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The Missing Sister
The owl appeared late at night and left just as suddenly, he recognised the handwriting immediately and ripped open the envelope.
She is yours.Three words. Three words that forever changed the course of the war.
If something happens to us, I want you to hide her. Name her Hermione, for she will have my last libation before I sleep and be the messenger of dreamers.
Moony and Mary know.
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2008 pages, ebook
Published February 20, 2024
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August 10, 2025преборихх ги тия 2008стр😆😆
October 29, 2024
i loved everything abt this fic oml. theo and hermione’s friendship. the found family trope was js too good in this fic
October 5, 2024
So overall I really enjoyed it. Just some general things I wish I’d known before investing in the fic.
SPOILERS!!
1. No smut - but c’mon guys, they’re underage.
2. Weasley bashing (to the point where I felt their personalities were totally misrepresented)
3. Due to Weasley bashing, golden trio dissolves after a few books
4. 75 long chapters- an average of 9 chapters per year. I thought it was perfect.
5. Hermione is a genius and can do no wrong
6. Harry/Pansy endgame.
7. Slytherin six are obsessed with Hermione and know things about her before she does… as 13/14 year olds…
8. Hermione ignores her muggle parents.
I loved wolfstar and I really loved the detailed canon rewrite idea. I know people talked about how Hermione has ravenclaw traits, but I do think if she wasn’t a muggle, she’d for sure be a slytherin. She’s always been fierce and ambitious.
I dig dramione so much, and am always wanting them as endgame. But I was still hoping for a Draco/Ron/Krum tug-o-war.
SPOILERS!!
1. No smut - but c’mon guys, they’re underage.
2. Weasley bashing (to the point where I felt their personalities were totally misrepresented)
3. Due to Weasley bashing, golden trio dissolves after a few books
4. 75 long chapters- an average of 9 chapters per year. I thought it was perfect.
5. Hermione is a genius and can do no wrong
6. Harry/Pansy endgame.
7. Slytherin six are obsessed with Hermione and know things about her before she does… as 13/14 year olds…
8. Hermione ignores her muggle parents.
I loved wolfstar and I really loved the detailed canon rewrite idea. I know people talked about how Hermione has ravenclaw traits, but I do think if she wasn’t a muggle, she’d for sure be a slytherin. She’s always been fierce and ambitious.
I dig dramione so much, and am always wanting them as endgame. But I was still hoping for a Draco/Ron/Krum tug-o-war.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 30, 2024
if youd tell me que at my 30’s i’d be reading a 1000 pages worth of fanfiction of harry potter that would completely rewrite the canon of the entire series
i honestly think i would be like ok girl what are you doing get a life but you know what
it was fun and it was okay and im healing my inner child so whatever
it still better than a lot of books ive read in my time
i honestly think i would be like ok girl what are you doing get a life but you know what
it was fun and it was okay and im healing my inner child so whatever
it still better than a lot of books ive read in my time
July 3, 2025
“Fifth year then.” He said and Pansy’s breath caught. Her own green eyes were brilliantly reflected on his glasses. “So I will have the right girl.”“Don't say things like that Henry.”He grinned and pulled their joined hands closer to him, Pansy felt her entire body following the pull. “Make me a ten-year program, make me learn everything I have to learn about Pansy Parkinson, from the way you eat your favourite food last so the taste will stay longer in your mouth to your preferred way to be cuddled in bed.” And this time it was impossible to keep her tears at bay so there she was, Pansy Parkinson crying for a boy. At least the boy was Harry Potter. “You wanted me to promise to live for myself now, I would gladly live for you.”
“He smiled, cold and terrible as most of his smiles. “You should call me Uncle.” He told her and got up from his chair, wiping invisible dirt from his pristine robes. “The liberty you have in my property, with my affairs, certainly Mr Malfoy seems too formal. Not to mention, we are soon to be business partners.” Without waiting for”
“ "When I married Lucius, I told him I would not accept a man that made his children fear him. I made him promise that our house would always be a home for them.”
