Unleashed Witch

The Primordial Queen #3

by Letty Frame

“Your magicae has fully awakened, Elzora.”

With my magicae unleashed, I should be in the perfect position to harness the powers of a soul witch. My primordium is stronger than ever, and at Necos’s castle, I’m finally safe—free to explore the true depths of my abilities without fear of exposure.

But not everything is as it seems within these walls. The tension between my men is growing by the day. There are no more secrets, no more lies between us, yet the hatred between them only intensifies. How can I enjoy our bond when their fighting tears my soul apart?

And for a soul witch... disharmony is deadly.

As the rebels begin to learn who I truly am, they’re eager to pull me and my soul connections into their plans. Meanwhile, King Etonik is tightening his grip, seeking to exploit my powers for his own gain.

I refuse to be anyone’s pawn. But when the stakes are survival, how do you fight for your freedom when you're not even sure who you can trust?



Unleashed Witch is the third book in the Primordial Queen series. It’s a fantasy/paranormal why choose that contains an introverted FMC, possessive men with touch her and die vibes, a fantasy universe, and a royal revolution spearheaded by our FMC!

Genres: Fantasy, Why Choose, Paranormal, Magic

524 pages, Kindle Edition

Published February 4, 2025

About the author

Letty Frame is an English paranormal and omegaverse reverse harem romance author who writes the kind of fated-mates stories every broken soul deserves. With big feelings, fierce men, and heroines who rise from the ashes, #whychoose has become her guiding motto.
Navigating chronic illness and mental health, Letty’s life is chaotic but perfect—and that messy, beautiful honesty lies at the heart of her stories. She writes broken characters, fate-driven romances, and hard-won happily-ever-afters that no one resents them for… except, arguably, their author.
After all, what could a mentally ill romance author want more than a happy ever after?
A traumatised, emotionally devastating journey to earning it.

Reviews

[Amanda Crossland · Rating 4 out of 5]

It was good

It wasn’t Great, but it was good. If I could, I would rate it 3.5 stars but since I can’t, 3 stars is to low, so I rounded up.
It bothers me so much, that ever chapter Elzora cries, she still lacks confidence, and constantly berates herself for breaking down over small things and big things. Like, crying because she’s frustrated she should be more knowledgeable than she is, this wasn’t just once, this was many many chapters worth of crying. Crying because she didn’t realize something about her men, and thinks she’s the worst soul mate. She constantly allows the guys to crap on each other, like horrible snipes and painful physical mishaps. Bullying each other, and the guys can’t see how much it bothers her. They are oblivious, even though she’s constantly asking them not to be “mean”, which she also says constantly. She internalizes so much that I was it got boring, I wanted to skip pages but I didn’t. She cries over all the mishaps with the guys but they don’t stop even when she asks them too, so either they are written completely stupid or they are just arrogant enough not to care even when they consistently tell her how much they are obsessed with keeping her safe. They constantly tell her she’s so much farther along than they figured. How strong she is but yet again, she just doesn’t beleive them, no matter how many times they tell her. She would rather think the worst in herself than to think of one positive thing. It’s painful to read since this is the 3rd book and it feels like it’s getting worse.
They left the school to stay at Necos to be safer, continuing her classes with the guys, although we didn’t get to read about Necos, Vex’s or Jaspers training as they didn’t schedule any. She gets to meet her dad. Anonumus, well her blood uncle but he was her mothers soul mate too so that means, he’s her dad too. He loves her so much, but I was completely caught off guard when he appeared to Necos and Elzora with Mr Downy a day before the Showcase. Eirik and Etrix dad was informed she was the Primordial Princess, and he’s planned a huge showcase to introduce her to the world. Elzora and her guys are still hiding her soul magic since soul witches are killed off once they mature. Mr Downy is now under suspicion of working with someone that does not have her best interest at heart. Which breaks her because he’s the last connection she has with her late grandma. He’s distant and shows up last min to give her a gold crown, the crown her dad Caeus made for her for their wedding day. I feel like there’s something hidden in this crown, even though she connects with it. It’s foreshadowing something. Oh, there was a chapter or two where Elzora is wanting to feel balanced and harmonized, she lets her magic spread out which switches the souls of the guys. They all get a very small taste of what their direct opposite feels and the different magic which gives allows a new modicum of respect to grow. They don’t bully each other as much after that. Just a few snipes here and there. Jasper opens up to Zohar, and allows Zohar to heal him. He was struggling so much in this book, he pulled away from them all and was even more surlier living at Necos castle with them all. Barely showing his face. Elzora allowed the space and didn’t think to ask for more, she notices small expressions that quickly disappeared when Jasper realized he was feeling even a smidge happy. So it just felt off, especially since she’s so Emphatic. Yet, Elzora is happy to chase Necos even when he pushes her away too, telling her they can never bond. It just felt weird.
There was a few instances where someone was named as a person in a group when it was them that was speaking. I swear I read about when Elzora bonded with Etrix earlier while doing the deed near the end, she bonds with him and Cial magically. I think there was some grammar errors in the book, there were sections where the bad grammar made things unclear and confusing.
Truly, there was alot of fluff, filler, whatever you want to call it. The story or plot as you will, pushes along but at a very slow pace. If we got rid of most of the crying and self discriminating, it would cut the book filler down by a huge amount and I would have definetly rated it a 5 star because it has the potential. I almost didn’t finish the book, her character needs some immediate growth for sure. I will read the next book but I’m in no hurry to read it immediately.

