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I was a secret—hidden safely away from the King of Hell.

Until I wasn’t.

Once he found me, his evil plans were set in motion.

Now, I was Satan’s number one enemy for no reason at all but to be a pawn in his twisted game of tug-of-war with his sons.

He wanted me to suffer.

He wanted everyone to watch my demise.

He wanted his sons to choose him instead of me.

But I wasn’t the pathetic little human afraid of monsters anymore.

I wasn’t afraid of him.

And there was no way I’d let him win.

435 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 1, 2024

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129 reviews5 followers
October 1, 2024
Book two in the My Demon Princes series starts off immediately from where book 1 ended. We have Lillian, the twins, Aiden and Nicholas and eldest brother, Kier. Lilly has been found by their father, king of Hell and he makes Lilly participate in three trials to make her a full demon or to forfeit her life. The trials are all extremely difficult so they begin to train almost immediately to give Lilly the best chance at completing them.

This book was really good! It was exciting the entire time, I flew through the pages and when I reached the cliffhanger my jaw was hanging open. I enjoyed seeing Lilly grow and become confident. The twins were a joy as per usual. They were sweet in the streets, but dirty talkers in the sheets. IYKYK. Kier grew a lot in this book too, I liked his POV chapters the best, it's always fun to see how they act vs how they think and Kier was the definition of stone faced but completely emotional inside. It was a very spicy book. As I mentioned, the dirty talking was top tier in this book. It wasn't entirely spice though, there's a lot of plot happening in between. This is a great second book in the series and after that cliffhanger I am desperate to read the next book in the series too.

I received an advance copy of this book in return for my honest review.
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50 reviews11 followers
August 16, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
🌶🌶🌶🌶
The seemlessness of this book from the first book was perfect. Lillians emotions are all over the place the twins Adian and Nicholas just want to ease the fear she has. Keir is still withdrawn and so beside himself he doesn't know how to think or act around Lillian. The king of Hell has it in his mind he will break his eldest son along with "his human" but he's in for a shock. Once the choice is made it's life or death by trials for Lillian her pirnces spring into action with all the training they can give. The twists and turns that continue to come will keep the pages flipping. Along with the things you'll never see coming this book is just a trip I never wanted to end. My head is spinning waiting for book 3!!!
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420 reviews
September 28, 2024
Welcome back to hell, where the princes are dirty talking demons obsessed with their offering, their woman, thier love

We are back in Hell with the demon princes Keir, Nicholas, and Aiden. As well as their offering Lillian. Their demon starts immediately after the cliffhanger from Their offering when Satan appears. Can I just say…… I hated him from the first time he was mentioned in book one and I hate him even more with a fiery burning passion.

On to our princes and their girl.
Keir is still fighting his feeling for Lillian trying to keep her safe and from getting hurt but hurting both her and himself in the process. The twins can’t get enough of Lilly and boy do they show it. ALOT. Multiple times and in *cough* multiple ways. If you thought book 1 was spicy then you are in for one hell of a ride in this book.

Satan is pissed that not only is a human in hell but she closed the only known portal to earth, but that his sons will protect her at any cost. This book had me fuming, it had me blushing , and it had me rooting for the Bad A woman Lillian is and is becoming. She faces so many obstacles keeping her from the HEA her and her demon princes deserve. This book also ends on a cliffhanger that I wasn’t expecting and im left stunned at the masterpiece that S.Lynn Smith has created.
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520 reviews22 followers
October 1, 2024
Holy freaking heck!!! I thought the ending to the first book in this series was intense but the ending to this one left be speechless and shaking!! I need more like now! Everything about this book was impossible to stop reading the plot, the spice, the emotions!!!

Also, seeing Keir finally acknowledge his attraction to Lilly was absolutely amazing and seeing him let her in was perfect. I’m so in love with these guys and I’m so dang sad I have to wait for more of them. I’m also scared to see how the ending changes the entire dynamic of these fours relationship. I love Keir’s dominance towards Lilly and how she brats towards him all the time. Also, seeing Nicholas be even more dominate and his mouth was so dang perfect. And Aiden always the go get with his insane mouth and ability to make Lilly smile. All of them together were so dang perfect and I really hope their relationship stays strong!!!
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2,339 reviews42 followers
October 1, 2024
Book 2, didn't disappoint. It started where the first left off. I was sucked in right away and kept on reading till the end.

We got a little of everything in this book. There was action, danger, feelings, steamy goodness, and a bit of humor.

I liked Lillian even more in this book. It was good seeing her strength and growth.