“Because you are still here. Because even after tonight you still trust me and trust Lucius enough to keep calling him uncle. Because I want to protect you and protect my family from what people will tell you about us.” Narcissa sighed, “I can’t defend my husbands’ actions, nor I will try. He made a decision many years ago and as his wife, I could only follow him. I had lost something to the war and I didn’t want to lose the man I loved. You have to know what you fight for, whom you fight for. This is the most important thing.”
“Unhand my girlfriend right now before I do something that will get the three of us dead.”
“Yeah?"She smiled sweetly at him. "My father will hear about this.""Oh love, when you say things like that you make me weak on my knees." He said and Harry groaned next to her.”
“You favour her so much Uncle, it’s really such a disparate favouritism.” He said and then smirked, leaning back on the chair, “If she’s Minister of Magic, I will be the Trophy Husband. It’s not like I need to work anyway. I can buy whomever we’d need to get whatever law or regulations she wants to be passed—”“You will slow down right now. Slow to a crawl. Possibly to a backward drag.” He told his godson.The boy only laughed, clearly done with career advice. “Will we ever talk about it?” Draco asked. Severus saw the boy's smirk was still in place. Severus glared at the boy. “You know we are together.”
“Severus had waited long enough. Sirius had turned to him already. He was waiting."Give him to me," Severus asked Sirius. "Be his godfather. Be his best friend, teach him how to ride a motorcycle and how to flirt. But give him to me, let me raise James Potter's son and you can be what James and Lily wanted you to be. Give him to me and everything you can offer him will be enough.”As though the temperature had dropped dozens of degrees, Sirius shivered and when he spoke, it was with the smallest of the sounds, “Thank you.”He nodded.”
“They helped Lucius to the settee and Narcissa called for the elves to prepare Lucius’ bath and separate new clothes. Narcissa was barking orders to the handful of elves in the room when he called for her, “My love.” She turned. “I just need…” Lucius stopped, exhausted, “I just need you. Close. Please, my love.”
“Draco leaned in close and whispered in her ear, “You look radiant sweetheart, do you like when they see what a good girl you are?”
“He smiled, cold and terrible as most of his smiles. “You should call me Uncle.” He told her and got up from his chair, wiping invisible dirt from his pristine robes. “The liberty you have in my property, with my affairs, certainly Mr Malfoy seems too formal. Not to mention, we are soon to be business partners.” Without waiting for”
“ "When I married Lucius, I told him I would not accept a man that made his children fear him. I made him promise that our house would always be a home for them.”
“Because you are still here. Because even after tonight you still trust me and trust Lucius enough to keep calling him uncle. Because I want to protect you and protect my family from what people will tell you about us.” Narcissa sighed, “I can’t defend my husbands’ actions, nor I will try. He made a decision many years ago and as his wife, I could only follow him. I had lost something to the war and I didn’t want to lose the man I loved. You have to know what you fight for, whom you fight for. This is the most important thing.”
“Unhand my girlfriend right now before I do something that will get the three of us dead.”
“Yeah?"She smiled sweetly at him. "My father will hear about this.""Oh love, when you say things like that you make me weak on my knees." He said and Harry groaned next to her.”
“You favour her so much Uncle, it’s really such a disparate favouritism.” He said and then smirked, leaning back on the chair, “If she’s Minister of Magic, I will be the Trophy Husband. It’s not like I need to work anyway. I can buy whomever we’d need to get whatever law or regulations she wants to be passed—”“You will slow down right now. Slow to a crawl. Possibly to a backward drag.” He told his godson.The boy only laughed, clearly done with career advice. “Will we ever talk about it?” Draco asked. Severus saw the boy's smirk was still in place. Severus glared at the boy. “You know we are together.”
“Severus had waited long enough. Sirius had turned to him already. He was waiting."Give him to me," Severus asked Sirius. "Be his godfather. Be his best friend, teach him how to ride a motorcycle and how to flirt. But give him to me, let me raise James Potter's son and you can be what James and Lily wanted you to be. Give him to me and everything you can offer him will be enough.”As though the temperature had dropped dozens of degrees, Sirius shivered and when he spoke, it was with the smallest of the sounds, “Thank you.”He nodded.”