[Nicola Simpson · Rating 3 out of 5]

++++

Please please please let the fmc stop Wineing. I can’t take much more of it. Then theirs family members that they don’t know how they are doing, but they run the rebels all this power and heritage and brains and not one can figure stuff out it’s driving me nuts book three and if I was a dnf’ er I would have bit I’m stubborn I’m hoping for a spectacular ending, and although mental health issues,anxiety,ADHD and depression are mentioned they are not portrait in the right way story does not flow but the premise could of been something spectacular if written correctly

[Jenn · Rating 4 out of 5]

This review is a long time coming.

This book was good. I loved reading it and see the FMC grow stronger and get better.

My one thing is the switcharoo.... to this day, I do not understand who was who was who was who.

I would like to see more bonding with the men. I'm unsure how many books is in this series but 3 books in and only I think 2-3 bonding out of 7/8... seems really slow to me and i dont want the bondings for the rest to feel rushed.

I would also like to say this, which is not a hit to the author or a negative... If there is an excessive time between books, a recap of characters would be nice. I think this series had two years in between books and I couldnt remember who anyone was and their powers. *still confused on some of them.*

[Jolene · Rating 3 out of 5]

Series book #3 of 5 Books
Next release: The Lost Witch - Feb 2026
Book #5 will conclude the series.

This book #3 was the best of all of them and yet I was still left wanting. I enjoy the world building and premise and really want to like the series more than I currently do. I'm hoping the next book solves that. Elzora- fmc is still just really unlikeable to me. I don't feel there has been any growth or development with the constant anxiety and whining that she deals with on every page. I feel like if this was as crippling as it's made to appear she would/ should constantly have 1 of her soulmates with her to ground her and help her calm. I mean if she's supposed to save the world let's maybe give her some tools to work with her issues.

Also... for someone with her power levels she would be able to have a shield on herself and possibly others so her/ them getting some of their injuries are just not plausible to me. Also... I get foreshadowing and stuff... but Veal being alive... manipulating memories etc... so she can get primordial throne could've been guessed/ revealed sooner. The mention the guards/government and all the masks Neco wears but there is no info. speculation or even just logic done by ANY of the main characters... it just doesn't work for me. It just feels like 3 books that could've been a trilogy series - just feels like wasted pages and the 3 books could've been more concise to wrap up the stories - in all books I skipped parts bc the whiny and dealing with anxiety seems to be the main part... NOT the plot. And it's the plot and world that interests me.

You can tell that Neco will have a massive role in next book because Veal the main villain that was revealed is a corrupt time Witch... Why El and her men and dad haven't figured out how she messed with memories/ time is beyond me... seems rather obvious.

