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Aether's Revival #9
Empire's Orders
After a long march across the empire, Gregory finally made it to Krogga. Going through Krogga itself wasn’t wasn’t terrible, but it did come with the uniqueness of the country. Honor fights between his men and local Kroggian youths were sanctioned every night. Because the magi showed himself as honorable by accepting the duels and the local customs, Gregory fostered goodwill with the Kroggians, helping smooth his way to Krogheim.
Ambassador Rudit Glowstone, Grandmaster of Aether’s Guard, greeted him upon his arrival in the capital. After a brief meeting, she let him go to his wives and friends, arranging for them to have the few days off that Yukiko had requested. That was why Gregory spent his first two days in Krogheim going through the steps required to marry Ling, Clover, and Roshana.
Gregory had to fight his way to the temple as per tradition, even having to put down a berserker champion who had stood in his way— the locals accepted the match as being honorable, as the berserker’s bloodlust ensured that one of the two of them was going to die. Gregory was allowed to marry his three friends in a ceremony that barely deviated from local customs. He spent the next two days with his new wives, then all of his wives, making sure all of their desires were thoroughly met.
Because Gregory had killed a champion on his way to the temple, the Krogheim council asked to speak with him. His prowess and acceptance of their local customs had them extend an invitation for the new year festival to the embassy, but specifically to Gregory and Jenn, as both had proven their strength to the Kroggians. The festival led to new connections with the other ambassadors, most of whom promised to visit after the week-long festival.
Jenn and Gregory found themselves in the finals of the festival duels, but both would end up facing the newest high champion of Krog, Ragnar Ivarson. The massive warrior defeated Jenn with her chosen fighting style of speed and his skill with weapons. When Gregory and Ragnar fought, though, small problems crystallized. Ragnar wasn’t just a high champion— he was Krog reborn. Having found Aether again, he promised that they would talk soon, and he’d even bring his sister with him.
Ambassador Rudit Glowstone, Grandmaster of Aether’s Guard, greeted him upon his arrival in the capital. After a brief meeting, she let him go to his wives and friends, arranging for them to have the few days off that Yukiko had requested. That was why Gregory spent his first two days in Krogheim going through the steps required to marry Ling, Clover, and Roshana.
Gregory had to fight his way to the temple as per tradition, even having to put down a berserker champion who had stood in his way— the locals accepted the match as being honorable, as the berserker’s bloodlust ensured that one of the two of them was going to die. Gregory was allowed to marry his three friends in a ceremony that barely deviated from local customs. He spent the next two days with his new wives, then all of his wives, making sure all of their desires were thoroughly met.
Because Gregory had killed a champion on his way to the temple, the Krogheim council asked to speak with him. His prowess and acceptance of their local customs had them extend an invitation for the new year festival to the embassy, but specifically to Gregory and Jenn, as both had proven their strength to the Kroggians. The festival led to new connections with the other ambassadors, most of whom promised to visit after the week-long festival.
Jenn and Gregory found themselves in the finals of the festival duels, but both would end up facing the newest high champion of Krog, Ragnar Ivarson. The massive warrior defeated Jenn with her chosen fighting style of speed and his skill with weapons. When Gregory and Ragnar fought, though, small problems crystallized. Ragnar wasn’t just a high champion— he was Krog reborn. Having found Aether again, he promised that they would talk soon, and he’d even bring his sister with him.
505 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 11, 2024
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About the author
Daniel Schinhofen
69 books1,304 followersDaniel James Schinhofen is a self-published author in the burgeoning genre of LitRPG/Gamelit. He published his first book, Last Horizon: Beta, in October of 2016, and has recently published his fifteenth book. A best-selling author on Amazon multiple times, his four series have achieved name recognition in the genre. When not slavishly typing away at the next book, Daniel tries to unwind with video games, playing with his dog Sugar, or going for walks around his neighborhood. His books can be found easily via his website http://schinhofenbooks.com/. Daniel can be found via Twitter using the handle @DJSchinhofen.
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September 20, 2024
Rating 4.0 stars
There is just something about this author. There isn't a lot that happens in his stories and the interactions with the characters are very repetitive. Why do I like it so much then? There is just something about it that makes it easy to read.
There is just something about this author. There isn't a lot that happens in his stories and the interactions with the characters are very repetitive. Why do I like it so much then? There is just something about it that makes it easy to read.
September 12, 2024
Full disclosure, I'm likely at least a little biased on this, but I think it was a great book.
September 24, 2024
A whole lot of nothing
This book isn't bad exactly, it isn't much of anything exactly. It's like finishing leftovers just because they need eating.
There is no story arc, No middle point or climax. It's just one day after another and then it just stops.
