Thank you to the publisher for the free ARC from a Goodreads giveaway! I’m leaving this review voluntarily.
I let my mom borrow this one first, and when she hesitated when I asked her how it was, I knew I was in for a time. I would text her as I was reading, quoting some of the more ridiculous lines and giving her my thoughts and she finally said, “Sadly, it does not get better.”
Marlow was really off-putting. When asked if she ever “processed” her own food, which, while accurate, was such a non-conversational way of asking if she ever prepared and ate anything she caught herself, her reply was equally ridiculous, saying, “Sadly, I was raised upper middle class and then married into wealth.” Umm… I beg your finest pardon? Are hunting and fishing only activities for the destitute? Actually, I don’t think we could have been beaten over the head more that she was wealthy. Then we were expected to find her so charming because she wanted to be a waitress in her new small town? Good grief.
I think the author wanted us to be as in love with Marlow as she was, and I just…wasn’t. Lines like this were repeated ad nauseam: “Dinner, of course, was incredible, and they told her so. Marlow accepted their praise graciously, but then, a woman like her was surely used to accolades.” Insert eye roll. We get it. She’s amazing and everyone thinks so (apparently except for me). And then we have an entire town giving Marlow a standing ovation at the end? You’ve got to be kidding me.
And Cort. I wanted to like him, but his character development just seemed so shallow. Where Marlow was constantly talked about in terms of her net worth, endless mentions of him being a Marine were Cort’s equivalent.
The dialogue (especially between Cort and Marlow and between Marlow and Pixie) was so cringey. It felt like a Hallmark movie but make it even cornier. Every conversation felt like there was some grand declaration. Herman told her to take the rest of the night off when she had an hour left of her shift, and she replied, “Oh, no. I’m not cutting you short. I’m supposed to be here until closing, and by God, I’ll be here.” Soooo dramatic.
We got hints of relationship development between Cort and Marlow in the beginning, but then things went off the rails when they discuss where their relationship is going, and he immediately says he wants it to be heading toward his bed. And then for the rest of the book, all they do is paw at each other like horny teenagers.
I about lost it when Marlow was trying to tell Pixie how to mother her baby. Pixie worshipped the ground Marlow walked on, and I wasn’t really sure why since Marlow was so abrasive and thought so highly of herself (though I’m not sure that was the author’s intent). Their conversations were so repetitive and unnatural, and I just couldn’t take it anymore.
Since this was an uncorrected proof, there were a couple of typos (and a Joann and a Joanna—Pixie’s real name), and there were times I had to read a line multiple times to make sense of it. Sometimes, it was hard to tell who was speaking, which was made even more difficult when what was being said didn’t seem to make sense in the context. I’m not sure if these were addressed in the final copy.
My mom didn’t like this because she said it was too predictable. My issues were apparently more than that. This author’s writing style just isn’t for me.