Traitor Son

The Empire of the Stars #1

by Melissa J. Cave

A battle-scarred knight who dreams of peace. A secret princess who knows the Empire’s darkest truths. And a marriage written in blood and betrayal.

After seven years of war, Remin of Andelin returns as the Empire’s most infamous hero...and the son of its greatest traitors. His reward is a ravaged duchy on the edge of the Empire, a noble title that only brings more enemies, and the hand of a princess no one’s ever heard of.

Princess Ophele Agnephus was raised in exile, the illegitimate daughter of the Divine Emperor and a disgrace to the sacred stars. Bound by her father’s bloody legacy and distrusted by her husband, she faces an even deadlier choice: to protect a secret that could shatter the Empire, or tell the truth about the cataclysm that destroyed Remin’s world.

Remin can’t afford to trust her. Even as he labors to build his new city by day and protects it from devils by night, he knows that Ophele could be everything: his love and his bride, the foundation of his new House…or the Emperor’s weapon, placed at his side to destroy everything he has left.

Epic in scope and intimate in heart, Traitor Son is a sweeping romantic fantasy about love in the ruins of a century of war, and the impossible dream of peace. Perfect for fans of monster-hunting in The Witcher, the lush world and Machiavellian politics of Jacqueline Carey's Kushiel's Legacy series, and the sweeping history and unforgettable romance of Outlander.

Begin an epic journey with Traitor Son, and discover a love that could redeem an Empire.

Genres: Fantasy, Romance, Fantasy Romance, Romantasy, Fiction, Enemies To Lovers, Adult

457 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 1, 2024

About the author

Melissa Cave is a writer and a veteran who has spent most of her life traveling, first as a military brat and then on active duty. She has always been fascinated by new places, cultures, languages, and history, and there is no better place to indulge that interest than in fantasy writing. She currently lives in Virginia, where she is failing to grow strawberries for the third year running.

Reviews

[Sophie · Rating 5 out of 5]

This enemies-to-lovers arranged marriage medieval fantasy novel is filled with knights, love, found family, betrayal, secrets, political intrigue, humour and monsters. Undoubtedly, this is an utter masterpiece of a debut! It has my whole heart and I eagerly await more!

He had been pushing her away for a reason. She was one of the Emperor’s poisoned gifts. The sweetest and most beguiling poison, a poison so seductive that it was almost enough to make him forget all the hard lessons he had learned and just gulp it down. Let it happen, whatever it was. Give up. Give in. Drown. The sweetness would be worth it.

[ Contains some spoilers ]

PLOT SUMMARY
24-year-old Remin “Grimjaw” of Andelin’s innocent family was slaughtered years ago by the Emperor, accused of treason. Now a brutal and renowned war hero, he is determined to take back everything he has lost. When he returns from a seemingly suicidal mission of recovering lands for the Emperor, he is granted any wish he desires. Naturally, he decides on the title of Duke, the lands of Brede and the Emperor’s daughter of the stars, princess of the House of Agnephus, for his wife. That way, the family name can never be erased.

18-year-old Princess Ophele Agnephus is the illegitimate daughter of the Emperor, raised in exhile by Lord and Lady Hurrell in Aldeburke essentially as a prisoner. She has had a very sheltered life having never left home and is very timid, but exceptionally clever. Their meeting hardly goes the way one would expect, with the princess up a tree and the duke livid and insulted on the ground. And their journey to Tresingale, the city Remin has started building, is hardly ideal with various embarrassing and awkward moments between the pair.

Their marriage on the way there does ease the tension, and once in Tresingale undeniable feelings are forming. Ophele begins to believe Remin is not the mean brute everyone has had her believe, but can be distant. Remin has trust issues from having more attempts on his life than he cares to count. He believes that, despite her innocent appearance and kind yet reserved nature, Ophele may be the Emperor’s very weapon that will bring about his greatest downfall.

With the incoming threat from assassins and monsters, Remin is torn between keeping Ophele at arm’s length and protecting her from harm. But Ophele is hiding a dangerous secret, one that concerns both their families and bring about the Empire’s destruction.

This is told from the third-person past-tense POV of Remin and Ophele

OVERALL OPINIONS
I think this has to be one of the best fantasies I have read this year! Seriously, I don’t think I have read anything that has made me smile, laugh and swoon as much as this. What a thrilling find this is! It did take me a chapter to get into it, but I knew from then on this would be an incredible read. And I adored this so much that I devoured it in practically one sitting, which is when you know it is good! The opening lines are:

“In the Greater Court of the Imperial Palace in Starfall, Remin knelt at the Divine Emperor’s throne and prepared to be knighted. Or killed.”

From this, I was instantly hooked and intrigued. Who is he, why would be possibly be killed?

This story reminds me a lot of the anime “My Happy Marriage” as the main character is also very kind, shy, raised in an abusive household and is wedded off to a man they believe is mean and cruel who turns out not to be as horrid as people think. There was also a touch of mystery-solving and alliances akin to “The Three Musketeers”, with monster-slaying a bit like “The Witcher”.

Melissa Cave has produced a debut that everyone should praise to the skies! The world-building, characters and plot are phenomenal, masterfully woven together to tell a beautiful tale. Full kudos for Cave to provide a Glossary with a pronunciation guide at the back of the book and a map at the front. These are extremely useful – nay, vital – to include as they help the reader go through the story better. Maps, to me, are invaluable and they help me visualise where things are.

But it is not just the effort in the grander scale of things that is impressive, the small details are just as thoughtful like having the chapter header image as the owl, a representation of Ophele as this is what Remin thinks of her (due to her wide often solemn eyes). Indeed, I assume the publisher’s name Owl & Bear, LLC is not a coincidence either, since the bear refers to Ophele’s perception of Remin as he is all big, dark, fierce and grumbles like a bear. It is cute they compare themselves to animals.

Book 1 in the upcoming Empire of the Stars trilogy, this has left me looking forward to the next instalment. I confess it took a long moment to realise this was part of a series (I must have been blind), so I was expecting more in the way of action – but, considering there is more to come, this is absolutely fine pacing-wise! I confess I am relieved because I have become so fond of the characters already, I cannot bear the thought of anything happening to them!

Remin and Ophele’s relationship are, of course, my favourite parts of the story. Cave does an amazing job at pushing them away and bringing them back together. It is through miscommunication (ironically one of my least favourite tropes but it was done exceptionally well here) that they misunderstand one another as neither have had much experience with the opposite sex. Remin especially does not understand what women want. I do like that they both try to understand the other person, and it wasn’t just one-sided with Remin understanding Ophele. They both grow and learn to communicate and I love that.