The 'events?' in this book lead us to what will happen in the next book, but what could have been glossed over as a flash back / or even a montage get told as a 505 page book.
This book isn't bad exactly, it isn't much of anything exactly. It's like finishing leftovers just because they need eating.
There is no story arc, No middle point or climax. It's just one day after another and then it just stops.
The 'events?' in this book lead us to what will happen in the next book, but what could have been glossed over as a flash back / or even a montage get told as a 505 page book.
September 15, 2024
mediocre, feels like a diary
The book feels like it is the MC’s diary. Since he constantly uses his foresight magic on everything, the book is about 2-3 times longer than it should be as each event gets played out that many times. The first time when he looks into the future, the second when he tells his wives about it, and then usually a third as he explains it to the ambassador. It makes parts of this book a slog to get through as it’s so repetitive.
Talking about it being repetitive, the author continues his trend of repeating daily tasks the family does every time as if you don’t already know. The fact that they eat breakfast while doing armsmaster squares, then peaceful fist, every morning, is laid out explicitly, just as it has past books. There is no reason to repeat it again every day, all it does is pad the word count and make people skim past it.
Speaking of skimming, and of speaking, this book also continues the trend of telling and not showing. If I highlighted the dialogue, I would bet that 80-85% of the book would be highlighted. Most often events are not shown, they are talked about. Usually in the form of the MC explaining what will happen with his foresight, and then the reader just having to assume that is what happened. Big fights happen towards the end of the book, that feel like they should be important scenes, but they get relegated to one or two sentences, as the outcome was already foretold.
I keep coming back for the world, and wondering what direction the overarching plot will take, however the actual writing is poor to mediocre, and I am left having to imagine so much of it myself because nothing is truly describe to you. The few descriptions are only used when the MC meets a new kind of Eurtik that he has never seen before, and they explain what that specific type looks like.
The book feels like it is the MC’s diary. Since he constantly uses his foresight magic on everything, the book is about 2-3 times longer than it should be as each event gets played out that many times. The first time when he looks into the future, the second when he tells his wives about it, and then usually a third as he explains it to the ambassador. It makes parts of this book a slog to get through as it’s so repetitive.
Talking about it being repetitive, the author continues his trend of repeating daily tasks the family does every time as if you don’t already know. The fact that they eat breakfast while doing armsmaster squares, then peaceful fist, every morning, is laid out explicitly, just as it has past books. There is no reason to repeat it again every day, all it does is pad the word count and make people skim past it.
Speaking of skimming, and of speaking, this book also continues the trend of telling and not showing. If I highlighted the dialogue, I would bet that 80-85% of the book would be highlighted. Most often events are not shown, they are talked about. Usually in the form of the MC explaining what will happen with his foresight, and then the reader just having to assume that is what happened. Big fights happen towards the end of the book, that feel like they should be important scenes, but they get relegated to one or two sentences, as the outcome was already foretold.
I keep coming back for the world, and wondering what direction the overarching plot will take, however the actual writing is poor to mediocre, and I am left having to imagine so much of it myself because nothing is truly describe to you. The few descriptions are only used when the MC meets a new kind of Eurtik that he has never seen before, and they explain what that specific type looks like.
June 20, 2025
Having finished Book 9 out of 10 that are out right now, I am happy to continue the series and then probably wait for the next books in the series. This book had the team cover almost another year at the Krogga embassy, and we have a little war at the border as well and along with that. This series is like a slice of life as we follow Greg and his wives as they grow and go through their lives. I have enjoyed the series so far and would continue the series so let's go and keep on reading.
People who don't read generally ask me my reasons for reading. Simply put, I love reading, so I have made it my motto to Forever Keep on Reading. I love reading everything except for self-help books, even occasionally. I read almost all the genres, but YA, Fantasy, and Biographies are the most read. My favorite series is Harry Potter, but then there are many more books I adore. I have bookcases filled with books that are waiting to be read so I can't stay and spend more time on this review, so remember I loved reading this and love reading more, you should also read what you love and then just Keep on Reading.
People who don't read generally ask me my reasons for reading. Simply put, I love reading, so I have made it my motto to Forever Keep on Reading. I love reading everything except for self-help books, even occasionally. I read almost all the genres, but YA, Fantasy, and Biographies are the most read. My favorite series is Harry Potter, but then there are many more books I adore. I have bookcases filled with books that are waiting to be read so I can't stay and spend more time on this review, so remember I loved reading this and love reading more, you should also read what you love and then just Keep on Reading.
October 9, 2024
THANK YOU for dialing back on the food scenes, omg. This was a much more pleasant read. I'm not sure if that was an intentional response to feedback or just happened but it made things much better.