Keir, Aiden, and Nicholas I couldn't seem to get enough. These brothers will do anything to protect their woman. Even though one is still fighting his feelings.
The spice between them all was off the charts hot!! 🥵

I think this was an excellent addition to the series! Now, I need book 3 as soon as possible because that ending!!
Profile Image for Ashley Van Durmen.
432 reviews
October 4, 2024
Oh yes ma’am S. Lynn Smith is at it again with Book 2 in the My Demon Princes series, Their Demon. I was chomping at the bit and gnawing at my enclosure to read this one.

If you are a fan of Paranormal Romance, Why Choose, Demons, Touch Her and 💀, Spice that is hotter than hell (pun intended) and so much more than this book is for you! *Check the TWs

We pick right back up from the end of Their Offering with Lillian being forced to make a deal with Satan, if she completes 3 trials she will be turned into a demon, if she loses she will be unalived.

Well Keir, Nicholas and Aiden are having none of that and will do anything to help prepare her for these trials including extra cardio 😉 The twins are willing to do whatever it takes to keep her happy and distracted while Keir continues to deny the pull of his bond with her but there is only so much he can do until that finally snaps 😏

The plot to spice ration in this book was fantastic and while the heat is an inferno, you don’t lose sight of the story and what Lillian must overcome. Will Lillian complete the trials? Will Keir pull his head out of his a$$?

Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
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580 reviews17 followers
September 28, 2024
Holy smokes… just when you think you couldn’t love a trio of demon brothers and their human anymore than you already did…Author S. Lynn was like but wait there’s more! This book had me in a chokehold. The incredible world building and amazing characters are unlike any others! This book picks up right where the first book stops. And without a doubt has you fanning yourself from all the heat these demons and their human cook up! The amount of detail to the story line is quite incredible…it’s almost like you’re living with them. If you love demon twins or a OTT demon daddy…if you love a fierce FMC that can hold her own… if you love found family…spice that will have you fanning yourself … this books for you!
Profile Image for Jamie Williams.
503 reviews10 followers
September 29, 2024
This book was incredible!! I couldn’t put it down, it had me in such a chokehold. It picks right up where the first book left off, and it’s a high speed ride to the end. If you like you like your books with high, HIGH spice, you definitely won’t be disappointed. These princes know how to bring the heat!! Lillian really comes into her own and finds her inner strength. The storyline with the trials is exciting and nerve wracking. I love the way the relationships evolve between the princess and Lillian. And the way this book ends…I’m chomping at the bit to find out what happens next!!!!
4 reviews1 follower
October 1, 2024
If you’re looking for a series that has ALL of the smut and an interesting plot, THIS IS IT.

You'll want to punch Kier in the face, i think he brings out the brat in all of us.

S. Lynn Smith does it again! This is a fantastic book and I'm already waiting for book 3.... She is the QUEEN of cliff hangers.
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6 reviews
October 1, 2024
Fantastic read

If you're into the darker side of hell, book 2 of this series brings you along for the ride and much more. Keep reading to find out what happens to the brothers and their human as she fights to survive. I recommend reading the first book so you don't feel so lost with book 2.
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52 reviews2 followers
October 1, 2024
I received an ARC of this book and DEVOURED it the moment I got it I am in love with these characters and this story, the cliffhanger from the first book had me scared going into this but this was such a funny, spicy good time.
272 reviews4 followers
September 29, 2024
I loved it!! Even though there was a lot more smut than the first one, it was still so good!! I loved the story and I really hope there will be a third book.
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16 reviews
September 28, 2024
Wow! I didn’t think this saga could get any better but wow! It’s super spicy and sweet with so much excitement. I can’t wait for the next book!
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7 reviews
January 2, 2025
I realllyyyy had to gnaw my way through this book I kept putting it down then picking it back up, it just felt repetitive in scenes with too much going on. The plot holes made the book less seamless like,she finishes a trial then passes out, finishes another trail another issue but she has enough strength to do some OTHER things. As for Lilly as a main character a part of me just CANNOT stand her, ‘chosen-one’ trope but cmon some parts I had to skim.
It was a decent read but just not the best for me.
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126 reviews4 followers
February 10, 2025
There really wasn’t much character progression, it was very insta love with the characters having sex almost every chapter. More plot than book one in terms of the trials but still very short in terms of description and what’s going on.

Unfortunately a miss for me
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126 reviews36 followers
October 1, 2024
So you've been waiting Satan knows how long for an update and it's finally here!
What can you expect? Dark demon-filled paranormal romance that'll have you in a chokehold begging for more. Don't worry friends, Keir is still perfectly *keir* and the twins are just as attentive to Lillian's needs. Book 2 has ramped up the spice and the action as well as the darkness.

"I'll give you a head start, baby. When I say run, you better run faster than you've ever run before. Don't look behind you. Don't slow down. Don't. Stop." I paused, standing tall over her. "And don't let me catch you."