There are so many scenes with them that I am obsessed with, I cannot possibly list them all! I think my all-time favourite moment is their wedding night, it’s so steamy. Indeed, there are about 3 spicy scenes and all incredible. They are not too graphical nor do they lack details. It is the perfect balance of all things sensual and hot that I prefer and wish more books would do. I also loved when they are in the market, and he watches how excited and happy she gets there (and is bewildered at the glass bear she asks for). The scene when they both dance with each other is the lovliest thing. I was smiling, I was squealing with joy!

There were plenty of descriptions throughout that were so gorgeous, like this one:

The stars in the vault of heaven looked down upon them, each one offering its own gate to paradise, reached only through great struggle and suffering.

Others elicited grins from me. One such thing that had me laughing out loud was this:

Remin knew how to dance, even if his long-ago dancing master had once witheringly described it as what one might expect to see if a fireplace poker decided to promenade through a ballroom.

The scene where they changed Remin’s password was also funny wherein he tries not to swear in front of his wife.

<< Positives >>
🠚 The descriptions are beautiful.
🠚 The storyline is very up my street, I loved every moment reading it!
🠚 Remin and Ophele’s relationship with all its ups and downs.
🠚 The spice!
🠚 The found family that both Ophele and Remin have through Remin’s friends the Knights of the Brede.
🠚 The chapter header image of the owl was cute.

<< Negatives >>
🠚 This probably comes into play in the next book but at the wedding, Ophele’s skin glows with star magic. Why does this never happen before or since?
🠚 Again, this is probably the next book’s plot but I thought, since the secret is brought up in this book, that the secret would be revealed by the end of it. I am glad it did not end on a cliffhanger, though, as I detest those haha!
🠚 I thought there was going to be a scene where they celebrated Ophele’s birthday since it is hinted at.
🠚 Sir Justenin was a lovely companion for Ophele, I wish there had been more of him.
🠚 I think I would have liked more moments of Ophele being bold, though it is heartwarming to see the strong woman she becomes at the end of the story.
🠚 The names of towns on the map were a little too small, I think the names should be printed larger.

CHARACTERS
-ˋˏ ꒰ Ophele꒱ ˎˊ-
↳ I love Ophele with all my heart she is so selfless and brave, enduring much and complaining little because she feels she is indirectly responsible for Remin’s misfortunes. She touches the hearts of everyone, and she certainly touched mine too.

Purpose was the gift of imperfection. The divine world was perfect, flawlessly ordered, but in a perfect world there was no purpose, no reason to learn, to work, to grow. There might be debts owed in an imperfect world, but they could be paid. An imperfect world was a work in progress. An imperfect world could be changed. *She* could change it, if she was brave.

-ˋˏ ꒰ Remin꒱ ˎˊ-
↳ Remin deserves the world and it was lovely to see him become so caring and protective of Ophele. He goes from always having his guard up to finding a safe place with Ophele.

His men called him Remin Grimjaw, impervious to pain. At seventeen, he had already survived five years of war, starvation, arrows, blades, poisoning, multiple attempted assassinations and two severe battlefield injuries only to grow almost insolently enormous, as if he thrived on mortal peril.

-ˋˏ ꒰ Other characters꒱ ˎˊ-
↳ Sir Miche very quickly became a favourite. He has an excellent balance of comicality and sentimentality that it is always a joy whenever he comes on the scene, bless him for everything he says and does – especially when reprimanding Remin, with Ophele’s best interests at heart. One of my fondest and perhaps funniest descriptions from the book is this:

When Miche had something on his mind, nothing could shut him up. Remin could have threatened him at spearpoint and he would have cheerfully impaled himself and delivered his remarks with his dying breath.

🠚Wen the cook was hilarious being in a permanent grumpiness, I always chortled at his scenes, especially when he mimics Ophele.

“Came in asking for bloody carrots every morning, I was hearing ‘Master Wen, Master Wen’ in me dreams. And then one day she says, ‘Master Wen, would it be easier to keep the apples and carrots here by the door? I don’t like to trouble you. For Master Eugene.’ ” Wen produced a credible impression of the princess’s shy, start-and-stop speech pattern, though the batting eyelashes were a little over the top.

I like that he tries not to swear in front of her haha. All the scenes with any of the men trying not to swear got me grinning ear-to-ear.

Oh, and let us not forget dear Master Euguene the donkey! A little sweetheart!

FAV QUOTES
• He had waged a perfect war upon them. In seven years, he had not lost a single battle. They could not defeat him, only delay him.
• She was the last thing he needed to forge a dynasty that would last for all time, the foundation for a noble House that could never be destroyed again. And when he was done, Kings and Emperors would kneel before him.
• He had commanded whole armies and ordered thousands of men to march to their deaths, but he had never been responsible for anything as fragile as a girl.
• He had checked her for weapons when he undressed her, but what defense had he against that look on her face? Those soft, trembling lips? Was it possible that she might be his, in truth?
• Remin lay looking at her sleeping face, soft and curving as a flower. Inexperienced as he was with women, he’d never thought about why maidens were said to be blooming. Nothing bloomed, in the places he had been. But his wife did.
• His wife’s case was a complicated one: she might be a target for assassins, or she might be an assassin herself.
• Where was the silent, solemn little owl he knew? She was smiling. Her eyes were so bright, so quick to see everything. Even veiled, hatted, and covered in white dust, he couldn’t help thinking her beautiful. She looked like nothing so much as the clearest and bluest of skies.
• He faced devils every night, but to Remin Grimjaw there was no creature in the world so dangerous as this girl, asleep in the grass with wildflowers dancing above her.
• “I keep looking for thorns,” he whispered. “And there just aren’t any.”
• For a long moment, they just looked at each other, and it seemed as if everything that had passed between them could be forgotten, for a time, in the forgiving shadows.
• her eyes went immediately to Remin, happy and laughing and wanting to share it with him, and suddenly it felt as if everything else in the world dissolved away, leaving only her. The loveliest thing he had ever seen.
• Looking into her golden eyes was like falling into the stars.
• When they walked home together afterward, she couldn’t help looking at him, marveling. Not because he was the great military genius and hero, Remin Grimjaw, but because now she understood how he had done it. And most often, it was with creativity, courage, and brute stubbornness rather than superhuman strength. Oddly, the more human he became to her, the more she admired him.