If you're open to more feedback, there's just too much dialogue, things are explained and over explained and then explained to death. It's exposition overload. Your story is really interesting and so is your world building. Find a way to have it come naturally, or infrequently. We *know* that aether's guard is *different and *respectful but we're reminded multiple times each chapter.
And for the love of God, give Greg some character. Hes just a yes man.
His entire build is
Look thoughtful
Nods
Say something super polite
Appear dry as possible
Repeat
The only times he shows emotions are incredibly forced, like the mothers love scenes, which were over explained, then brought back up and over explained again and again. Greg has so much potential, give him some passion, some humor, some growth.
I'm with the series to the end, keep on improving, cheering for you and Aether
If you're open to more feedback, there's just too much dialogue, things are explained and over explained and then explained to death. It's exposition overload. Your story is really interesting and so is your world building. Find a way to have it come naturally, or infrequently. We *know* that aether's guard is *different and *respectful but we're reminded multiple times each chapter.
And for the love of God, give Greg some character. Hes just a yes man.
His entire build is
Look thoughtful
Nods
Say something super polite
Appear dry as possible
Repeat
The only times he shows emotions are incredibly forced, like the mothers love scenes, which were over explained, then brought back up and over explained again and again. Greg has so much potential, give him some passion, some humor, some growth.
I'm with the series to the end, keep on improving, cheering for you and Aether
September 16, 2024
+1 for writing a Recap.
December 13, 2025
Romance:
October 12, 2024
The book is decent, but it drags issues from previous books, which has annoyed me enough by now.
FIRST issue. In all honesty, Gregory is becoming a boring character. If other characters are not forcing his Foresight magic to expand differently, he would never experiment or try anything differently. He is... DULL. His real training is inexistent, which was one of the most interesting parts of the series. Instead, everything fades in the background, resumed in two sentences and never going deeper into what is he really learning, which comes as lazy writing.
SECOND issue... Fights. Where are the great fights from previous books? Now, they all fade into the background, while the author directly describes the winning move, skipping the whole fight, with luck, If not, we directly read the result, nothing else. This is one of the biggest problems. The author is literally butchering the action for wasted pages of repetitive day to day stuff. Again, this comes as VERY lazy writing.
THIRD issue. Vera. In all honesty, she was presented as this universe version of Freya, the extremely beautiful god of love, passion, etc. Instead, she is the opposite. The author's need to make them all SO different, forced him to ruin one of the most expected characters, in my opinion. It literally irked me every time she is described as twice as broad as the MC in muscle mass and a head taller. The author transformed his version of Freya into a muscled Giant. I just could not help but NOT like her, at all. Not her fault. My expectations were VERY different, and her character is ruined in that regard. I cannot enjoy her 'sexy' or romantic moments. It keeps clashing against the idea I had of every goddess of beauty, love and passion, and the author's sudden idea of diversity... Her personality is interesting, but I just cannot stomach her body shape with who she is and how she was introduced many times. In fact, Darkness is created with her in mind, and she is a stunning goddess, as she SHOULD be. Just like Greg should be a handsome god, yet he clearly is not. But the difference is not SOOOOO HUGE...
FIRST issue. In all honesty, Gregory is becoming a boring character. If other characters are not forcing his Foresight magic to expand differently, he would never experiment or try anything differently. He is... DULL. His real training is inexistent, which was one of the most interesting parts of the series. Instead, everything fades in the background, resumed in two sentences and never going deeper into what is he really learning, which comes as lazy writing.
SECOND issue... Fights. Where are the great fights from previous books? Now, they all fade into the background, while the author directly describes the winning move, skipping the whole fight, with luck, If not, we directly read the result, nothing else. This is one of the biggest problems. The author is literally butchering the action for wasted pages of repetitive day to day stuff. Again, this comes as VERY lazy writing.
THIRD issue. Vera. In all honesty, she was presented as this universe version of Freya, the extremely beautiful god of love, passion, etc. Instead, she is the opposite. The author's need to make them all SO different, forced him to ruin one of the most expected characters, in my opinion. It literally irked me every time she is described as twice as broad as the MC in muscle mass and a head taller. The author transformed his version of Freya into a muscled Giant. I just could not help but NOT like her, at all. Not her fault. My expectations were VERY different, and her character is ruined in that regard. I cannot enjoy her 'sexy' or romantic moments. It keeps clashing against the idea I had of every goddess of beauty, love and passion, and the author's sudden idea of diversity... Her personality is interesting, but I just cannot stomach her body shape with who she is and how she was introduced many times. In fact, Darkness is created with her in mind, and she is a stunning goddess, as she SHOULD be. Just like Greg should be a handsome god, yet he clearly is not. But the difference is not SOOOOO HUGE...