SO the battle at the end was the best part of the book - but you know she could've just ended it and didn't so it still left me unsatisfied. I want to read the resolution but I don't know if I have patience for book 4 and 5... we will see if I care when they are released. It really feels like not much has happened in 3 books. So it was a good read but still kinda annoying and not great... Has potential to be so much better.

[Payton · Rating 5 out of 5]

wild ride

So many more secrets have come to light but gosh dang are there still some doozies left. I swear. Elzora is continuing to roll with the punches. Sometimes not so gracefully but what can a girl do. She’s been forced in to this world of unknown and it’s overwhelming. She constantly deals with her anxiety and self-doubts. Especially because her magic has a mind of its own and tends to go awry at the most inopportune times. But she is getting stronger and her thirst for knowledge is helping her learn more about this world. Learning new skills, embracing her magic and developing her bonds is pivotal for her. She does do more of that in this book. There are going to be many more struggles ahead, but I think she has the right core group of guys in her corner. Some of her relationships and bonds have developed even more and that helps settle her soul to a degree. There are definitely some bumps in the road with this group because let’s be honest with a group this big, with this many strong personalities… it’s going to happen. But at the end of the day these guys are willing to do just about anything to make her happy and help her succeed. They’re wholeheartedly obsessed with her… even if they don’t know how to show her what she means to them. I feel like she’s finally reaching a point where she’s ready to embrace who she is fully and to find her footing with her powers and future. I’m actually really excited for the next book to see where this journey takes them.

[CM · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 Stars
Elzora (FMC)

(MMCs):
1. Eirik (1 chapter)
2. Necos (1 chapter)
3. Zohar (2 chapters)
4. Mael (1 chapter)
5. Jasper (1 chapter)
6. Ciar (1 chapter)
7. Etrix (0 chapters)
8. Ryes (0 chapters)
9. Vexus (0 chapters)

The book is multiple POV --> but not great. The MMCs only have a few chapters but not all of them. Only 1 has > 1 chapter and 3 don't have any chapters. All have the baseline magic bonding, only a couple are fully magically bonded and only about 3 are fully bonded magically and physically. Too many MMCs.

There are just too many MMCs. There is not much relationship building because there is not enough time with the plot. The most the reader learns about the MMCs backstory is from the few paragraphs that her daddy/uncle explains their backgrounds.

Overall the plot is ok and has kept me interested. I am not enjoying so many MMCs because the relationships are just not growing well. While the following is not in consideration in my rating it is a negative for me: this is not a finished series. I did not realize when I started reading the series. It looks like it took a bit between the books and I have not found any indicaiton of the remaining books coming out soon. It looks like the author has other books coming out. That is a big pet peeve of mine is when authors take too long between books in a series yet release other books. Hopefully it will not take too long otherwise I will forget about the characters/plot and not continue the series.

[Adri · Rating 4 out of 5]

Rating: 3.75⭐️

Read if you like:
Reverse Harem
Big Harem
Slow Burn
Mental Health Rep
Touch her and Die

Elzora still struggles with her anxiety and with her powers that seem to have a mind of their own. She finally grows a little more secure with her abilities and magic which made me so happy. I can't wait to see her gain more control and confidence in her abilities.

Her men. UGH sometimes I wanted to shake them so they could realize how much their animosity towards each other hurts Elzora.

With things being tense between her men she struggles with them being at each other's throats. I can't wait for them to figure things out and learn how to live and love Elzora together.

With so many unanswered questions I'm dying that I have to wait for the next one!!

[Christine Sonnabend · Rating 5 out of 5]

Elzora’s story is so well-developed and interesting that it leaves me wanting more. I hope we don’t have to wait too long for the next book! The author does rich character development and handles the mental health issues extremely well. I love how she handles Elzora’s anxiety issues in such a believable way, without any judgement from the other characters, only acceptance. There are so many characters in the story that it might seem overwhelming, but they are fleshed out and different enough that it makes sense and flows into the story line. I highly recommend this book, but read the previous ones first, as they really set the stage for this one and for the cliffhanger at the end.