• She turned to smile at him, and the fronds of her long hair hung around her in damp tendrils, like an enchantress from an old story. Maybe she was one of those dangerous, beautiful women, luring him so subtly and so sweetly that even Remin Grimjaw couldn’t resist her.
• and when she lifted her eyes to his, for a dazzled moment he completely forgot where they were going and what they were doing and even that he had a horse he was supposed to be directing. The smile that spread across his face almost felt like the shattering of a mask, he used it so rarely. But it was also completely out of his control when she was smiling back at him, wide and foolish and beautiful, and he hadn’t known it was possible to be so happy.

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I received an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review and I’d like to thank Mellisa Cave and Reedsy for the opportunity. This has not affected my opinion in any way.

[KMart Vet · Rating 2 out of 5]

This has a premise with a lot of potential—an uneasy arranged marriage between two people so drastically different and the promise of political intrigue. It introduces strong foundations for character-driven conflict and emotional depth. And while there were elements I found compelling, especially in the initial setup, I ultimately struggled to connect with the story the way I’d hoped.

I appreciated how distinct both Remin and Ophele were. Their differences made me curious about how they’d bridge the gap between them. Ophele had so much narrative potential—an exiled princess raised in secrecy in an abusive household—but she remained incredibly passive throughout. While her background lends itself to quiet resilience, I often wished for more agency and strength from her. She’s treated with a kind of delicate reverence that, while perhaps intentional, felt a too infantilizing for my taste.

I found the romantic relationship difficult to root for, largely due to the imbalance of power and how certain moments—particularly the consummation of their marriage—were handled. The lack of enthusiastic consent made me deeply uncomfortable, and I found it hard to move past that dynamic. It feels like it has those medieval history vibes, but that is not something I wanted in a romance. Remin is very emotionally distant and, at times, incredibly harsh in ways that made it difficult for me to feel invested in the romance. Honestly, I spent the whole book wishing that Miche would just be the romantic lead.

On the fantasy side, I’d describe this as very low fantasy. There are hints of magic and otherworldly threats, but those elements aren’t explored in depth. Similarly, the political tensions linger in the background without ever really taking center stage. That’s not necessarily a flaw—slice-of-life fantasy has its audience—but I personally prefer when the world-building and external stakes are more tightly woven into the narrative.

All that said, I did enjoy the writing style. Melissa J. Cave’s prose is elegant and inviting, and despite my issues with the romance and characters, the storytelling held my attention.

In the end, Traitor Son may resonate more with readers who enjoy slower-paced, historically inspired fantasy romances with an emphasis on atmosphere. For me, it didn’t quite deliver the emotional depth or character development I was looking for, but I can absolutely see its appeal to others. It’s a thoughtful debut with a strong sense of tone, even if it left me personally wishing for more.

Thanks so much to the author, netgalley, and publisher for the complimentary copy. This review is voluntary and all opinions are my own.

[Amelia · Rating 5 out of 5]

Ugh, this was such a great book! I loved the knights, courtly love aspects, and the characters' reverence for their ancestors. The story and characters were so compelling and I found myself nearly crying for Ophele's troubles several times. Her character is so selfless and sweet! The main plotline of the book follows the relationship of Ophele and Remin, which does get resolved right at the end of the book. There is definitely a big tee up of the next book in the series, which I am now impatiently waiting for! No cliffhanger. Only critique is that the intimacy scenes were only in missionary, though the author managed to keep the scenes fresh and they didn't feel too repetitive, plus it makes sense with Remin and Ophele's naivety.

[Rachel · Rating 5 out of 5]

Remin is a ‘traitors’ son who rises to fame and glory to win back his birthright to ensure his family name is never destroyed. To do this he bargained to marry the Emperor‘s daughter

I absolutely loved this book!! There’s a good range of politics, world building and character development. Plus honestly, the romance was absolutely top tier! The whole story revolves around Remin and his Knights building a new city while overcoming threats

I will say that this felt more heavy on the romance and the politics/ magical elements were more on the back burner. I’m assuming now characters are established the next books will include more focus and details on those things.

I will absolutely be picking up the next one!

Wen had been in absolute stitches (especially his rant about pastry’s) I want to see more of his character for sure! Thank you to NetGalley for giving me a free eARC in exchange for a honest review

[Cody Hamilton · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5/5 ⭐️

Before I get to the negative bits, I want to make it clear that most of my negative feelings toward this book have very little to do with the writing itself. I think that Cave could have a strong career ahead as a writer. That said the middle portion of this book is one of the single biggest drags I’ve ever experienced as a reader. When the romance takes center stage at the beginning and the end the story is engaging and tantalizing to consume. Outside the romance it’s hard to find a lot of positives; the world is bland, it’s fantasy with almost zero fantasy elements outside exterior menace from creatures you never meet. What it boils down to for about 50% of its pages is a building sim that has little do with actual development outside water carrying. I hate writing reviews like this but growth is hard without negative feedback. As I eluded to the issue has much less to do with the writing as with the crafting of the world and even more so the story.

[Katyana · Rating 4 out of 5]

****3.5****

I wanted to like this more than I actually did, but I'm rounding up to 4 because I'm hopeful that some of the most annoying parts of the book are over now, and won't persist and make me DNF book 2.

I like the story, and the broad cast of characters. It has a fairly typical set-up for fantasy - orphaned boy fighting to win back what was taken from him. It is the details / complex circumstances that are really pulling me in, and to be fair, we get a lot of arrows pointing at stuff but no answers as to what fills those holes. I'm taking on faith that the author will eventually give us the answers, as that seeming conspiracy is the core of the plot (what happened with Remin's family, what did Ophele's mother have to do with it, etc). And that's also fairly typical for fantasy - book 1 sets up a big plot, but gives very few answers. So that's fine.

My primary problem is that I didn't like the two leads very much.

Ophele, the FMC, is a wilting daisy. You know what I mean, that super precious, shy FMC that is a complete doormat, never holds a grudge, and needs to be treated like a precious child at all times. Don't get me wrong, Ophele isn't afraid to work - she nearly works herself into the ground. But she's fragile, takes everything in the worst possible way, and rather than get angry, she retreats and cries herself to sleep. I understand why she is the way she is - her life has been lived in a cage, surrounded by people who enjoyed tormenting her. I don't blame her for it, and I feel a little protective over her wide-eyed innocent character. It just isn't the kind of lead I want to read about. I find it a little disheartening, when reading a fantasy full of conflict, to know that your FMC isn't going to be able to contribute to anything. She would likely be terrified even hearing about it. Her literal only job in the world is to take care of her husband, the actual main character, and give him children. And I just think that's depressing.