Their Demon ends on a cliffhanger and is part of a 3 book series in which books 1 and 2 are on Amazon & KU!

“I may have been facing a challenge, one that could possibly kill me, but clearly, my p*ssy didn't get the life-or-death memo as she pulsed for this man.”

😈Dark Paranormal Romance
🖤MFMM (MF & MFM gr0up scenes)
😈Demons
🖤Brothers sh@ring her
😈Telepathic Connection
🖤Discovering Powers
😈Dubcon
🖤🩸 Play
😈Primal Play
🖤Reverse ‘Who did this to you?’
😈Destined Love
🖤Parental @buse
😈Corporal Pun!shment
🖤Groveling
😈Panic Attacks
🖤’Too Many’ Os
😈Sp@nking
🖤Combat Fighting
😈De@th/Murd3r
🖤Graphic Sëx (LOTS)
😈ON PAGE Mutil@tion/De@th Of A Baby Animal
🖤Erötïc Asphyxi@tion
😈Restr@int Play
🖤DP/DVP
😈Passing Out From Os

Spice level: solid 4.5 (MF & MFM group scenes and more)
Plot: 5/5: THAT CLIFFHANGER! MA'AM HOW DARE YOU!!
Overall: What are you waiting for? Go read it!
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187 reviews4 followers
October 14, 2024
I seriously don't know why I i haven't read this series before now. I know this book is newly released, but it's so so good.

Lillian is such a strong MFC, and even though she was terrified through most of what she was going through, she never let herself feel it when she needed to be strong the most. And the times she did start to panic, her princes were right there to hold her up, to keep her strong.

Kier. I would have liked for him to get more revenge than he did. I felt like all the stuff he put up with and all the punishments his father inflicted, he should have had the chance to torture his father. Would it have been heartbreaking? yes, that's his father. But it would have been justified. And the twins, I would have liked to see more between them and Lillian. This book focused a lot of her and Kier's relationship. Which isn't bad by any means. But i do feel like Kier is reluctant to share sometimes.

I wanted the final battle to be this huge battle to the death thing. I guess it was, but it seemed rushed. And my heart broke for all of them. I'm super curious about what's going to happen with Lillian and Mavis. How has this event affected their friendship.

I still give this a 5 star rating. It was brilliant and action-packed and yummy. This series is worth every star I've given it and then some.

This PNR is worth the read. Please give it the love it deserves!!
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58 reviews
June 29, 2025
AHHHHHHH STOP IT!!! GIVE ME THE THIRD BOOK NOW I BEG!!!

The plot be plotting, the spice be spicyyy. I think I just developed separation anxiety from my kindle via this book. I couldn’t put it down.

First off love an empowered badass woman, the confidence and sass from Lillian is spot on.
The twins are just down right cheeky and hilarious and Keir that sweet twisted soul, I don’t want to spoil it but I’m so glad his character progressed that way.

The trials had me speed reading (also sad to admit that I couldn’t wait and jumped forward till the end of the book and spoiled it for myself - and that says something cause I never do that). Every nearly single trial had me biting my blanket trying to not scream at her to hurry up so loud I woke up my neighbours.

Honestly if you love a demon and/or why choose, PICK THIS BOOK UP!!

Honestly 4.5⭐️/5 plot (the only reason why it’s not a 5 is cause the ending got to me) and 5🌶️ /5 🔥🔥🔥.

Profile Image for Ree Reads Smut.
33 reviews
October 7, 2024
God Daaaaaaam 😈

Welcome back to Hell Little Ones 😘

Tantruming Toddler Satan isn’t happy…
Shadow Daddy Keir is still tryna be a Monk…
And the twins.. well, they’re just tryna hit a new record for hitting it with Lillian 😉

The dramas ramping up, the steam is getting spicier than a red chilly curry, and our girl Lil is just tryna stay alive.

And stay alive she does…

If you read book one, don’t pretend like you’re not going to read book 2..

We all know you were left gagged and begging and now you don’t even need to kneel or say please to get to the next round of edging. I say edging because this puppy also ends in a cliffy but ohhhh she’s a good one.. So how about you just be a good girl for your Demon Princes and get to reading.

Enjoy 😘
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238 reviews14 followers
September 29, 2024
Book two of the My Demon Princess series and we are starting right where we left off from book one. This book has even more spice than the first book. The characters are even more yummy and the story is not my normal cup of tea being that it’s a paranormal type, but I am here for this one. Book one left me on a cliffhanger and book two has now left me shook, how am I supposed to feel about this ending? Again Lillian is one hell of a bad@ss who I fell in love with before and she doesn't disappoint here either. Thank you again Ms. S. Lynn Smith for an amazing read, for sure 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐’s here. Very well written.
Profile Image for Miranda Jacobs.
10 reviews2 followers
October 2, 2024
Absolutely astounding. She did it again, the way I was captivated by the story, desiring more from the brothers just like Lilly, and was surrounded by all the emotions. I can promise you this 2nd book holds up to the first one. I was on my TOES at the end.