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 14, 2024
Absolutely dissatisfied
The author is relying too heavily on the harem interactions in place of plot. His plot is fine, awesome even but not when harem strangles 70% of the book's total content. The constant "hugs and kisses" are cringe, annoying and ever persistent throughout the entirety of the book. The author has actually ruined the genre of harem with how unbelievably cringe he portrays it in this book. And he uses it as a crutch in place of the story. I can't understand any circumstance recommend reading this book to anyone.
The author is relying too heavily on the harem interactions in place of plot. His plot is fine, awesome even but not when harem strangles 70% of the book's total content. The constant "hugs and kisses" are cringe, annoying and ever persistent throughout the entirety of the book. The author has actually ruined the genre of harem with how unbelievably cringe he portrays it in this book. And he uses it as a crutch in place of the story. I can't understand any circumstance recommend reading this book to anyone.
September 29, 2024
The books seem to be getting stuck in pointless details
It's a great story still but this book dragged on and on.
There is just to much pointless detail and almost constant rehashing of things already said or done. Most of the previous books have taken place over a year of the hero's life. This one continues that theme. A single year. As the hero doesn't expect to be strong enough to face the evil emperor for hundreds of years yet I just can't face the monotony.
This will be my last book in this series.
It's a great story still but this book dragged on and on.
There is just to much pointless detail and almost constant rehashing of things already said or done. Most of the previous books have taken place over a year of the hero's life. This one continues that theme. A single year. As the hero doesn't expect to be strong enough to face the evil emperor for hundreds of years yet I just can't face the monotony.
This will be my last book in this series.
September 15, 2024
It was very slow and plodding
There have been other books in this series that were slow, but this is by far the slowest. I hope that it picks up its pacing and excitement again.
There have been other books in this series that were slow, but this is by far the slowest. I hope that it picks up its pacing and excitement again.
July 7, 2025
Critical Review: Empire’s Orders (Aether’s Revival #9) by Daniel Schinhofen
Essential, Hook, and Thesis
What does it mean to lead when your every move is seen—and your every day is routine?
Empire’s Orders is the ninth entry in Daniel Schinhofen’s popular LitRPG/cultivation-harem series, Aether’s Revival. This time, the stakes are more social than explosive, the action is slower, and the world-building leans into the intricate webs of tradition, family, and politics. The novel offers comfort and slow growth for those who have come this far, though it risks monotony for readers hoping for more action or change.
Basic Plot Summary
After a long march, Gregory and his wives reach Krogga, a kingdom with its own traditions and rougher customs. Gregory, as a magi and ambassador, earns local respect by honoring their rituals—including sanctioned duels and an intense fight with a berserker champion. Much of the book centers on marriage customs and political maneuvering, as Gregory marries Ling, Clover, and Roshana, and the embassy becomes a hub for festivals and diplomatic intrigue. The climax comes during the new year festival, culminating in duels with Krogga’s top champion, Ragnar, who is revealed to be something more than human.
Praise and Critique
Strong World-Building and Consistency: Schinhofen continues to deliver a detailed, evolving setting, from embassy life to the unique social rules of Krogga. Fans of “slice-of-life” fantasy will find the day-to-day rituals, politics, and character interactions both familiar and immersive.
Relatable, Caring Characters: The heart of the series—Gregory and his ever-growing family—remains warm, supportive, and emotionally open. The depiction of family bonds and mutual respect is unusual in the genre and gives the story its emotional weight.
Low Stakes, High Comfort: There’s a gentle, almost soothing progression to the book. For longtime readers, the predictability and repetition are a feature, not a bug—it’s about spending time with people you’ve come to care about.
Political Intrigue and Festival Atmosphere: There’s genuine pleasure in watching Gregory and his group navigate cultural differences, forge alliances, and outmaneuver rivals through brains rather than brawn.
Criticism
Repetition and Slow Pacing: Much of the book is repetitive, with daily routines, training, and endless reaffirmations of love and loyalty. Key events are often recounted multiple times—through foresight, discussion, and summary—which can make the story feel padded and slow. Some battles and plot points are resolved “off-screen” or in a sentence or two.
Dialogue-Heavy, Action-Light: Schinhofen tells more than he shows. Important scenes (including fights) are often skipped or minimized, while dialogue and explanation dominate, occasionally sapping narrative tension.
Gregory’s Foresight and Power: The protagonist’s abilities often remove tension from the plot, allowing him to resolve threats or crises in advance. This “overpowered” quality makes life comfortable for the characters but can limit suspense for the reader.
Harem and Family Focus: The balance tips even further toward “family slice-of-life” and away from adventure, sometimes to the detriment of pacing and plot. Readers not invested in every wife’s personality may find it repetitive or wish for more external challenges.