Remin is a dickhead. I think I said that about a billion times in my kindle notes. Again, I understand why he is the way he is, and it makes perfect sense. But when you have an FMC who is the embodiment of a golden retriever puppy, you just can't watch the MMC kick the fucking puppy for 300 pages without hating him. And I really do. All the truly horrible shit he's been through is certainly the reason why he is the way he is, but it doesn't excuse his cruelty, in the same way people can't be excused for being abusers just because they were abused as a child. He is choosing to kick this puppy over and over, and it really hurts his character in my eyes.

Fortunately, I think that comes to a resolution in the end of this first book, so I'm hopeful that there will be zero puppy-kicking moments in book 2.

[Dave C · Rating 4 out of 5]

There are fewer things better than starting a new book with no expectations and it delivering something great. Melissa J Cave's 'Traitor Son' does exactly that and was a brilliant read.

Thanks to excellent world-building, superb characterisation, and political machinations, I was quickly gripped and thoroughly enjoyed the first book in this new series.

Whilst the romance element of the plot took centre stage (something I'm not normally into), I was engaged throughout and the fantasy and political elements woven around this were very well done, with the potential of what's to come a very exciting prospect!

I'm really looking forward to the next instalment and would give this 4.5 stars if I could. A very nice surprise and a huge thank you to NetGalley and Owl & Bear for an ARC of this novel.

[Thais • tata.lifepages • · Rating 5 out of 5]

Oh my is it hot in here??🥵🔥 y’all I wasn’t expecting the spice in this book but let me tell ya.. it had me weak in the legs!!🫠🫠

This is an epic fantasy romance with a historical setting (medieval times). This is actually perfect for fans of epic high fantasy and building of medieval civilizations! We follow Remin, a strong warrior that is determined to win back all that was taken from his family when they were deemed as traitors by the emperor. Throughout the years, he flies through the ranks and becomes a legendary war hero. ⚔️ everyone thought that he was on a suicide mission, following the emperor commands to prove his worth… and his most desired prize? The Princess 😱👀 to start a family line that could never be ended.

On the other hand, Princess Ophele , bastard Daugther of the Emperor, has been kept hidden all her life. A sheltered, innocent young lady but at the same time very bright, well read and with a kind heart. She’s a bookworm like me! 🥰 once the giant and esteemed warrior comes to collect his prize… she knows her life will never be the same and hopes that he will never figure out the dark secret she carries 👀

I feel like the book is divided in two parts: one before they arrived in the Andelin valley while he was collecting the princess and the other while they arrive in The Valley and begin the process of building a civilisation.

What you can expect:
⚔️arranged marriage
⚔️only one-horse ride
⚔️broody alpha male
⚔️she’s the enemy’s daughter
⚔️redemption
⚔️ building a medieval city
⚔️will you teach me?🔥🥵
⚔️ monsters
⚔️ insta lust with slow burn love

[Alex Carvalho · Rating 3 out of 5]

3/5 - This is a tough one for me, so I rounded up. First of all, the characters are well written. And they’re quite distinct people who feel real with clear motivations and strong voices, which was a big pro. Melissa Crave's prose is also quite nice, her writing style is lovely and she does deliver a strong atmosphere immediately.

I don't think this book had a plot??? It felt like all set up. Honestly, it felt more like "a day in the life", which actually worked for me. Watching a city be planned and built was really novel IMO, and a nice change of pace. The side characters interacting with Ophele, and her starting to come into her own and gain a little confidence was really well done and enjoyable.

A lot of world building was missing for me, though, even if the book was all set-up. There were hints of magic and threats, but none of those elements are explored. Like, why did Ophele literally glow at her wedding? Is she magical? What's going on with the king?

Most importantly - I just could not root for the relationship, it felt abusive to me. Remin was constantly ordering Ophele around or ignoring her for months? Sweet Ophele deserved better. As a character, I would have like to seen more growth from her, she remained SO passive. I was hoping to see her make him grovel, unfortunately that never happened. Overall, the power dynamic felt gross, I don't like Remin, and I rly don't think Ophele needed to be 17.

[Pete Reviews Books Good · Rating 3 out of 5]

A very interesting story with a few things I've never really dove into before, but that isn't a bad thing!

The book follows Remin, one of the most talented and feared generals of the age who is determined to win back his families ancestorial land. Before entering the fray at a pivotal battle, he demands the Emperor grant his wish, that he marry his daughter if he helps turn the tide of the war. After he does, the story begins in earnest.

Princess Ophele, the aforementioned Emperor's daughter, lives an incredibly sheltered life and when she is finally introduced to her future husband, she is horrified to say the least. Remin is a brutal warrior, and takes no joy in the marriage but insists on it regardless and doesn't seem to care at all about his future wife or her feelings, about anything. As the story goes on though, it has a great enemy-to-lover turn, which is what I meant at the beginning of the review.

I bought this book on my birthday, as part of a "post your book and I'll buy it" reverse present type thing. So I went in blind to it pretty much, and I certainly didn't realize how much romance would be a part of it. I know romantasy is a huge thing right now, and I've never really sought it out; just because I generally prefer romance as a side-story in a book, not the focus. But I will say that this book was a perfect mix of it. This would definitely qualify as a romance-heavy book, with some spice for sure, but it was very well done and the setting behind it all made it easy to read.

One of the other biggest compliments I can give this book is the comparison to a favorite of mine, Pillars of the Earth. Most of this book takes place once the couple get to Remin's family home, and goes into great depth on how they go about rebuilding it, specifically to keep the demons that come at night out. Not going to get into that plot point to prevent spoilers, but I thought the whole process of building up a community from scratch to become a fully functioning town was incredibly interesting. Like I said, it reminded me of Pillars of the Earth in that way; where the plots keep moving on different threads, but the underlying expansion of the community the characters live in was there to anchor it all.

Overall, I really enjoyed this book and for sure will be checking out the 2nd. I gave it 4 stars because again, I'm not a huge romance guy and the slow burn aspects of it made it a bit slow for me, but that should NOT be a reason people take seriously. If I'm not a big romance guy, and I'm saying this one was great, odds are that people who enjoy it will love this book. So do yourself a favor, and check it out!

[Megan Bajorek · Rating 4 out of 5]

Thoroughly Surprised and Impressed!

From the opening, Melissa J. Cave has a clear voice within her world building and characters. Setting the stage of a less magic dominated form of fantasy and more medieval meets unknown and known forces of evil type of fantasy, it is easy to immediately fall in love with Ophele, Remin, Miche, Wen, Eugene and the other present and unique cast of characters.