[Devon Scholz · Rating 4 out of 5]

So we pick right where we left off in book 2 with Elzora unlocking her powers. I was a little underwhelmed with the 3rd book and the storyline that it took. It felt like such a shift from the first 2 books that immediately pulled me in. There was a lot more filler and emotional overload on the part of Elzora and the conflict between her men. In terms of the actual plot it was a very slow progression. Over all the whole book was pretty good, I was just a bit disappointed in the pacing. I definitely still want to continue reading the series I just hope the pace picks up like it did in the first 2 books. I wish we could give half ratings because I’d probably give this one a 3.5/5 stars.

[Jemma Newby · Rating 5 out of 5]

Nooooo , I need more now. How can it end like that. What a rollercoaster ride that was , Wow I loved every second of it. This book started where the last one finished and boy did it not disappoint. Elzora (Zoe) and her guys are getting closer and I loved seeing them all bonding more over there love for her. Honestly this book / series is incredible and I'm desperately waiting for the next book. I can't wait to see what happens next. It's a five star read for me that I would definitely recommend.

[Brenda Davis · Rating 5 out of 5]

Unleashed but bound to a prophecy

Elzora coming to terms with her new life and as she bonds with more of her 9 mates she becomes more balanced with who she is and what she can unleash after having her magic trapped and spending so many years dealing with anxiety and abandonment issues. Now will we learn who the prophecy is to come to life about, will she gain confidence, will she learn to understand her gifts, will she bond with all her mates? To be continued on a major cliffhanger

[Johanna · Rating 4 out of 5]

I’m angry!

This book is not the end of a trilogy and although there’s a promise that it will be less than two and a half years before the next book, there’s no promise that the fourth book will end the series.
I waited until book 3 was about to be released to begin this story because I read a lot and who knows what I’ll remember when the next book is out.
The writing is excellent. I’m invested in the characters, but don’t let Amazon list the books as 1 of 3 and 2 of 3 if that’s a lie.

[Kristin E. Todd · Rating 4 out of 5]

Unfinished series

Not a trilogy, but with nine mates it was bound to be a long one. She still hasn't bonded with all of them. This is a PG very slow burn reverse harem. The series is excellent with adventure, magic, royalty and mystery evil characters. There are numerous plot twists and new characters pop up without warning or explanation. I'm just really hoping our FMC can stop crying and the mates stop bickering throughout the next book. It's a very good series and I'll read the next whenever it comes out.

[Lisa Bing · Rating 4 out of 5]

The series continues with this installment but there are more to come. With nine mates, though, you do have to give a girl a chance to properly bond to each of them ;) I enjoyed the character dynamics, the secrets revealed, the adventure, magic and slow burn romance but there are still questions for me so I'm quite anxious for the next book ;) I should warn you of the steep cliff at the end of this book - it's a doozy ;P I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of Zoe and her mates growing together, and of course, hopefully defeating the baddies. Good fun!

[Ishta Roth · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good.

Book 3 picked up immediately after the ending of book 2.
The book was good, not great but good.
It was long and while not hard to follow along it's getting slow to progress.
Zoe has now matured and is facing the difficult task of learning her magic, balancing 9 mates, an evil conspiracy and a prophecy.
It's a lot for a young woman who only weeks ago thought herself human and alone and is now basically the heir to the throne.
The cliffhangers in Letty's books keep me on my toes and reels me in.
I enjoyed this book but it took me a longer than expected to get through it.

[Stacie Tucker · Rating 4 out of 5]

3 is not the final book

I like this series, but I try to wait for the entire series to be complete before I start book 1.

Once book 4 is released (Feb 2026), I’ll have to re-read the series to have the story fresh in my mind. Which spoils the surprises.

4 stars:
1. Pacing.
2. There are a few parts in the book that needs a second read, because the 2 prince brothers’ names are incorrectly used/switched during scenes & conversations.
3. Accurate portrayal of an anxiety disorder prevents me from dropping another star.

[Anastacia Newton · Rating 5 out of 5]

Leaves you guessing...

This book kept me guessing as I read while also introducing new secrets. I love watching her build deeper connections with her mates while also watching the growing pains of navigating life together. It's amazing to watch her grow into herself and build new skills! The cliffhanger makes me so excited for the next book. I cannot wait to see how Zoe navigates the coming challenges as well as connects with some of the more reluctant mates.

