parar de pensar com o fogo no rabo e apreciar uma boa construção de mundo e narrativa inteligente né pessoal pelo amor? Menos hormônios subindo na cabeça e mais CONTEÚDO. Amei, junto com The Eagle Neast, The disappearances of Draco Malfoy e algumas outras, se tornou uma das fav. Perfeita!!!

[Montse Carmona · Rating 3 out of 5]

I gave it 3 stars because even though the plot is very well written (you still have the main events of HP canon happening and they’re intertwined with this new version), it has a tiny little bit of spice but definitely NO SMUT, I repeat, we have no smut. And I mean it’s not the only thing I like to read but I also think dramione deserves to be written with smut, but that’s just my opinion.

Some chapters could’ve been skipped entirely (the dodgeball chapter anyone?) and not because they weren’t fun but because this is such a LONG fic that you kinda wanna get to the good bits ASAP.

Overall it’s GREAT and well thought of. I would’ve LOVED a further down in time epilogue.

[Mary Kate · Rating 5 out of 5]

OMG THIS BOOK! Ok, it's crazyyy long, because it starts with Hermione in 1st year and follows her through all years in school, but she was sorted into Slytherin instead of Gryffindor. Oh wow I just really, really loved this book. I think about it often. It follows the timeline of the actual books, and still has most of the big moments of each book, but slightly different. This is all in Hermione's perspective, and you get to see how she would have handled the situations but as a Slytherin instead. You get to see how she fits in with the Slytherin crowd and who she ends up being friends with from the Gryffindor crowd. I would say more, but no spoilers! Really excellent book!

[Phoebe Jane · Rating 5 out of 5]

This has got to be one of my FAVORITES. Definitely a reread! I love it so much!

It has everything I’ve ever loved; the found family trope is the best, brilliant storyline, and the dramione in here is amazing and honestly this is CANON in my mind. It has been 2 days since i finished and I still have a hangover. Everything about it is beautiful!

Also, I would like more details or scenes for the epilogue. I hope a spinoff would happen with a time skip at the end. Overall, I love it. It’s been a while since I read a Dramione fluff.

[Ryn · Rating 5 out of 5]

it was amazing. so far this and manacled are my top 2 dramione fics. it literally answered 90% of the regrets I had with the og books/movies. also the way certain things take place just make so much sense. the growth of hermione, Draco, and harry was amazing too. the way their characters are written matches so much in the earlier books but the changes to their character development still make so much sense. I felt all of the emotions and enjoyed myself

[Mis queridos libros · Rating 4 out of 5]

Creo que tiene mejor perspectiva.
Es una muy buena forma de volver a conectar con el mundo mágico.
Sobre todo desde el punto de vista diferente y interesante.
Draco uff... excelente.
Cissa es en definitiva mi personaje favorito.
¿Pudieron dar otro final? Tal vez.
Solo diré que ocupo una Pansy como amiga.

[Miwa · Rating 5 out of 5]

4.5 ⭐️ this was a lengthy one, a full retelling of all the HP books. Lots of minor editing issues and minimal spice. Well done with the two POV and absolutely loved how this author brought all these relationships to life.

[Mish · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is another canon in my mind now. I'm so happy I took the leap to read this long fic.
Snape being a dad, Remus and Lupin with Theo and Harry, a very morally grey Hermione and no Ron/Hermione end goal in sight? Check

[Brooke Wallace · Rating 4 out of 5]

I wasn’t going to give it this many stars because the writing is so bad. Zero proofreading or editing of any kind was done. BUT I LOVED THE STORY AND THE CHARACTERS SO MUCH!! 😭 I will never get over the characters ❤️❤️

[Audrey · Rating 3 out of 5]

loved the plot but the entirety of it let me down I felt a lot could’ve been expanded on or had more details. love Severus tho as Hermione’s dad, and her as a Slytherin super unique.

[Anele Wood · Rating 5 out of 5]

One of the best HP fanfics out there😍

[Heydi · Rating 5 out of 5]

I love it so so much

[Moonlover · Rating 5 out of 5]

Absolute masterpiece, i think itll be my new comfort fic.
I really love everything, the dynamics, the fluff, the hurt, the comfort, i loved it allllll🥰

[Cora Fogarty-hackett · Rating 5 out of 5]

Almost three months later 😫 an incredible retelling of the entire Harry Potter series with Hermione as a Slytherin, we love to see it.
Truly a journey, absolutely worth it

[rosa]

Less than a week to read 652,974 words - I couldn’t put it down 🥹

[Sam Lue · Rating 5 out of 5]

5/5

I enjoyed this retelling! Although this is a Dramione HEA, I wouldn’t say their relationship is the focus of the fic. We follow Hermione through her years at Hogwarts.

[V · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 - did I really read 650k+ words of a fanfic that goes from Y1 to 2nd WW with the premise of snape being Hermione’s dad? I sure did.

[Raquel Weber · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 ⭐️

[Jena Jean · Rating 5 out of 5]

It was honestly an amazing read that kept me absolutely entranced the entire time. Found family, with all the devotion. I loved every single second of it.

[Nelda · Rating 5 out of 5]

I’ve been changed after reading this fic