Ophele is pure and naive but brilliant and clever; an isolated but curious and self taught woman of noble birth but a lifetime of poor treatment yields a sophisticated blend of characters from across the fantasy genre. Her subtle but unwavering brilliance and wit along with physical limitations in way of strength/health reminds me so much of Violet from Fourth Wing while also her sheltered upbringing, lack of experience and limited understanding of the world including politics and the like reminds me of Poppy from From Blood and Ash; two characters I will always respect and love. But Ophele also has something unique all her own, a determination to make the lives of those who have been hurt better with such little concerns or conscious awareness of the cost to herself. Ophele's compassion and empathy in spite of her past of trauma and fear, sets her apart from other characters within this genre. I felt her fear, anxiety, shame and desire to be better deep in my soul. Yes there are moments when your heart can't take anymore how scared, meek, anxious and traumatized she is but at the same time those moments are followed by humor, cleverness, but also a strong unwavering courage when it comes to showing compassion, kindness and empathy.

Remin is the perfect blend of passion, realist obsessive fixations, emotion and mental walls, a dark and traumatizing past, a committed need for vengeance, his protective streak, and the level of "girl dumb", in that he knows not how to speak, act or treat a woman (very Adam from Seven Brides from Seven brothers telling Millie to toughen up or Dwight awkwardly patting Pam's shoulder as she cries because no man can know how to treat a woman when she cries) let alone care for one who has never walked more than a mile from her home, is endearing and adorable. The conflict and emotional torture he inflicts to on himself in regards to distrust, the struggle to weigh the price of vengeance and what is proving to be forceful a good, pure heart makes him a new favorite book boyfriend for me! Good god his BIG romantic gesture had me tearing up just because of how much Melissa J. Cave allows us to truly get to know him and how in that moment I felt him lay it all on the line and truly mean every word.

Although not a traditional dual POV, Traitor Son, gives thorough and detailed accounts from both main characters. Never boring or too descriptive or whiny, both characters are open with themselves about their flaws, shame, and guilt but struggle to be completely honest with themselves in which they actually acknowledge and accept they are not the cause, culprit, criminal or reason for the bad things that have happened to them or because of them. Ophele's guilt and shame at being related by blood to the people responsible for Remin's pain and suffering, never feels forced or fake but is rather an understandable motivator due to all the loss and political warmongering she's been exposed to from a young age. Ophele wants to believe it is her duty to attone for sins of others; to make amends and right past wrongs. In reality, she knows and remains conflicted between shame/guilt on behalf of the abusers and rage/vengeance towards those same abusers for hurting anyone. Remin similarly occulates between affirmation that his actions and behavior toward Ophele is the only logical, smart, safe way to behave but also feel imense confusion and fear that he has wrongfully held her accountable for things that could never be her fault. His behavior and actions speaks to anyone who has had their trust violated on so many levels, if actually can destroy a part of a person. But as most would know from therapy, to heal the broken or missing pieces you must speak up, be honest, ask for help and love which is exactly how the book leaves us: a "on a path to healing" Ophele and Remin; although no one would be foolish enough to believe it will be smooth sailing here on out. The slow burn is perfect with just enough "will they won't they" and light sprinkle of spice to keep me rooting for these two!!!

Melissa J. Cave is a clever author in a mature and professional way. Her use of dialogue, detailed description, indepth characters thoughts/reflections, succinct use of language and prose all wrapped around carefully, lightly laid out clues that our lovebirds aren't quite to paradise yet; many challenges await our heroes on the horizon that I'm certain will rest them individually and as a couple. I swear to God, if anything happens to Miche or Eugene or Wen...I'll....I'll...I'll be devastated and never ever the same.

Do yourself a favor and dive into this unique and thrilling journey! If you do so soon you'll be just in time for the sequel Stardust Child which I'm so excited to read!

[Jenni · Rating 5 out of 5]

First of all, I DEVOURED this book. Wow. What a gem. This is not the story of a long, brutal, grueling war, but everything that comes after. Rebuilding, starting anew, and creating a vision of the future.

Remin Grimjaw is feared and revered across the empire. Known as a hero, a knight-general, and Duke of Andelin, he has waged and won a war spanning the last seven years where he has never lost a battle and is now ready to collect what he is owed by the Divine Emperor, including a marriage to his daughter. Ophele has been exiled as punishment for her mother’s betrayal to the empire and has never stepped foot out of her abusive guardian’s property. Suddenly, she is stolen away from everything she has ever known to start a new life miles and miles away in the valley of Andelin, where Remin plans to create the new jewel of the empire. He is gruff, war-hardened, and knows absolutely nothing about women, and Ophele just wants to survive and make up for the wrongs her father has done.

I wasn’t sure what to expect when starting this book but was so delighted and surprised at how quickly I was sucked into this story and the depth and emotions explored. It is so refreshing to have characters with real flaws and motivations that make sense and stay true to character. Remin is expecting a spoiled noble lady but Ophele is not the typical strong-willed, sassy, outspoken heroine. She is naive, alone, scared, and all of the other things that you would expect from a young girl who had to bear the consequences of other’s actions her whole life, but she is strong and brave in her own way. And for Remin, underneath that hardened war general exterior, he is paranoid and extremely cautious after people attempting to kill him since he was nine years old and losing his entire family. He just wants to rebuild the home that was taken from him and dreams of creating a new legacy that will stand generations. And it is so heartwarming seeing how they slowly learn how to fit together and how they can help each other. I think my favorite thing about this book was watching their tumultuous relationship grow into something genuine and beautiful.

Melissa J Cave does an incredible job at building a world that feels so immersive and real and making characters come alive off the pages. Her writing has made me emotionally invested in infrastructural development, which is something I never thought I would say, as well as a certain donkey, a ferocious cook, and the rest of the Brede Knights. I felt dread when things got dicey. I gasped, and laughed, and cried and was on the edge of my seat almost the whole time. I really loved it and felt like this was such a unique story and I can’t wait to see where it goes. And the foundations were set beautifully for the rest of the series. I daresay this has become my favorite read of the year and I cannot wait to dive into the sequel and find out what happens next!

I recommend this to lovers of medieval fantasy, unique characters, vast (and literal) worldbuilding, hard-earned romance, fighting demons and monsters, learning to overcome emotional trauma, and found family.