Evaluation
Empire’s Orders is a gentle, character-driven installment that rewards fans who enjoy incremental growth and the comfort of returning to familiar faces. It’s less about escalation and more about deepening relationships, learning to adapt to new cultures, and negotiating the complex responsibilities of leadership. The writing is clean, editing is solid, and the world feels lived-in, even as the plot treads water at times.
Conclusion
This book is best seen as “comfort food” for the devoted: warm, safe, and predictable, but with little risk or explosive excitement. For those invested in Gregory’s journey and the extended Petit family, there’s enough political drama, hints at greater powers, and emotional payoff to justify the length. Readers craving action, plot twists, or new ground may want to brace themselves for a slow, steady burn rather than a raging fire.
Recommended for: Readers who enjoy slow-paced, character-focused LitRPG with an emphasis on family, culture, and the comforts of routine. Those looking for adrenaline or major shake-ups may be left wanting, but for the faithful, it’s another solid entry in a beloved series.
Essential, Hook, and Thesis
What does it mean to lead when your every move is seen—and your every day is routine?
Empire’s Orders is the ninth entry in Daniel Schinhofen’s popular LitRPG/cultivation-harem series, Aether’s Revival. This time, the stakes are more social than explosive, the action is slower, and the world-building leans into the intricate webs of tradition, family, and politics. The novel offers comfort and slow growth for those who have come this far, though it risks monotony for readers hoping for more action or change.
Basic Plot Summary
After a long march, Gregory and his wives reach Krogga, a kingdom with its own traditions and rougher customs. Gregory, as a magi and ambassador, earns local respect by honoring their rituals—including sanctioned duels and an intense fight with a berserker champion. Much of the book centers on marriage customs and political maneuvering, as Gregory marries Ling, Clover, and Roshana, and the embassy becomes a hub for festivals and diplomatic intrigue. The climax comes during the new year festival, culminating in duels with Krogga’s top champion, Ragnar, who is revealed to be something more than human.
Praise and Critique
Strong World-Building and Consistency: Schinhofen continues to deliver a detailed, evolving setting, from embassy life to the unique social rules of Krogga. Fans of “slice-of-life” fantasy will find the day-to-day rituals, politics, and character interactions both familiar and immersive.
Relatable, Caring Characters: The heart of the series—Gregory and his ever-growing family—remains warm, supportive, and emotionally open. The depiction of family bonds and mutual respect is unusual in the genre and gives the story its emotional weight.
Low Stakes, High Comfort: There’s a gentle, almost soothing progression to the book. For longtime readers, the predictability and repetition are a feature, not a bug—it’s about spending time with people you’ve come to care about.
Political Intrigue and Festival Atmosphere: There’s genuine pleasure in watching Gregory and his group navigate cultural differences, forge alliances, and outmaneuver rivals through brains rather than brawn.
Criticism
Repetition and Slow Pacing: Much of the book is repetitive, with daily routines, training, and endless reaffirmations of love and loyalty. Key events are often recounted multiple times—through foresight, discussion, and summary—which can make the story feel padded and slow. Some battles and plot points are resolved “off-screen” or in a sentence or two.
Dialogue-Heavy, Action-Light: Schinhofen tells more than he shows. Important scenes (including fights) are often skipped or minimized, while dialogue and explanation dominate, occasionally sapping narrative tension.
Gregory’s Foresight and Power: The protagonist’s abilities often remove tension from the plot, allowing him to resolve threats or crises in advance. This “overpowered” quality makes life comfortable for the characters but can limit suspense for the reader.
Harem and Family Focus: The balance tips even further toward “family slice-of-life” and away from adventure, sometimes to the detriment of pacing and plot. Readers not invested in every wife’s personality may find it repetitive or wish for more external challenges.
Evaluation
Empire’s Orders is a gentle, character-driven installment that rewards fans who enjoy incremental growth and the comfort of returning to familiar faces. It’s less about escalation and more about deepening relationships, learning to adapt to new cultures, and negotiating the complex responsibilities of leadership. The writing is clean, editing is solid, and the world feels lived-in, even as the plot treads water at times.
Conclusion
This book is best seen as “comfort food” for the devoted: warm, safe, and predictable, but with little risk or explosive excitement. For those invested in Gregory’s journey and the extended Petit family, there’s enough political drama, hints at greater powers, and emotional payoff to justify the length. Readers craving action, plot twists, or new ground may want to brace themselves for a slow, steady burn rather than a raging fire.
Recommended for: Readers who enjoy slow-paced, character-focused LitRPG with an emphasis on family, culture, and the comforts of routine. Those looking for adrenaline or major shake-ups may be left wanting, but for the faithful, it’s another solid entry in a beloved series.
