The Mosquito’s Sting is the first book in Alyk Thorne’s Warlock’s Bond series, and it is a story that instantly grabbed my attention. I am always looking for new fantasy worlds to dive into, and this sounded like a unique world that would leave me eager for more. Thus, I went in with high hopes.
I will be honest and say that my feelings for this book changed quite a bit as I worked my way through it. In truth, my overall rating ended up being a two-point-five-star rating – which I rounded up to a three-star rating simply because I was curious about the bigger picture. Despite this, the overall did not work for me quite the way I had hoped. I started super curious about the story and interested in the characters. There were so many elements that I wanted to dive deeper into, and I was excited to see how they would progress. Unfortunately, for me, I felt like everything happened far too quickly. Before one element of the world could be appreciated, a new twist was thrown in. The impact of these twists was often lost because the depth of understanding was not quite at the level it needed to be for the twist to hit as hard as was intended. In many ways, I feel like too many ideas were combined into one book, with some of these elements needing to be saved for later books. I was able to handle this at first, but it became too much, and it impacted upon my enjoyment of the story. When I started to be annoyed by this element, it turned my attention to other things that were also impacting upon my enjoyment. Such as strange writing choices (characters saying things that really did not fit the setting, along with having knowledge of things that did not fit the world) and inconsistencies with how the characters were behaving (focusing on what was needed to move the story forward rather than what reflected how they were developing).
Overall, this was a story with a lot of potential, yet it failed to hit the mark for me. I can see why many enjoyed it, but it failed to tick my boxes in the anticipated way.