[Krista · Rating 5 out of 5]

Why is this book not more widely known! It is wonderful. Its free on kindle now but I will probably buy it to support the author. 5 solid stars.
From the beautiful cover art to the sweetly unfolding love story, it held me captive and I want more.

Remin is the typical guy that has no experience with the ladies. Nothing. So of course he messes it all up :)
But Ophele was the pure heart he needed to find a safe place to trust. Really well done story with lots and lots of practical thoughts and advice. A slow unfolding of a story but well worth it and wrapped up nicely before the next one begins.

Highlights & Spoilers:
“What will you give me if I do it?” Remin interrupted.
The Emperor smiled. “What do you desire? Name it, and if it lies in our Empire and under the sight of the stars, we will grant it to you.”
Remin could wish for the moon, and the Emperor knew he would never have to grant it. Duke Ereguil was right. The Brede was a devourer of armies. Let the boy drown in it.
“The Andelin for my duchy,” Remin said. The words came to him like prophecy. “The Brede for my own. And your daughter for my wife.”

Oooooo so good.
I also appreciated the sly humorous touches:
"Unaccustomed as he was to noblewomen, or any women at all outside the camp prostitutes that marched with his army, Remin had the odd feeling he was being offered something, and it was not what he had come for."
and
"Was it always going to be like this? It seemed impossible that it would be any other way.
He was treating her like his horse, feeding her and bedding her down for the night, watching constantly to make sure she didn’t wander off.
She supposed she was lucky he hadn’t tied her to a picket."

One peeve- the wedding vows were very complicated and there was no sign of rehearsal, so that was a suspension of belief for me. There was some explanation 80% later where Ophele shares that she memorized the vows from a book but that info would have helped the earlier scene for me.

I liked this description of Ophele, a tenacious heroine has promise:
"But Ophele’s mind was a busy place, and her life had never been her own. No matter how limited her options, no matter how cramped her prison, she had never been able to stop seeking a way out. A pattern she might exploit. A solution to the problem."

And another comment I had after this quote:
"He wanted her to say something, anything, but she only nodded again as he set her down beside the road in front of their cottage, and he left with the feeling of a job poorly done.
If only she would talk. He couldn’t imagine what she was thinking, and he didn’t know what to say to make it right."
IF ONLY HE WOULD TALK TOO.

Oh and plenty of spice at the right times ;)
Anyway- 2 peeves (for me) out of an almost 400 page story? Remarkable I say :)

[Anna (Literaria Luminaria) · Rating 5 out of 5]

What a wonderful story ♡ full RTC!

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[Grumble · Rating 1 out of 5]

How do you manage to write the most generic things possible in two chapters alone? How is this guy 24 but still growing and is described as having an overly tall teenagers body? The way the fml is written you'd think she was 12 years old and the height of his belly button. Gross. I won't read past the sample. It tells me of the hell I'll get continuing, I have no desire to read sex scenes between an abusive man and a girl whose age isn't given in the sample but is referred to as a child and as looking like a child. This author has a YouTube where she talks about "tiktok slop". If those are slob this is the inedible leftovers of that very slop. I don't understand hating on books you clearly wish to be like

[Carole · Rating 5 out of 5]

From the ashes of a long war emerges newly knighted Remin of Andelin a fierce warrior who on this day kneels before his Emperor to receive his reward, one that includes the Emperor’s secret daughter Ophele.

Traitor Son is a story that evolves into a wonderful romantic fantasy with the feel of a classic historical novel that overflows with love, treachery, secrets, political intrigue, passion, and the new seeds that will sprout from the ashes of war.

Two worthy souls will find each other as they travel along with his men to the lands where they will build his new Duchy of Andelin, even as for Remin to trust his new wife will not be an easy choice.

I adored this story that entertained as it tugged at the heart and was so well written I became lost in an adventure that refused to let me go.

Well crafted characters and imaginative world building weave together the threads of a narrative that will please all readers of epic romance and storytelling.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

[G6Gigi Gaines · Rating 5 out of 5]

Empire of the Stars has me Hooked

This is a well written story with so many little twists and turns it kept me captivated throughout the whole book. This author does a wonderful job creating her characters. The storyline is amazing and I can’t wait to read the next book. This book covers an arranged marriage, a stubborn male and a shy and sheltered female with the other co-characters that create a beautiful balance to the story.

[Ellen H. · Rating 4 out of 5]

I thought this was super well written and overall a great fantasy. The romance in particular was 5 stars for me. The plot I found dragged a little and I didn’t love how much time was spent on the “devils”. I will probably continue on with the series though to see more of Remin and Ophelia and I did love the way this book concluded!

[Tanira · Rating 5 out of 5]

I knew by chapter 2 this would be a 5-star read and by chapter 4 I was already dreading the ending. This was very well done and I cannot wait for the rest of this story to come to life.

[Lena · Rating 4 out of 5]

"and suddenly it felt as if everything else in the world dissolved away, leaving only her. The loveliest thing he had ever seen.
Ah.
He loved her.
He knew it. He knew it as surely as he knew his own name. It was like flying and it was like drowning, beautiful and dreadful, and somehow inescapably inevitable"

[Maria Elena | pagesofmaria · Rating 4 out of 5]

A medieval inspired setting, knights, court intrigue, and a complicated romance with some well placed spicy moments. You won’t be shocked to know that I enjoyed Traitor Son very much!

The story follows Remin, heir of a noble House that was accused of treason against the Empire, who has been able to rise from squire to knight and eventually to gain back his duchy when he succeeds in the dangerous and almost impossible task of reconquering a lost territory for the Emperor. Emperor who would like nothing more than to be rid of Remin, and instead is forced to grant him his wish: land, title, and his daughter for wife. But the daughter the Emperor gives to Remin is his illegitimate daughter, Ophele, who has lived in exile her whole life and holds a dangerous secret about her husband’s family and her own.

The intrigue was a major part of this story and was the reason I was hooked from the start. The stakes are high for both Remin and Ophele, who technically have no reason to trust each other but are forced to be together—Ophele more than Remin, since she literally had no say in the matter of her marriage to Remin, who is initially using her as a means to an end. Remin is a bit of a brute, while Ophele is gentle, a little bit sheltered and curious, too. I loved seeing how they slowly came to trust each other. It was especially difficult for Remin. He's a man who has known betrayal before, and he truly has a hard time believing that the daughter of the Emperor would ever be on his side. Watching him come to terms with his feelings for Ophele regardless of the possibility that she might betray him was one of the most beautiful moments in the book. My hope for the future books is that together they’ll overcome the Emperor’s machinations, the secrets and the bloody history between their families.