September 12, 2024
Always over too soon
I have greatly enjoyed the series and I think it's safe to say that I'll be here till the end. This entry didn't see all that much fighting or perhaps I should say there was quite a bit of fighting just off screen. We have some more political intrigue perhaps a couple of assassination attempts and what I perceive to be a hint at something troubling for our dark heart heading towards the end of the series. There are two series that the author has already finished that I have read. One of which was The Binding word series. I like that series more than the other one but found the ending to be okay. I am hoping that this series which has become my favorite by this author ends in a way that I like a lot more. I have not heard if the author has made it known when the series might come to a conclusion. From my point of view there's still a lot of story left to tell. I am kind of hopeful that there's a bit more action in the next one, but having reached the end of this one I'm expecting a wedding and some characters we haven't seen in a while to show up. I could be wrong but I can't wait to find out. I look forward to this entry receiving the audio treatment and with that I want to say Well done to everybody who had a hand in bringing this story to us, the Amazon readers.
I have greatly enjoyed the series and I think it's safe to say that I'll be here till the end. This entry didn't see all that much fighting or perhaps I should say there was quite a bit of fighting just off screen. We have some more political intrigue perhaps a couple of assassination attempts and what I perceive to be a hint at something troubling for our dark heart heading towards the end of the series. There are two series that the author has already finished that I have read. One of which was The Binding word series. I like that series more than the other one but found the ending to be okay. I am hoping that this series which has become my favorite by this author ends in a way that I like a lot more. I have not heard if the author has made it known when the series might come to a conclusion. From my point of view there's still a lot of story left to tell. I am kind of hopeful that there's a bit more action in the next one, but having reached the end of this one I'm expecting a wedding and some characters we haven't seen in a while to show up. I could be wrong but I can't wait to find out. I look forward to this entry receiving the audio treatment and with that I want to say Well done to everybody who had a hand in bringing this story to us, the Amazon readers.
September 13, 2024
Good as always.
Good stuff as always.
Good story. Well written. I like it and I can’t wait for more.
With that though there is a couple things tho that stood out a bit, which could possibly use a little work on.
Now this could just be me but it is starting to feel quite slow at times. Could stand to see a little more action instead of so much intrigue/daytoday slice of life stuff. The intrigue and others IS done well, just could mix it up a bit more.
I’m also wondering how the series will be managed if we’re to go all the way to see Greg declare himself etc. as in how the plot moves along considering the scope sorta thing. At the rate it’s going… that’s a helluva lotta books.
Last thing is something I’ve thought a bit on previously but, considering all Greg’s and Co have been through so far, and what they’re likely to go through, at times they still seem a bit too soft/gentle. I can appreciate the writing conveying just how much they all love each other etc, but man oh man, I ended up skipping some bits because it just felt like an overload at times. That could be toned down a bit.
Good stuff as always.
Good story. Well written. I like it and I can’t wait for more.
With that though there is a couple things tho that stood out a bit, which could possibly use a little work on.
Now this could just be me but it is starting to feel quite slow at times. Could stand to see a little more action instead of so much intrigue/daytoday slice of life stuff. The intrigue and others IS done well, just could mix it up a bit more.
I’m also wondering how the series will be managed if we’re to go all the way to see Greg declare himself etc. as in how the plot moves along considering the scope sorta thing. At the rate it’s going… that’s a helluva lotta books.
Last thing is something I’ve thought a bit on previously but, considering all Greg’s and Co have been through so far, and what they’re likely to go through, at times they still seem a bit too soft/gentle. I can appreciate the writing conveying just how much they all love each other etc, but man oh man, I ended up skipping some bits because it just felt like an overload at times. That could be toned down a bit.
September 17, 2024
As is typical for the author, the book is full of compelling moments that help keep some of the mundane day-to-day descriptions from bogging down the story.
And that's a real talent, because the day-to-day at times gets really old. I do skim some of those moments, because I'd rather read about the events than read about how the MC knows what the events of the day will entail. That's the biggest drawback from the book is the MC can almost always find an answer around a situation that allows he and his family to come out in the best possible result. That's some next level OP, which I am on record stating I'm not a fan of the OP MC.
But it's the finely crafted plot that keeps me glued to the pages. Almost nobody in haremlit plots out a book or series the way this author can. That's his superpower.
And that's a real talent, because the day-to-day at times gets really old. I do skim some of those moments, because I'd rather read about the events than read about how the MC knows what the events of the day will entail. That's the biggest drawback from the book is the MC can almost always find an answer around a situation that allows he and his family to come out in the best possible result. That's some next level OP, which I am on record stating I'm not a fan of the OP MC.
But it's the finely crafted plot that keeps me glued to the pages. Almost nobody in haremlit plots out a book or series the way this author can. That's his superpower.
