Unexpected Odessey

by Sanya Dane

Adalia is a genius with anger issues. She works for the world’s most prominent technology company and has created the most sophisticated way to travel on Terra Prime. Now she's trying to perfect a device that will allow travel to other universes, the Odessey. Kidnapped by a so-called friend, she finds herself on a starship to another planet. Although her kidnapper is beyond hot, could her situation get any worse?

Jace has traveled light years to find the source of the phenomenon killing his planet and his people. He’d already made the decision to get Adalia’s help to reverse the effects her experiment had on his planet, no matter what. However, he didn't expect to have trouble keeping his hands anywhere but on her. She's timid one moment, fierce the next, and has a body that causes his imagination to run wild.

Can Jace and Adalia repair the damage to Vimos before his people find out she's responsible for their planet's deterioration or will hidden enemies and manipulation destroy his world and her company?

128 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 29, 2014

About the author

Sanya Dane is a native New Yorker who lives with her precocious son, mischievous cat and laid-back dog. Sanya developed a love of reading as a child who absorbed Dr. Seuss and Disney books like a sponge. She wrote her first creative story in fifth grade about a girl and her unicorn. In her spare time, Sanya enjoys listening to musical muses, singing and laughing out loud.

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Reviews

[Kiki · Rating 2 out of 5]

There was potential in this book, but it was actually very disappointing for me. I like third person, but this is third person with not much insight into the characters emotion. The book very much reads like A happens, so B happens, then C happens.

For example at one point the hero whistles a tune and a flying freaking lion comes. The heroine who has never seen nor heard of these creatures before apparently has no thoughts on the matter. She just pets it then climbs up on it with the hero. Huh? How does that make sense? She is a genius which means rapid thinking, right? So why doesn't she have any thoughts about this creature other than 'I wonder if I can pet it'? Basically, the whole book was like this.

[Aisha Davis · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good book. Handsome prince from outer space kidnaps sexy genius in order to keep his world from being destroyed. Mix in hot love scenes and great fighting for a interesting read.

[Elise-Pinterest+Goodreads=The Perfect Book Boyfriend]

Sorry, I can't even get to the halfway mark on this one. I do not like he writing style (third person).