The pace slowed down toward the middle of the book, once Remin and his knights settle and start the construction of the city, though I do like that it gave us opportunity to know the characters better and for the romance to bloom.

Here are some tropes/elements!
💍 arranged marriage
❤️‍🔥 enemies to lovers
👑 secret princess
🏰 medieval setting
💕 found family
✨ court intrigue

Spice: 3 peppers 🌶️🌶️🌶️

Thank you to the author for gifting me a copy. Opinions are my own.

[marlen l. k. · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5 stars ✨

[Claire · Rating 4 out of 5]

TRAITOR SON is a fantasy novel about what happens after the war is won. Remin Grimjaw is both a hero and the son of a traitor. After service to the emperor that wants him dead, he desires three things: land for his duchy, the river for his own, and the emperor's daughter for his wife. He's going to make something of the land he fought so hard for, and build a noble house no one will be able to tear down. Ophele is the emperor's unwanted, uncared for bastard daughter and they have to make the best of an uneasy marriage.

TRAITOR SON is the story of Remin and Ophele's marriage and the start of the building of their new home. In some ways this story is kind of cozy and exactly the kind of thing I like--the nitty gritty of how to carve out out a new home from nothing, and how to build a relationship from a lot of preconceived notions. And much of the book worked for me, which is why I managed to read it in the course of a day.

Two niggles I had problems with were Remin's attitude towards Ophele--for much of the book he is pretty cold to her and emotionally stunted in general, and he does a lot of things that end up hurting her. I could have bonked him on the head multiple times. He does eventually come around and we see his reasons for it, but I wanted to hit him over the head a lot. He'd better spend the next five books in this series walking over broken glass for Ophele. And he needs to learn to trust and have faith for other people, not just for Ophele. He's got some more growth to go through.

My second niggle was Ophele's general naiveté and her youth, I guess is the best word. She's seventeen and a bit of a bookish mouse and very easily crushed by unintentional cruelty, which is relatable, and we understand why over the course of the book. But I kept expecting and hoping for her to stand up to him, to insist on being treated as an equal, and making him [i]talk to her[/i], for goodness's sake, but she never does. I think this was so apparent because once we reach her new home in the valley, there are no other women in the story at all. It is literally a huge settlement full of men. And as the remnant of an army, it kind of makes sense, but I REALLY hope the next installments have more women to provide their perspective to her. Miche filled the councillor role for both Remin and Ophele (and I LOVED his character) but boy I hope we get more women. I really hope we get more community building in general. I love stories focused on community.

There is also a subplot about monsters that felt a little inconsistent but we've got five more books to flesh that out.

Anyways, I had a good time and it was very readable, four stars!

Heat level: 4

[Jessica · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received an advanced copy of Traitor Son from the author and am leaving this review voluntarily.

Traitor Son is the beginning of what I guarantee will be an epic tale full of adventure, romance, and depth. Weirdly enough, I would classify this first book as almost cozy, though I doubt the next ones will stay that way. It's a story of picking up the broken pieces and putting them back together. It's a story of healing, forgiveness, and acceptance. It's a story that builds the foundations for that epic tale I know is coming.

This is a very character-driven book. I'm honestly not sure what the plot is besides "build a home." Though I'm usually a plot girl, I enjoyed the character focus. It felt right. I ended up not caring what the plot was because I was so focused on how these characters developed. Their journey from broken to stitched back together was the true plot, and I was there for it. Ophele and Remin grew so much from where they started to where the book ended, and it all felt very natural. I will note that the beginning of their relationship was very fast, and I was a little worried about the insta-lust/love/what's-going-on that was happening, but the author took it in a completely different direction than I was expecting, and I appreciated it.

Although the world-building was lacking in some aspects, there was enough to make one understand what was happening and where everything was. Since this is the beginning of the series, I was expecting more, but overall, I'm pleased with what I got. I'm curious about the devils and the world in general and can't wait to learn more.

There were two things that I did struggle with. The first is that the pacing was slow. That's not to say that the book didn't suck me in and pull me along because it did, but with no actual plotline, it was hard to determine where the story was trying to take me. Second, the end resolution was about the romance, but I wanted something ... more. I ended the book feeling that nothing had been accomplished besides the culmination of Ophele and Remin's relationship. They were still rebuilding. The devils still ran rampant. There were still traitors in their midst. I was looking for one or two more plot threads to be tied up, but nothing else happened. Again, this is the first book in what is planned to be a longer series, but I still need a satisfying ending to each of those books.

Traitor Son is a character-driven, cozy fantasy that sets up a series that promises something great. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for that type of story.

[Mappy BookGirl · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was instantly a new favorite. Within the first few chapters I was sucked in, and next thing I knew I only had 10% left and was dreading it being over. I loved the relationships and development between characters, and the banter was great as well. The story was amazing and left me wanting more, so I really can't wait to see what happens next in this series. Melissa - I'm a fan :)

[Sam (Bookpaperraven) · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.75 ⭐️

So, this was an odd flop for me. The actual writing style was good, often when I don't enjoy a book it's because of the writing. The issue I had with it is nothing really happened. There wasn't rising action to a climax and then falling action and a resolution (you know, the format of what makes a novel a novel). Stuff just happened, and for the most part it wasn't interesting stuff. I ranted a bit to a friend who said I must share the review and so here is my very candid thoughts from our conversation: there's a battle, the guy wins, he gets to marry the princess of the king who hates him and is constantly trying to kill him. They're both human virgins and somehow have sex 6 times in one night, then another night the same amount of times (ow but, also how does he keep it up that long?). Then he's grumpy and aloof and avoiding her for months while she's meek and timid and won't stand up for herself. They build a town in painstaking detail so now I know how to do that. There's monsters that aren't really a threat. She almost dies of heatstroke because she's a tiny timid thing who can't do manual labour. He takes care of her and stops being aloof and grumpy and she's minimally less quiet and pathetic and they live happily ever after.

[Katherine Hill · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was on odd book for me. I think the writing was beautiful, the characters had very strong voice. It is just odd that the author chose to make her seventeen and marry a twenty four year old man? What was the reason other than adding to her FMC’s fright. It was an incredibly odd choice, questionable at best. I continued on when I usually DNF as soon as there are spicy scenes with a minor but i continued because it is a fantasy book and maybe things work different in this universe, but still, what an ODD choice to make as author because she easily could’ve been 18. Also, this is super low world building at best. It almost doesn’t feel fantasy. We get almost no explanation for anything.