January 18, 2025
fantastic series; looking forward to more
This series is quite amazing. Highly engaging and makes you want to keep reading until the book is over- which comes all too soon.
I loved the nuanced descriptions of politics, clan life, and family life. I especially appreciate the love shown within Greg’s family.
This series is extremely well written; better than many professionally published books that I’ve read. There are few, if any, spelling or grammar mistakes, and feels professionally edited. The author also uses an advanced vocabulary, which makes me feel like he’s treating his readers like intelligent people, all of which is very uncommon with Indie books.
I highly recommend this series if you enjoy this genre.
This series is quite amazing. Highly engaging and makes you want to keep reading until the book is over- which comes all too soon.
I loved the nuanced descriptions of politics, clan life, and family life. I especially appreciate the love shown within Greg’s family.
This series is extremely well written; better than many professionally published books that I’ve read. There are few, if any, spelling or grammar mistakes, and feels professionally edited. The author also uses an advanced vocabulary, which makes me feel like he’s treating his readers like intelligent people, all of which is very uncommon with Indie books.
I highly recommend this series if you enjoy this genre.
September 18, 2024
There are no surprises by this point: a good core of a story that is buried in repetitive drivel. This one was hard because almost nothing happened. It's essentially just slice-of-life where every day is the same day sprinkled with individual, detailed visits to every wife to talk about their mutual love and devotion. Foresight continues to negate all tension in the book but is expanded to serve as the primary means of resolving all problems within the story.
I'm ambivalent about the series at this point. I still would like to see where it goes, but halfway through each book, I'm left wondering why I'm even bothering because all I end up being is bothered and struggling to finish.
I'm ambivalent about the series at this point. I still would like to see where it goes, but halfway through each book, I'm left wondering why I'm even bothering because all I end up being is bothered and struggling to finish.
February 8, 2025
I decided to abandon this series. I stopped after reading almost half of the book. Nothing was really happening. Only the MC and his marvelous relationship with his harem and the marvelous relationships between the wives. It is not the first series of Daniel Schinhofen that I abandon. It always start with a nice world setup and an interesting history. Then, as the series advance, the relationship of the MC and his harem of wives takes each time more part of the book. And as fas as I can tell the relationship among them is always the same whether you read Aether's Revival, Binding Words or Luck's voice.
September 13, 2024
Loved every page
The first Schinhofen series I ever picked up and never regretted it.
While the book might get off to a slow start, following the family and their routine while getting used to the Embassy and Krogga, fostering friendship and goodwill... Things take some interesting turns, with other reveals taking place.
And forces inside the empire and out start putting things in motion, as more people get drawn in to the Pettit family's path. Some friend and others foe...
But definitely looking forward to more!
The first Schinhofen series I ever picked up and never regretted it.
While the book might get off to a slow start, following the family and their routine while getting used to the Embassy and Krogga, fostering friendship and goodwill... Things take some interesting turns, with other reveals taking place.
And forces inside the empire and out start putting things in motion, as more people get drawn in to the Pettit family's path. Some friend and others foe...
But definitely looking forward to more!
September 19, 2024
Another good book.
I like the progression and development.
I really like the unexpected twists.
The one thing I would quibble with is the constant use of the pet names... as well as the touch of excess in the lovey-dovey stuff, but that is my only quibble. I like some romantic stuff, but not the amount, as it seems to be too much.
I can bypass these filler sections well enough, though. Which was easy.
All the other stuff is good. I just want more action.
Oh well, I still enjoy it.
I like the progression and development.
I really like the unexpected twists.
The one thing I would quibble with is the constant use of the pet names... as well as the touch of excess in the lovey-dovey stuff, but that is my only quibble. I like some romantic stuff, but not the amount, as it seems to be too much.
I can bypass these filler sections well enough, though. Which was easy.
All the other stuff is good. I just want more action.
Oh well, I still enjoy it.
September 15, 2024
better and more details, along w/great characters
I admit I am a huge fan of D.S. & love all his books/series, but this one has a tendency to make me over-emotional. The chapters surrounding a mother’s love are particularly hard for me. That being said, they are also very pertaining to the circumstances & just make the story greater. Please keep coming up with great stories & entertaining characters!
I admit I am a huge fan of D.S. & love all his books/series, but this one has a tendency to make me over-emotional. The chapters surrounding a mother’s love are particularly hard for me. That being said, they are also very pertaining to the circumstances & just make the story greater. Please keep coming up with great stories & entertaining characters!
September 19, 2024
Not any growth as magi, but a lot happens otherwise
I have to wonder how the Emperor isn’t suspicious of Greg already. The family is growing, but having time together is going to get harder and harder - and keeping the truth under wraps won’t be easy - especially since Toja is likely aware of the truth of Aether’s last life.
