I received the arc for a review.
I'll start out by saying the book is amazing. Upon reading the pitch, I believed it to be a typical NA romance. Turns out to be far from that. Every aspect of the plot is a mystery that leaves you wondering how it all ties together.
The characters, Sophie and Raphael, knew each other as kids, but Sophie only knew his by his middle name, Arie. Circumstances led Raphael to leave, and for Sophie to believe him to be dead. So when he reenters her life, his time as Raphael and not Arie, she doesn't make the connection. Raphael, though, was in love with her as a kid, and now that she's back in his life, he vows to never let her go. So first it's the wonder of when will she realize who he is.
Then because of her father's past mistakes, she owes money to Kravic, a powerful man, kinda like a mob boss. In the midst of the danger, we learn that Raphael himself has a past with these people as well.
And then there's Sophie's deceased mom, who also has connections to Raphael.
Suffice to say, this is a very interesting, intriguing novel that will leave you on the edge of your seat wondering what's going to happen next.
Stuff that could be better: the novel needs a quick line edit. There's a few nagging errors:
-chapter 8 and 10, the "Sophie" title as a colon after it, while none of the others do.
-pg.74 "Goodnight, Ladies." Ladies shouldn't be capatalized.
-pg.92 "Now, now Raf." A comma needs to go before his name.
-pg.95 I like sitting around graveyards," he waves his hand around the cemetery. The comma should be a period, and then 'he' needs to be capatalized.
-chapters 17, 36 and 37 starts on the same page that the previous chapters end on.
-pg.235 there's a bracket in place of 'I'
-This happens a few times throughout: when someone asks a question, the dialogue tag (ex. "he said") should be 'he said' not 'He said.' even though the question technically ended the sentence. Just the rules grammar.
Also, I found Jace's characterization very off. At first, because of the name, I thought she was a guy. It seemed like she was a gay male friend. Then when I learned she was a girl, I never got that feeling. To me, again, she seemed like a gay guy, and not at all like a girl. If the characterization was better, I think it'd fix the issue.
Besides the few errors, overall I found the writing very riveting. It has a good flow and a great tone. Since the book is told in a dual POV, the author nailed down each character's voice amazingly.
This is said to be the first of a series. I really want to know if book two is more of thier story or someone else's. Maybe it's Hawk's and Dani's...there seems to be starting something there....
Anyone who likes some mystery, action and romance, this is the book for them!