“They helped Lucius to the settee and Narcissa called for the elves to prepare Lucius’ bath and separate new clothes. Narcissa was barking orders to the handful of elves in the room when he called for her, “My love.” She turned. “I just need…” Lucius stopped, exhausted, “I just need you. Close. Please, my love.”
“Draco leaned in close and whispered in her ear, “You look radiant sweetheart, do you like when they see what a good girl you are?”
November 3, 2025
I want to start this review off same as I do always when reviewing Fan Fiction on Goodreads by saying that I understand the controversy around reviewing fanfic on good reads but it’s the only place I log my reading, so this is for personal looking back only.
Because of that I wanted to add a disclaimer:
It is illegal to purchase fan fiction and is a breach of copyright laws to make money from other peoples characters. If you want a physical copy of this book please download and bind yourself.
This fic took me a while to finish.. it is LARGE. It did also get a bit long in the middle. I don’t want to say boring because it DEFINITELY was not that but long.
This fic captures the perfect Draco for me, soft but only for her vibes. It gives off the other side of Draco that canon supporters refuses to see imo, him backed into a corner and surviving for his family.
The snakes as a whole were chefs kiss to be fair and although I love me some Ron bashing I feel like this was a good amount of neutral bashing - like he wasn’t a massive knob but almost irrelevant to their lives.
I have only rated this a 3 - one mainly for the middle, that’s why it took so long to read. Two because I’d have liked just a tincy bit more spice. I don’t think it would need loads, because they’re young for a GOOD CHUNK of this fic, but maybe just a tincy bit more detail than kissing and hands and lots of talks of dicks 😂
But well worth the hype in general
Because of that I wanted to add a disclaimer:
It is illegal to purchase fan fiction and is a breach of copyright laws to make money from other peoples characters. If you want a physical copy of this book please download and bind yourself.
This fic took me a while to finish.. it is LARGE. It did also get a bit long in the middle. I don’t want to say boring because it DEFINITELY was not that but long.
This fic captures the perfect Draco for me, soft but only for her vibes. It gives off the other side of Draco that canon supporters refuses to see imo, him backed into a corner and surviving for his family.
The snakes as a whole were chefs kiss to be fair and although I love me some Ron bashing I feel like this was a good amount of neutral bashing - like he wasn’t a massive knob but almost irrelevant to their lives.
I have only rated this a 3 - one mainly for the middle, that’s why it took so long to read. Two because I’d have liked just a tincy bit more spice. I don’t think it would need loads, because they’re young for a GOOD CHUNK of this fic, but maybe just a tincy bit more detail than kissing and hands and lots of talks of dicks 😂
But well worth the hype in general
October 24, 2025
Credo che questa sia la mia seconda fanfiction con struttura "gli interi 7 libri originali rivisti". Per intenderci, l'altra è stata "Oh mu God, not again" quindi una rivisitazione molto più fedele ai libri.
Qui invece ho visto una storia simile eppure stravolta. Sarò sincera, ho fatto un po' una smorfia quando ho saputo che Hermione qui era la figlia di Severus e Lily.
Serpeverde? Quello ci può stare, ma il fattore genetico mi ha presa un po' contropiede, non sapevo come reagire e invece... alla fine mi sono completamente innamorata.
Mi sono innamorata della storia, di tutte le modifiche fatte rispetto alla storia originale, a tutti i personaggi (nuovi e già conosciuti).
Qui il trope FOUND FAMILY regna sovranissimo and I'm down for it. Ho adorato ogni singolo momento, le relazioni che si sono formate, la crescita di determinati personaggi.
La consiglio? Caldamente.
Ma non ve la venderei come Dramione, leggetela per tutto il resto, la Dramione è più un contorno.
Qui invece ho visto una storia simile eppure stravolta. Sarò sincera, ho fatto un po' una smorfia quando ho saputo che Hermione qui era la figlia di Severus e Lily.
Serpeverde? Quello ci può stare, ma il fattore genetico mi ha presa un po' contropiede, non sapevo come reagire e invece... alla fine mi sono completamente innamorata.