[LittlePiscesReading]

An enthralling read from start to finish. The Andelin Valley is a harsh land, but beautiful, and a shining beacon of hope for Remin who has won it in a brutal war. The exact brutality of which we glimpse. It’s hard not to be swept up in his dream of building something even as he crashes into his relationship with Ophele like a bull in a China shop. A princess in blood only, she makes for a poor bargain, but even in our first meeting she’s so brave and daring even as she hides. Together they’re as complimentary as they are repellant. Even in the throes of strife there’s something nice in the domesticity that peeks through.

Years of attempts on his life have made Remin mistrustful. His suspicions of Ophele are warranted even when you wince at his fumbles. And her timidity is foreign to him. Her silences and quick wit make her suspect. Her guilt at the destruction of his House subserviates her. That neither has had much experience with people beyond their own sex only leads to more misunderstandings. I dearly love the conflicts and tensions in their relationship, even when I wondered if there could be a way forward for them. Between his accidental and intentional cruelties and his absences it stops the relationship from solidying for a breadth of the book but Cave expertly weaves them back together with care. Remin’s struggles with vulnerability and agony in not allowing himself believe that he could be happy, be safe, with her, comes to the most beautiful conclusion.

But it would be a disservice not to touch on the excellence of Cave’s world. There’s a line that I love – ‘even the drains were fascinating’. It’s so true. The construction, the strategising, even discussions on theology -all of it is fascinating. Tresingale barely exists when they arrive and its construction is so interesting. Seeing Ophele find herself among its people is a joy. As is the introduction of one Master Eugene. But especially in its hope. After years of destruction the Knights of the Brede finally get to build, to create, and it lends a buoyancy to the narrative. There’s love between the soldiers, and for those who have been lost – from Ophele’s letter to Azelma to Victorin’s apples. Connection is the greatest strength in this book and one I can’t wait to see developed as the series goes on.

Much appreciated, given Cave’s skill in crafting horror. I just had to go and reread chapter nine this Halloween. Even over actual horror books I have. Whether the incursions of devils or the shattering of peace after an assassination attempt, tension and threat come across viscerally. Remin’s people are backed into some terrifying corners and the tension of not knowing what’s to come, but that there is something coming, is wielded excellently. Cave writes so well across so many subjects and moods.

That said, I understand why he could be cruel but it did edge too far for me once or twice. Likewise I know that Ophele’s age is going to be uncomfortable for some readers especially given the sex scenes and I would caution to be aware of that.

Thanks to Melissa J. Cave for the arc. I leave this review voluntarily.

[Sammie · Rating 4 out of 5]

A great slow burn for the first book! The will they won't they pulled me in and had me needing to know what was going to happen.

The dry humour had me laughing all the way through too and for that alone I would recommend!

I did finish the book with some questions, bit as this is book one I expect they'll be answered I'm book two, but that's a good thing as it keeps you invested!



BLURB:

Do the promises of war ever survive the peace?

At the end of a brutal war, Remin of Andelin promised his knights that he would build them a good place, far from the carnage of war and the poisonous intrigues of the Empire. But the only thing more difficult than winning a war is securing the peace.

Welcome to the Andelin Valley, where the days are filled with the backbreaking labor of building a city and the nights bring monsters summoned in the waning days of the war. The Andelin devils dare even the sacred soil of the Empire, and it takes all of Remin’s military genius to keep his people alive. Yet even in the face of bandits, traitors, and the implacable hatred of the Emperor, the greatest danger to Remin might be his new wife.

Princess Ophele Agnephus. Daughter of the Stars, the Exile Princess, she is the daughter of the Divine Emperor who executed Remin’s family. Raised in secret and given in the place of her sister as a reward for Remin’s war victory, Ophele carries a secret that could topple the Empire: his family was innocent. But will she risk her life to reveal her family’s crimes to the most dangerous man in the Empire?

A tale of love and redemption. As the summer bleeds on and the walls of their city rise, Remin finds himself drawn to Ophele, who shares so many of his dreams and sorrows. She could be his love and his wife, the mother of his children, the foundation of a dynasty that will last forever. Or she could be the Emperor’s weapon, placed at his side to destroy everything he has left.

A marriage built in the ashes of betrayal. A land built on the ruins of a century of war. And a people determined to rise, with shattered trust and an unquenchable hope…if Ophele can only make them believe it is possible. Traitor Son is the story of a people broken by tragedy, a hero torn between his duty and his dreams, and a young woman who must find the courage to take her place at his side, before their own devils tear them apart.

[Nicole · Rating 4 out of 5]

Sir Remin of Andelin is the son of traitors, born to a noble house. Now, a ruthless warrior just out of a seven-year war, he’s ready to collect on a seemingly impossible bargain made by the Divine Emperor of Starfall—including the Emperor’s daughter as his bride.

Princess Ophele Agnephus has lived a life far removed from power. “She knew she was the Emperor’s daughter, but it was in the same distant way she knew there was an Emperor and he lived in a palace…” She never expected to be claimed like a prize—or swept into a political marriage with a man shaped by blood and betrayal.

Can a war-hardened duke and a sheltered princess overcome assassins, treasonous secrets, and their own emotional scars to build a dynasty—or will their innermost fears destroy them first?

What I loved:

✨ Rich world building (somewhat literally). I enjoyed following the ruins of Andelin being rebuilt from the ground up.
✨ Complex character development - especially Remin and Ophele’s painfully slow but compelling emotional arc.
✨ The Knights of Brede are an unforgettable cast of characters (and thank goodness for Miche).
✨ Master Wen and Master Eugene (IYKYK)

What didn’t quite land:

❗️ The middle section dragged a bit. It was heavy on daily tasks (water-hauling, ghoul-guarding, wall-building) and light on plot progression.
❗️ The wedding night relations were awkward—particularly given Ophele’s youth and naivety. Also, could we have not just made her older than *almost* 18? I get it's medieval/fantasy/fiction, but still...
❗️ Ophele’s extreme meekness, combined with Remin’s cold paranoia, occasionally bordered on emotional abuse. I understand how it serves the long arc, but it was tough to read at times.
❗️ Fantasy elements were minimal beyond the ghouls and a few references to past battles. I was expecting a bit more magic or myth.

Final thoughts:

This is a (super) slow-burn, politically layered fantasy that builds a solid foundation for a much larger saga. While it leans more toward medieval intrigue than traditional fantasy, it’s beautifully written, emotionally charged, and filled with potential. I’ll definitely be picking up book two.

Thanks to #BookSirens for the review copy!