It will be interesting to see how the family will grow in strength and work to improve the Empire.
I have to wonder how the Emperor isn’t suspicious of Greg already. The family is growing, but having time together is going to get harder and harder - and keeping the truth under wraps won’t be easy - especially since Toja is likely aware of the truth of Aether’s last life.
It will be interesting to see how the family will grow in strength and work to improve the Empire.
October 1, 2024
Amazing story
Once again, Daniel has written a story that is just awesome. I only have it a 4 star because I feel the sheer amount of adoration between the Petits is way way over the top and it detracts from the story; is just not realistic. Yes, I know it's a fictional story, but it is my opinion and I feel that the story line could get much further along if it wasn't for that previously mentioned adoration. Thank you.
Once again, Daniel has written a story that is just awesome. I only have it a 4 star because I feel the sheer amount of adoration between the Petits is way way over the top and it detracts from the story; is just not realistic. Yes, I know it's a fictional story, but it is my opinion and I feel that the story line could get much further along if it wasn't for that previously mentioned adoration. Thank you.
October 3, 2024
Getting more complex
As Greg and family grows, the complexity of politics, orders and dodging unfavourable futures increases. There is a lot of story left to tell but it is starting to feel like the author wants to hurry it along a bit as this book felt a little shorter and paced a little higher (more skipped days). I’m still enjoying the story, but not as much as the previous books in the series.
As Greg and family grows, the complexity of politics, orders and dodging unfavourable futures increases. There is a lot of story left to tell but it is starting to feel like the author wants to hurry it along a bit as this book felt a little shorter and paced a little higher (more skipped days). I’m still enjoying the story, but not as much as the previous books in the series.
October 25, 2024
When gods are reborn
The petit family is tested when the Kroggans go to war in order to take a village back from the empire.
They have to skirt the boundaries of politics when the Empire orders them to go against their conscience. Gregory does his best to save the ambassador's reputation and stay on her good side. Thank goodness she's clan.
Ragnar and Verka reveal their divinity to Gregory's family and hint that they know he's aether reborn.
The petit family is tested when the Kroggans go to war in order to take a village back from the empire.
They have to skirt the boundaries of politics when the Empire orders them to go against their conscience. Gregory does his best to save the ambassador's reputation and stay on her good side. Thank goodness she's clan.
Ragnar and Verka reveal their divinity to Gregory's family and hint that they know he's aether reborn.
July 5, 2025
filler
For me, there was too much of this i simply skipped. Embassy functions didn’t have enough detail to hold the attention; the family interaction holds nothing of interest; Greg particularly is described as mostly idle. The major politics was well done but - for me - this book could have been half as long. Or, it needed some sub-plots within the Empire, Krogga or both. E.g. the interactions that caused other clans to act.
For me, there was too much of this i simply skipped. Embassy functions didn’t have enough detail to hold the attention; the family interaction holds nothing of interest; Greg particularly is described as mostly idle. The major politics was well done but - for me - this book could have been half as long. Or, it needed some sub-plots within the Empire, Krogga or both. E.g. the interactions that caused other clans to act.
September 11, 2024
Another great book
This series just continues to build and build on previous books, greg lives life as a magi ambassador you have a slice of life a harem of very different women and action aplenty what is not to love about this story arc, long may it continue as even more question are asked about his previous life and what the emperors involvement in it was.
This series just continues to build and build on previous books, greg lives life as a magi ambassador you have a slice of life a harem of very different women and action aplenty what is not to love about this story arc, long may it continue as even more question are asked about his previous life and what the emperors involvement in it was.
September 12, 2024
Another great addition
Lol by this point in the series I don't really think another review is necessary to convince anyone to keep reading. I will say that as usual Mr. Schinhofen has maintained an amazing standard of storytelling in the series, as he does in every series. I very much look forward to book 10 and whatever is next in the rotation.
Lol by this point in the series I don't really think another review is necessary to convince anyone to keep reading. I will say that as usual Mr. Schinhofen has maintained an amazing standard of storytelling in the series, as he does in every series. I very much look forward to book 10 and whatever is next in the rotation.
September 14, 2024
Like the last book, the implications are there that Krogga is not a much better place
In a kingdom that holds the ideal of strength of arm and battle wits, any one with inappropriate mana choosing to prove themselves faces exile or being otherwise removed. Krogga does not have slaves, but it is doubtful that the second class is treated any better than the empire.
In a kingdom that holds the ideal of strength of arm and battle wits, any one with inappropriate mana choosing to prove themselves faces exile or being otherwise removed. Krogga does not have slaves, but it is doubtful that the second class is treated any better than the empire.
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