Mi sono innamorata della storia, di tutte le modifiche fatte rispetto alla storia originale, a tutti i personaggi (nuovi e già conosciuti).
Qui il trope FOUND FAMILY regna sovranissimo and I'm down for it. Ho adorato ogni singolo momento, le relazioni che si sono formate, la crescita di determinati personaggi.
La consiglio? Caldamente.
Ma non ve la venderei come Dramione, leggetela per tutto il resto, la Dramione è più un contorno.
November 25, 2025
2/5⭐️ but also i dnf-ed at 85%
Story is amazing but writter so poorly. If you think about your worst fanfic work created by a teeneger without knowledge and skills - yep, that's it. (I'm so sorry to the author). Mostly its just re-written (and sometimes not even changed) literal scenes from original universum. Towards the end I only read thing that did not happen in books.
I love the idea of Snape as a father. The amount of caring he did! And when it was finally brought out to the open how they slowly build a dauhter-dad relationship and created an amazing mismatched but heartful family.
The way I SCREAMED when Malfoy betrayed her in 2 part. I'm so dissapointed he got out lightly and was forgiven so quickly. It has so much potential for the future.
And Parkinson and Longbottom storyline (separate work) - I devoured it.
All in all, it had a lot of potential, however execution failed spectaculary.
Story is amazing but writter so poorly. If you think about your worst fanfic work created by a teeneger without knowledge and skills - yep, that's it. (I'm so sorry to the author). Mostly its just re-written (and sometimes not even changed) literal scenes from original universum. Towards the end I only read thing that did not happen in books.
I love the idea of Snape as a father. The amount of caring he did! And when it was finally brought out to the open how they slowly build a dauhter-dad relationship and created an amazing mismatched but heartful family.
The way I SCREAMED when Malfoy betrayed her in 2 part. I'm so dissapointed he got out lightly and was forgiven so quickly. It has so much potential for the future.
And Parkinson and Longbottom storyline (separate work) - I devoured it.
All in all, it had a lot of potential, however execution failed spectaculary.
February 10, 2025
Simplesmente um dos melhores livros que já li. Absolutamente perfeito, as nuances e a reescrita MUITO inteligente com 100% de aproveitamento de eventos importantes do canon, as personalidades, os POVS, tudo. Comecei achando impossível não achar ABSURDO que Snape era pai da Hermione. Terminei convicta de que ESSA na verdade é a real história de HP e nada me convence do contrário, dane-se a J.K. quem escreveu o canon foi Singularritae. Podia ter mais SMUT? Sim, mas não era o objetivo nem o foco dessa história, e admiro a autora por se manter firme nessa decisão. As vezes precisamos parar de pensar com o fogo no rabo e apreciar uma boa construção de mundo e narrativa inteligente né pessoal pelo amor? Menos hormônios subindo na cabeça e mais CONTEÚDO. Amei, junto com The Eagle Neast, The disappearances of Draco Malfoy e algumas outras, se tornou uma das fav. Perfeita!!!
September 30, 2024
I gave it 3 stars because even though the plot is very well written (you still have the main events of HP canon happening and they’re intertwined with this new version), it has a tiny little bit of spice but definitely NO SMUT, I repeat, we have no smut. And I mean it’s not the only thing I like to read but I also think dramione deserves to be written with smut, but that’s just my opinion.
Some chapters could’ve been skipped entirely (the dodgeball chapter anyone?) and not because they weren’t fun but because this is such a LONG fic that you kinda wanna get to the good bits ASAP.
Overall it’s GREAT and well thought of. I would’ve LOVED a further down in time epilogue.
Some chapters could’ve been skipped entirely (the dodgeball chapter anyone?) and not because they weren’t fun but because this is such a LONG fic that you kinda wanna get to the good bits ASAP.
Overall it’s GREAT and well thought of. I would’ve LOVED a further down in time epilogue.
December 26, 2024
This has got to be one of my FAVORITES. Definitely a reread! I love it so much!