Lilly was found out by the king of hell and told she has to pass 3 trials to become a demon or die. Her sweet princes take it upon themselves to train her, or distract her, as much as possible to make sure she lives. Kier stays brooding but the twins have a great go at it until Lilly is fighting for her life when they least expect it. Can she survive these trials? With the princes help she sure hopes she will
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42 reviews1 follower
October 2, 2024
This is the sequel to Their Offering which is the first book. It picks up directly where the first book left off on the cliff hanger. This book has everything in it; action, adventure, drama, and some wonderfully spicy scenes! I couldn't put it down once I started it and was rooting for Lillian from the get-go. In this second installment she is meant to go through 3 trials in order to become a demon or give up her life. This book leaves on a cliff hanger and I can't wait to find out what happens in the 3rd book!
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6 reviews1 follower
October 8, 2024
Where do I even begin with this one?! I was disappointed that one of the trials wasn't to sit there with a straight face and watch her mother be tortured (unfortunately she didn't make an appearance in this book - but I'd have danced with glee).

The amount of spice in this book made it difficult to put it down! Seeing the development of Lily's relationship with Keir, and whatever twists and turns that would take was a roller coaster I was happy to be on. S. Lynn Smith did such a phenomenal job with character development in this installment of the series that we got to see growth from all of our favorite demons. I was also happy to read challenges between Lilly and the twins because I mean we're in hell - everything can't be rainbows and butterflies all the time.

S. Lynn Smith leaves us with another gut punching ending that has us on the edge of our seats waiting for book 3 to come out! The only question now, is who will be left standing and who will rule over Hell? Satan? Keir? Lilly? The Twins?
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3 reviews1 follower
October 2, 2024
Holy Hell! This book was absolutely amazing. The spice is 🥵 the spiciest! When I read, “When I catch you, I’m going to punish you. I’ll make you scream and cry and beg. You’ll be shown no mercy, and I’ll use every hole of yours until you pass out from all the pain and pleasure.” 🙌🏼🫠 what a way to make us all blush! And the trials my goodness! The anxiety I felt for Lillian while reading it happen made me feel like I was actually there😮‍💨. But that ending was SPECTACULAR! I can’t wait to read the next book 🙌🏼🩷
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472 reviews12 followers
October 13, 2024
To be honest I had to really chew my way through this one at times.
I’m not sure why.
It’s not bad at all.
But I had to really pull myself through it.

There’s a TON of smut. Usually I don’t mind this, but this felt a bit gratuitous. It wasn’t great.

It was all it but meh…

I’m not sure I loved the way He’ll was portrayed.
Satan seemed super one dimensional too.

⭐️ Plot: 2,5/5
🌶️ Spice: 3/5
📖 Genre: paranormal fantasy reverse harem
🏞️ Setting: Hell
🗣️ POV: Multiple
🛏️ Tropes:
- reverse Harem
- Fated Mates
- Trials
- Touch her and Die
- Forced Proximity
- Chosen One
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248 reviews11 followers
October 15, 2024
Picking up right where Their Offering leaves off, book 2 in the series finally gives us everything we wanted from Keir!!! I'll never get enough of the TWINS either!

Lily against Satan is one of the best plots, I've read to date. The trials, the training, the way the Princes of Hell support and believe in Lily made this book, one I just couldn't put down.

I'm absolutely loving how Lily's relationship with each of her men is growing throughout three books.

And the SPICE!!! Next Level HOT! Thigh clenching, pånty ruining hotness!

I cannot wait for more!!
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21 reviews1 follower
October 21, 2024
ahhhh

Ok first off I couldn’t but this down!!!!

As Lilly had to face off with Satan things get crazy. I don’t want to give anything about but this book is a wild ride! And I need the 3rd like RIGHT NOW!!!

Now I’m not sure I’ve ever loved and hated a character at the same time as much as I did Keir at the beginning of this series and that stayed until about half way through this one. I do love the twins sooo much. And the side characters are great!

I honestly can’t wait to see where this will go now!!
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7 reviews
February 28, 2025
I laughed, I fangirled, I screamed, I cried, I will not recover.This is one of those books that kept me up waayy past my bedtime on a work day because I JUST NEEDED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!
The growth that Lilly had in this book just made me so happy! She kicked ass and turned into such a badass by the end! I was so proud of her! I was also proud of Keir (who I wanted to strangle the entire first book!!) for finally opening up and getting what he deserved!
I hope to see more of them in the future! ♡
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