I'm so confused. This book was a first for me in the worst way. I don't think I've ever read a series where the author just completely erases an entire character from the final book. Just like he never even existed. And a MAIN character at that. THE main character's love interest. The man she literally ties her heart to and connected their souls to prevent his death. I am so unbelievably confused as to how she just never told us what happened to him. But let me start from the beginning.
I was already a little worried about what to expect with this book considering it took her five years to write it after the second book when there was only a year between the first two. And I got even more concerned when I saw how short this book was, shorter than the other two by far. I absolutely loved the first book. It was such a great story with diverse characters, interesting West African mythology, and an exciting magic system and storyline. And while the second book didn't quite live up to the first, it was still a great book. And a big part of that was because of the introduction of Roen, Zelie's new love interest.
A mercenary with sarcasm for days, hilarious one-liners, and a soft spot reserved only for Zelie. He quickly became my favorite character, and I wanted so badly for them to end up together. And it really seemed like they would after they confessed their feelings for each other, saved each other's lives, and became connected by magic. The second book ends with him sprinting to save her from the impending white mist before they both collapse. And that's literally the last we ever see or hear from this character. It is SO bizarre that the author chose to act as if he never existed. To give no ending to this character. Not even just to say he died. Zelie, who cared SO much about him, mentions one time that she wonders if he's alive and that's it. I honestly want to give this book negative stars for this reason alone. I have never read a book that just erases such an important character from the final book. That doesn't even bother to so much as hint at his fate. I truly do not understand how Adeyemi's editors didn't push this point. If she wanted to leave it ambiguous, Zelie should've at least thought about him a few more times. But it's essentially like he never existed.
Moving past that serious flaw in the storyline, the overall plot of this novel felt extremely rushed and a bit confusing. We're introduced to this new enemy but never really given any backstory. What is Baldyr's story? How did he learn about that ritual? Where did the medallions come from? How did he become King and why is he able to become a God? The whole thing felt like it just wasn't really thought out and that the passion the author had when writing the first and second books just vanished. I'm not sure what happened over the course of those five years, but it felt very clear that she didn't want to write this novel or maybe just had no idea what she wanted to write. While overall I thought the enemy was confusing and poorly explained, I will say that their blood axes and the magic surrounding them were pretty cool.
Another example of how rushed and breezed over it all was: the Maji and the Monarchy are fighting for yearsss and for the entirety of the first two books. In this book, they reach an agreement and get over it within like 5 pages. Just like that. And then it's never really addressed again. There are so many characters that we get zero closure for. Like to the point that we don't even know their fates. Do the maji continue to rule Lagos? Does the peace last?
The big war lasts like 20 pages. For whatever reason, the people from New Gaia are left to fight alone for most of it. They don't even get like 2 Maji to come help, which makes zero sense considering a Burner or Cancer could've helped A LOT. All that work to bring magic back and yet Inan goes off alone to help everyone else fight the Skulls. I get that they needed to defend Orïsha, but again, even a couple of Maji could've made a big difference.
Amari and Tzain are randomly over because she falls in love with the princess of the new world. I mean what? They were the OG couple, the one that started in the first book and prevailed through the second, and for what? Nothing comes from it. Yes, they break up after Amari almost gets Zelie killed, but it felt so certain that they'd overcome it. Where does this random love for this random princess that she barely knows come from? They spend like one month together and Amari forgets Tzain just like that. So does she end up with the princess? Is she going to go live in New Gaia? Does New Gaia get rebuilt? Did the emperor live? Did Nehanda live? Is Zelie going to be queen? No one knows. We never get any of those answers. Inan dies randomly. And it was meant to be all meaningful and sweet, but it happened too fast with no real build up or explanation, so it completely fell flat. Of course he tells Zelie he loves her first and she essentially reciprocates it (again - where tf is Roen?!) So basically all of the couples we rooted for in the first two books completely fall apart.
The only thing I thought was good about this book was the introduction of New Gaia. It was the only moment that I saw any of that passion and beautiful writing from the author. Her descriptions of the other kingdom were stunning and vivid. It was a creative and incredible new setting, and she did a great job of painting an image in my head. The people and the culture were really interesting. Mae'e was a great character. The Lamina were so unique and their method of drawing weapons from their bodies was really cool. I truly wish Adeyemi has actually put time and more effort into this book because the brief bit we got of New Gaia was like a teasing hint of what could have been. Of the potential for a book as incredible as the first.
After the release, she gave an interview about how stressful she found this series and unfortunately, it's just really apparent that she pushed this novel out to finally end it. It's like 5 years had passed and she knew she needed to finish it, so she put the bare minimum into it and got it over with. And it's such a disappointment because she had something truly special in this series. I was invested in it and grew to love so many of the characters, and I hate that we'll never get to see what could've been. The drop in quality from the first two books to this one is mind-blowing. Plot aside, there were actual mistakes with consistency that clearly were missed in editing: like one scene where two characters are walking up stairs and talking and it's night time but then suddenly it's the middle of the day like 5 seconds later. And the location of the medallion embedded in Zelie changed from being in her chest to her ribcage and back again.
I debated giving this book 2 stars, but idk, I just really feel like there were too many significant problems with it. I'd like to give it 1.5 stars, but if I have to choose between rounding up or rounding down, unfortunately I have to go with down.