[Katelyn D. · Rating 5 out of 5]

Oh how I’ve missed Zoe and her mates. Unleashed Witch was an absolutely wild ride. So many discoveries were made, but I still have a multitude of questions. Zoe continues to learn more about her powers and the world she’s found herself in, all while trying to navigate the challenges surrounding her. I love seeing the character growth in some of the characters. That cliffhanger left me reeling and I will be eagerly awaiting the next book!

[Christina · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ohhh the cliffhanger on this book is out of this world!! Elzora has grown so much even though everyone is still keeping sooo many secrets both from her and for her. There are so many scenes that got my blood pumping and anxiety going! Elzora is getting more and more confident in herself and I absolutely love it! The bonds are bonding! There’s so much foreshadowing it makes me ache for the next book!

[Yajaira L. Strait · Rating 2 out of 5]

These but have got to be the most irritating books I've ever read. The main character was the biggest crybaby on the planet and she supposed to be some heroin. The men that's in her life are all adolescent children it seems like by the way they behave. It was just not a great set of books. I'm reading them because I started them and I'm the kind of person that needs to finish them but holy moly I can't wait to be done.

[Shayne · Rating 5 out of 5]

The third installment to the Primordial series has finally arrived. It took a long time to get here but it was so worth it. Eldora and her men picked up right where we left off in book two. And we start making some major progress while also facing new and more dangerous challenges. The characters come to life where I would often forget that I was reading a book vs watching the movie in my head. I can't wait to see how the last chapters will unfold in the next book.

[Tracey · Rating 5 out of 5]

Unleashed, witch by Letty frame. I really enjoyed this third book in this area. I really love the character development. The cliff hanger from book 2 really set the tone for this third book. I was really invested in the story plot. And I was pleasantly surprised how everything turned out. I'm always looking forward to reading one of Letty's books. I highly recommend reading each book in this series

[Melissa Smith · Rating 5 out of 5]

Thing have heated up for sure in this series, and Ellie is about to find herself at the head of it. She knows she's an integral part of all that's wrong in this world, but she's also only a piece of the puzzle. Other parts are beginning to be revealed, more people coming out of the woodwork to reveal their part to play, and I have a feelings things will only continue to heat up. Can't wait for the next installment if the series

[June McKibben · Rating 5 out of 5]

Elzora has fully matured and her magic is very powerful. With in fighting in her mating circle and enemies that masquerade as allies her anxieties are high. We get to see deeper meanings to some of her men in this book and learn of potential other evils she will have to face. This book left me wanting more now.

[Dawn Milligan · Rating 5 out of 5]

This has been a fantastic read. I really enjoyed the character dynamics, even with the strife they caused our girl. The writing was superb. I truly admired how she handled everything that was thrown at her and emerged stronger. This is a fabulous story!

[Racheal Moore · Rating 5 out of 5]

I absolutely love this world and I was looking forward to seeing how everything went for the main character I was completely surprised when I got to the end and learned there was another book and I was beyond excited because this world isn’t done and I can’t wait to visit it in the next book

[Kacey · Rating 4 out of 5]

I would probably give this book at 3.7. I love to see the story like develop more and the relationships and group dynamics grow. I will say Elzora does cry like every chapter, even when I really don’t think it’s warranted bc you can have anxiety without crying at every thought or emotion. Over all I did enjoy the rest of the book. I’m sad to have to wait a year for the next one 🥲 I feel like now there is really even more room for the story to continue to grow.

[Paige · Rating 4 out of 5]

it’s a good thing that there’s a fourth book.

This was a good book. Longer and more detailed than the first two in the series, but also a good story. I liked how the relationships developed, though not all of them were completed. I did not like the cliffhanger.

[Chele · Rating 5 out of 5]

I love this series. Letty Frame always manages to address mental health in a real way that just makes her characters so real! Elzora is amazing and coming into her own. Following her journey and this world makes my reading heart happy. I can't wait to see what happens next!

[Abby Collins-Tester · Rating 5 out of 5]

Unleashed

Epic continuation of the series
Secrets are coming to light and bonds are forming
Who is really behind the darkness?