It has everything I’ve ever loved; the found family trope is the best, brilliant storyline, and the dramione in here is amazing and honestly this is CANON in my mind. It has been 2 days since i finished and I still have a hangover. Everything about it is beautiful!
Also, I would like more details or scenes for the epilogue. I hope a spinoff would happen with a time skip at the end. Overall, I love it. It’s been a while since I read a Dramione fluff.
It has everything I’ve ever loved; the found family trope is the best, brilliant storyline, and the dramione in here is amazing and honestly this is CANON in my mind. It has been 2 days since i finished and I still have a hangover. Everything about it is beautiful!
Also, I would like more details or scenes for the epilogue. I hope a spinoff would happen with a time skip at the end. Overall, I love it. It’s been a while since I read a Dramione fluff.
September 15, 2025
it was amazing. so far this and manacled are my top 2 dramione fics. it literally answered 90% of the regrets I had with the og books/movies. also the way certain things take place just make so much sense. the growth of hermione, Draco, and harry was amazing too. the way their characters are written matches so much in the earlier books but the changes to their character development still make so much sense. I felt all of the emotions and enjoyed myself
February 19, 2025
Creo que tiene mejor perspectiva.
Es una muy buena forma de volver a conectar con el mundo mágico.
Sobre todo desde el punto de vista diferente y interesante.
Draco uff... excelente.
Cissa es en definitiva mi personaje favorito.
¿Pudieron dar otro final? Tal vez.
Solo diré que ocupo una Pansy como amiga.
Es una muy buena forma de volver a conectar con el mundo mágico.
Sobre todo desde el punto de vista diferente y interesante.
Draco uff... excelente.
Cissa es en definitiva mi personaje favorito.
¿Pudieron dar otro final? Tal vez.
Solo diré que ocupo una Pansy como amiga.
December 13, 2024
4.5 ⭐️ this was a lengthy one, a full retelling of all the HP books. Lots of minor editing issues and minimal spice. Well done with the two POV and absolutely loved how this author brought all these relationships to life.
December 11, 2025
This is another canon in my mind now. I'm so happy I took the leap to read this long fic.
Snape being a dad, Remus and Lupin with Theo and Harry, a very morally grey Hermione and no Ron/Hermione end goal in sight? Check
Snape being a dad, Remus and Lupin with Theo and Harry, a very morally grey Hermione and no Ron/Hermione end goal in sight? Check
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September 18, 2024
loved the plot but the entirety of it let me down I felt a lot could’ve been expanded on or had more details. love Severus tho as Hermione’s dad, and her as a Slytherin super unique.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 25, 2024
One of the best HP fanfics out there😍
January 17, 2025
I love it so so much
January 30, 2025
Absolute masterpiece, i think itll be my new comfort fic.
I really love everything, the dynamics, the fluff, the hurt, the comfort, i loved it allllll🥰
I really love everything, the dynamics, the fluff, the hurt, the comfort, i loved it allllll🥰
March 21, 2025
Almost three months later 😫 an incredible retelling of the entire Harry Potter series with Hermione as a Slytherin, we love to see it.
Truly a journey, absolutely worth it
Truly a journey, absolutely worth it
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April 22, 2025Less than a week to read 652,974 words - I couldn’t put it down 🥹
May 21, 2025
5/5
I enjoyed this retelling! Although this is a Dramione HEA, I wouldn’t say their relationship is the focus of the fic. We follow Hermione through her years at Hogwarts.
I enjoyed this retelling! Although this is a Dramione HEA, I wouldn’t say their relationship is the focus of the fic. We follow Hermione through her years at Hogwarts.
July 30, 2025
3.5 - did I really read 650k+ words of a fanfic that goes from Y1 to 2nd WW with the premise of snape being Hermione’s dad? I sure did.
November 11, 2025
It was honestly an amazing read that kept me absolutely entranced the entire time. Found family, with all the devotion. I loved every single second of it.
November 17, 2025
I’ve been changed after reading this fic
November 28, 2025
quite possibly the best fic i have ever read
December 18, 2025
epic read
January 5, 2026
Ta książka była taka genialna o boże, kochałam w niej wszystkich bochaterow dosłownie
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